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#1 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 13 May 2002 - 08:19 PM

It does not look like I am going to finish this chapter before the quiz will end! Somehow this was the hardest part to write ever, and one of the most disturbing. It is like struggling against the very string current. Well, I hope at least it is interesting to read. Sigh. As always – please any grammar, typos etc that you notice – let me know!

The Road to Hell is paved with Good Intentions.

“Why, your worship!” he grinned like a jovial toad, giggling involuntarily as if at some hilarious joke, and sneaked a quick look at Anomen, “why would you of all people be interested in these?”

I learned about guril berries and their use, all right. That did not bring me any closer to the solution of the riddle. Minsc and Vicky talked with the boy Faraji, who had found one of the latest bodies. But the child was too young and too frightened to tell them anything useful, even though Minsc won his trust with the hamster trick. All that the youngster said was that the old lady living across the street from him was a witch, and therefore the murders must be her doing. It turned out she was indeed a local hedgewizard, practicing her craft without a license. But there was nothing wrong with her fundamentally, and after purchasing few cheap potions Viconia dismissed her as a suspect.

“She would not have had a nerve for it, jabress,” the elf grinned at me languidly showing the row of pearly-white teeth. “I looked her in the eye - she is just an old faern, scared half to death that somebody would betray her to the magistrate. Your surface females rarely have any spine in them.”

“Most likely you are right, Viconia, “ I said tiredly dismissing her jibe, “I may be prejudiced, but something tells me this is a man's work.”

“Yet we found something interesting for you, jabress!” the priestess said triumphantly pulling her backpack from under the table.

What she extricated out of it was a square piece of rough hide, the size of a standard folio and at least two fingers thick. It looked weird - hairless, and dull gray but wrinkled. It was well processed, and flexible enough to be worked into a shield cover or a piece of armor. I got an impression that this was a sample to be presented to a customer or at a trade show. One of its corners was marred with rusty brown substance that soaked into the leather and dried inside it. From the moment I saw it I had no doubt about the nature of that stain.

“Where did you get it?” I asked curiously, “it is not a…”

“No, jabress.” Viconia answered quickly. “This is not a rivvin hide, if that's what you meant,” she scowled at my dark glance. “And to stop your next question – yes, I have seen worked humanoid skin, although I had never had a taste for those kind of 'souvenirs'! Neither it looks like an orc pelt or a piece of dragon hide. I have no idea what beast was flayed to produce this bit. We got it from an old rivvil, who had found it on the site of the latest murder.”

“Let me see it Vicky, “ the gnome interfered suddenly. “I think I can tell you what it is! Speak of the devil, your worship! It is a piece of elephant hide, or I am hairless halfling!”

“Are you sure?” I inquired simply, trying to keep excitement out of my voice.

“Well, I never saw it prepared like this but yes, I am pretty positive that's what it is, since I have seen Beeloo's favorite pet often enough when he brought her out of her pen for cleaning.” He took sniff at the leather. “Eek! It reeks of blood, but still there is a smell of tannin about it. It was processed not so long ago.”

“Blast the fiend who had slaughtered an innocent elephant on top of his other crimes!” Minsc said doubtfully. “Err, even little Boo is shaking with anger at such an outrage, right?”

I gave him a blank stare for his trouble and he shifted uncomfortably. Viconia giggled.

“A processed piece of an exotic hide, and a smell of guril,” I said after a short pause, “any interesting ideas citizens?”

“A piece of hide would surely point to an armorer or a cobbler,“ Anomen said suddenly, turning hot pink.

I gave him an appreciating stare. Whatever were his shortcomings, at least he could use his head for something other than wearing a helmet, (on rare occasions, anyway).

“All right, friends. I am calling it a night,” I suggested tiredly. “Tomorrow we will continue the investigation.”


Tomorrow morning came bright and sunny, which was unusual to put it mild for the Athkatlan winter. After days of ice-cold drizzle that alone was enough to put me in a better mood. The first thing I noticed when I descended for breakfast was Anomen, who was lingering by the kitchen door with suspiciously determined expression.

“I asked the cook to prepare some warm milk with spices,” he offered timidly. “Would you care to share your meal with me, my lady? I want to offer my apologies.”

My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody remembered what I liked for my morning drink. He picked up a table that could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the sun, and going to the locale Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness. Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched. Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago. Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way he disparaged Rosie.

Viconia gave us an amused stare when she finally conceded to wake up and join the company. I felt irritated. This ridiculous game between the three of us started to chafe on my nerves. I wondered briefly, what Yoshimo and Valygar were doing this fine morning, and blushed catching myself at being rather unconcerned about it. Therefore, I immediately asked for the writing utensils, and arranged for the innkeeper's nephew to be sent to the Adventurer's Mart with a ciphered epistle.

“Minsc, would you care to go down to the Aegisfield's office, deliver my note to him and bring back an answer?” I asked after finishing my second letter. “Viconia, since you already know the hedgewitch, I want you to go back and discreetly ask her about guril. Watch her reaction. It is rather important to find out if she uses it in her potions.”

The priestess scowled at me, but accepted an errand, muttering something to the extent of 'Xun izil dos phuul quarthen, lueth dro.' (Do what you are ordered and live.)

“Oh, just drop it, Viconia. I am not trying to humiliate you. This whole business stinks of dark magic. And we had already met one elderly lady selling potions, who turned out to be a shapeshifter!”

“Jan, I want you to find the local herb merchant and obtain a sample of this peculiar plant. I want Rosie to have a sniff at it. Anomen, can you please find her, and convince her to come to the Five Flagons with you?” He blinked. “Oh, come on, use your charm. I need to talk to her again, and have her examine Jan's samples.” I turned back to the gnome. “By the way, old chap, can you ask the herb man to give you some similar smelling substances? We need a clean test. I will see you all back here at about noon time.”

“And what is it that you are going to do this fine morning, your worship? “ Jan inquired with a smile.

“Oh, I am going down to the temple of Ilmather's morgue.” I said. They stared at me without understanding. “I need to see the bodies,” I explained simply. “I cannot continue from this point without seeing the main evidence”

“Are you sure you up to the task, lass?” the little wizard asked carefully.

