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#1 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 05:26 AM

Hmm…not much to say about this chapter as nothing of great importance occurs here… so I’ll just boast instead of the backlog that I have built during my vacation… I now have 32 chapters to spare… I reckon that by my posting pace, we will see Theo and Co kicking Irenicus's tail in Hell, right on X-mas eve. :twisted:

And of course, I’m really looking forwards to writing some less stressful stuff before I get into the whole ToB thing… heh, so far I have thought of few sub-plots, like travel back to Baldur’s Gate to find Eddie’s girl and visit the old places.

Then there is a certain Red Dragon who is still alive and Jaheira needs a new suit of armor. Heck, that awful pink Doomplate just brings bad luck and she certainly could challenge Sarry in the ‘The Most Hideous Armor of The Year’ contest.

And, since Jaheira and Theo will settle in Imnesvale, eventually… they will have an interesting new neighbor. Yep, I reckon that Mr. Corthala is still sulking in his cabin and I’m looking forward to do something with him… :)

Hmm, does that sound like worth wasting your time to read? And if you have any suggestions, this is the time to make them… though, Watcher’s Keep is definitely out. Nah, I’m not going there. I can’t see Theo suddenly developing a lust for adventure and treasure… [/rant] ;)

 

Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 5.22.

“Prepare some blankets so that we can carry her over to a more suitable place, it is not healthy to lay in a pool of blood,” Viconia’s words shake me out of the trance that I have been in, still unable to comprehend that Jaheira had been so close to death… “Theodur, do you hear me? And hand me her backpack, we better get a new tunic for her, or would you wish that she remains so… exposed?”

“Huh? Oh… yes, right away Vic,” I scuttle off to retrieve Jaheira’s backpack and dig into it to find some blankets and new clothing. I pass the blankets to Immy and she proceeds to create a comfortable sleeping berth in the corner, farthest to the entrance of the room. After Viconia has finished dressing her, I carefully take Jaheira’s light body in my arms and carry her over to the prepared spot.

With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries.

“You should rest too, Theo,” Viconia speaks, coming to stand beside me, placing her hand on my shoulder. In response I can only hug her briefly, whispering words of gratefulness in her ears.

“Hey, hey… what’s going on, guys?” Imoen interrupts our silent embrace and I have a hard time figuring out if she is joking or not, “first Eddie and Jaheira are hugging each other and now Vic and you… is there something I am missing, bro?”

“Eh… no, we have just all become somewhat of an emotional wreckages…” I chuckle wearily, “I think, I will lay down a bit with Jaheira, if our healer allows me to disturb her patient…”

“Of course, as long as you don’t do something stupid as hugging or squeezing her – I would not want to try out my luck with resurrection spells, from my previous dozen attempts I recall only one to be successful,” Viconia warns me as I settle in beside Jaheira, lying on my side and looking at her haggard face. I take her hand in mine and at the feel of my touch her lips part producing a barely audible whisper.

“Sorry… failed…” are the words coming from her mouth.

“It’s all right, Jaheira… you are alive and everything will be well… sleep and recover your strength,” I speak quietly and with joy feel that she responds by squeezing my hand weakly.

“So… cold… where are you…” she slowly turns her head to the side, but her eyes stay closed. I lean closer and kiss her forehead as gently as I can, it seems to have the needed effect and her squeeze on my hand grows weaker and she drifts off into the sleep.

I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once.

Viconia and Imoen have both made sleeping berths for themselves and are sitting on their blankets and chatting idly, noticing that I have risen from the floor, their stares turn towards me. Strangely enough, I would have thought that Vic would look at Imoen’s company as a punishment I have placed upon her, but here, when she does not have to share a room with her, she actually chooses Imoen’s company… weird.

“She’s okay?” Imoen asks quietly and I reply with a nod.

“I am going to check on her, regardless,” Viconia rises from her spot, perhaps not as much concerned about Jaheira, but simply bored with sitting around and doing nothing.

