Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
And this one does deserve a disclaimer. Folks, I really mean it.
Warning: Dark and mature themes, that many might find disturbing (despite the lack of graphical details)
Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 5.15.
“Dearest, please don’t do anything stup… that might disappoint me,” Jaheira says meaningfully, as we are about to enter the Female Fighter’s Society tower.
“I would never do anything deliberate, knowing that it might harm you,” I try to reassure her, but I am worried myself and the knowing expression in Viconia’s eyes does not help either.
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
“Good that you didn’t make me to wait for much longer, Rindvel,” she grins, “however, I invited you for a talk in private, which means that the presence of your companions is unnecessary. In fact, Solaufein asked me that I send your subordinates to see him - perhaps he has a task for them… I hardly care. Now go and leave Rindvel and me alone.”
My friends turn around to leave me alone with this power-hungry bitch, only Jaheira hesitates and I catch her look, filled with anger, desperation and helplessness over her inability to intervene in what is bound to happen. I feel sharp, physical pain in my chest area as I continue to look at her, but Viconia takes her by the shoulder and nudges towards the door… unwillingly she allows herself to be pushed outside…
Phaere orders me to follow her and leads me through a narrow hallway until we reach a room, her room. My thoughts are racing all over the place, the panic over what Phaere wants from me, the pain for hurting Jaheira without wanting to…
“You have proven useful, Rindvel. A strong and powerful male… yes, you are worthy of my bed. Come, you shall remain here for a time and please me,” Phaere speaks seductively, as we both stand beside the large bed, her arm on my hip, the other resting on my chest… I feel dazed from the strong scent of perfumes that emanate from her.
“I… umm… can’t do it, Phaere,” I whisper weakly, trying to dodge out.
“What do you mean by that ‘can’t’? I command you to!” Phaere hisses dangerously.
“I… err… belong to another,” is the best excuse that enters my mind, probably because it is the truth, too…
“What? Who is this another?” the expression on Phaere’s face is so menacing that I almost tremble in fear… saying that this another is Jaheira, might prove to be a very fatal mistake – especially to Jaheira.
“Err… you don’t know her… she is…”
“Ah, someone in Ched Nasad… but surely that can’t stop me, Rindvel,” Phaere grins, “she is not here… and I’m used in getting what I want…”
Drat! She didn’t fall for that! Umm… ideas, ideas… gah, this perfume is making me suffocate…
“You see, Phaere… she… umm, that woman cursed me… it can’t be removed too,” I explain, yet the stutter makes it sound very unconvincing, “It prevents me from becoming… err… intimate…”
“Surely you are not serious, Rindvel. Are you playing some kind of game with me?” her grin is both mischievous and ruthless at the same time as I feel her hand stroking at my leg and slowly moving… upwards…
“Hmm… your reaction is most interesting,” she laughs as my head is spinning and I feel my control cracking… “Yes… I think, I have found a remedy for this curse of yours…” she speaks as her movements of the hand elicit a groan from my lips.
Forcefully she presses her lips against mine, and when I cannot force myself to kiss her back, she breaks loose only to snarl, “Noncompliance means death, Rindvel. I hope you understand that, male.”
She pushes me onto the bed and soon enough she is all over me, her hands touching me, her lips against mine… and the threat of death is the only thing that makes me respond to her caresses… I feel only her warm body pressing against mine, but the sensations that it brings are not the ones of pleasure and my thoughts are elsewhere – suddenly I understand the pain and anguish that Jaheira felt after humiliation she suffered in the dungeon and it breaks my heart apart…
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
“Come on, Heira… let’s go unless we want Solaufein to get angry with us,” Imoen says, looking at Jaheira who is leaning heavily against the wall of the building.
“Besides it will take your mind off our dear Rindvel and whatever he might be up to now,” Viconia adds.
“Shut up! I don’t want to hear anything about it… let’s just… go,” Jaheira shakes herself and straightens her back, seemingly regaining the control over herself, but the heavy frown twisting her face stays intact.
“Well, I wouldn’t be surprised if Phaere finds him unworthy, in that case I would graciously offer my unsurpassable skills at her disposal,” Edwin says something that is perhaps intended to be calming, but it does not come across that way.
“Just… keep your mouth shut! I will not say it again, but if any of you make a comment over it, I will… I will…” Jaheira’s voice trails off and she continues to converse quietly, more with herself, “perhaps… perhaps, he can wriggle out… somehow… perhaps…”
“Now, let’s find out what our sulky Drow has devised for us,” Viconia says as the group reaches the Male Fighters Society building. Quietly they enter to find Solaufein already waiting for them in the hall.