“Oh, I'll survive,“ I shrugged, “I saw Rakshasa's handiwork, remember?”

“I am going with you,” the young Helmite said suddenly, “please,” he gave me a pleading stare, “since you are doing it to find the murderer of my sister the least I can do is to share this experience!”

I looked at him in silence for a moment, then nodded in compliance and turned to the little wizard. “Jan, would you mind finding a young woman named Rose Bouquet after you are done with your purchases?”

The Ilmatheri priest led us across the temple grounds into a smaller stone structure covered in flaking yellow paint. It was gravely cold inside, and the moment I stepped in a familiar stench of formalin and decaying flesh assaulted my nostrils. I stumbled as the memories of Irenicus' prison invaded my mind.

Flicker… a gloved hand is caressing my face leaving behind the familiar stench…flicker… and the hot-red blade is searing the soles of my feet filling the chamber with nauseating smell of burned meat…flicker… Khalid's dissected body is sprawled on the stone slab…flicker… I think I fainted for a second. Embarrassing, but the sense of smell is indeed the strongest catalyst of memories that I know.

Anomen caught me in his hands and for once I was grateful for his fussy chivalry that made him insist on staying two steps ahead of me, and offering me his hand. Falling head first on these slimy steps would not have been fun. Yet I dismissed his suggestion to turn back, and we followed the silent Ilmatheri all the way down the spiraling stone stairway, into the spacious bitter cold chamber, lighted only by the blue flames of a single brazier.

There were too many of them in that 'special' corner. Almost half a dozen. The quiet priest assured us these were the victims of the 'Skinner' from the last ten days. They had already buried as many over the previous month.

“He is getting greedy, “ I uttered looking at the expanse of purple-blue muscle tissue, and terrible blackened faces frozen in eternal grimaces of pain.

Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had died of shock and blood loss.

It reeked of some dark ritual, yet lacked the signs of exalted intemperance that is so often a sign of the religious zeal. I thought of the evil religions that required human sacrifice – loviatori, banites, even bhaalites. All of them would prefer to do a job like this in the confines of their temples, following the murder with a lot of fussy rituals and a ceremonial disposal of the corpse. This was too … workmanlike. Almost as if whoever was doing it was taking quiet pride in the precision of his strokes, and geometrical accuracy of the wounds.

“I've seen enough,” I said abruptly, waking up from my trance. “We need to hurry. I want to see the answer that Minsc should bring from Aegis.”

By the time we got back to the Five Flagons I recovered my wits. Anomen was grim and silent, his pale face contorted in a grimace of cold anger. I don't think I looked any better. We found our companions gathered in the main room around the fire. It felt like our visit to the Ilmather's temple only lasted a few minutes, but in reality the whole morning had passed and the sun was traveling down from its zenith point.

Jan was pacing impatiently in front of the fireplace. Upon seeing us enter he gave a cry and waved at me energetically. “We've got news for you!” he squeaked in a high pitch that marked his speech when he was greatly excited. “It was an oak bark, not guril! The girl had recognized it clearly!”

I noticed Rosie, who was hiding shyly behind Minsc' great bulk. Viconia was sprawled on a soft chair with her feet close to the fire. “The Cragmoon witch gave me the clue as well,” she nodded firmly. “Guril is rich in tannin.”

“Minsc,” I asked quickly, “the answer from lieutenant Aegis?”

“That lieutenant is a weird fellow!” Minsc boomed unhappily. “Boo says he is a stinker. First he is not there then he makes us wait for an hour! I gave him your note but he wont read it until I answer his questions. He wanted to know what you've been up to, lassie. I told him it was nothing, except somebody had murdered an elephant under his very nose, and he did not even know! But when he read your letter he jumped up like there was a wasp in his pants and run out!”

“Where did he go?” I asked urgently. “Did he tell you where exactly he was going?”

“Ah,” Minsc shrugged, “not really, but he yelled something like 'Hidesman' before he run out. Beats me if I know what he meant!”

“Rosie,” I asked the redheaded woman urgently, “does this ring a bell to you?”

“Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

NOTES FROM SISTER OMPHALLA

Guril berries - a plant of guril, and especially its fruit is used in folk medicine as a base for a salve which supposedly can cure some intimate afflictions, caused by untidy love life.

Formalin - a water solution of formaldehyde, the simplest aldehyde. Often used for manufacturing of embalming fluids and as a preservative and disinfectant.

Corium - in humanoids, and the vertebrates generally, the skin consist of two layers, an outer nonsensitive and nonvascular epidermis, cuticle, or skarfskin, composed of cells which are constantly growing and multiplying in the deeper, and being thrown off in the superficial, layers; and an inner sensitive, and vascular dermis, cutis, corium, or true skin, composed mostly of connective tissue.

Tannin (or tannic acid) - An acid obtained from nutgalls as a yellow amorphous substance, having an astringent taste, and forming with ferric salts a bluish-black compound, which is the basis of common ink. Called also tannin, and gallotannic acid. By extension, any one of a series of astringent substances resembling tannin proper, widely diffused through the vegetable kingdom, as in oak bark, willow, guril, tea, coffee, etc.

Tanning -To convert (the skin of an animal) into leather, as by usual process of steeping it in an infusion of oak or some other bark, whereby it is impregnated with tannin, or tannic acid (which exists in several species of bark), and is thus rendered firm, durable, and in some degree impervious to water.


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#2 Guest_Winter_Bloom_*

Posted 13 May 2002 - 09:06 PM

> “She would not have had a nerve for it, jabress,” the elf grinned at me

> languidly showing the row of pearly-white teeth. “I looked her in the eye

> - she is just an old faern, scared half to death that somebody would

> betray her to the magistrate. Your surface females rarely have any spine

> in them.”

The old woman has reason to be wary. The Cowlies would toss her in Spellhold without a second thought.

> “No, jabress.” Viconia answered quickly. “This is not a rivvin hide, if

> that's what you meant,” she scowled at my dark glance. “And to stop your

> next question – yes, I have seen worked humanoid skin, although I had

> never had a taste for those kind of 'souvenirs'! Neither it looks like an

> orc pelt or a piece of dragon hide. I have no idea what beast was flayed

> to produce this bit. We got it from an old rivvil, who had found it on the

> site of the latest murder.”

