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#1 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 12:59 PM

Eh, I took a good look at the start of this chapter and could not find a good place to insert Keldorn’s explanation of why he started to cast True Sight when seeing the false Demin. I will likely add the explanation at the end of the 7.3. before moving it to the Novellas page. For those who got puzzled by that, he became suspicious because every other elf they came across was either in shock or carried an injury of some sorts – and combined with Edwin’s warning about Rakshasa, it was enough to tip off Keldorn.

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you. :twisted:

 

Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 7.4.

Viconia and Jaheira set to their task with all haste and in a matter of few moments powerful healing spells bring Demin back to life, from the brink of the death. Jaheira helps her to rise from the floor and I assist her in carrying the priestess to the nearest chair and seating her on it. She takes a few moments to gather her breath before addressing us, and we all wait for her words patiently.

“I… th-thank you for your assistance, strangers… you are not elves… how do you come to be here?” the priestess asks, “Our city is very difficult to find by outsiders, and with the Exile employing his magics to hide it… if you have stumbled upon it unknowingly, then it truly is a miracle.”

“We came here with general Sovalidaas and a part of his forces,” Jaheira explains and the priestess raises an eyebrow at the explanation, “we were supposed to come here under the leadership of Elhan, but unfortunately he died on the battlefield.”

“Excuse me, priestess, but most of the elves we rescued in the city, referred to Irenicus as the Exile,” I ask Demin, but she looks rather stunned by the news of Elhan’s death, “am I to understand that he has returned to a place that he has once been banished from?”

“Oh… Elhan… Rillifane, bless your spirit… forgive me, stranger, I need a moment to recollect myself…” Demin falls silent, but after a little while continues the tale, “You are correct about the Exile, stranger… many of us would prefer this incident solved without involving others, but I begin to believe it is a mistake to keep this amongst us exclusively. The consequences of this have been far reaching and have proven especially difficult to dispel.”

“I know that elves are reluctant to share any information about events occurring in their own settlements and generally tend to disassociate from other races, but I am afraid that this is not an internal affair, priestess Demin,” Jaheira adds, “we must know what motivated Irenicus to do all those atrocious things…”

“I understand and I am not so concerned with the shame of our people over Irenicus and Bodhi. What good is our silence if the city is crushed because we would not seek help?” Demin muses, “You are not an elf thus it will be difficult for you to fathom why we are so hesitant to speak of this… Hopefully you will come to understand.”

“What is there to understand?” I snarl, “I may be a stupid and barbaric half-breed and most of my companions, lowly humans and despised dark elves, but surely you could make an effort and try to explain.”

“Understand this - The Exiles were not always as you know them now,” Demin continues, “They once had names that I would have been proud to speak, and were as worthy as any other of praise.”

“That can’t be true, can it?” Imoen looks at me, confused, “they are villains, aren’t they? They… they tortured us and… and stole our souls…”

“Certainly you are entitled to your misgivings, child,” Demin looks at Imoen and addresses her in a patient voice, “You would not be here if you were not driven by powerful emotions, and the Exile is good at provoking a reaction.”

“Yes, he has provoked himself right into a fireball on our next meeting (no one keeps Edwin Odesseiron caged and gets away with it, that much is a certainty),” Edwin growls.

“However, he has garnered the strongest of reactions from us, his own people, for he wronged us greater than any other. He is a criminal that knows no bounds,” Demin says, “Yes, he was once elven as we are, but he is no longer. Queen Ellesime rightfully cast him out, for he had proven he was not elven at heart.”

“And how exactly did he prove that?” I ask her.

“Then I must return to an earlier history… She and He were well known in the elven court of Suldanessellar. He, at least, was a great asset to our kind and kin. He was the greatest of our mages, as skilled as any of elven blood could be without divine assistance. He even had the favour of the Queen,” Demin’s face expression turns sour, “But it was not enough for him… of the two, the 'sister' was the insatiable one. She was not as regarded, but she held great influence over her 'brother,' and pulled him into her madness.”

“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.

“Every piece of information is valuable in order to better understand our opponent,” Keldorn objects and I am hardly surprised by his reaction.

“Yes, if I may continue… as I said, Bodhi was obsessed with power - together they sought more than was possible, they wished the power of the gods, and they were not concerned about the consequences,” Demin’s face expression turns dark, “Irenicus performed a dark ritual and committed a grave offense against the greatest symbol of our longevity, the Tree of Life. He sought to merge his essence with the divine tree, draining it and stealing its energy.”