“We looted some neat stuff from those freaks,” Immy says and points to a pile of swords and other items, just behind Edwin, “a couple of items were especially interesting, Eddie can tell you more about them. Come, let’s take a look.”

We both kneel down to the pile of war trophies and Edwin joins us, wearing a face expression that is both reverent and excited at the same time.

“I suppose you require my knowledge to explain you the traits of these quite exquisite items (hmm, they should fetch a nice price on the surface, but I suppose they would be more beneficial in helping us to get there),” Edwin starts the tale.

“Now, this belt,” Edwin retrieves a shiny looking girdle from under the pile, “gives its wearer the strength of the Frost Giant (lucky for them it doesn’t make the wearer’s intellectual capabilities similar to those of a Frost Giant – even though if in some cases that would be an improvement).”

“Wow… that’s great… of course, the battle was not worth to fight only to get this item,” I look meaningfully at Edwin, “Jaheira will make good use of this…”

“Hey, she already has a similar belt,” Imoen protests, “you should give this to Vicky, she needs one too… it’s not fair that your bias influences your judgment, so there! The belt goes to Vic!”

“Nope, she’ll get Jaheira’s old one, its almost as good…” I reply, “and speaking of bias, maybe you’re not that fair yourself, sister mine…”

“Erm… whatever do you mean by that?” she shrugs uncomfortably.

“Nothing… absolutely nothing…” I chuckle, but her reaction is making me ponderous, “anything else, Eddie?”

“All these swords are magical, but of inferior quality than the one you wield now,” Edwin comments, “except this one, but you will not be able to wield it, just because you are too righteous, lawful and generally goody-two-shoes. The Soul Reaver cannot be touched by creatures with... ergh, good and pure spirit.”

I look upon the peculiar looking sword, the golden hilt incrusted with pearls, the blade is from some metal with a dark hue and a couple of inches shorter than that of my old sword, but it is wider and it’s edges are strangely cogged, so that once it has pierced the opponents skin and flesh it tears it and makes the injuries that much more worse… and then I realize…

“That sword… Jaheira… she was hurt by…this thing?” I whisper, barely holding back the tears and anger… Imoen just nods with a sad expression in her eyes. Instinctively, I reach out and grab the hilt of the sword in my hand… it feels so light and graceful as I lift it up and observe every curve in the elegantly processed blade.

“Amazing… you can actually touch it?” Edwin stares in disbelief, “hmm, I guess then you are not such a goody-two-shoes, as I took you for… well, good for us all as this tool is incredibly powerful – each time you draw blood with it, your opponent gets magically drained and weakened.”

“That’s wonderful… but I’m not sure if I will be able to wield it knowing that it almost took Jaheira from me…” I speak solemnly.

“Pah! Who cares about your romantic notions, on the contrary – think of how fitting it will be to cleave that mageling in two with this sword,” Edwin remarks and I think that maybe I should listen – a tool is a tool and it can’t be evil in itself… its how you use it that matters.

“She looks much better now,” Viconia speaks, having finished her inspection, “I think we should go for a rest to restore our spells and then we should be ready to move on, she is regaining her strength quickly…” We follow Viconia’s advice and soon the five of us are snoozing in our bedrolls, the entrance safely protected by Viconia’s wards.

 

A touch of a warm hand on my cheek… a quiet whisper in my ear… and a pair of concerned eyes, that looks deep into mine. Jaheira. She is awake… alive and well…

“That was unpleasant,” she says quietly, “I regret that you had to go through this… this was a quite… unwelcome experience for me as well.”

“I will do anything I can to prevent something like that from occurring again,” I speak, looking in her eyes “we have enough provision for a tenday or so… how long will you need to be ready to fight on?”

“A tenday? Surely, you are jesting, beloved – I am ready to go immediately,” her reply shocks me and to illustrate her determination she rises into a sitting position. Though she fights not to show it, I see that it takes her a lot of effort just to pull herself up from the floor.