> “Let me see it Vicky, “ the gnome interfered suddenly. “I think I can tell

> you what it is! Speak of the devil, your worship! It is a piece of

> elephant hide, or I am hairless halfling!”

Depending on where you get it on the body, elephant hide can be very thick.

> “A processed piece of an exotic hide, and a smell of guril,” I said after

> a short pause, “any interesting ideas citizens?”

> “A piece of hide would surely point to an armorer or a cobbler,“ Anomen

> said suddenly, turning hot pink.

> I gave him an appreciating stare. Whatever were his shortcomings, at least

> he could use his head for something other than wearing a helmet, (on rare

> occasions, anyway).

Heh, heh...

> “I asked the cook to prepare some warm milk with spices,” he offered

> timidly. “Would you care to share your meal with me, my lady? I want to

> offer my apologies.”

> My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody

> remembered what I liked for my morning drink. He picked up a table that

> could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and

> chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of

> yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the

> sun, and going to the locale Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness.

> Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched.

> Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's

> death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago.

> Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way

> he disparaged Rosie.

Hmm... ;)

> “And what is it that you are going to do this fine morning, your worship?

> “ Jan inquired with a smile.

> “Oh, I am going down to the temple of Ilmather's morgue.” I said. They

> stared at me without understanding. “I need to see the bodies,” I

> explained simply. “I cannot continue from this point without seeing the

> main evidence”

That will be a disturbing trip.

> The Ilmatheri priest led us across the temple grounds into a smaller stone

> structure covered in flaking yellow paint. It was gravely cold inside, and

> the moment I stepped in a familiar stench of formalin and decaying flesh

> assaulted my nostrils. I stumbled as the memories of Irenicus' prison

> invaded my mind.

> Flicker… a gloved hand is caressing my face leaving behind the familiar

> stench…flicker… and the hot-red blade is searing the soles of my feet

> filling the chamber with nauseating smell of burned meat…flicker… Khalid's

> dissected body is sprawled on the stone slab…flicker… I think I fainted

> for a second. Embarrassing, but the sense of smell is indeed the strongest

> catalyst of memories that I know. Anomen caught me in his hands and for

> once I was grateful for his fussy chivalry that made him insist on staying

> two steps ahead of me, and offering me his hand. Falling head first on

> these slimy steps would not have been fun. Yet I dismissed his suggestion

> to turn back, and we followed the silent Ilmatheri all the way down the

> spiraling stone stairway, into the spacious bitter cold chamber, lighted

> only by the blue flames of a single brazier.

That's a disturbing memory. ;)

> There were too many of them in that 'special' corner. Almost half a dozen.

> The quiet priest assured us these were the victims of the 'Skinner' from

> the last ten days. They had already buried as many over the previous

> month.

And that's plain evil for whoever did that.

> Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings

> that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was

> meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin

> and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh

> were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could

> continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged

> victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or

> cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had

> died of shock and blood loss.

Eeeww.

> It reeked of some dark ritual, yet lacked the signs of exalted

> intemperance that is so often a sign of the religious zeal. I thought of

> the evil religions that required human sacrifice – loviatori, banites,

> even bhaalites. All of them would prefer to do a job like this in the

> confines of their temples, following the murder with a lot of fussy

> rituals and a ceremonial disposal of the corpse. This was too …

> workmanlike. Almost as if whoever was doing it was taking quiet pride in

> the precision of his strokes, and geometrical accuracy of the wounds.

Ouch!

> “That lieutenant is a weird fellow!” Minsc boomed unhappily. “Boo says he

> is a stinker. First he is not there then he makes us wait for an hour! I

> gave him your note but he wont read it until I answer his questions. He

> wanted to know what you've been up to, lassie. I told him it was nothing,

> except somebody had murdered an elephant under his very nose, and he did

> not even know! But when he read your letter he jumped up like there was a

> wasp in his pants and run out!”

> “Where did he go?” I asked urgently. “Did he tell you where exactly he was

> going?”

> “Ah,” Minsc shrugged, “not really, but he yelled something like 'Hidesman'

> before he run out. Beats me if I know what he meant!”

> “Rosie,” I asked the redheaded woman urgently, “does this ring a bell to

> you?”

> “Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local

> tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

Something tells me the lieutenant is a gonner. ;)


#3 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 13 May 2002 - 10:35 PM

> The Ilmatheri priest

Ilmateri

> led us across the temple grounds into a smaller stone

> structure covered in flaking yellow paint. It was gravely cold inside, and

> the moment I stepped in a familiar stench of formalin and decaying flesh

> assaulted my nostrils. I stumbled as the memories of Irenicus' prison

> invaded my mind.

*shudder*

> Flicker… a gloved hand is caressing my face leaving behind the familiar

> stench…flicker… and the hot-red blade is searing the soles of my feet

> filling the chamber with nauseating smell of burned meat…flicker… Khalid's

> dissected body is sprawled on the stone slab…flicker… I think I fainted

> for a second. Embarrassing, but the sense of smell is indeed the strongest

> catalyst of memories that I know.

What a description! And about the sense of smell, I have found it to be so in RL too.

Liked the Sherlock Holmes-ness of the episode!


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#4 Guest_Rose of Jericho_*

Posted 13 May 2002 - 11:57 PM

> I learned about guril berries and their use, all right. That did not bring

> me any closer to the solution of the riddle. Minsc and Vicky talked with

> the boy Faraji, who had found one of the latest bodies. But the child was

> too young and too frightened to tell them anything useful, even though

> Minsc won his trust with the hamster trick. All that the youngster said

> was that the old lady living across the street from him was a witch, and

> therefore the murders must be her doing.

There's always one in every town, huh? The one little old lady who gets the title of "evil witch."

> What she extricated out of it was a square piece of rough hide, the size

> of a standard folio and at least two fingers thick. It looked weird -

> hairless, and dull gray but wrinkled. It was well processed, and flexible

> enough to be worked into a shield cover or a piece of armor. I got an

> impression that this was a sample to be presented to a customer or at a

> trade show. One of its corners was marred with rusty brown substance that

> soaked into the leather and dried inside it. From the moment I saw it I

> had no doubt about the nature of that stain.