“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.

“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…

“Yes, yes, we know Edwin… you are worthy of a divine status, we know that…” I cut him off, “as you were saying, priestess…”

“Irenicus failed in his plans, but there was a price to pay for the rest of us. He disrupted the elven connection to land and nature. There was a great shock that ran through Suldanessellar, and many of our weaker citizens lay near death,” I can discern hate and rage in Demin’s usually calm voice, “that he would endanger so many for his own selfish goals was one thing, but to threaten the very nature of what makes us so special, was unfathomable.”

“Err… indeed… so how come he still lives?” I ask Demin, knowing that I probably won’t like the answer.

“It fell to Queen Ellesime to judge the crime, and she was very harsh. Having forsaken everything elven, they would be outcast so they might learn how precious our ways are,” Demin explains.

“Err… so… um… she just cast them out of the city so that they could wreak havoc elsewhere?” Imoen looks at Demin, slightly stunned.

“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.

“Indeed… that doesn’t sound really… um… well, that doesn’t make me particularly sympathetic towards the elves…” I look at Demin with a faint hope that either I have misunderstood her words or she has misspoken.

“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.

“That must be awful to live like a… like a… human?” Nalia shows her exceptional skills of deduction and produces a rather acceptable summarization, “hey… but I live like that every day and I can tell you that is not that bad… at least not worse than death…”

“Do not judge so quickly, Nalia,” Keldorn interjects, “I am sure that the Queen had her reasons and we cannot comprehend what such punishment would mean for an elf.”

“Well, if it is indeed a punishment worse than death as Demin says, then I must say that this Ellesime is a cruel sadist,” Viconia snarls and as I open my mouth to concur with Viconia’s statement, I am interrupted by a quick chanting and five glowing sphere’s of energy fly across room and hit Demin in the chest, making her scream in pain.

“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.

“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”

“I understand that perfectly well, you maniacal wizard, but I will not let my anger muck up one last chance we have to survive!” Jaheira yells back at him, and I feel the need to intervene, before things have gone from bad to worse…

“Foul mage! Finally you show your true colors by harming a defenceless and hurt woman! There is no excuse for such atrocity!” Keldorn bellows, drawing his sword and looking at Edwin menacingly.

“Shut up, Keldorn and stay out of it! EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!” Jaheira screams from the top of her lungs and immediately we all freeze and the room falls in an eerie silence.

“Err… dearest?” I ask her timidly, but she is too irritated to notice.

“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?” Jaheira finishes her speech and everyone in the room look rather ashamed.

“How is she?” I ask Viconia as she has finished yet another healing spell, in hopes to patch up the injured priestess.

“Ah, she will live, but I’m afraid that Edwin’s outburst may have hampered her talkativeness,” Viconia snorts, looking at our wizard, who is rather pale in the face.

“You mean that she won’t talk to us or is it that she can’t talk to us even if she wanted to?” Nalia questions her, sending sideways glances to Keldorn.

“I’m afraid that she’s not at her full consciousness right now,” Viconia explains, “I can only cast another healing spell and then we’ll have to wait… hopefully not for too long…”

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.

#2 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 04:05 PM

“What is there to understand?” I snarl, “I may be a stupid and barbaric half-breed and most of my companions, lowly humans and despised dark elves, but surely you could make an effort and try to explain.”


Heh, perfectly understandable that Theo is annoyed here, I think - since the elves need him to save their city for them, insulting him for being a half breed is a bit of a cheek.

“Understand this - The Exiles were not always as you know them now,” Demin continues, “They once had names that I would have been proud to speak, and were as worthy as any other of praise.”


Fair enough, but I can't see Theo caring a whole lot about whether Irenicus was once a nice guy.

“Then I must return to an earlier history… She and He were well known in the elven court of Suldanessellar. He, at least, was a great asset to our kind and kin. He was the greatest of our mages, as skilled as any of elven blood could be without divine assistance. He even had the favour of the Queen,” Demin’s face expression turns sour, “But it was not enough for him… of the two, the 'sister' was the insatiable one. She was not as regarded, but she held great influence over her 'brother,' and pulled him into her madness.”


“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.


C'mon Vic, either you want the story or you don't. Let her finish.