“Perhaps this might help,” I slip the new belt around her waist and she looks at me surprised, the effect it gives is immediate, “just a little war trophy for you…” I add. She shifts with unease, seeing the fatal sword lying nearby.

“Ah… I will toss it away if you feel uncomfortable seeing it,” I speak quietly.

“I am not that sensitive, Theodur. I may have got on the wrong end of that sword once, but with you wielding it, I will be sure that it will not happen again,” she replies nonchalantly.

“Jaheira! You are well!” an annoying imp called Imoen suddenly jumps on us and ends up in-between the two of us and hugging Jaheira tightly, “don’t you ever scare us like that again Jaheira… bro was looking like a walking corpse and I think he almost succumbed to the call of the blood again…” she bubbles uncontrollably.

“Ready for travel, Jaheira?” Viconia asks, having come across to take a look at her patient and she is seemingly satisfied with what she sees, “good to have you back, druid. Yes, don’t look so surprised… without you around, I am not sure how we could handle Theodur… sooner or later Bhaal would have overtaken him.”

“Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.”

“Edwin, did someone knock you on the head during the battle or did I just heard an apology from you?” Jaheira chuckles, but Edwin just mutters something under his breath and walks away.

“Let us ready ourselves and leave – time is of essence, I doubt that the Matron Mother will care for our excuses,” Jaheira says in a voice that does not leave a room for objection… and even though I still worry about her rushing too fast in the battle after sustaining such heavy injuries, I have no other choice than to follow.

#2 Guest_Dark-Mage_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 11:36 AM

Intresting chapter, I enjoyed it muchly :twisted:

#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 12:27 PM

Intresting chapter, I enjoyed it muchly :twisted:


Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it!

#4 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 03:01 PM

Then there is a certain Red Dragon who is still alive and Jaheira needs a new suit of armor. Heck, that awful pink Doomplate just brings bad luck and she certainly could challenge Sarry in the ‘The Most Hideous Armor of The Year’ contest.


LOL! I think Ardulace's green armour would look good on Jaheira.

And, since Jaheira and Theo will settle in Imnesvale, eventually… they will have an interesting new neighbor. Yep, I reckon that Mr. Corthala is still sulking in his cabin and I’m looking forward to do something with him… :lol:


Yay! Well, assuming Theo doesn't kill him or anything, anyway :lol: .

With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries.


Aww - though Jaheira probably won't take well to his coddling :) .

“So… cold… where are you…” she slowly turns her head to the side, but her eyes stay closed. I lean closer and kiss her forehead as gently as I can, it seems to have the needed effect and her squeeze on my hand grows weaker and she drifts off into the sleep.


Awww!

I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once.


or maybe he's just pretending he is, to impress the others :twisted:

“Hey, she already has a similar belt,” Imoen protests, “you should give this to Vicky, she needs one too… it’s not fair that your bias influences your judgment, so there! The belt goes to Vic!”


Compromise and keep it for yourself, Theo :)

“That’s wonderful… but I’m not sure if I will be able to wield it knowing that it almost took Jaheira from me…” I speak solemnly.


That's sweet, Theo, but also kind of dumb ;) .

A touch of a warm hand on my cheek… a quiet whisper in my ear… and a pair of concerned eyes, that looks deep into mine. Jaheira. She is awake… alive and well…


A relief for Theo, no doubt :D .

“I am not that sensitive, Theodur. I may have got on the wrong end of that sword once, but with you wielding it, I will be sure that it will not happen again,” she replies nonchalantly.


I'm beginning to get worried now that you might be foreshadowing something horrible here...

“Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.”


Of course, Eddie :)

“Let us ready ourselves and leave – time is of essence, I doubt that the Matron Mother will care for our excuses,” Jaheira says in a voice that does not leave a room for objection… and even though I still worry about her rushing too fast in the battle after sustaining such heavy injuries, I have no other choice than to follow.


