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#1 Guest_Bibbi_*

Posted 07 September 2003 - 12:28 AM

another chapter, trying to get back into the swing of things. i thought for a moment that my internet would be down for a while due to netowrk problems, but no fears, intrepid readers, thicker than water is here. :wink: here's one of the more interesting locations from the game: the prison plane. and the group officially gets its newest member, to most people's dismay. try not to feel too dejected. heh



Tybalt felt a surge of energy flow through him as he hurtled through the portal; dizziness overcame him until he was mercifully dumped to the floor. But this floor squished under his boot, unlike the stone basement of the Five Flagons. Where was he?

He gathered his bearings and saw himself standing on the brink of the world. Before him, the ground abruptly gave way to an endless void. One more step and he would have been lost forever.

He turned and found that the soft floor was in fact part of an enormous structure he had landed on. Pale, fleshy material formed columns and arches above him, connected to the floor as if one being. To further that belief, a faint thrum sounded throughout the area like a gigantic heartbeat.

Tybalt was not alone on this strange edifice in the middle of nowhere. A small dwarf ran at him with a mad gleam in his eyes. “How did you get here?” the creature asked him in astonishment. “No one but the masters can come and go!” He was half-starved and filthy, dressed only in tatters of clothing. He held a broken collar that looked to be a fit to a raw circle around the dwarf’s neck.

“I chased after some bounty hunters,” Tybalt gasped. “Where am I?”

The dwarf giggled insanely. “Not a good idea jumping through every doorway you see, is it?” he cried. “You’re in the planes’ best prison, you are! The Warden here hasn’t had an escape since anyone can remember. You better hope those bounty hunters were worth it, because you’re stuck here, now!”

The dwarf cringed as a flare erupted behind them and Jaheira and the others dropped from the sky onto the ground. They oriented themselves as Tybalt had done moments before, gaping in wonder at their new environment.

“Tybalt!” Jaheira yelled angrily when she caught sight of him. “I did not expect to become a baby-sitter! Must you always run off?”

“Could have fooled me,” Tybalt muttered to himself.

“What?” she asked dangerously.

“We’re on another plane,” Tybalt explained hastily to everyone. “The hunters have taken Haer’Dalis here. We should try to find him before they find us.”

“Too late!” the dwarf cried as he slipped behind a column. The bounty hunters had returned without the actors.

“It looks like we have some new prisoners,” the lead hunter laughed as the two parties clashed.

“We should have come here more prepared,” Jaheira asserted crabbily after they narrowly defeated the hunters. They had not had time to rest between the sewers exploration, the fight with Mekrath, and the defense of the actors back in the Five Flagons. Now, they were stranded for who knew how long on another plane and they were all tired.

“Strong fighters not need fight the whole prison,” the grungy dwarf said slyly when he determined the danger had passed. “I know a way to free the prisoners. They will fight for you.”

“Who are you?” Valygar demanded.

“A simple prisoner,” the dwarf mewled. “But free now! I slipped out of the control collar and am a slave no more! All prisoners here wear the collars, but if you turn them off they will help you.”

Yoshimo looked amused. “A most handy fellow, here. Tell me, how did you learn this?”

“I keep my ears open,” the dwarf shrugged. “The Master of Thralls carries the control orb for the collars. Destroy it and free everyone! They will fight the Warden, who holds the keys out.”

“Where is the Thrall Master and how do we destroy the orb?” Tybalt asked.

“There’s a pillar of flame,” the dwarf gestured to the right, “where you can destroy the orb. The Master of Thralls is further that way. You’ll know when you see him.”

Jaheira looked suspicious but was convinced by Valygar. “It’s our best plan right now,” he pointed out. “Even if it is a trap, we’re no worse off than if we knew nothing.”

The druid nodded reluctantly. “Very well. We will do as you ask, dwarf, but if you’re lying…” She left the threat hanging.

The dwarf gulped and took a step back. “I’ll watch from over here,” he squeaked and scuttled away.

The group made their way past several groups of slaves to a pillar of flame, just as the dwarf had promised. “He’s been truthful so far,” Yoshimo said. “Though the best lies are hidden in the truth.”

Valygar shot the thief an inquiring look. “I suppose you have a great deal of expertise with lies, Yoshimo?”