“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…


Maybe another time, Eddie. :twisted:

“Indeed… that doesn’t sound really… um… well, that doesn’t make me particularly sympathetic towards the elves…” I look at Demin with a faint hope that either I have misunderstood her words or she has misspoken.


Heh, he's being more restrained than I thought he would be. :oops:

Yep, I think this was a very credible reaction - he's being a bit harsh on the elves, but then Theo's not the type to try to look at things from the elvish pov.

“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.


Sorry Demin, but I don't really think Theo's in the mood to listen. Particularly not since you're basically claiming that as a pure elf you're superior to him.

“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


But they never actually set out to try to kill you. Best save the spells for Irenicus, when you'll really need them.

“Foul mage! Finally you show your true colors by harming a defenceless and hurt woman! There is no excuse for such atrocity!” Keldorn bellows, drawing his sword and looking at Edwin menacingly.


Uh oh...

“Shut up, Keldorn and stay out of it! EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!” Jaheira screams from the top of her lungs and immediately we all freeze and the room falls in an eerie silence.


“Err… dearest?” I ask her timidly, but she is too irritated to notice.


Shhh Theo. Probably a bad idea to attract her attention right now. :shock:

“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?” Jaheira finishes her speech and everyone in the room look rather ashamed.


Or at least, has enough of a sense of self preservation to pretend to look ashamed. 8)

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


Well Theo, you're the one who likes balance - maybe you need Keldorn and Nalia to balance out Eddie and Vic? :x

After all, however annoyed Theo was with Demin, killing injured women isn't exactly his style - I wouldn't have thought he would be particularly approving of Eddie's actions? Although obviously he'd never go so far as to attack Edwin.

Nice chapter :wink:. How many more chapters do you have planned for Suldanessellar before they get to Irenicus?

#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 05:07 PM


“What is there to understand?” I snarl, “I may be a stupid and barbaric half-breed and most of my companions, lowly humans and despised dark elves, but surely you could make an effort and try to explain.”


Heh, perfectly understandable that Theo is annoyed here, I think - since the elves need him to save their city for them, insulting him for being a half breed is a bit of a cheek.


Of course, she doesn't see it as an insult. :twisted:


“Understand this - The Exiles were not always as you know them now,” Demin continues, “They once had names that I would have been proud to speak, and were as worthy as any other of praise.”


Fair enough, but I can't see Theo caring a whole lot about whether Irenicus was once a nice guy.


Nope, not really. He may ponder about it for a bit, but won't be too interested.


“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.


C'mon Vic, either you want the story or you don't. Let her finish.


She's not terribly patient, is she?


“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…


Maybe another time, Eddie. :shock:


We have another Irenicus here in the making.


“Indeed… that doesn’t sound really… um… well, that doesn’t make me particularly sympathetic towards the elves…” I look at Demin with a faint hope that either I have misunderstood her words or she has misspoken.


Heh, he's being more restrained than I thought he would be. 8)


Yep, I think this was a very credible reaction - he's being a bit harsh on the elves, but then Theo's not the type to try to look at things from the elvish pov.


I think with all his bad experiences, Theo is trying to be as restrained as he possibly can. But he is not developing a lot of a sympathy towards Ellie... :x


“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.


Sorry Demin, but I don't really think Theo's in the mood to listen. Particularly not since you're basically claiming that as a pure elf you're superior to him.


Indeed... and Demin is probably the most tolerant of the lot.


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


But they never actually set out to try to kill you. Best save the spells for Irenicus, when you'll really need them.


Those are insignificant details to Edwin. He's not going to stand there and be insulted.


“Foul mage! Finally you show your true colors by harming a defenceless and hurt woman! There is no excuse for such atrocity!” Keldorn bellows, drawing his sword and looking at Edwin menacingly.


Uh oh...


That didn't sit well at all with a paladin...


“Shut up, Keldorn and stay out of it! EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!” Jaheira screams from the top of her lungs and immediately we all freeze and the room falls in an eerie silence.



“Err… dearest?” I ask her timidly, but she is too irritated to notice.


Shhh Theo. Probably a bad idea to attract her attention right now. :oops:


Well, he's just afraid that she might do something inconsiderate. :x


“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?” Jaheira finishes her speech and everyone in the room look rather ashamed.