Never mind Theo - I'm sure she'll be ok :D

Nice chapter :D

#5 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 03:28 PM


Then there is a certain Red Dragon who is still alive and Jaheira needs a new suit of armor. Heck, that awful pink Doomplate just brings bad luck and she certainly could challenge Sarry in the ‘The Most Hideous Armor of The Year’ contest.


LOL! I think Ardulace's green armour would look good on Jaheira.


Hmm. Yep, it probably will... unless it's a full plate. I know that she can wear them, but I think that if presented with a choice, she would go for something lighter.


And, since Jaheira and Theo will settle in Imnesvale, eventually… they will have an interesting new neighbor. Yep, I reckon that Mr. Corthala is still sulking in his cabin and I’m looking forward to do something with him… :)


Yay! Well, assuming Theo doesn't kill him or anything, anyway :) .


Nope. I'm kinda warming up to Valygar, guess it's because of reading 'Thicker Than Water'. Though, Valygar in my story will not attempt to steal Jaheira from Theo... :)


With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries.


Aww - though Jaheira probably won't take well to his coddling :) .


Nope, but it's the sentiment that matters. :D


“So… cold… where are you…” she slowly turns her head to the side, but her eyes stay closed. I lean closer and kiss her forehead as gently as I can, it seems to have the needed effect and her squeeze on my hand grows weaker and she drifts off into the sleep.


Awww!


Yes, I'm glad to finally be able to post an Aww-filled chapter... :D


I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once.


or maybe he's just pretending he is, to impress the others ;)


Could be that he's just fallen asleep... :)


“Hey, she already has a similar belt,” Imoen protests, “you should give this to Vicky, she needs one too… it’s not fair that your bias influences your judgment, so there! The belt goes to Vic!”


Compromise and keep it for yourself, Theo :D


LOL! Yes, but he doesn't really need it... not as bad as Vic, for example.


“That’s wonderful… but I’m not sure if I will be able to wield it knowing that it almost took Jaheira from me…” I speak solemnly.


That's sweet, Theo, but also kind of dumb :) .


Yep... but the sword is kinda evil, though...


A touch of a warm hand on my cheek… a quiet whisper in my ear… and a pair of concerned eyes, that looks deep into mine. Jaheira. She is awake… alive and well…


A relief for Theo, no doubt :lol: .


You bet. :lol:


“I am not that sensitive, Theodur. I may have got on the wrong end of that sword once, but with you wielding it, I will be sure that it will not happen again,” she replies nonchalantly.


I'm beginning to get worried now that you might be foreshadowing something horrible here...


:twisted: Uh... no. Scary thought... but this time the answer is a firm 'no'.


“Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.”


Of course, Eddie :)


Eddie? Making a mistake? Never! :)


“Let us ready ourselves and leave – time is of essence, I doubt that the Matron Mother will care for our excuses,” Jaheira says in a voice that does not leave a room for objection… and even though I still worry about her rushing too fast in the battle after sustaining such heavy injuries, I have no other choice than to follow.


Never mind Theo - I'm sure she'll be ok :lol:


The scribe says so, at least. :)

Nice chapter :)


Thank you kindly! :)

#6 Laufey

Posted 25 September 2003 - 07:49 PM

With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries.


Awww...


“Of course, as long as you don’t do something stupid as hugging or squeezing her – I would not want to try out my luck with resurrection spells, from my previous dozen attempts I recall only one to be successful,” Viconia warns me as I settle in beside Jaheira, lying on my side and looking at her haggard face. I take her hand in mine and at the feel of my touch her lips part producing a barely audible whisper.


“Sorry… failed…” are the words coming from her mouth.


Oh Jaheira...just try to relax a bit.


I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once.


How cute! :)


“Hey, she already has a similar belt,” Imoen protests, “you should give this to Vicky, she needs one too… it’s not fair that your bias influences your judgment, so there! The belt goes to Vic!”