“Ah, you have come,” he smiles serenely, “Phaere must have instructed you wrongly, however. I only require the attention of your leader,” he points to Jaheira, “the rest of you are dismissed.”
“What is it you wish of me, Solaufein?” Jaheira asks hoarsely, before her companions have left the hall.
“Ah, but this is only to be discussed away from prying ears,” Solaufein calmly explains.
“Remember, he’s a male… you don’t have to comply to anything he asks,” Viconia whispers, before turning around and ushering both Edwin and Imoen outside.
“Now that we are alone, female,” Solaufein smirks, “I can explain you what this is all about. But first, follow me to a place where our talk will not be interrupted. I trust you have a name, female?”
“Heira,” Jaheira replies whilst trying to keep her voice level, “what is this all about, Solaufein? I urge you to explain…”
“Very soon, dear Heira,” he leads Jaheira into a room that looks like a bedchamber… actually, it is a bedchamber and this realization is making Jaheira feel very nervous…
“What…” Jaheira’s question is silenced as Solaufein presses his palm against her mouth. Angrily she knocks his hand away and steps a few paces away from the large drow warrior who is chuckling amusedly.
“And I thought that I have lost all interest in the opposite sex after Phaere,” he laughs quietly, “I have to thank you, dear Heira… you are an extraordinary woman and there is nothing more I would love, than to have you sharing my bed. And with your lovely, firm, strong body of a warrior it will be a pleasure and unforgettable experience for us both…”
“You… you are mad, Solaufein,” Jaheira protests in a trembling voice, her fists clenched in anger, “you… forget that you are only a male, not much higher in position than I… you have no right to…”
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
“How?” Jaheira manages weakly and she closes her eyes, unable to look at him any further, “what do you intend to…”
“Ah, I have my own sources of information,” Solaufein says, “of course, it was your… odd compassion, that you showed towards me, which gave me first doubts. After that, only a little research was necessary… and do not worry – your secret is safe with me. For now – it will depend on your… compliance…”
“You are a despicable bastard, Solaufein,” Jaheira whispers as Solaufein goes to stand behind her, his hands working on the straps of her armor.
“I promise, I will be gentle,” he leans closer to whisper in her ear and Jaheira winces at the comment.
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 5.15.
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Disturbing is not necessarily a bad thing.Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
And this one does deserve a disclaimer. Folks, I really mean it.
Warning: Dark and mature themes, that many might find disturbing (despite the lack of graphical details)
But it is the inadvertent things that we do that can potentially do the most harm.“Dearest, please don’t do anything stup… that might disappoint me,” Jaheira says meaningfully, as we are about to enter the Female Fighter’s Society tower.
“I would never do anything deliberate, knowing that it might harm you,” I try to reassure her, but I am worried myself and the knowing expression in Viconia’s eyes does not help either.
I can imagine that smile, it definitely is not an inviting one.Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
And already there is pain and angst here.My friends turn around to leave me alone with this power-hungry bitch, only Jaheira hesitates and I catch her look, filled with anger, desperation and helplessness over her inability to intervene in what is bound to happen. I feel sharp, physical pain in my chest area as I continue to look at her, but Viconia takes her by the shoulder and nudges towards the door… unwillingly she allows herself to be pushed outside…
I suppose by Drow standards this is one of the greatest complements a male can get.“You have proven useful, Rindvel. A strong and powerful male… yes, you are worthy of my bed. Come, you shall remain here for a time and please me,” Phaere speaks seductively, as we both stand beside the large bed, her arm on my hip, the other resting on my chest… I feel dazed from the strong scent of perfumes that emanate from her.
I’m guessing our hero does not have sufficient charisma to pull that gambit off.“You see, Phaere… she… umm, that woman cursed me… it can’t be removed too,” I explain, yet the stutter makes it sound very unconvincing, “It prevents me from becoming… err… intimate…”
“Surely you are not serious, Rindvel. Are you playing some kind of game with me?” her grin is both mischievous and ruthless at the same time as I feel her hand stroking at my leg and slowly moving… upwards…
“Hmm… your reaction is most interesting,” she laughs as my head is spinning and I feel my control cracking… “Yes… I think, I have found a remedy for this curse of yours…” she speaks as her movements of the hand elicit a groan from my lips.
Very dark and very disturbing.She pushes me onto the bed and soon enough she is all over me, her hands touching me, her lips against mine… and the threat of death is the only thing that makes me respond to her caresses… I feel only her warm body pressing against mine, but the sensations that it brings are not the ones of pleasure and my thoughts are elsewhere – suddenly I understand the pain and anguish that Jaheira felt after humiliation she suffered in the dungeon and it breaks my heart apart…
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Viconia almost sounds concerned.Besides it will take your mind off our dear Rindvel and whatever he might be up to now,” Viconia adds.