That description would pretty much damn the local hidesman. Or at least make him a top suspect.

So you're really enjoying the murder-mystery stuff, I can see. This is starting to become a Faerunian version of "Law & Order." It's great fun, as Minsc would say.

> “Well, I never saw it prepared like this but yes, I am pretty positive

> that's what it is, since I have seen Beeloo's favorite pet often enough

> when he brought her out of her pen for cleaning.”

The shortest Jan Jansen story ever.

> My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody

> remembered what I liked for my morning drink. He picked up a table that

> could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and

> chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of

> yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the

> sun, and going to the locale Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness.

> Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched.

> Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's

> death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago.

> Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way

> he disparaged Rosie.

Wow, that is dedicated. I especially liked the bit about him going to the temple because he was rude. Although I think it might be "going to the local shrine of Helm in penance for his rudeness." And it really does sound like he's changing.

> Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings

> that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was

> meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin

> and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh

> were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could

> continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged

> victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or

> cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had

> died of shock and blood loss.

Blech. This puts me in mind of the book "The Silence of the Lambs." The "skinner" in that book did the same sort of work.

> It reeked of some dark ritual, yet lacked the signs of exalted

> intemperance that is so often a sign of the religious zeal. I thought of

> the evil religions that required human sacrifice – loviatori, banites,

> even bhaalites.

I wonder if the names would be capitazlied -- Banites, Bhaalites, etc.

> “Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local

> tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

And away we go. I love this particular chase. It's so dark. :)

Rose of Jericho


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#5 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 01:22 AM

> The old woman has reason to be wary. The Cowlies would toss her in

> Spellhold without a second thought.

Right you are! but tell it to Viconia ..

> Depending on where you get it on the body, elephant hide can be very

> thick.

I have no clue where tanner got it, but I assume it was well prepared and thinned if needed.

> Heh, heh...

> Hmm... :)

Lol. They have their ups and downs.

> That will be a disturbing trip.

> That's a disturbing memory. :-)

> And that's plain evil for whoever did that.

Absolutely, that's why I had such a hard time writing it. This whole part will end soon, thanks Gods!

> Eeeww.

> Ouch!

Oh, yes, my feeling too.

> Something tells me the lieutenant is a gonner. :)

I'll see what I can do.


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#6 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 01:24 AM

> Ilmateri

Thnx!

> *shudder*

Oh, yes. I want to finish this part soon, sniff.

> What a description! And about the sense of smell, I have found it to be so

> in RL too.

> Liked the Sherlock Holmes-ness of the episode!

That's what I was aiming for. Too bad everybody already knows the answer!

Thanks for the comments!


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#7 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 01:36 AM

> There's always one in every town, huh? The one little old lady who gets

> the title of "evil witch."

Unfortunately yes, though it is especially uncomfortable in Athkatla.

> That description would pretty much damn the local hidesman. Or at least

> make him a top suspect.

It did. That's why she decided to ask Aegis if they had a hidesman or armorer living in the area.

> So you're really enjoying the murder-mystery stuff, I can see. This is

> starting to become a Faerunian version of "Law & Order."

> It's great fun, as Minsc would say.

Lol! thanks! I am quickly switching back to melodrama soon enough. :-)

> The shortest Jan Jansen story ever.

It had to be read right after the previous part. ( see part 9)Beeloo is the guy who tell jan about Lissa.

> Wow, that is dedicated. I especially liked the bit about him going to the

> temple because he was rude. Although I think it might be "going to

> the local shrine of Helm in penance for his rudeness." And it really

> does sound like he's changing.

Thanks! I shall correct this. I am trying to make these relationship as stormy as possible.

> Blech. This puts me in mind of the book "The Silence of the

> Lambs." The "skinner" in that book did the same sort of

> work.

That's what I had in mind, plus I recently read another version of Jack the Ripper story.

> I wonder if the names would be capitazlied -- Banites, Bhaalites, etc.

probably, I shall check in faiths and avatars

> And away we go. I love this particular chase. It's so dark. :)

Scary too, but the main surprise will be after it is over!

Thanks for stopping by and for your help!


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#8 Guest_Rose of Jericho_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 04:39 AM

> That's what I had in mind, plus I recently read another version of Jack

> the Ripper story.

Oooh, what story? I'm an amateur Ripperologist myself. Any new theories?


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#9 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 05:10 AM

> Oooh, what story? I'm an amateur Ripperologist myself. Any new theories?

Chuckle. It is an old one, but I am afraid not very well known in Britain or other english speaking countries. There was a russian political dissident and medical student in London at the time, who was one of the major suspects and who quickly returned to St. Petersburg and thus avoided being investigated. The book I read is about him. It is called 'Decorator', and it is in russian. It is a bestseller in a bestseller series "Adventures of Erast Fandorin' in Russia by Boris Akunin. Unfortunately it was only translated on french, polish and italian so far. If they ever decide to do english edition I will let you know, if you will still be interested. I find him rather brilliant as mysteries go. The book is really scary psyco-religious drama, with XIX century Russia political context. It maybe a bit foreign to american reader. :(

Here is the pic from it. Scary!



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#10 Requiem

Posted 14 May 2002 - 05:17 AM

> What she extricated out of it was a square piece of rough hide, the size

> of a standard folio and at least two fingers thick. It looked weird -

> hairless, and dull gray but wrinkled. It was well processed, and flexible

> enough to be worked into a shield cover or a piece of armor. I got an

> impression that this was a sample to be presented to a customer or at a

> trade show. One of its corners was marred with rusty brown substance that

> soaked into the leather and dried inside it. From the moment I saw it I

> had no doubt about the nature of that stain.

Excellent description of the hide -- ugh. :(

> > I gave him an appreciating stare. Whatever were his shortcomings, at least

> he could use his head for something other than wearing a helmet, (on rare

> occasions, anyway).

*grin*

> My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody

> remembered what I liked for my morning drink. He picked up a table that

> could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and

> chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of

> yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the

> sun, and going to the locale Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness.

> Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched.

> Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's

> death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago.

> Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way

> he disparaged Rosie.