“Nope, she’ll get Jaheira’s old one, its almost as good…” I reply, “and speaking of bias, maybe you’re not that fair yourself, sister mine…”


Maybe not. :twisted:

“That sword… Jaheira… she was hurt by…this thing?” I whisper, barely holding back the tears and anger… Imoen just nods with a sad expression in her eyes. Instinctively, I reach out and grab the hilt of the sword in my hand… it feels so light and graceful as I lift it up and observe every curve in the elegantly processed blade.


“Amazing… you can actually touch it?” Edwin stares in disbelief, “hmm, I guess then you are not such a goody-two-shoes, as I took you for… well, good for us all as this tool is incredibly powerful – each time you draw blood with it, your opponent gets magically drained and weakened.”


Hmmm...interesting!


“I am not that sensitive, Theodur. I may have got on the wrong end of that sword once, but with you wielding it, I will be sure that it will not happen again,” she replies nonchalantly.


Yep, practical as ever. ;)


“Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.”


“Edwin, did someone knock you on the head during the battle or did I just heard an apology from you?” Jaheira chuckles, but Edwin just mutters something under his breath and walks away.


Is my special little darling actually apologizing? :) How funny, and really intimidating!
Rogues do it from behind.

#7 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 September 2003 - 08:52 PM


With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries.


Awww...


Heh, all of this will cause Theo to develop a really strong protective streak.


“Sorry… failed…” are the words coming from her mouth.


Oh Jaheira...just try to relax a bit.


Hehe... that makes those rare moments when she does relax, all the more precious. :)


I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once.


How cute! :D


Must admit, I like the image myself.


“Nope, she’ll get Jaheira’s old one, its almost as good…” I reply, “and speaking of bias, maybe you’re not that fair yourself, sister mine…”


Maybe not. ;)


:twisted:


“Amazing… you can actually touch it?” Edwin stares in disbelief, “hmm, I guess then you are not such a goody-two-shoes, as I took you for… well, good for us all as this tool is incredibly powerful – each time you draw blood with it, your opponent gets magically drained and weakened.”


Hmmm...interesting!


Soul Reaver is a very nice sword... I was kinda trying to play with the alignmet restrictions in this way, since Theo is 'Good' on his character sheet and this sword can't be wielded by good characters.


“I am not that sensitive, Theodur. I may have got on the wrong end of that sword once, but with you wielding it, I will be sure that it will not happen again,” she replies nonchalantly.


Yep, practical as ever. :)


That's how we like her. :)


“Edwin, did someone knock you on the head during the battle or did I just heard an apology from you?” Jaheira chuckles, but Edwin just mutters something under his breath and walks away.


Is my special little darling actually apologizing? :D How funny, and really intimidating!


LOL! Yeah, you'd expect him to insult ten other persons during his rare apologies... :D

#8 Guest_IronDragon_*

Posted 26 September 2003 - 03:56 AM

[quote] Hmm…not much to say about this chapter as nothing of great importance occurs here… so I’ll just boast instead of the backlog that I have built during my vacation… I now have 32 chapters to spare… I reckon that by my posting pace, we will see Theo and Co kicking Irenicus's tail in Hell, right on X-mas eve. [/quote] Sounds like a great Yule present to me.

[quote] And of course, I’m really looking forwards to writing some less stressful stuff before I get into the whole ToB thing… heh, so far I have thought of few sub-plots, like travel back to Baldur’s Gate to find Eddie’s girl and visit the old places. [/quote] Am sure yoru characters could use some R&R before tackling Mellisan and company.

[quote] Then there is a certain Red Dragon who is still alive and Jaheira needs a new suit of armor. Heck, that awful pink Doomplate just brings bad luck and she certainly could challenge Sarry in the ‘The Most Hideous Armor of The Year’ contest. [/quote] I find Jaheira rather fetching in the bright green Gorgon plate but somehow I suspect your aiming to dress her up in red instead.