The bounty hunter smiled roguishly. “All in a day’s work, lord ranger, nothing more.”

To one side, Aerie was mournfully closing the eyes of one of the fallen slaves. “T-they’re not in control of their actions,” she said with tears in her eyes. “How can we kill them?”

Ajantis kneeled beside her. “My lady, these people were dead when they first put the collars on. Now we merely send them some peace. Better that these few die so the rest may be freed, I think.”

She nodded sadly. “Yes, but that doesn’t make this any easier.” She sighed and stood.

“If it helps,” Ajantis offered, “I will try to subdue any slaves without killing them.”

Aerie smiled brightly. “Thank you, Sir Ajantis.”

The group continued on the single path created from the living prison. After a few short skirmishes, they came across an imposing man armored in dark plate mail. Horns jutted from his helmet, though whether they originated beneath it or not was debatable.

“Who are you?” the tall man boomed. His voice guaranteed that here was no ordinary man as it hinted at infernal fires and demonic parentage. “Why are you not in collars?”

“You are horrible!” Aerie shouted before anyone else had a chance to respond. “How can you torment people like this? Is this a prison or a torture chamber?” She shot out a bolt of energy, striking the man unprepared.

The Master of Thralls bellowed and two air elementals flew before him. “You think to free the slaves?” he laughed. Then he and the elementals advanced.

“We must move back!” Jaheira cried. “Try to isolate them!” They retreated to a narrow section of the ground where only one person could get across at a time. Unfortunately, the air elementals held no such weaknesses as reliance on solid ground, and floated above the void surrounding them. They flanked the group across the bridge and struck from both sides. The Master of Thralls came at them from the small jut of floor available in front of them.

Ajantis and Xan battled the first elemental while Tybalt and Valygar focused on the second. Jaheira and Yoshimo warded off the Thrall Master as Aerie repeatedly cast spell after spell against the creature. Finally, their furious defense defeated the prison keepers and they were able to recuperate for a minute before taking the orb.

Aerie stared at the Thrall Master’s corpse, conflicted emotions playing across her face. “I’m glad he’s dead,” she whispered to Ajantis, who stood nearby. “I know I shouldn’t, but I’m glad.” She clutched her face in her hands. “What’s wrong with me?”

The paladin laid a hand around her shoulder. “He was an evil man, Aerie. There is no shame in despising such a villain. To enslave others is the basest form of evil.”

“You’re right, I guess,” Aerie smiled gratefully. “I just wish there was another way. Does violence have to solve everything?”

“’Tis a harsh world, young Aerie, and sometimes the only messenger can be a sword. The sooner you see this, the better.”

The elf girl narrowed her eyes. “Don’t talk down to me, Ajantis, I’ve seen more winters than you and have had more than my share of suffering. And I can’t believe that bloodshed will solve every problem. Maybe you’re the one who can’t see the truth, yet.” She walked away.

Ajantis stared after her in some confusion. Xan smiled nastily from nearby. “Say something she didn’t like?” he asked.

“It is none of your business, dwarf,” Ajantis replied shortly.

Xan drew himself up as high as possible. “I won’t be a dwarf forever, paladin. When I am cured, you will know to speak better to me.”

“I will never respect a man of such dubious morals,” Ajantis said coolly.

Xan barked a laugh. “Am I a mystery to you, paladin? Neither good nor evil? What are you to do with me? You have no reason to condemn me, but you cannot trust me, either, can you? You would not dare risk your superior moral code to smite something as insignificant as myself.”

Ajantis tried to make himself as imposing as possible and stepped to the dwarven mage. “I will be watching you, wizard, for any sign of evil. And when I detect it, you had best be ready.”

Xan scoffed. “I’ll wait for that moment eagerly. Then we’ll see who’s the better man.”

Aerie wandered over to them. “Is something wrong?” she asked innocently.

“We were just having a friendly chat,” Xan explained. Ajantis merely stared at him.

“Oh, that’s nice,” Aerie said uncertainly, noting the murderous looks exchanged. “Well, we’re ready to break the orb, so we should all be ready to storm the Warden as soon as the freed slaves regain control of their bodies.” She moved away.

“This isn’t over,” Ajantis promised.

“Of course not,” Xan sneered.