Or at least, has enough of a sense of self preservation to pretend to look ashamed. :)


Well, I think they have a cause to be ashamed. :P


Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


Well Theo, you're the one who likes balance - maybe you need Keldorn and Nalia to balance out Eddie and Vic? :P


That process of balancing out can be quite... explosive. :(

After all, however annoyed Theo was with Demin, killing injured women isn't exactly his style - I wouldn't have thought he would be particularly approving of Eddie's actions? Although obviously he'd never go so far as to attack Edwin.


He's not approving, but then he knows that Edwin didn't try to kill Demin - he would have chosen a juicier spell for that. And he can understand the anger and how easy it is to provoke Eddie.

Nice chapter :D. How many more chapters do you have planned for Suldanessellar before they get to Irenicus?


Errr... uhuh, I think that 7.11. is the battle at the Tree of Life... I wasn't in hurry, obviously... :wink:

Btw - another week and no Garrick. What's the deal? :)

#4 Laufey

Posted 22 November 2003 - 05:42 PM

“Oh… Elhan… Rillifane, bless your spirit… forgive me, stranger, I need a moment to recollect myself…” Demin falls silent, but after a little while continues the tale, “You are correct about the Exile, stranger… many of us would prefer this incident solved without involving others, but I begin to believe it is a mistake to keep this amongst us exclusively. The consequences of this have been far reaching and have proven especially difficult to dispel.”


Yeah, you can say that again. :twisted:

“Yes, he has provoked himself right into a fireball on our next meeting (no one keeps Edwin Odesseiron caged and gets away with it, that much is a certainty),” Edwin growls.


Go Eddie! 8)


“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.


“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…


Awwww... :oops:


“Err… so… um… she just cast them out of the city so that they could wreak havoc elsewhere?” Imoen looks at Demin, slightly stunned.


“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.


Exactly.


“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.


“That must be awful to live like a… like a… human?” Nalia shows her exceptional skills of deduction and produces a rather acceptable summarization, “hey… but I live like that every day and I can tell you that is not that bad… at least not worse than death…”


And that made me *so* eager to want to run around and save those elves precious butts. :shock:


“Well, if it is indeed a punishment worse than death as Demin says, then I must say that this Ellesime is a cruel sadist,” Viconia snarls and as I open my mouth to concur with Viconia’s statement, I am interrupted by a quick chanting and five glowing sphere’s of energy fly across room and hit Demin in the chest, making her scream in pain.


“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


Temper, temper, Eddie...not that I don't understand it, but this isn't helping.


“Shut up, Keldorn and stay out of it! EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!” Jaheira screams from the top of her lungs and immediately we all freeze and the room falls in an eerie silence.


“Err… dearest?” I ask her timidly, but she is too irritated to notice.


Come now Theo, you're sounding like Khalid. :wink:


Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


Oh dear...the plot thickens even more. Just *don't* let Eddie handle any sensitive negotiations...
Rogues do it from behind.

#5 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 05:57 PM


“Oh… Elhan… Rillifane, bless your spirit… forgive me, stranger, I need a moment to recollect myself…” Demin falls silent, but after a little while continues the tale, “You are correct about the Exile, stranger… many of us would prefer this incident solved without involving others, but I begin to believe it is a mistake to keep this amongst us exclusively. The consequences of this have been far reaching and have proven especially difficult to dispel.”


Yeah, you can say that again. :oops:


They do not know all the consequences, do they?


“Yes, he has provoked himself right into a fireball on our next meeting (no one keeps Edwin Odesseiron caged and gets away with it, that much is a certainty),” Edwin growls.


Go Eddie! :x


The fight at the Tree is going to be a tough one.


“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.



“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…


Awwww... 8)


I *really* doubt that Edwin would have succeeded if put in Irenicus's place. But let us allow him to dream... :shock:


“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.


Exactly.


I like having Edwin around, because in moments like this I can make him channel my own thoughts on the whole thing.


“That must be awful to live like a… like a… human?” Nalia shows her exceptional skills of deduction and produces a rather acceptable summarization, “hey… but I live like that every day and I can tell you that is not that bad… at least not worse than death…”


And that made me *so* eager to want to run around and save those elves precious butts. :wink:


Oh, yes. And the lesson in elven bigotry is not done yet.


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


Temper, temper, Eddie...not that I don't understand it, but this isn't helping.