Not a very good day for Jaheira is it?Just… keep your mouth shut! I will not say it again, but if any of you make a comment over it, I will… I will…” Jaheira’s voice trails off and she continues to converse quietly, more with herself, “perhaps… perhaps, he can wriggle out… somehow… perhaps…”
Fortunately it will be something different than what Phaere had in mind.Ah, you have come,” he smiles serenely, “Phaere must have instructed you wrongly, however. I only require the attention of your leader,” he points to Jaheira, “the rest of you are dismissed.”
“What is it you wish of me, Solaufein?” Jaheira asks hoarsely, before her companions have left the hall.
Well maybe not.“And I thought that I have lost all interest in the opposite sex after Phaere,” he laughs quietly, “I have to thank you, dear Heira… you are an extraordinary woman and there is nothing more I would love, than to have you sharing my bed. And with your lovely, firm, strong body of a warrior it will be a pleasure and unforgettable experience for us both…”
Oh my.“Ah, I have my own sources of information,” Solaufein says, “of course, it was your… odd compassion, that you showed towards me, which gave me first doubts. After that, only a little research was necessary… and do not worry – your secret is safe with me. For now – it will depend on your… compliance…”
“You are a despicable bastard, Solaufein,” Jaheira whispers as Solaufein goes to stand behind her, his hands working on the straps of her armor.
“I promise, I will be gentle,” he leans closer to whisper in her ear and Jaheira winces at the comment.
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
That was….evil.
I really enjoyed it!
Great chapter. Am really glad you didn’t take the easy way out.
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Posted 05 September 2003 - 10:46 PM
Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
Doesn't sound like this will be a fun chapter, then. “I would never do anything deliberate, knowing that it might harm you,” I try to reassure her, but I am worried myself and the knowing expression in Viconia’s eyes does not help either.
And given your introduction to this chapter, I'm worried too...Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
Poor Theo.
My friends turn around to leave me alone with this power-hungry bitch, only Jaheira hesitates and I catch her look, filled with anger, desperation and helplessness over her inability to intervene in what is bound to happen. I feel sharp, physical pain in my chest area as I continue to look at her, but Viconia takes her by the shoulder and nudges towards the door… unwillingly she allows herself to be pushed outside…
That was a very moving description of how Jaheira feels. Really hope Theo isn't going to let her down.“What? Who is this another?” the expression on Phaere’s face is so menacing that I almost tremble in fear… saying that this another is Jaheira, might prove to be a very fatal mistake – especially to Jaheira.
C'mon Theo...think fast...
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Oh Theo...“Ah, you have come,” he smiles serenely, “Phaere must have instructed you wrongly, however. I only require the attention of your leader,” he points to Jaheira, “the rest of you are dismissed.”
Oh no - not this too. Although actually it will probably be worse for the two of them if she wriggles out - that way she will feel that he should have been able to, as well.
“Remember, he’s a male… you don’t have to comply to anything he asks,” Viconia whispers, before turning around and ushering both Edwin and Imoen outside.
That's true, she does have that advantage.
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
Oh no - looks like they weren't cautious enough. And of course, this means that she doesn;t really have much choice but to give him what he wants
.She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
Probably even worse for her, because she's only just got over what happened in irenicus's dungeon. And having to submit to it voluntarily would just be so horrible. Well, you were sure right about that being dark and depressing. It was very well written though - very powerful descriptions of their emotions.
And of course the worst thing is that this probably won't be the end of it - no reason for either phaere or Solaufein to be satisfied with just this one time. So they will have to deal with escaping and finding a way out of the situation before they can even start to deal with their own feelings.
The more I think about it the more horrible their situation seems - no only have they both gone through a horrible and extremely traumatic experience, but they also have to consider what this means for their relationship.
I feel extremely sorry for them both.Well, great chapter, anyway.
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Disturbing is not necessarily a bad thing.
Warning: Dark and mature themes, that many might find disturbing (despite the lack of graphical details)
Nope. Though, I think its important that a writer just doesn't add disturbing scenes for the sake of the brutal shock effect, they have to make sense and give something to the story in character and plot development.
But it is the inadvertent things that we do that can potentially do the most harm.
“I would never do anything deliberate, knowing that it might harm you,” I try to reassure her, but I am worried myself and the knowing expression in Viconia’s eyes does not help either.
Uh, so true. This situation is certainly one of them - I think that it was too easy in the game to get out of Phaere's claws, so I tried to make it harder and in the same time not to make it seem that Theo was willing.