Well, the boy can learn, it seems.

> Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings

> that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was

> meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin

> and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh

> were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could

> continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged

> victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or

> cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had

> died of shock and blood loss.

*shiver*

Nice treatment of this particular quest. This had a nicely creepy feel to it. Perfect!


#11 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 05:27 AM

> Excellent description of the hide -- ugh. :(

Thanks!

> *grin*

> Well, the boy can learn, it seems.

I definitely hope so. He is supposed to change after his test, but I am trying to start this evolution thing ahead of the game. :)

> *shiver*

> Nice treatment of this particular quest. This had a nicely creepy feel to

> it. Perfect!

I am glad it had a creepy feeling. It is funny but difficult to switch ganres all the time, but that's what I am trying to do. From satire to horror story and back. Gee, too bad we all already know how it ends! Or do we? /wink, wink

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, I do like your comments so. :)


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#12 Requiem

Posted 14 May 2002 - 05:32 AM

> > I am glad it had a creepy feeling. It is funny but difficult to switch

> ganres all the time, but that's what I am trying to do. From satire to

> horror story and back. Gee, too bad we all already know how it ends! Or do

> we? /wink, wink

*grin* Somehow with you as the author, I'm going to say the ending is not necessarily a given! :(

> Thanks for stopping by and commenting, I do like your comments so. :)

Thanks -- I've actually be lurking a bit--go underground as it were when RL stuff overwhelms me. But I do so enjoy your stories.



#13 Laufey

Posted 14 May 2002 - 05:51 AM

Just a brief comment since I'm in a bit of a hurry, but I really like the 'mystery' aspect you're still keeping up here. Oh, and Anomen was very sweet in this chapter. :( Once he does decide to apologise he doesn't hold back, does he?


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#14 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 06:48 AM

> Just a brief comment since I'm in a bit of a hurry, but I really like the

> 'mystery' aspect you're still keeping up here.

I do try. It is not easy since all my mysteries are already known to the public here. :( Even the Moira's murder.

> Oh, and Anomen was very

> sweet in this chapter. :) Once he does decide to apologise he doesn't hold

> back, does he?

I feel he doesn't. It is almost impossible for him to 'decide' though. Hey i feel sorry for him, really. All the trashing he was getting lately!

Where are all sweet anomen loving ladies? All gone?

chuckle. I hope he is still believable though. He is the same guy who called Mazzy names and wrote all these nasty letters. :)

Thanks for commenting, and sorry for the lack of input lately. My RL is getting 'interesting' again, I may just go into lurking for a while and post only occasionally.


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#15 Guest_Dorotea_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 06:52 AM

> Thanks -- I've actually be lurking a bit--go underground as it were when

> RL stuff overwhelms me. But I do so enjoy your stories.

I may need to go into lurking too. I am not sure but it looks like I won't be able to have access the Attic at work anymore. Oh well. :(


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#16 Guest_Anonymous_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 10:37 AM

> It does not look like I am going to finish this chapter before the quiz

> will end! Somehow this was the hardest part to write ever, and one of the

> most disturbing. It is like struggling against the very string current.

> Well, I hope at least it is interesting to read. Sigh. As always – please

> any grammar, typos etc that you notice – let me know!

> The Road to Hell

> is paved with Good Intentions. “Why, your worship!” he grinned like a

> jovial toad, giggling involuntarily as if at some hilarious joke, and

> sneaked a quick look at Anomen, “why would you of all people be interested

> in these?”

*snerk* Love the glance Cesspool's way!

> I learned about guril berries and their use, all right. That did not bring

> me any closer to the solution of the riddle. Minsc and Vicky talked with

> the boy Faraji, who had found one of the latest bodies. But the child was

> too young and too frightened to tell them anything useful, even though

> Minsc won his trust with the hamster trick. All that the youngster said

> was that the old lady living across the street from him was a witch, and

> therefore the murders must be her doing. It turned out she was indeed a

> local hedgewizard, practicing her craft without a license. But there was

> nothing wrong with her fundamentally, and after purchasing few cheap

> potions Viconia dismissed her as a suspect.

> “She would not have had a nerve for it, jabress,” the elf grinned at me

> languidly showing the row of pearly-white teeth. “I looked her in the eye

> - she is just an old faern, scared half to death that somebody would

> betray her to the magistrate. Your surface females rarely have any spine

> in them.”

Surface females aren't automaticly clerics of Lolth either - maybe those facts are conected?

> “Most likely you are right, Viconia, “ I said tiredly dismissing her jibe,

> “I may be prejudiced, but something tells me this is a man's work.”

> “Yet we found something interesting for you, jabress!” the priestess said

> triumphantly pulling her backpack from under the table.

> What she extricated out of it was a square piece of rough hide, the size

> of a standard folio and at least two fingers thick. It looked weird -

> hairless, and dull gray but wrinkled. It was well processed, and flexible

> enough to be worked into a shield cover or a piece of armor. I got an

> impression that this was a sample to be presented to a customer or at a

> trade show. One of its corners was marred with rusty brown substance that

> soaked into the leather and dried inside it. From the moment I saw it I

> had no doubt about the nature of that stain.

Blood?

> “Where did you get it?” I asked curiously, “it is not a…”

> “No, jabress.” Viconia answered quickly. “This is not a rivvin hide, if

> that's what you meant,” she scowled at my dark glance. “And to stop your

> next question – yes, I have seen worked humanoid skin, although I had

> never had a taste for those kind of 'souvenirs'!

Well that's reassuring although I'm sure there are some Sharrans who wouldn't be so diserning.

> Neither it looks like an

> orc pelt or a piece of dragon hide. I have no idea what beast was flayed

> to produce this bit. We got it from an old rivvil, who had found it on the

> site of the latest murder.”

> “Let me see it Vicky, “ the gnome interfered suddenly. “I think I can tell

> you what it is! Speak of the devil, your worship! It is a piece of

> elephant hide, or I am hairless halfling!”

> “Are you sure?” I inquired simply, trying to keep excitement out of my

> voice.