True, true. Demin might be very prejudiced, but she isn't the one responsible and generally she is perhaps the only one of the high-ranked elves that I do not particularly dislike.


“Shut up, Keldorn and stay out of it! EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!” Jaheira screams from the top of her lungs and immediately we all freeze and the room falls in an eerie silence.



“Err… dearest?” I ask her timidly, but she is too irritated to notice.


Come now Theo, you're sounding like Khalid. :x


Well, I think he will take that as a compliment, after all Khalid was a sweet and likeable guy. :P


Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


Oh dear...the plot thickens even more. Just *don't* let Eddie handle any sensitive negotiations...


Like with the Nizidraman-whatshisname dragon? :twisted:

I'll try...

#6 Guest_Chantrys_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 06:46 PM

For those who got puzzled by that, he became suspicious because every other elf they came across was either in shock or carried an injury of some sorts – and combined with Edwin’s warning about Rakshasa, it was enough to tip off Keldorn.


Ah, good. Works for me. :shock:

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all.


Now why am I not surprised? :oops:

“I understand and I am not so concerned with the shame of our people over Irenicus and Bodhi. What good is our silence if the city is crushed because we would not seek help?” Demin muses, “You are not an elf thus it will be difficult for you to fathom why we are so hesitant to speak of this… Hopefully you will come to understand.”


And if you don't come to understand (as I expect, you folks being of lesser races and all), I will repeat myself. Slowly. Using very short words.

“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.


(*rude giggle*)

“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.

“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…

“Yes, yes, we know Edwin… you are worthy of a divine status, we know that…” I cut him off, “as you were saying, priestess…”


I particularly liked this reaction. Very on.

“Err… so… um… she just cast them out of the city so that they could wreak havoc elsewhere?” Imoen looks at Demin, slightly stunned.

“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.


LOL! Yes, I always thought the elves dropped the ball on that one. But then again, I can't possibly fathom their superior ways, so what do I know? :twisted:

“Well, if it is indeed a punishment worse than death as Demin says, then I must say that this Ellesime is a cruel sadist,” Viconia snarls and as I open my mouth to concur with Viconia’s statement, I am interrupted by a quick chanting and five glowing sphere’s of energy fly across room and hit Demin in the chest, making her scream in pain.

“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.


Oh, dear. Perhaps you should have gagged and bound him before starting this conversation.

“Foul mage! Finally you show your true colors by harming a defenceless and hurt woman! There is no excuse for such atrocity!” Keldorn bellows, drawing his sword and looking at Edwin menacingly.


Yes, I can totally see this. He's been looking for an excuse for a while now. I initially wondered about the normally measured Keldorn drawing his sword so quickly, but then again, everyone's on edge. :wink:

“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?” Jaheira finishes her speech and everyone in the room look rather ashamed.


Yeah! Go Jaheira! You show them who's boss!

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


I think it is, so long as everyone is able to restrain themselves. 8)

I thought you did a great job with this chapter. Everyone was quite credible, at least in my book.

#7 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 07:07 PM

For those who got puzzled by that, he became suspicious because every other elf they came across was either in shock or carried an injury of some sorts – and combined with Edwin’s warning about Rakshasa, it was enough to tip off Keldorn.


Ah, good. Works for me. 8)


Wheee, and finally something makes sense! :x


About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all.


Now why am I not surprised? :x


Not enough LG chars in the group, eh?


“I understand and I am not so concerned with the shame of our people over Irenicus and Bodhi. What good is our silence if the city is crushed because we would not seek help?” Demin muses, “You are not an elf thus it will be difficult for you to fathom why we are so hesitant to speak of this… Hopefully you will come to understand.”


And if you don't come to understand (as I expect, you folks being of lesser races and all), I will repeat myself. Slowly. Using very short words.


I don't think that will really help, though... :P


“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.


(*rude giggle*)


:twisted:


“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.


“Indeed, drow… I always admired people with huge ambitions, but it looks like this wizard bit off too big of a lump to swallow. Now, I, on the other hand…” Edwin starts to boast…


“Yes, yes, we know Edwin… you are worthy of a divine status, we know that…” I cut him off, “as you were saying, priestess…”


I particularly liked this reaction. Very on.


Thanks! :shock:


“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.