I can imagine that smile, it definitely is not an inviting one.Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
No, I don't think it is... I don't think Phaere actually knows how to smile invitingly...
And already there is pain and angst here.My friends turn around to leave me alone with this power-hungry bitch, only Jaheira hesitates and I catch her look, filled with anger, desperation and helplessness over her inability to intervene in what is bound to happen. I feel sharp, physical pain in my chest area as I continue to look at her, but Viconia takes her by the shoulder and nudges towards the door… unwillingly she allows herself to be pushed outside…
Yes, knowing how Jaheira likes to be in 'control'
, the situation where she has to watch passively would be very hard on her. I suppose by Drow standards this is one of the greatest complements a male can get.“You have proven useful, Rindvel. A strong and powerful male… yes, you are worthy of my bed. Come, you shall remain here for a time and please me,” Phaere speaks seductively, as we both stand beside the large bed, her arm on my hip, the other resting on my chest… I feel dazed from the strong scent of perfumes that emanate from her.
I think you have to be a real Drow to truly appreciate it...
I’m guessing our hero does not have sufficient charisma to pull that gambit off.
“Hmm… your reaction is most interesting,” she laughs as my head is spinning and I feel my control cracking… “Yes… I think, I have found a remedy for this curse of yours…” she speaks as her movements of the hand elicit a groan from my lips.
I suppose so, yes. His head is too messed up at this moment for him to think straight and come up with a better excuse...
Very dark and very disturbing.
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Thanks. It had to be done. All though I always insist that dark and angsty themes are not my cup of tea, I seem to be handling them adequately.
Viconia almost sounds concerned.Besides it will take your mind off our dear Rindvel and whatever he might be up to now,” Viconia adds.
Almost?
Ah, well... maybe she wants to calm Jaheira because hysterical shouting in the streets might attact attention... Not a very good day for Jaheira is it?Just… keep your mouth shut! I will not say it again, but if any of you make a comment over it, I will… I will…” Jaheira’s voice trails off and she continues to converse quietly, more with herself, “perhaps… perhaps, he can wriggle out… somehow… perhaps…”
No, it's a really bad day for her... and it's about to get much, MUCH worse.
Fortunately it will be something different than what Phaere had in mind.
“What is it you wish of me, Solaufein?” Jaheira asks hoarsely, before her companions have left the hall.
Uh... this is not the 'good Eilistraee follower' Sola, we see in the game...
Well maybe not.“And I thought that I have lost all interest in the opposite sex after Phaere,” he laughs quietly, “I have to thank you, dear Heira… you are an extraordinary woman and there is nothing more I would love, than to have you sharing my bed. And with your lovely, firm, strong body of a warrior it will be a pleasure and unforgettable experience for us both…”
*gulp*
Oh my.
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
That was….evil.
Oh, I know. I did a very nasty thing to my beloved character... and I think inflicting sexual abuse on your characters is the very much worst thing that you can do. It was definitely... very painful.
I really enjoyed it!
Huh?
Well, that's nice... but I hope you didn't get any evil ideas! Great chapter. Am really glad you didn’t take the easy way out.
Thanks. And I wanted to deviate from the game plot a bit and turn the Underdark parts around. Expect a different resolve to the Underdark drama...
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Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
No... anything, but fun.
“I would never do anything deliberate, knowing that it might harm you,” I try to reassure her, but I am worried myself and the knowing expression in Viconia’s eyes does not help either.
And rightfully so, I'm afraid. I have said before that I definitely plan for this story to have a happy, satisfying ending. I suppose I can use it as a justification to torture them along the way...
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
Poor Theo.
Yes, he is in for an unpleasant experience.
My friends turn around to leave me alone with this power-hungry bitch, only Jaheira hesitates and I catch her look, filled with anger, desperation and helplessness over her inability to intervene in what is bound to happen. I feel sharp, physical pain in my chest area as I continue to look at her, but Viconia takes her by the shoulder and nudges towards the door… unwillingly she allows herself to be pushed outside…
Thanks... but I'm afraid that Theo just doesn't have what it takes to get out of the situation. As I said, I think it was too easy in the game, and I tried to make it harder without making Theo seem eager or willing. At least, that's what I aimed for...
“What? Who is this another?” the expression on Phaere’s face is so menacing that I almost tremble in fear… saying that this another is Jaheira, might prove to be a very fatal mistake – especially to Jaheira.
C'mon Theo...think fast...
He's just too distraught, it's just like the whole brains have gone completely numb...
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
I'm afraid so... poor Theo certainly didn't enjoy that...