They separated and went back to the flaming column with the others. “Remember,” Jaheira reiterated, “as soon as the orb breaks, we’ll want to strike. Yoshimo will lead us to the Warden where he is surrounded by slaves. They should help us defeat him, but only if we get there in time.”

“Yes, yes, you’ve already been through this,” Tybalt danced around impatiently.

Jaheira frowned but placed the orb in the fire. A loud crack filled the air and several shrieks were heard in the distance. “Let’s go!” she commanded.

Yoshimo ran toward the Warden’s station, dodging pulsing sphincters in the floor as he went. The others followed swiftly in time to see groups of collared prisoners shake themselves out of their long torpor and face the world again. At the end of the path lay a large platform where slaves crowded around another heavily armored man. This man, however, was having a much more difficult time in maintaining authority as the former slaves were taking their vengeance. In their starved and beaten state, though, they were no match for a strong warrior such as the Warden. The slaves would soon fall.

The group pushed through the crowd to reach the embattled Warden and give him a real test of his abilities. With all of the chaos from the mob, the Warden had no chance to retaliate and fell quickly.

Yoshimo deftly grabbed a keychain from the body before the surge of prisoners could swarm the body and vent their rage on it. “One exit, coming right up!”

“Please!” Aerie fought to make her voice heard over the crowd. “We will free you all, but you must be patient. Give us a chance to release our friends and they can help us all!”

The crowd gave no sign of hearing this until Xan shot an explosion into the air with a loud boom.

“Th-thank you,” Aerie stammered. “Everyone keep calm and you’ll soon be free.” She gathered the slaves to the side, allowing a path to another hallway of individual cells. “I’ll gather these people until you find the actors.”

Yoshimo led the rest of them down the hall to the last occupied cell. Haer’Dalis and his troupe lounged hopelessly within until they caught sight of their rescuers. “My raven!” Haer’Dalis shouted. “I knew you would not abandon us so easily! You have my heartfelt thanks.”

“And mine,” Raelis smiled. “If you free us from this cell, I will be able to send you back to Athkatla, and we will be able to return to Sigil.”

“We also ask that you return the slaves to their homes,” Ajantis mentioned.

Raelis frowned. “That would doubtless take time; these prisoners come from all corners of the multiverse. The best I can do is take them with me to Sigil. From there, they will have means to find their own worlds.”

Tybalt nodded. “That sounds fair enough.” They opened the door and escorted the troupe back to the Warden’s room, where Aerie had taken all of the surviving slaves. The dirty dwarf appeared to thank them all before vanishing in a cloud of smoke.

“If he could leave at any time…” Tybalt wondered.

“The magic of the prison is such that no one may leave without the Warden’s permission,” Haer’Dalis explained at his side. “With your timely arrival, we are free to go as we please.”

“Attention,” Raelis stated with more success than Aerie had previously had. Everyone immediately quieted and waited for her announcement. “I am ready to take us all from this place. First, Tybalt and his friends shall go back to Athkatla, then the rest of us can return to Sigil. Is everyone ready?”

“Mistress Raelis, I am afraid I cannot go with you.” Haer’Dalis’ confession shocked everyone present.

Raelis looked at him sadly. “I knew our time together would never be forever,” she said, “but I did not expect you to leave so soon.”

“Yes,” the bard announced, “this bard has learned much during my time with you, but I cannot in good conscience leave the Prime with unfinished business. Perhaps one day we will meet again, Raelis.”

Raelis brushed his cheek gently and nodded. “Farewell, Haer’Dalis.” In another moment, she and the prisoners were gone, replaced by the familiar basement of the Five Flagons.

“It is good to have the solid earth under us,” Jaheira said in relief. “I think I will take a long bath and go to sleep for a week.”

Everyone agreed. The group slowly walked up the stairs to a long meal and longer rest. But Haer’Dalis held Tybalt back for a moment. “My raven, might I ask a boon of you?”

“I suppose,” Tybalt answered uncertainly.

“I confess that your world has captured my heart as surely as any spider web’s. I am bound to travel its lengths until it releases me from its cruel bondage. Until then, may I join with you, see through your eyes and adventure as one of your comrades. Your tale promises to be a grand one, and a skilled poet at your side will be an enormous asset.”