LOL! Yes, I always thought the elves dropped the ball on that one. But then again, I can't possibly fathom their superior ways, so what do I know? :oops:


Well, you're not the only one who can't fathom their ways... :(


“Well, if it is indeed a punishment worse than death as Demin says, then I must say that this Ellesime is a cruel sadist,” Viconia snarls and as I open my mouth to concur with Viconia’s statement, I am interrupted by a quick chanting and five glowing sphere’s of energy fly across room and hit Demin in the chest, making her scream in pain.


“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.


Oh, dear. Perhaps you should have gagged and bound him before starting this conversation.


Yes, Edwin went over the edge, but I thought it was very likely to happen.


“Foul mage! Finally you show your true colors by harming a defenceless and hurt woman! There is no excuse for such atrocity!” Keldorn bellows, drawing his sword and looking at Edwin menacingly.


Yes, I can totally see this. He's been looking for an excuse for a while now. I initially wondered about the normally measured Keldorn drawing his sword so quickly, but then again, everyone's on edge. :D


Well, he would probably not attack Edwin straight away, without knowing if he has indeed killed Demin. But this is dangerously close to coming to blows.


“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?” Jaheira finishes her speech and everyone in the room look rather ashamed.


Yeah! Go Jaheira! You show them who's boss!


LOL! It was needed, and Jaheira never misses an opportunity to yell at someone. :)


Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


I think it is, so long as everyone is able to restrain themselves. :)


Yep, and Edwin is now put on a very close scrutiny. :wink:

I thought you did a great job with this chapter. Everyone was quite credible, at least in my book.


Thanks! Glad to hear that the reactions of characters seemed credible! :P

#8 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 08:13 PM


After all, however annoyed Theo was with Demin, killing injured women isn't exactly his style - I wouldn't have thought he would be particularly approving of Eddie's actions? Although obviously he'd never go so far as to attack Edwin.


He's not approving, but then he knows that Edwin didn't try to kill Demin - he would have chosen a juicier spell for that. And he can understand the anger and how easy it is to provoke Eddie.


Ah, fair enough. But to be fair to Keldorn, he would probably have done something no matter which of the party had attacked Demin - ok he was probably glad of an excuse to confront Edwin, but I doubt it was just that which motivated him.


Nice chapter :shock:. How many more chapters do you have planned for Suldanessellar before they get to Irenicus?


Errr... uhuh, I think that 7.11. is the battle at the Tree of Life... I wasn't in hurry, obviously... :twisted:


Wow! I'm impressed you managed to get that much mileage out of the chapter.

Btw - another week and no Garrick. What's the deal? :oops:


:wink: It's been nearly finished for a week, but then RL got a bit on top of me. I'm going to try to do some more writing tonight, though. I won't make any promises about when it'll be posted because they usually turn out to be lies - but it shouldn't be much longer now.

#9 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 22 November 2003 - 09:47 PM


He's not approving, but then he knows that Edwin didn't try to kill Demin - he would have chosen a juicier spell for that. And he can understand the anger and how easy it is to provoke Eddie.


Ah, fair enough. But to be fair to Keldorn, he would probably have done something no matter which of the party had attacked Demin - ok he was probably glad of an excuse to confront Edwin, but I doubt it was just that which motivated him.


Exactly. And I think Theo understands him, too.


Errr... uhuh, I think that 7.11. is the battle at the Tree of Life... I wasn't in hurry, obviously... :twisted:


Wow! I'm impressed you managed to get that much mileage out of the chapter.


Heh, yes, but I am not sure if it is a good thing or not... ah, but you'll se it for yourselves. :shock:


Btw - another week and no Garrick. What's the deal? :wink:


8) It's been nearly finished for a week, but then RL got a bit on top of me. I'm going to try to do some more writing tonight, though. I won't make any promises about when it'll be posted because they usually turn out to be lies - but it shouldn't be much longer now.


That sounds quite encouraging! :oops:

#10 Guest_IronDragon_*

Posted 23 November 2003 - 06:40 AM

Eh, I took a good look at the start of this chapter and could not find a good place to insert Keldorn’s explanation of why he started to cast True Sight when seeing the false Demin. I will likely add the explanation at the end of the 7.3. before moving it to the Novellas page. For those who got puzzled by that, he became suspicious because every other elf they came across was either in shock or carried an injury of some sorts – and combined with Edwin’s warning about Rakshasa, it was enough to tip off Keldorn.

There are always reasons for these things,

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you.