[quote] And, since Jaheira and Theo will settle in Imnesvale, eventually… they will have an interesting new neighbor. Yep, I reckon that Mr. Corthala is still sulking in his cabin and I’m looking forward to do something with him… [/quote] I’m sure he will beahpy to elave that dingy cabin of his.

[quote] Hmm, does that sound like worth wasting your time to read? And if you have any suggestions, this is the time to make them… though, Watcher’s Keep is definitely out. Nah, I’m not going there. I can’t see Theo suddenly developing a lust for adventure and treasure… [/rant] [/quote] Watcher’s keep is for power gaming not for role play.


Anyway…on to the story:

[quote] “Prepare some blankets so that we can carry her over to a more suitable place, it is not healthy to lay in a pool of blood,” Viconia’s words shake me out of the trance that I have been in, still unable to comprehend that Jaheira had been so close to death… “Theodur, do you hear me? And hand me her backpack, we better get a new tunic for her, or would you wish that she remains so… exposed?” [/quote] while I didn’t’ mention it last chapter I really appreciate the realism you use in depicting a serious injury. The game seems to brush aside the problems of infections and serious wounds by letting characters fight and mover around whether they have 100 HP or only 1 left.

[quote] With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries. [/quote] Worse the longer you take the farther away Irenicus gets.

[quote] “Sorry… failed…” are the words coming from her mouth. [/quote] how typical of Jaheira to take responsibility for everything.

[quote] I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once. [/quote] Having an unquiet mind myself I understand.

[quote] Viconia and Imoen have both made sleeping berths for themselves and are sitting on their blankets and chatting idly, noticing that I have risen from the floor, their stares turn towards me. Strangely enough, I would have thought that Vic would look at Imoen’s company as a punishment I have placed upon her, but here, when she does not have to share a room with her, she actually chooses Imoen’s company… weird. [/quote] Hmmmmmmm



[quote] “We looted some neat stuff from those freaks,” Immy says and points to a pile of swords and other items, just behind Edwin, “a couple of items were especially interesting, Eddie can tell you more about them. Come, let’s take a look.” [/quteo] yeah the demon princes have some good stuff on them

[quote] “Erm… whatever do you mean by that?” she shrugs uncomfortably.

“Nothing… absolutely nothing…” I chuckle, but her reaction is making me ponderous, “anything else, Eddie?” [/quote] Hmmmmmmm number 2.

[quote] “All these swords are magical, but of inferior quality than the one you wield now,” Edwin comments, “except this one, but you will not be able to wield it, just because you are too righteous, lawful and generally goody-two-shoes. The Soul Reaver cannot be touched by creatures with... ergh, good and pure spirit.” [/quote] Good thing Edwin is picking it up then.

[quote] “That sword… Jaheira… she was hurt by…this thing?” I whisper, barely holding back the tears and anger… Imoen just nods with a sad expression in her eyes. Instinctively, I reach out and grab the hilt of the sword in my hand… it feels so light and graceful as I lift it up and observe every curve in the elegantly processed blade.

“Amazing… you can actually touch it?” Edwin stares in disbelief, “hmm, I guess then you are not such a goody-two-shoes, as I took you for… well, good for us all as this tool is incredibly powerful – each time you draw blood with it, your opponent gets magically drained and weakened.” [/quote] If only I could bring myself to play an evil character it would be a very good sword to use.

[quote] “Pah! Who cares about your romantic notions, on the contrary – think of how fitting it will be to cleave that mageling in two with this sword,” Edwin remarks and I think that maybe I should listen – a tool is a tool and it can’t be evil in itself… its how you use it that matters. [/quote] Guns don’t kill people, the hole the bullet leaves behind is what kills.

[quote] “A tenday? Surely, you are jesting, beloved – I am ready to go immediately,” her reply shocks me and to illustrate her determination she rises into a sitting position. Though she fights not to show it, I see that it takes her a lot of effort just to pull herself up from the floor. [/quote] Jaheira would of course scold anyone else for pretending to be hale and healthy.