“Haer’Dalis,” Tybalt responded nervously, “while I would welcome you with us, our path is not the safest. We will not be able to protect you all the time; I would worry for your safety.”

“If that is your greatest reluctance,” the bard laughed, “then fear not. I am a skilled swordsman; I have bested opponents across the planes with Chaos and Entropy.” He showed the Bhaalspawn his twin blades strapped at the waist. “And I have some small talent with street magic,” he admitted.

Truth to tell, Tybalt wasn’t displeased at the bard’s offer, but he wasn’t sure of the others’ opinions to this addition, specifically Jaheira’s. He thought for a moment, then grinned. Jaheira wasn’t leader of the group, at least, not officially. “Welcome aboard,” he congratulated Haer’Dalis.

#2 Guest_argan_*

Posted 07 September 2003 - 12:53 AM

Interesting chapter :wink:

#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 07 September 2003 - 06:52 AM

another chapter, trying to get back into the swing of things. i thought for a moment that my internet would be down for a while due to netowrk problems, but no fears, intrepid readers, thicker than water is here. :) here's one of the more interesting locations from the game: the prison plane. and the group officially gets its newest member, to most people's dismay. try not to feel too dejected. heh


Heh, you have my two least favorites from BG2 - Aerie and Haer and one of my least favorite from BG - Ajantis, in the group, but I still enjoy the story. Probably, the fact that Jaheira is in the party and is being romanced makes up for everything. :)

“We should have come here more prepared,” Jaheira asserted crabbily after they narrowly defeated the hunters. They had not had time to rest between the sewers exploration, the fight with Mekrath, and the defense of the actors back in the Five Flagons. Now, they were stranded for who knew how long on another plane and they were all tired.


“Strong fighters not need fight the whole prison,” the grungy dwarf said slyly when he determined the danger had passed. “I know a way to free the prisoners. They will fight for you.”


Somehow, they didn't quite make a match for the Warden... when I make it to him, the thralls are usually all dead already... ;)

To one side, Aerie was mournfully closing the eyes of one of the fallen slaves. “T-they’re not in control of their actions,” she said with tears in her eyes. “How can we kill them?”


Errr... because it's better to kill them, than let them kill you? Eh, LG's and their ideals... *sigh*

“If it helps,” Ajantis offered, “I will try to subdue any slaves without killing them.”


I would not leave anyone alive behind my back, who could sneak up on me with a backstab. But then, I am not a paladin. :(

Aerie stared at the Thrall Master’s corpse, conflicted emotions playing across her face. “I’m glad he’s dead,” she whispered to Ajantis, who stood nearby. “I know I shouldn’t, but I’m glad.” She clutched her face in her hands. “What’s wrong with me?”


You are finally becoming a normal person, that's what. I find it incredible that a person being tortured and put in a cage by slavers, could be all about whiny sweetness and innocence. There must be some hate and rage below the surface and she should vent it sometimes.

The elf girl narrowed her eyes. “Don’t talk down to me, Ajantis, I’ve seen more winters than you and have had more than my share of suffering. And I can’t believe that bloodshed will solve every problem. Maybe you’re the one who can’t see the truth, yet.” She walked away.


I'd say that with that attitude, Ajantis will probably outlive her. And it's not like everyone in this group wants to try the violent way first and talk later. I hope her childish ideals get shattered quickly, for her own sake.

“Oh, that’s nice,” Aerie said uncertainly, noting the murderous looks exchanged. “Well, we’re ready to break the orb, so we should all be ready to storm the Warden as soon as the freed slaves regain control of their bodies.” She moved away.


“This isn’t over,” Ajantis promised.


“Of course not,” Xan sneered.


Is there a competition for Aerie? Xan, really. Don't bother.

“It is good to have the solid earth under us,” Jaheira said in relief. “I think I will take a long bath and go to sleep for a week.”


LOL! Though, I have no doubt that she will be the first up next morn and bugging everyone not to waste precious time by oversleeping... ;)

“If that is your greatest reluctance,” the bard laughed, “then fear not. I am a skilled swordsman; I have bested opponents across the planes with Chaos and Entropy.” He showed the Bhaalspawn his twin blades strapped at the waist. “And I have some small talent with street magic,” he admitted.