There really is no good explanations for what the elves did regarding Jon-boy.

“I… th-thank you for your assistance, strangers… you are not elves… how do you come to be here?” the priestess asks, “Our city is very difficult to find by outsiders, and with the Exile employing his magics to hide it… if you have stumbled upon it unknowingly, then it truly is a miracle.”

Miracle, a divine intervention, well she is real close on this.

“Excuse me, priestess, but most of the elves we rescued in the city, referred to Irenicus as the Exile,” I ask Demin, but she looks rather stunned by the news of Elhan’s death, “am I to understand that he has returned to a place that he has once been banished from?”

Grandma always said that a bad penny always returns.

“I know that elves are reluctant to share any information about events occurring in their own settlements and generally tend to disassociate from other races, but I am afraid that this is not an internal affair, priestess Demin,” Jaheira adds, “we must know what motivated Irenicus to do all those atrocious things…”

I guess “because he’s really evil” just won’t cut it any more.

“Certainly you are entitled to your misgivings, child,” Demin looks at Imoen and addresses her in a patient voice, “You would not be here if you were not driven by powerful emotions, and the Exile is good at provoking a reaction.”

exceptionally good.

“However, he has garnered the strongest of reactions from us, his own people, for he wronged us greater than any other. He is a criminal that knows no bounds,” Demin says, “Yes, he was once elven as we are, but he is no longer. Queen Ellesime rightfully cast him out, for he had proven he was not elven at heart.”

and made her problem someone elses.

“Then I must return to an earlier history… She and He were well known in the elven court of Suldanessellar. He, at least, was a great asset to our kind and kin. He was the greatest of our mages, as skilled as any of elven blood could be without divine assistance. He even had the favour of the Queen,” Demin’s face expression turns sour, “But it was not enough for him… of the two, the 'sister' was the insatiable one. She was not as regarded, but she held great influence over her 'brother,' and pulled him into her madness.”

and now they seem to have reversed their positions. I wonder what Bhodi was before she became a vampire. She has displayed no magic as far as I can recall.

“Yes, if I may continue… as I said, Bodhi was obsessed with power - together they sought more than was possible, they wished the power of the gods, and they were not concerned about the consequences,” Demin’s face expression turns dark, “Irenicus performed a dark ritual and committed a grave offense against the greatest symbol of our longevity, the Tree of Life. He sought to merge his essence with the divine tree, draining it and stealing its energy.”

“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.

yes the boy has got some …er… nerve.

“Err… indeed… so how come he still lives?” I ask Demin, knowing that I probably won’t like the answer.

you won’t

“It fell to Queen Ellesime to judge the crime, and she was very harsh. Having forsaken everything elven, they would be outcast so they might learn how precious our ways are,” Demin explains.
“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.

told you.

“That must be awful to live like a… like a… human?” Nalia shows her exceptional skills of deduction and produces a rather acceptable summarization, “hey… but I live like that every day and I can tell you that is not that bad… at least not worse than death…”

Soon Nalia will learn that logic does not work when it is applied against racism.

“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.

“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”

I must be ill. I’m approving of Edwin’s actions.

“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?”

Yes mother.

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.

Little late to be second guessing.

#11 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 23 November 2003 - 08:33 AM

Eh, I took a good look at the start of this chapter and could not find a good place to insert Keldorn’s explanation of why he started to cast True Sight when seeing the false Demin. I will likely add the explanation at the end of the 7.3. before moving it to the Novellas page. For those who got puzzled by that, he became suspicious because every other elf they came across was either in shock or carried an injury of some sorts – and combined with Edwin’s warning about Rakshasa, it was enough to tip off Keldorn.

There are always reasons for these things,


Well, normally you want your readers to know them :)

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you.

There really is no good explanations for what the elves did regarding Jon-boy.


Nope. Besides, it isn't Demin who should be doing the explaining and getting the brunt of anger.

“I… th-thank you for your assistance, strangers… you are not elves… how do you come to be here?” the priestess asks, “Our city is very difficult to find by outsiders, and with the Exile employing his magics to hide it… if you have stumbled upon it unknowingly, then it truly is a miracle.”

Miracle, a divine intervention, well she is real close on this.


Not that it matters or changes anything.

“Excuse me, priestess, but most of the elves we rescued in the city, referred to Irenicus as the Exile,” I ask Demin, but she looks rather stunned by the news of Elhan’s death, “am I to understand that he has returned to a place that he has once been banished from?”