“Ah, you have come,” he smiles serenely, “Phaere must have instructed you wrongly, however. I only require the attention of your leader,” he points to Jaheira, “the rest of you are dismissed.”
Oh no - not this too. Although actually it will probably be worse for the two of them if she wriggles out - that way she will feel that he should have been able to, as well.
Yes, the symmetry of them both undergoing the same experience at the same time, seemed like a fascinating idea... until I started writing. Then it just plain... hurt. And she won't be able to get out of this one...
“Remember, he’s a male… you don’t have to comply to anything he asks,” Viconia whispers, before turning around and ushering both Edwin and Imoen outside.
That's true, she does have that advantage.
You will eventually find out why it didn't matter to Solaufein. I've got this backstory for evil-Sola...
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
Oh no - looks like they weren't cautious enough. And of course, this means that she doesn;t really have much choice but to give him what he wants
I'm afraid so... and she can't kill him too, even if she would gladly do that. Phaere hasn't asked that yet... if you didn't notice, I switched the quests from the game - in the game, you have to 'kill' Sola first and only then Phaere wants the PC to share her bed.
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
It is really terrible... a small consolation is that it happened while she was in her drow body, but... it is a very small consolation.
Well, you were sure right about that being dark and depressing. It was very well written though - very powerful descriptions of their emotions.
Thanks. I'm afraid that I had to drink something stronger than juice to actually write this part...
And of course the worst thing is that this probably won't be the end of it - no reason for either phaere or Solaufein to be satisfied with just this one time. So they will have to deal with escaping and finding a way out of the situation before they can even start to deal with their own feelings.
Next chapter might be slightly satisfying after all this... though it will still be pretty dark and angsty.
The more I think about it the more horrible their situation seems - no only have they both gone through a horrible and extremely traumatic experience, but they also have to consider what this means for their relationship.
Yes, and even if Theo himself will be pretty scarred after all this, he will have to be strong for her. I said before that there are very bad times in store for them... I'm afraid, I am not quite through yet with them, especially Jaheira...
but they will get out of here, and I think you will probably enjoy the two last episodes of the Underdark section... I know that Theo and Jaheira both did enjoy them... 
Well, great chapter, anyway.
Thank you! I am just glad to get it off my chest, I delayed and delayed with posting it...
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Posted 08 September 2003 - 05:08 AM
Aha, so you did it! This was dark and angsty indeed, and I know exactly how painful it is to do this sort of thing to your beloved characters, no matter if you feel that the story demands it. Well written!
Now of course I'm very interested in seeing how you will handle Solaufein and if you will follow the course we discussed earlier - that could prove...intriguing.
This was dark and angsty indeed, and I know exactly how painful it is to do this sort of thing to your beloved characters, no matter if you feel that the story demands it. Well written! Now of course I'm very interested in seeing how you will handle Solaufein and if you will follow the course we discussed earlier - that could prove...intriguing.
Rogues do it from behind.
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Aha, so you did it!
Yep, it's damn hard. The ways we treat our beloved characters... obviously, I can't kill her. I have a lot of trouble by just seeing her killed in other stories. Sexual abuse is probably just one notch lower in the ranking of bastardish things to do. Well, I *will* make it up to them, eventually... I hope.
Now of course I'm very interested in seeing how you will handle Solaufein and if you will follow the course we discussed earlier - that could prove...intriguing.
Well... the solution will actually be a very simple one. Heh, a bit too crude for my tastes, but... well, you'll see. Heh, actually in a couple of hours time.
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Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
And this one does deserve a disclaimer. Folks, I really mean it.
Warning: Dark and mature themes, that many might find disturbing (despite the lack of graphical details)
*shrugs* I didn't find it disturbing in the least...but maybe that is just me.
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
That doesn't surprise me in the slightest.
“Good that you didn’t make me to wait for much longer, Rindvel,” she grins, “however, I invited you for a talk in private, which means that the presence of your companions is unnecessary. In fact, Solaufein asked me that I send your subordinates to see him - perhaps he has a task for them… I hardly care. Now go and leave Rindvel and me alone.”
Oh dear...
“Ah, someone in Ched Nasad… but surely that can’t stop me, Rindvel,” Phaere grins, “she is not here… and I’m used in getting what I want…”
Kane: Hey, I like this lady!
Forcefully she presses her lips against mine, and when I cannot force myself to kiss her back, she breaks loose only to snarl, “Noncompliance means death, Rindvel. I hope you understand that, male.”
Benny: *sighs* That's one way to get what you want, I suppose. Most people won't argue with anything once you've threatened to kill them if they don't do what you want. Not those with sense anyway.