Truth to tell, Tybalt wasn’t displeased at the bard’s offer, but he wasn’t sure of the others’ opinions to this addition, specifically Jaheira’s. He thought for a moment, then grinned. Jaheira wasn’t leader of the group, at least, not officially. “Welcome aboard,” he congratulated Haer’Dalis.


LOL, I suppose the reactions of the others will come in the next chapter... that is bound to be interesting and... vocal. :(

#4 Guest_Hunter_*

Posted 08 September 2003 - 05:24 AM

another chapter, trying to get back into the swing of things. i thought for a moment that my internet would be down for a while due to netowrk problems, but no fears, intrepid readers, thicker than water is here. :) here's one of the more interesting locations from the game: the prison plane. and the group officially gets its newest member, to most people's dismay. try not to feel too dejected. heh


Oh that's good, that means that i have someone to blame for everything.

The dwarf giggled insanely. “Not a good idea jumping through every doorway you see, is it?” he cried. “You’re in the planes’ best prison, you are! The Warden here hasn’t had an escape since anyone can remember. You better hope those bounty hunters were worth it, because you’re stuck here, now!”


Doh! Think before you act the next time.

The dwarf cringed as a flare erupted behind them and Jaheira and the others dropped from the sky onto the ground. They oriented themselves as Tybalt had done moments before, gaping in wonder at their new environment.


“Tybalt!” Jaheira yelled angrily when she caught sight of him. “I did not expect to become a baby-sitter! Must you always run off?”


And for once, her anger is justified.

“Could have fooled me,” Tybalt muttered to himself.


“What?” she asked dangerously.


:( She's not used to be spoken back to.

“We should have come here more prepared,” Jaheira asserted crabbily after they narrowly defeated the hunters. They had not had time to rest between the sewers exploration, the fight with Mekrath, and the defense of the actors back in the Five Flagons. Now, they were stranded for who knew how long on another plane and they were all tired.


And it's all tybalts fault ;) . And it is his fault. ;)

The group made their way past several groups of slaves to a pillar of flame, just as the dwarf had promised. “He’s been truthful so far,” Yoshimo said. “Though the best lies are hidden in the truth.”


He would know.

Valygar shot the thief an inquiring look. “I suppose you have a great deal of expertise with lies, Yoshimo?”


Oh yes.

“You are horrible!” Aerie shouted before anyone else had a chance to respond. “How can you torment people like this? Is this a prison or a torture chamber?” She shot out a bolt of energy, striking the man unprepared.


GO aerie!

The elf girl narrowed her eyes. “Don’t talk down to me, Ajantis, I’ve seen more winters than you and have had more than my share of suffering. And I can’t believe that bloodshed will solve every problem. Maybe you’re the one who can’t see the truth, yet.” She walked away.


Take that.

Ajantis stared after her in some confusion. Xan smiled nastily from nearby. “Say something she didn’t like?” he asked.


:) She's not just a naive girl.

“It is none of your business, dwarf,” Ajantis replied shortly.


Xan drew himself up as high as possible. “I won’t be a dwarf forever, paladin. When I am cured, you will know to speak better to me.”


That only make him seem even more silly.

“This isn’t over,” Ajantis promised.


“Of course not,” Xan sneered.


I'm looking forward to it.

Yoshimo ran toward the Warden’s station, dodging pulsing sphincters in the floor as he went. The others followed swiftly in time to see groups of collared prisoners shake themselves out of their long torpor and face the world again. At the end of the path lay a large platform where slaves crowded around another heavily armored man. This man, however, was having a much more difficult time in maintaining authority as the former slaves were taking their vengeance. In their starved and beaten state, though, they were no match for a strong warrior such as the Warden. The slaves would soon fall.


An insect swarm works wonders here.

“Attention,” Raelis stated with more success than Aerie had previously had. Everyone immediately quieted and waited for her announcement. “I am ready to take us all from this place. First, Tybalt and his friends shall go back to Athkatla, then the rest of us can return to Sigil. Is everyone ready?”


“Mistress Raelis, I am afraid I cannot go with you.” Haer’Dalis’ confession shocked everyone present.


Perhaps even she is becoming tired of him.

Everyone agreed. The group slowly walked up the stairs to a long meal and longer rest. But Haer’Dalis held Tybalt back for a moment. “My raven, might I ask a boon of you?”