> “Well, I never saw it prepared like this but yes, I am pretty positive

> that's what it is, since I have seen Beeloo's favorite pet often enough

> when he brought her out of her pen for cleaning.” He took sniff at the

> leather. “Eek! It reeks of blood, but still there is a smell of tannin

> about it. It was processed not so long ago.”

> “Blast the fiend who had slaughtered an innocent elephant on top of his

> other crimes!” Minsc said doubtfully. “Err, even little Boo is shaking

> with anger at such an outrage, right?”

Awww! Minsc standing up for the rights of defenceless animals! How Rangerish! Goodo Minsc!

> I gave him a blank stare for his trouble and he shifted uncomfortably.

> Viconia giggled.

Aww! Leave the poor guy alone!

> “A processed piece of an exotic hide, and a smell of guril,” I said after

> a short pause, “any interesting ideas citizens?”

> “A piece of hide would surely point to an armorer or a cobbler,“ Anomen

> said suddenly, turning hot pink.

Hmm! What's his problem?

> I gave him an appreciating stare. Whatever were his shortcomings, at least

> he could use his head for something other than wearing a helmet, (on rare

> occasions, anyway).

*snerk*

> “All right, friends. I am calling it a night,” I suggested tiredly.

> “Tomorrow we will continue the investigation.”

> …

> Tomorrow morning came bright and sunny, which was unusual to put it mild

> for the Athkatlan winter. After days of ice-cold drizzle that alone was

> enough to put me in a better mood. The first thing I noticed when I

> descended for breakfast was Anomen, who was lingering by the kitchen door

> with suspiciously determined expression.

> “I asked the cook to prepare some warm milk with spices,” he offered

> timidly. “Would you care to share your meal with me, my lady? I want to

> offer my apologies.”

> My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody

> remembered what I liked for my morning drink.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Take it as a sign Thea! (HE LIKES YOU!!!!!!!!!)

> He picked up a table that

> could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and

> chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of

> yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the

> sun, and going to the locale

local

> Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness.

> Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched.

> Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's

> death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago.

> Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way

> he disparaged Rosie.

*grins*

> Viconia gave us an amused stare when she finally conceded to wake up and

> join the company. I felt irritated. This ridiculous game between the three

> of us started to chafe on my nerves.

I can imagine!

> I wondered briefly, what Yoshimo and

> Valygar were doing this fine morning, and blushed catching myself at being

> rather unconcerned about it. Therefore, I immediately asked for the

> writing utensils, and arranged for the innkeeper's nephew to be sent to

> the Adventurer's Mart with a ciphered epistle.

> “Minsc, would you care to go down to the Aegisfield's office, deliver my

> note to him and bring back an answer?” I asked after finishing my second

> letter. “Viconia, since you already know the hedgewitch, I want you to go

> back and discreetly ask her about guril. Watch her reaction. It is rather

> important to find out if she uses it in her potions.”

> The priestess scowled at me, but accepted an errand, muttering something

> to the extent of 'Xun izil dos phuul quarthen, lueth dro.' (Do what you

> are ordered and live.)

> “Oh, just drop it, Viconia. I am not trying to humiliate you. This whole

> business stinks of dark magic. And we had already met one elderly lady

> selling potions, who turned out to be a shapeshifter!”

> “Jan, I want you to find the local herb merchant and obtain a sample of

> this peculiar plant. I want Rosie to have a sniff at it. Anomen, can you

> please find her, and convince her to come to the Five Flagons with you?”

> He blinked. “Oh, come on, use your charm. I need to talk to her again, and

> have her examine Jan's samples.” I turned back to the gnome. “By the way,

> old chap, can you ask the herb man to give you some similar smelling

> substances? We need a clean test. I will see you all back here at about

> noon time.”

> “And what is it that you are going to do this fine morning, your worship?

> “ Jan inquired with a smile.

> “Oh, I am going down to the temple of Ilmather's morgue.” I said. They

> stared at me without understanding. “I need to see the bodies,” I

> explained simply. “I cannot continue from this point without seeing the

> main evidence”

Eww! At least she takes the worst errand!

> “Are you sure you up to the task, lass?” the little wizard asked

> carefully.

> “Oh, I'll survive,“ I shrugged, “I saw Rakshasa's handiwork, remember?”

> “I am going with you,” the young Helmite said suddenly, “please,” he gave

> me a pleading stare, “since you are doing it to find the murderer of my

> sister the least I can do is to share this experience!”

> I looked at him in silence for a moment, then nodded in compliance and

> turned to the little wizard. “Jan, would you mind finding a young woman

> named Rose Bouquet after you are done with your purchases?”

> The Ilmatheri priest led us across the temple grounds into a smaller stone

> structure covered in flaking yellow paint. It was gravely cold inside, and

> the moment I stepped in a familiar stench of formalin and decaying flesh

> assaulted my nostrils. I stumbled as the memories of Irenicus' prison

> invaded my mind.

Erg!

> Flicker… a gloved hand is caressing my face leaving behind the familiar

> stench…flicker… and the hot-red blade is searing the soles of my feet

> filling the chamber with nauseating smell of burned meat…flicker… Khalid's

> dissected body is sprawled on the stone slab…flicker… I think I fainted

> for a second. Embarrassing, but the sense of smell is indeed the strongest

> catalyst of memories that I know.

And setting off memories like that? Yech!

> Anomen caught me in his hands

Erm, wouldn't 'arms' be better?

> and for

> once I was grateful for his fussy chivalry that made him insist on staying

> two steps ahead of me, and offering me his hand. Falling head first on

> these slimy steps would not have been fun. Yet I dismissed his suggestion

> to turn back, and we followed the silent Ilmatheri all the way down the

> spiraling stone stairway, into the spacious bitter cold chamber, lighted

> only by the blue flames of a single brazier.

> There were too many of them in that 'special' corner. Almost half a dozen.

> The quiet priest assured us these were the victims of the 'Skinner' from

> the last ten days. They had already buried as many over the previous

> month.

> “He is getting greedy, “ I uttered looking at the expanse of purple-blue

> muscle tissue, and terrible blackened faces frozen in eternal grimaces of

> pain.

Yech!

> Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings

> that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was

> meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin

> and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh

> were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could

> continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged

> victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or

> cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had

> died of shock and blood loss.

And again I say Yech!