She pushes me onto the bed and soon enough she is all over me, her hands touching me, her lips against mine… and the threat of death is the only thing that makes me respond to her caresses… I feel only her warm body pressing against mine, but the sensations that it brings are not the ones of pleasure and my thoughts are elsewhere – suddenly I understand the pain and anguish that Jaheira felt after humiliation she suffered in the dungeon and it breaks my heart apart…
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Sad...but it's not his fault. He didn't really have much of a choice.
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
Oh dear...
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
A very sad chapter indeed.
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*shrugs* I didn't find it disturbing in the least...but maybe that is just me.
Well, you know... many (most) people find rape to be a very disturbing subject (myself included). I think that's understandable.
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
That doesn't surprise me in the slightest.
She's a shark-woman, allright.
“Good that you didn’t make me to wait for much longer, Rindvel,” she grins, “however, I invited you for a talk in private, which means that the presence of your companions is unnecessary. In fact, Solaufein asked me that I send your subordinates to see him - perhaps he has a task for them… I hardly care. Now go and leave Rindvel and me alone.”
Oh dear...
Well, you knew that was coming.
“Ah, someone in Ched Nasad… but surely that can’t stop me, Rindvel,” Phaere grins, “she is not here… and I’m used in getting what I want…”
Kane: Hey, I like this lady!
Theo: She's all yours... after I finish chopping her to small bits with my sword.
Forcefully she presses her lips against mine, and when I cannot force myself to kiss her back, she breaks loose only to snarl, “Noncompliance means death, Rindvel. I hope you understand that, male.”
Benny: *sighs* That's one way to get what you want, I suppose. Most people won't argue with anything once you've threatened to kill them if they don't do what you want. Not those with sense anyway.
Well, Theo definitely wants to live another day.
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Sad...but it's not his fault. He didn't really have much of a choice.
Indeed, he's not charismatic enough or well-spoken to get out of that one.
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
Oh dear...
Well, you probably didn't see that coming, though.
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
A very sad chapter indeed.
So it is. Sigh. The gloom won't continue forever, though.
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*shrugs* I didn't find it disturbing in the least...but maybe that is just me.
Well, you know... many (most) people find rape to be a very disturbing subject (myself included). I think that's understandable.
*nods* Oh yes, of course it is. I've been doing a lot of research on it for a scene I'm writting in an original story and there is no doubt that it's a highly disturbing subject. And the chapter definitely deserved the warning you put...it's just that I didn't find it disturbing personally. Not that it surprised me, to be honest, I think I've read too much and seen too many disturbing things in RL to be particularly affected by anything like this any more.
“Ah, someone in Ched Nasad… but surely that can’t stop me, Rindvel,” Phaere grins, “she is not here… and I’m used in getting what I want…”
Kane: Hey, I like this lady!
Theo: She's all yours... after I finish chopping her to small bits with my sword.
*grins* Kane will get his chance...eventually.
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Sad...but it's not his fault. He didn't really have much of a choice.
Indeed, he's not charismatic enough or well-spoken to get out of that one.
Poor Theo.
“Ah, dear Heira… if that is your real name,” Solaufein’s smile becomes less pleasant, “it is time to drop your pretenses… yes, I would never be able to get away with this if you were a normal Drow female… but you are not – am I right, surfacer?”
Oh dear...
Well, you probably didn't see that coming, though.
Nope...that was quite a surprise to say the least.
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Well, you know... many (most) people find rape to be a very disturbing subject (myself included). I think that's understandable.
*nods* Oh yes, of course it is. I've been doing a lot of research on it for a scene I'm writting in an original story and there is no doubt that it's a highly disturbing subject. And the chapter definitely deserved the warning you put...it's just that I didn't find it disturbing personally. Not that it surprised me, to be honest, I think I've read too much and seen too many disturbing things in RL to be particularly affected by anything like this any more.
Oh, I can understand that, with all the cruelty of the RL and the violence being the part of our lives courtesy of the TV, Internet and other sources of mass communication. I must admit though, that I personally am a bit worried when people say that things I normally expect them to find disturbing, do not affect them... I know, I wince everytime when I read a gory death description, esp. if I feel sympathy for the character killed. It differs from person to person, I suppose, due to their bacground - perhaps all this mass of information, makes us in some ways indifferent to such touchy subjects as death, rape, war, etc. Sometimes I envy those who have thicker skin than I do, sometimes I think that I am the lucky one.
*grins* Kane will get his chance...eventually.
Hehe, I can imagine that he is pretty eager... but I must say - those drow women are over-estimated. They only expect the male to satisfy them, they give nothing in return. Bah!