He has some nerve, after what he has done.

“Haer’Dalis,” Tybalt responded nervously, “while I would welcome you with us, our path is not the safest. We will not be able to protect you all the time; I would worry for your safety.”


Yes! YES! Why didn't i think of that, if he travels with them, there's a greater chance that he will be killed, oh yes.

Take him with you, don't hesistate.

Truth to tell, Tybalt wasn’t displeased at the bard’s offer, but he wasn’t sure of the others’ opinions to this addition, specifically Jaheira’s. He thought for a moment, then grinned. Jaheira wasn’t leader of the group, at least, not officially. “Welcome aboard,” he congratulated Haer’Dalis.


I dosn't matter if it's official or not, jaheira is the boss, just ask her.

Hunter

#5 Guest_Bibbi_*

Posted 08 September 2003 - 06:26 PM

Interesting chapter


thanks. it'll get even more interesting as time goes by and relationships dissolve. it'll be fun, i promise. 8)
thanks for reading!

#6 Guest_Bibbi_*

Posted 08 September 2003 - 06:47 PM

Bibbi wrote:
another chapter, trying to get back into the swing of things. i thought for a moment that my internet would be down for a while due to netowrk problems, but no fears, intrepid readers, thicker than water is here. here's one of the more interesting locations from the game: the prison plane. and the group officially gets its newest member, to most people's dismay. try not to feel too dejected. heh


Heh, you have my two least favorites from BG2 - Aerie and Haer and one of my least favorite from BG - Ajantis, in the group, but I still enjoy the story. Probably, the fact that Jaheira is in the party and is being romanced makes up for everything.


if nothing else, the unpopular npcs serve as a focus point for comments, i think. 8) bad publicity is good publicity, as they say.


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“Strong fighters not need fight the whole prison,” the grungy dwarf said slyly when he determined the danger had passed. “I know a way to free the prisoners. They will fight for you.”


Somehow, they didn't quite make a match for the Warden... when I make it to him, the thralls are usually all dead already...


yeah, they're not as helpful as they could be, but then, that would break computer games' traditions of the player having to do EVERYTHING by him/herself :(

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To one side, Aerie was mournfully closing the eyes of one of the fallen slaves. “T-they’re not in control of their actions,” she said with tears in her eyes. “How can we kill them?”



Errr... because it's better to kill them, than let them kill you? Eh, LG's and their ideals... *sigh*


in a perfect world, you'd want them around. unfortunately, nothing's perfect, so you have to learn to adapt. aerie's learning, slowly

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“If it helps,” Ajantis offered, “I will try to subdue any slaves without killing them.”



I would not leave anyone alive behind my back, who could sneak up on me with a backstab. But then, I am not a paladin.


a paladin's moral code seems very hard to uphold, given human nature, so i'm always impressed when they follow through and act as chivalrously as they are supposed to. too many times they give a sermon on goodness and justice and turn around and attack the innocent. :( Ajantis follows the tenets of paladinhood seriously, however, so there's no need to worry about him....

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Aerie stared at the Thrall Master’s corpse, conflicted emotions playing across her face. “I’m glad he’s dead,” she whispered to Ajantis, who stood nearby. “I know I shouldn’t, but I’m glad.” She clutched her face in her hands. “What’s wrong with me?”



You are finally becoming a normal person, that's what. I find it incredible that a person being tortured and put in a cage by slavers, could be all about whiny sweetness and innocence. There must be some hate and rage below the surface and she should vent it sometimes.


and there will be more, later. i feel bad turning her into a colder, harsher person as she ventures into the world, but we must all go through this process at some point in our lives.

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The elf girl narrowed her eyes. “Don’t talk down to me, Ajantis, I’ve seen more winters than you and have had more than my share of suffering. And I can’t believe that bloodshed will solve every problem. Maybe you’re the one who can’t see the truth, yet.” She walked away.



I'd say that with that attitude, Ajantis will probably outlive her. And it's not like everyone in this group wants to try the violent way first and talk later. I hope her childish ideals get shattered quickly, for her own sake.


i only wish there were an easier way for her to grow up. an adventuring company's not the best place to discover your position in the world. of course, there are even worse ways to grow up

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“Oh, that’s nice,” Aerie said uncertainly, noting the murderous looks exchanged. “Well, we’re ready to break the orb, so we should all be ready to storm the Warden as soon as the freed slaves regain control of their bodies.” She moved away.