[quote] “Ready for travel, Jaheira?” Viconia asks, having come across to take a look at her patient and she is seemingly satisfied with what she sees, “good to have you back, druid. Yes, don’t look so surprised… without you around, I am not sure how we could handle Theodur… sooner or later Bhaal would have overtaken him.” [/qutoe] and may someday still even with Jaheira around.

[quote] “Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.” [/quote] Wow. Edwin almost admitted he was…wrong.

Great chapter, as always.
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#9 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 September 2003 - 07:31 AM

[quote][quote] Hmm…not much to say about this chapter as nothing of great importance occurs here… so I’ll just boast instead of the backlog that I have built during my vacation… I now have 32 chapters to spare… I reckon that by my posting pace, we will see Theo and Co kicking Irenicus's tail in Hell, right on X-mas eve. [/quote] Sounds like a great Yule present to me.
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Heh, I hope that I can stay true to that promise. I want to finish writing 'Rush' as soon as I can, since I have other things on my mind already, and I really suck when I have to concentrate at two projects at once. Still, I see that the writing could take me up to some 6-8 months and posting it... well, that could go on for more than a year.

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[quote] And of course, I’m really looking forwards to writing some less stressful stuff before I get into the whole ToB thing… heh, so far I have thought of few sub-plots, like travel back to Baldur’s Gate to find Eddie’s girl and visit the old places. [/quote] Am sure yoru characters could use some R&R before tackling Mellisan and company.
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Yep. I thought so too.

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[quote] Then there is a certain Red Dragon who is still alive and Jaheira needs a new suit of armor. Heck, that awful pink Doomplate just brings bad luck and she certainly could challenge Sarry in the ‘The Most Hideous Armor of The Year’ contest. [/quote] I find Jaheira rather fetching in the bright green Gorgon plate but somehow I suspect your aiming to dress her up in red instead.
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Oh, yes... the Gorgon Plate suits her very well indeed... :)

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[quote] And, since Jaheira and Theo will settle in Imnesvale, eventually… they will have an interesting new neighbor. Yep, I reckon that Mr. Corthala is still sulking in his cabin and I’m looking forward to do something with him… [/quote] I’m sure he will beahpy to elave that dingy cabin of his.
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Yes, poor Val... I have some amusing plans for him, hehe... :(

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[quote] Hmm, does that sound like worth wasting your time to read? And if you have any suggestions, this is the time to make them… though, Watcher’s Keep is definitely out. Nah, I’m not going there. I can’t see Theo suddenly developing a lust for adventure and treasure… [/rant] [/quote] Watcher’s keep is for power gaming not for role play.
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Yep. But with a lot of effort, I suppose you can make it interesting to read. I haven't played the Durlag's Tower in BG1, but I thought it also served mostly powergaming purpose - and Laufey made it a real treat to read in ItC.

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[quote] “Prepare some blankets so that we can carry her over to a more suitable place, it is not healthy to lay in a pool of blood,” Viconia’s words shake me out of the trance that I have been in, still unable to comprehend that Jaheira had been so close to death… “Theodur, do you hear me? And hand me her backpack, we better get a new tunic for her, or would you wish that she remains so… exposed?” [/quote] while I didn’t’ mention it last chapter I really appreciate the realism you use in depicting a serious injury. The game seems to brush aside the problems of infections and serious wounds by letting characters fight and mover around whether they have 100 HP or only 1 left.
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Yes, that is what I try... sadly, I have not enough personal experience to add the amount of details that I would like, but I suppose it's a start.

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[quote] With a heavy heart, I look at her body, wrapped in the blankets, she looks so tiny and vulnerable, her chest rising just barely as she breathes slowly and calmly… perhaps it will take more than a day, maybe two until she recovers and that Ardulace bitch might get very angry indeed. But I will take as long as it needs and will make absolutely sure that my Jaheira has fully recovered from her injuries. [/quote] Worse the longer you take the farther away Irenicus gets.
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Yep, he's probably preparing for the attack on Suldanessellar right now.