Well, you probably didn't see that coming, though.
Nope...that was quite a surprise to say the least.
Heh, it came to my head some three months ago as I was sitting in a plane to Milan. Guess I should travel more.
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Well, you know... many (most) people find rape to be a very disturbing subject (myself included). I think that's understandable.
*nods* Oh yes, of course it is. I've been doing a lot of research on it for a scene I'm writting in an original story and there is no doubt that it's a highly disturbing subject. And the chapter definitely deserved the warning you put...it's just that I didn't find it disturbing personally. Not that it surprised me, to be honest, I think I've read too much and seen too many disturbing things in RL to be particularly affected by anything like this any more.
Oh, I can understand that, with all the cruelty of the RL and the violence being the part of our lives courtesy of the TV, Internet and other sources of mass communication. I must admit though, that I personally am a bit worried when people say that things I normally expect them to find disturbing, do not affect them... I know, I wince everytime when I read a gory death description, esp. if I feel sympathy for the character killed. It differs from person to person, I suppose, due to their bacground - perhaps all this mass of information, makes us in some ways indifferent to such touchy subjects as death, rape, war, etc. Sometimes I envy those who have thicker skin than I do, sometimes I think that I am the lucky one.
Yeah...sometimes it can be a good thing and sometimes not. I can watch horror films without wincing and to date, after years and years of reading, I have only ever come across one story that affected me badly, so I feel safe reading pretty much anything. But it isn't like those scenes don't make me think at all, in your scenes I felt sympathy for both Jaheira and Theo and I felt angry for them and I knew that I'd hate to be in the situation. But the scenes didn't stick in my mind at all, once I'd finished reading it, I was able to wipe them from my head and forget about them. *shrugs* But I know exactly why scenes like this don't affect me as badly as other people. When I was young, I witnessed something terrible that I never should have seen and it is that image that has stayed in my mind for the last twelve years. I've never seen or read anything that has affected me worse than that, so... *shrugs again* That's just life, I guess. I think you're probably the lucky one too.
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Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
Laska : Wooo, have fun!
Weyoun : He won't...
“Dearest, please don’t do anything stup… that might disappoint me,” Jaheira says meaningfully, as we are about to enter the Female Fighter’s Society tower.
Hmmm... Coming from the woman that was happily doing Theo behind Khalid's back that just sounds a bit dodgy.
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
Laska : Okay, you run. I'll, ahum, keep this Drow busy while you flee the city.
Phaere orders me to follow her and leads me through a narrow hallway until we reach a room, her room. My thoughts are racing all over the place, the panic over what Phaere wants from me, the pain for hurting Jaheira without wanting to…
Laska : Well, I...
Weyoun : Shut up, elf! Theo's having real trouble with this.
“I… umm… can’t do it, Phaere,” I whisper weakly, trying to dodge out.
“What do you mean by that ‘can’t’? I command you to!” Phaere hisses dangerously.
Laska : It's not his problem. He's just from a parallel universe that's big on musical theatre.
Weyoun : Did that deter her?
Laska : Nah, Phaere's still all over him... *looks jealous*
Weyoun : Damn... Next time, just tell her he had a nasty boating accident and his entire lower body half is a prostetic.
Laska : Knowing Phaere, that'll probably just turn her on.
“Hmm… your reaction is most interesting,” she laughs as my head is spinning and I feel my control cracking… “Yes… I think, I have found a remedy for this curse of yours…” she speaks as her movements of the hand elicit a groan from my lips.
Nice try, though...
Forcefully she presses her lips against mine, and when I cannot force myself to kiss her back, she breaks loose only to snarl, “Noncompliance means death, Rindvel. I hope you understand that, male.”
She pushes me onto the bed and soon enough she is all over me, her hands touching me, her lips against mine… and the threat of death is the only thing that makes me respond to her caresses… I feel only her warm body pressing against mine, but the sensations that it brings are not the ones of pleasure and my thoughts are elsewhere – suddenly I understand the pain and anguish that Jaheira felt after humiliation she suffered in the dungeon and it breaks my heart apart…
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Ouch... Dark and yet somewhat sexy. Nicely done.
“Very soon, dear Heira,” he leads Jaheira into a room that looks like a bedchamber… actually, it is a bedchamber and this realization is making Jaheira feel very nervous…
“What…” Jaheira’s question is silenced as Solaufein presses his palm against her mouth. Angrily she knocks his hand away and steps a few paces away from the large drow warrior who is chuckling amusedly.