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“This isn’t over,” Ajantis promised.



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“Of course not,” Xan sneered.



Is there a competition for Aerie? Xan, really. Don't bother.


strange how she seems to generate such friction between men, huh? i hadn't originally planned any of this, but it came up as the characters interacted. and thinking back to the real game where haer and the pc might have a tussle, aerie's really got something going for her. guys just like the innocent school-girl look, i guess :(


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“It is good to have the solid earth under us,” Jaheira said in relief. “I think I will take a long bath and go to sleep for a week.”



LOL! Though, I have no doubt that she will be the first up next morn and bugging everyone not to waste precious time by oversleeping...


hehe, true.


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“If that is your greatest reluctance,” the bard laughed, “then fear not. I am a skilled swordsman; I have bested opponents across the planes with Chaos and Entropy.” He showed the Bhaalspawn his twin blades strapped at the waist. “And I have some small talent with street magic,” he admitted.



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Truth to tell, Tybalt wasn’t displeased at the bard’s offer, but he wasn’t sure of the others’ opinions to this addition, specifically Jaheira’s. He thought for a moment, then grinned. Jaheira wasn’t leader of the group, at least, not officially. “Welcome aboard,” he congratulated Haer’Dalis.


LOL, I suppose the reactions of the others will come in the next chapter... that is bound to be interesting and... vocal.


count on it. jaheira still holds too much fondness for tybalt to order him around despotically, but she's not going to like his decision. and haer won't be the easiest for anyone to get along with for anyone, not just jaheira.

thanks for reading!

#7 Guest_Bibbi_*

Posted 08 September 2003 - 07:03 PM

Bibbi wrote:
another chapter, trying to get back into the swing of things. i thought for a moment that my internet would be down for a while due to netowrk problems, but no fears, intrepid readers, thicker than water is here. here's one of the more interesting locations from the game: the prison plane. and the group officially gets its newest member, to most people's dismay. try not to feel too dejected. heh



Oh that's good, that means that i have someone to blame for everything.


aww, poor haer. he'll be getting plenty of blame, i'm sure, but there's enough to go around the group. 8)


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The dwarf giggled insanely. “Not a good idea jumping through every doorway you see, is it?” he cried. “You’re in the planes’ best prison, you are! The Warden here hasn’t had an escape since anyone can remember. You better hope those bounty hunters were worth it, because you’re stuck here, now!”



Doh! Think before you act the next time.


then he wouldn't be the same crazy bhaalspawn we all know and love :D and we wouldn't get as many fun encounters

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The dwarf cringed as a flare erupted behind them and Jaheira and the others dropped from the sky onto the ground. They oriented themselves as Tybalt had done moments before, gaping in wonder at their new environment.



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“Tybalt!” Jaheira yelled angrily when she caught sight of him. “I did not expect to become a baby-sitter! Must you always run off?”



And for once, her anger is justified.


she gets angry a lot, i notice. wonder why.... :)

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“Could have fooled me,” Tybalt muttered to himself.



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“What?” she asked dangerously.



She's not used to be spoken back to.


though i don't think valygar is going to let her get away with as much as in the past. he's not going to call her on everything, but he's not going to be easy to boss around


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“We should have come here more prepared,” Jaheira asserted crabbily after they narrowly defeated the hunters. They had not had time to rest between the sewers exploration, the fight with Mekrath, and the defense of the actors back in the Five Flagons. Now, they were stranded for who knew how long on another plane and they were all tired.



And it's all tybalts fault . And it is his fault.


like you said, there will be another to lay blame on soon

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The group made their way past several groups of slaves to a pillar of flame, just as the dwarf had promised. “He’s been truthful so far,” Yoshimo said. “Though the best lies are hidden in the truth.”



He would know.


:(

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Valygar shot the thief an inquiring look. “I suppose you have a great deal of expertise with lies, Yoshimo?”