> It reeked of some dark ritual, yet lacked the signs of exalted

> intemperance that is so often a sign of the religious zeal. I thought of

> the evil religions that required human sacrifice – loviatori, banites,

> even bhaalites.

Especially Bhaalites I would think. Bhaal was the god of Murder.

> All of them would prefer to do a job like this in the

> confines of their temples, following the murder with a lot of fussy

> rituals and a ceremonial disposal of the corpse. This was too …

> workmanlike. Almost as if whoever was doing it was taking quiet pride in

> the precision of his strokes, and geometrical accuracy of the wounds.

Ooooh! just screams 'TANNER' doesn't it?

> “I've seen enough,” I said abruptly, waking up from my trance. “We need to

> hurry. I want to see the answer that Minsc should bring from Aegis.”

> By the time we got back to the Five Flagons I recovered my wits. Anomen

> was grim and silent, his pale face contorted in a grimace of cold anger. I

> don't think I looked any better. We found our companions gathered in the

> main room around the fire. It felt like our visit to the Ilmather's temple

> only lasted a few minutes, but in reality the whole morning had passed and

> the sun was traveling down from its zenith point.

> Jan was pacing impatiently in front of the fireplace. Upon seeing us enter

> he gave a cry and waved at me energetically. “We've got news for you!” he

> squeaked in a high pitch that marked his speech when he was greatly

> excited. “It was an oak bark, not guril! The girl had recognized it

> clearly!”

> I noticed Rosie, who was hiding shyly behind Minsc' great bulk. Viconia

> was sprawled on a soft chair with her feet close to the fire. “The

> Cragmoon witch gave me the clue as well,” she nodded firmly. “Guril is

> rich in tannin.”

> “Minsc,” I asked quickly, “the answer from lieutenant Aegis?”

> “That lieutenant is a weird fellow!” Minsc boomed unhappily. “Boo says he

> is a stinker. First he is not there then he makes us wait for an hour! I

> gave him your note but he wont read it until I answer his questions. He

> wanted to know what you've been up to, lassie. I told him it was nothing,

> except somebody had murdered an elephant under his very nose, and he did

> not even know! But when he read your letter he jumped up like there was a

> wasp in his pants and run out!”

> “Where did he go?” I asked urgently. “Did he tell you where exactly he was

> going?”

> “Ah,” Minsc shrugged, “not really, but he yelled something like 'Hidesman'

> before he run out. Beats me if I know what he meant!”

> “Rosie,” I asked the redheaded woman urgently, “does this ring a bell to

> you?”

> “Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local

> tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

Oooooooooooooooh! I've looked through the dialogs in Inf Exp so I know that one eventuality is one finds the Ageis dead. Are you gonna play out that course?

> NOTES FROM SISTER OMPHALLA

> Guril berries - a plant of guril, and especially its fruit is used in folk

> medicine as a base for a salve which supposedly can cure some intimate

> afflictions, caused by untidy love life.

> Formalin - a water solution of formaldehyde, the simplest aldehyde. Often

> used for manufacturing of embalming fluids and as a preservative and

> disinfectant.

> Corium - in humanoids, and the vertebrates generally, the skin consist of

> two layers, an outer nonsensitive and nonvascular epidermis, cuticle, or

> skarfskin, composed of cells which are constantly growing and multiplying

> in the deeper, and being thrown off in the superficial, layers; and an

> inner sensitive, and vascular dermis, cutis, corium, or true skin,

> composed mostly of connective tissue.

> Tannin (or tannic acid) - An acid obtained from nutgalls as a yellow

> amorphous substance, having an astringent taste, and forming with ferric

> salts a bluish-black compound, which is the basis of common ink. Called

> also tannin, and gallotannic acid. By extension, any one of a series of

> astringent substances resembling tannin proper, widely diffused through

> the vegetable kingdom, as in oak bark, willow, guril, tea, coffee, etc.

> Tanning -To convert (the skin of an animal) into leather, as by usual

> process of steeping it in an infusion of oak or some other bark, whereby

> it is impregnated with tannin, or tannic acid (which exists in several

> species of bark), and is thus rendered firm, durable, and in some degree

> impervious to water.

This glossary of terms is always useful.

Good story Doro! Love to see the next one!

-Hyper. Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarf!!!!



#17 Guest_Anonymous_*

Posted 14 May 2002 - 10:49 AM

> Hey

> i feel sorry for him, really. All the trashing he was getting lately!

> Where are all sweet anomen loving ladies? All gone?

Sorry, gotten distracted by other NPCs. I don't nessecarily hate Ano but with the current air combined with the aforementioned distraction I've been less than sympathetic with him. Ah well, if my WB ever moves it'll help keep the early stages of Narri's relationship with him somewhat distant (she does break his nose at one point!)



#18 Weyoun

Posted 14 May 2002 - 04:30 PM

> “Most likely you are right, Viconia, “ I said tiredly dismissing her jibe,

> “I may be prejudiced, but something tells me this is a man's work.”

> “Yet we found something interesting for you, jabress!” the priestess said

> triumphantly pulling her backpack from under the table.

> What she extricated out of it was a square piece of rough hide, the size

> of a standard folio and at least two fingers thick. It looked weird -

> hairless, and dull gray but wrinkled. It was well processed, and flexible

> enough to be worked into a shield cover or a piece of armor. I got an

> impression that this was a sample to be presented to a customer or at a

> trade show. One of its corners was marred with rusty brown substance that

> soaked into the leather and dried inside it. From the moment I saw it I

> had no doubt about the nature of that stain.

A piece of Elephant hide, yes?

> “Where did you get it?” I asked curiously, “it is not a…”

> “No, jabress.” Viconia answered quickly. “This is not a rivvin hide, if

> that's what you meant,” she scowled at my dark glance. “And to stop your

> next question – yes, I have seen worked humanoid skin, although I had

> never had a taste for those kind of 'souvenirs'!

Somehow, I am rather relieved to hear that... ;)

> “A piece of hide would surely point to an armorer or a cobbler,“ Anomen

> said suddenly, turning hot pink.

> I gave him an appreciating stare. Whatever were his shortcomings, at least

> he could use his head for something other than wearing a helmet, (on rare

> occasions, anyway).