“And I thought that I have lost all interest in the opposite sex after Phaere,” he laughs quietly, “I have to thank you, dear Heira… you are an extraordinary woman and there is nothing more I would love, than to have you sharing my bed. And with your lovely, firm, strong body of a warrior it will be a pleasure and unforgettable experience for us both…”
Whoa... A very different sola...
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
Laska : So... want me to kill him for you? It's really not that much of trouble. I'll just need a bear-trap, apply it to his groinal area, then drag the chain behind a cart driving through a cavern filled with hungry umberhulks.
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Yeah...sometimes it can be a good thing and sometimes not. I can watch horror films without wincing and to date, after years and years of reading, I have only ever come across one story that affected me badly, so I feel safe reading pretty much anything. But it isn't like those scenes don't make me think at all, in your scenes I felt sympathy for both Jaheira and Theo and I felt angry for them and I knew that I'd hate to be in the situation. But the scenes didn't stick in my mind at all, once I'd finished reading it, I was able to wipe them from my head and forget about them. *shrugs* But I know exactly why scenes like this don't affect me as badly as other people. When I was young, I witnessed something terrible that I never should have seen and it is that image that has stayed in my mind for the last twelve years. I've never seen or read anything that has affected me worse than that, so... *shrugs again* That's just life, I guess. I think you're probably the lucky one too.
Oh, yes...
something like that would explain why you are less affected by something written or seen on TV. Heck, I've seen many disgusting things in my life, but luckily none of them have left a long-lasting effect on me. That must be tough.
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Yes, the much dreaded Phaere part is here. And it is bad… really bad. I said that the Underdark parts will be quite different and by that I meant especially this part and the consequences it brings.
Laska : Wooo, have fun!
Weyoun : He won't...
Theo: So you still haven't come up with solutions to keep your elf quiet?
“Dearest, please don’t do anything stup… that might disappoint me,” Jaheira says meaningfully, as we are about to enter the Female Fighter’s Society tower.
Hmmm... Coming from the woman that was happily doing Theo behind Khalid's back that just sounds a bit dodgy.
Errr... that's different. Um... somehow... I think
Phaere awaits us inside, the Drow beauty has changed her attire to one that is slightly less formal and I feel more nervous about that fact. She looks at me with a haughty smile that is supposed to be seducing, but to me seems just plain scary…
Laska : Okay, you run. I'll, ahum, keep this Drow busy while you flee the city.
Theo: I think you're in for a disapointment, elf, once you do get to meat her.
Phaere orders me to follow her and leads me through a narrow hallway until we reach a room, her room. My thoughts are racing all over the place, the panic over what Phaere wants from me, the pain for hurting Jaheira without wanting to…
Laska : Well, I...
Weyoun : Shut up, elf! Theo's having real trouble with this.
Theo: You bet, I am... of course, I would have appreciated anything that could distract Phaere, at this moment.
“What do you mean by that ‘can’t’? I command you to!” Phaere hisses dangerously.
Laska : It's not his problem. He's just from a parallel universe that's big on musical theatre.
Weyoun : Did that deter her?
Laska : Nah, Phaere's still all over him... *looks jealous*
Weyoun : Damn... Next time, just tell her he had a nasty boating accident and his entire lower body half is a prostetic.
Laska : Knowing Phaere, that'll probably just turn her on.
Theo: Eh? That sounds pretty... sick.
“Hmm… your reaction is most interesting,” she laughs as my head is spinning and I feel my control cracking… “Yes… I think, I have found a remedy for this curse of yours…” she speaks as her movements of the hand elicit a groan from my lips.
Nice try, though...
Doesn't being a male suck?
I never thought that it was possible to cry whilst making love. But then this cannot be called lovemaking…
Ouch... Dark and yet somewhat sexy. Nicely done.
Hehe... I didn't really aimed for it to be one bit sexy - heck, I was afraid that it might imply that Theo wanted it, when he actually didn't.
“And I thought that I have lost all interest in the opposite sex after Phaere,” he laughs quietly, “I have to thank you, dear Heira… you are an extraordinary woman and there is nothing more I would love, than to have you sharing my bed. And with your lovely, firm, strong body of a warrior it will be a pleasure and unforgettable experience for us both…”
Whoa... A very different sola...
Yep. Hard not to notice, eh?
She feels two strong hands removing her armor and then stripping away her tunic as she stands in the middle of the room, her eyes still closed. She tries to cry, but no tears come… her heart is bleeding.
Laska : So... want me to kill him for you? It's really not that much of trouble. I'll just need a bear-trap, apply it to his groinal area, then drag the chain behind a cart driving through a cavern filled with hungry umberhulks.
Theo: That's a nice idea, but he's already dead. Perhaps you need some minced-meat of a drow?
Great stuff,
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