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[quote] “Sorry… failed…” are the words coming from her mouth. [/quote] how typical of Jaheira to take responsibility for everything.
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I thought so... duty and loyalty very much make her essence, something that I really appreciate myself.

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[quote] I lay at her side for an indefinite period of time, perhaps I have fallen asleep myself while watching her… but she is still sleeping peacefully as I look at her again. I rise from the floor to stretch my legs and take a look at what my friends are doing… Edwin is sitting on the floor cross-legged, chessboard in front of him and the spellbook in his lap – our resident genius once again is doing two things at once. [/quote] Having an unquiet mind myself I understand.
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Hehe... myself, I can only concentrate at one job at a time.

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[quote] “We looted some neat stuff from those freaks,” Immy says and points to a pile of swords and other items, just behind Edwin, “a couple of items were especially interesting, Eddie can tell you more about them. Come, let’s take a look.” [/quteo] yeah the demon princes have some good stuff on them
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Yep, but you don't necessarily want to lose someone to get ahold of that stuff.

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“Nothing… absolutely nothing…” I chuckle, but her reaction is making me ponderous, “anything else, Eddie?” [/quote] Hmmmmmmm number 2.
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Yes, quite puzzling, init?

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[quote] “All these swords are magical, but of inferior quality than the one you wield now,” Edwin comments, “except this one, but you will not be able to wield it, just because you are too righteous, lawful and generally goody-two-shoes. The Soul Reaver cannot be touched by creatures with... ergh, good and pure spirit.” [/quote] Good thing Edwin is picking it up then.
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Yeah, you can't hold having a good and pure spirit against Edwin.

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“Amazing… you can actually touch it?” Edwin stares in disbelief, “hmm, I guess then you are not such a goody-two-shoes, as I took you for… well, good for us all as this tool is incredibly powerful – each time you draw blood with it, your opponent gets magically drained and weakened.” [/quote] If only I could bring myself to play an evil character it would be a very good sword to use.
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Actually, it can be used by neutrals too... only good can't wield it.

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[quote] “Pah! Who cares about your romantic notions, on the contrary – think of how fitting it will be to cleave that mageling in two with this sword,” Edwin remarks and I think that maybe I should listen – a tool is a tool and it can’t be evil in itself… its how you use it that matters. [/quote] Guns don’t kill people, the hole the bullet leaves behind is what kills.
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Hehe, that's right... and sometimes it is not you using the tool, but the tool is using you...

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[quote] “A tenday? Surely, you are jesting, beloved – I am ready to go immediately,” her reply shocks me and to illustrate her determination she rises into a sitting position. Though she fights not to show it, I see that it takes her a lot of effort just to pull herself up from the floor. [/quote] Jaheira would of course scold anyone else for pretending to be hale and healthy.
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Naturally. She can be quite oblivious to her own well-being, she really needs someone to look after her... though, she won't like pampering of course.

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[quote] “Ready for travel, Jaheira?” Viconia asks, having come across to take a look at her patient and she is seemingly satisfied with what she sees, “good to have you back, druid. Yes, don’t look so surprised… without you around, I am not sure how we could handle Theodur… sooner or later Bhaal would have overtaken him.” [/quote] and may someday still even with Jaheira around.
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There is always the threat, yes. But with Jaheira around, he has more reasons to resist.

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[quote] “Eh… druid, if you are under some ungrounded delusions that this unfortunate and insignificant little mishap is due to my… ummm… error of judgment, in that case I offer my… er… apologies,” Edwin speaks the last word with an incredibly sour expression on his face, making Jaheira’s eyebrow arch mischievously, “of course the very assumption of me being capable of making a mistake is nonsensical in itself.” [/quote] Wow. Edwin almost admitted he was…wrong.
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Hehe... and I'm afraid, that's as far as he'll go... :(

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Great chapter, as always.
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