LOL! Very rare occasions. :D

> “Minsc, would you care to go down to the Aegisfield's office, deliver my

> note to him and bring back an answer?” I asked after finishing my second

> letter. “Viconia, since you already know the hedgewitch, I want you to go

> back and discreetly ask her about guril. Watch her reaction. It is rather

> important to find out if she uses it in her potions.”

> The priestess scowled at me, but accepted an errand, muttering something

> to the extent of 'Xun izil dos phuul quarthen, lueth dro.' (Do what you

> are ordered and live.)

LOL! Oh my, what an enthousiastic response! :D

> “Oh, I am going down to the temple of Ilmather's morgue.” I said. They

> stared at me without understanding. “I need to see the bodies,” I

> explained simply. “I cannot continue from this point without seeing the

> main evidence”

Oh, dear... I suddenly know why this story will be disturbing. :)

> Flicker… a gloved hand is caressing my face leaving behind the familiar

> stench…flicker… and the hot-red blade is searing the soles of my feet

> filling the chamber with nauseating smell of burned meat…flicker… Khalid's

> dissected body is sprawled on the stone slab…flicker… I think I fainted

> for a second. Embarrassing, but the sense of smell is indeed the strongest

> catalyst of memories that I know.

Who can blame her after what she went through at the hands of Irenicus.

> Strangely enough, I did not feel scared or disgusted; the only feelings

> that filled my heart were pity and anger at whoever did this. His work was

> meticulous, as every one of the corpses was missing big squares of skin

> and underlying corium on their backs and bellies. The patches of flesh

> were peeled off with accurate precision of a professional, who could

> continue his job with steady hand on the still conscious, bound and gagged

> victim, trashing under his sharp knife. There were no stabbing wounds or

> cut throats, and the Ilmatheri confirmed impassively that all of them had

> died of shock and blood loss.

Yeeechhhh... A bit too graphic for my tastes. :D

> I told him it was nothing,

> except somebody had murdered an elephant under his very nose, and he did

> not even know!

LOL! Hard to miss somethign like that...

> But when he read your letter he jumped up like there was a

> wasp in his pants and run out!”

> “Where did he go?” I asked urgently. “Did he tell you where exactly he was

> going?”

> “Ah,” Minsc shrugged, “not really, but he yelled something like 'Hidesman'

> before he run out. Beats me if I know what he meant!”

> “Rosie,” I asked the redheaded woman urgently, “does this ring a bell to

> you?”

> “Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local

> tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

I don't think that was the brightest Idea Aegis has ever had.

Great stuff, if usual...

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#19 Laufey

Posted 14 May 2002 - 06:26 PM

> I feel he doesn't. It is almost impossible for him to 'decide' though. Hey

> i feel sorry for him, really. All the trashing he was getting lately!

> Where are all sweet anomen loving ladies? All gone?

> chuckle.

Don't you worry. ;) I like Anomen myself, warts and all. I'll be mostly nice to him when Cards get that far. True, he won't get Rini, but I'll treat him all right. Except for the angsty parts, but *all* my favorite characters get to suffer, so it's only fair. ;-)


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#20 Arcalian

Posted 14 May 2002 - 06:33 PM

> “She would not have had a nerve for it, jabress,” the elf grinned at me

> languidly showing the row of pearly-white teeth. “I looked her in the eye

> - she is just an old faern, scared half to death that somebody would

> betray her to the magistrate. Your surface females rarely have any spine

> in them.”

"had *the* nerve for it"

> “A processed piece of an exotic hide, and a smell of guril,” I said after

> a short pause, “any interesting ideas citizens?”

Captialize "Any", and put a comma after "ideas".

> My eyebrows went up. It was the first time in my life that somebody

> remembered what I liked for my morning drink. He picked up a table that

> could only sit the two of us, and was unconditionally polite and

> chivalrous through the whole breakfast, thus securing my forgiveness of

> yesterday's episode. I nearly choked when he admitted to rising with the

> sun, and going to the locale Helm's shrine in penitence for his rudeness.

> Knowing how seriously he took his religion, I was rather touched.

> Something fundamental was changing in him in the wake of his sister's

> death. I could never have imagined him doing that mere two weeks ago.

> Still, he did not understand that I was only mad at him because of the way

> he disparaged Rosie.

Perhaps you should've tried to explain it to him, sister?

> Viconia gave us an amused stare when she finally conceded to wake up and

> join the company. I felt irritated. This ridiculous game between the three

> of us started to chafe on my nerves.

Ler her have him. It would mature him a bit, I think, provided she didn't eat him alive.

> The Ilmatheri priest led us across the temple grounds into a smaller stone

> structure covered in flaking yellow paint. It was gravely cold inside, and

> the moment I stepped in a familiar stench of formalin and decaying flesh

> assaulted my nostrils. I stumbled as the memories of Irenicus' prison

> invaded my mind.

*Adrian grits his teeth* Yes.....hated that place like no other. It was a little slice of hell.

> It reeked of some dark ritual, yet lacked the signs of exalted

> intemperance that is so often a sign of the religious zeal. I thought of

> the evil religions that required human sacrifice – loviatori, banites,

> even bhaalites. All of them would prefer to do a job like this in the

> confines of their temples, following the murder with a lot of fussy

> rituals and a ceremonial disposal of the corpse. This was too …

> workmanlike. Almost as if whoever was doing it was taking quiet pride in

> the precision of his strokes, and geometrical accuracy of the wounds.

I agree, sister. For me, murder is always about removing an enemy, not gleeful vivisection of the corpse.

> “Where did he go?” I asked urgently. “Did he tell you where exactly he was

> going?”

> “Ah,” Minsc shrugged, “not really, but he yelled something like 'Hidesman'

> before he run out. Beats me if I know what he meant!”

> “Rosie,” I asked the redheaded woman urgently, “does this ring a bell to

> you?”

> “Did he mean Rejiek the Hidesman ?” she said warily. “that's the local

> tanner, he has a shop right at the waterfront.”

One mystery about to be solved, but not the other.


Adrian
The road to the abyss may be paved with good intentions, but it is those with bad intentions that race down that road as fast as they can.




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