Oh yes.


hehe. yoshi's not the most trusted member; the group's not stupid: they need a good thief, which he is, but they don't necessarily have to trust him completely, which i felt the party did in the game. there wasn't a lot of questioning going on, though perhaps there wasn't as much mysteriousness attached to him in game


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“You are horrible!” Aerie shouted before anyone else had a chance to respond. “How can you torment people like this? Is this a prison or a torture chamber?” She shot out a bolt of energy, striking the man unprepared.



GO aerie!


she's being exposed to the harsh world in big doses and reacts accordingly. she's not going to be the same circus runaway as before


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The elf girl narrowed her eyes. “Don’t talk down to me, Ajantis, I’ve seen more winters than you and have had more than my share of suffering. And I can’t believe that bloodshed will solve every problem. Maybe you’re the one who can’t see the truth, yet.” She walked away.



Take that.


tho maybe she should examine herself before criticising others. she does have a lot to learn, yet

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Ajantis stared after her in some confusion. Xan smiled nastily from nearby. “Say something she didn’t like?” he asked.



She's not just a naive girl.


nope, she's someone figuring lots of things out right now, and the besr thing they can do is let her alone to think

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“It is none of your business, dwarf,” Ajantis replied shortly.



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Xan drew himself up as high as possible. “I won’t be a dwarf forever, paladin. When I am cured, you will know to speak better to me.”



That only make him seem even more silly.


xan will never make the heroic figure, i fear. not that he wants to, but i'm sure everyone wishes to be seen in a different light from time to time


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“This isn’t over,” Ajantis promised.



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“Of course not,” Xan sneered.



I'm looking forward to it.


hehe. the three of them will have an interesting encounter later on. it'll bring them...closer together to say the least :(


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Yoshimo ran toward the Warden’s station, dodging pulsing sphincters in the floor as he went. The others followed swiftly in time to see groups of collared prisoners shake themselves out of their long torpor and face the world again. At the end of the path lay a large platform where slaves crowded around another heavily armored man. This man, however, was having a much more difficult time in maintaining authority as the former slaves were taking their vengeance. In their starved and beaten state, though, they were no match for a strong warrior such as the Warden. The slaves would soon fall.



An insect swarm works wonders here.


i always like to have the warden spend as many spells on the slaves as possible before taking him on, myself, though that's not the most ethical way of dealing with him... i'm sure aerie and ajantis would have some words for my tactics


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“Attention,” Raelis stated with more success than Aerie had previously had. Everyone immediately quieted and waited for her announcement. “I am ready to take us all from this place. First, Tybalt and his friends shall go back to Athkatla, then the rest of us can return to Sigil. Is everyone ready?”



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“Mistress Raelis, I am afraid I cannot go with you.” Haer’Dalis’ confession shocked everyone present.



Perhaps even she is becoming tired of him.


hmm, never thought of that. she lets go of him easily, but is that because she shares his views and sees love as naturally fleeting or has she tired of his doomguard philosophy. an interesting idea for a side story

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Everyone agreed. The group slowly walked up the stairs to a long meal and longer rest. But Haer’Dalis held Tybalt back for a moment. “My raven, might I ask a boon of you?”



He has some nerve, after what he has done.


that he does; you have to give him some credit for that, tho. not too many people would be persistant enough to pull off what he does


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“Haer’Dalis,” Tybalt responded nervously, “while I would welcome you with us, our path is not the safest. We will not be able to protect you all the time; I would worry for your safety.”



Yes! YES! Why didn't i think of that, if he travels with them, there's a greater chance that he will be killed, oh yes.

Take him with you, don't hesistate.


:( :) he's not going anywhere for a while (not permanently, at least)

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Truth to tell, Tybalt wasn’t displeased at the bard’s offer, but he wasn’t sure of the others’ opinions to this addition, specifically Jaheira’s. He thought for a moment, then grinned. Jaheira wasn’t leader of the group, at least, not officially. “Welcome aboard,” he congratulated Haer’Dalis.


I dosn't matter if it's official or not, jaheira is the boss, just ask her.

Hunter



and thus tybalt avoids asking her opinion, knowing what it will be. he's like a bad child delaying punishment from mommy. this group really is turning into a dysfunctional family with Momma Jaheira and Poppa Vally. and then there're all the squabbling children and strange uncle yoshi who no one can ever figure out :D

thanks for reading!




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