Grandma always said that a bad penny always returns.


Uh, and Jon was a really bad penny.

“I know that elves are reluctant to share any information about events occurring in their own settlements and generally tend to disassociate from other races, but I am afraid that this is not an internal affair, priestess Demin,” Jaheira adds, “we must know what motivated Irenicus to do all those atrocious things…”

I guess “because he’s really evil” just won’t cut it any more.


Actually, 'he ia raving mad' was their best try, but I don't think Theo would buy that one, now.

“Certainly you are entitled to your misgivings, child,” Demin looks at Imoen and addresses her in a patient voice, “You would not be here if you were not driven by powerful emotions, and the Exile is good at provoking a reaction.”

exceptionally good.


Stealing a soul can do that.

“However, he has garnered the strongest of reactions from us, his own people, for he wronged us greater than any other. He is a criminal that knows no bounds,” Demin says, “Yes, he was once elven as we are, but he is no longer. Queen Ellesime rightfully cast him out, for he had proven he was not elven at heart.”

and made her problem someone elses.


Well, since only inferior beings live outside her city, Ellesime was not too bothered, I guess.

“Then I must return to an earlier history… She and He were well known in the elven court of Suldanessellar. He, at least, was a great asset to our kind and kin. He was the greatest of our mages, as skilled as any of elven blood could be without divine assistance. He even had the favour of the Queen,” Demin’s face expression turns sour, “But it was not enough for him… of the two, the 'sister' was the insatiable one. She was not as regarded, but she held great influence over her 'brother,' and pulled him into her madness.”

and now they seem to have reversed their positions. I wonder what Bhodi was before she became a vampire. She has displayed no magic as far as I can recall.


Truth be told, I have no idea. She probably had some sort of powers, since when she became a vampire she was heads above the ordinary vamps in power.

“Yes, if I may continue… as I said, Bodhi was obsessed with power - together they sought more than was possible, they wished the power of the gods, and they were not concerned about the consequences,” Demin’s face expression turns dark, “Irenicus performed a dark ritual and committed a grave offense against the greatest symbol of our longevity, the Tree of Life. He sought to merge his essence with the divine tree, draining it and stealing its energy.”


“Impressive…” a word escapes from Viconia’s lips.

yes the boy has got some …er… nerve.


And determination.


“Err… indeed… so how come he still lives?” I ask Demin, knowing that I probably won’t like the answer.

you won’t


he didn't.

“It fell to Queen Ellesime to judge the crime, and she was very harsh. Having forsaken everything elven, they would be outcast so they might learn how precious our ways are,” Demin explains.
“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.

told you.


Yep.

“That must be awful to live like a… like a… human?” Nalia shows her exceptional skills of deduction and produces a rather acceptable summarization, “hey… but I live like that every day and I can tell you that is not that bad… at least not worse than death…”

Soon Nalia will learn that logic does not work when it is applied against racism.


That certainly is the case.


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”

I must be ill. I’m approving of Edwin’s actions.


No, I think you are perfectly alright. :)

“Viconia! Heal the priestess and quickly! Edwin – another trick like that from you and I will strangle you with my bare hands, is that clear? Keldorn, if you dare threaten one of us once again with your sword, then you are on your own, from that moment. Do I make myself clear?”

Yes mother.


That kind of outburst doesn't seem very motherly to me, at all. :)

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.

Little late to be second guessing.


True, so he won't brood over it for long. :)

#12 Guest_Rose of Jericho_*

Posted 23 November 2003 - 10:00 PM

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you. :)


I thought so. It's certainly a departure from the way I played the game, but then, I always play a goody-goody.

“I… th-thank you for your assistance, strangers… you are not elves… how do you come to be here?” the priestess asks, “Our city is very difficult to find by outsiders, and with the Exile employing his magics to hide it… if you have stumbled upon it unknowingly, then it truly is a miracle.”


They're elves. Half-human elves, but still elves all the same, in my book anyway. Silly snotty elves.

“Excuse me, priestess, but most of the elves we rescued in the city, referred to Irenicus as the Exile,” I ask Demin, but she looks rather stunned by the news of Elhan’s death, “am I to understand that he has returned to a place that he has once been banished from?”


He's not actually asking her anything until the second half of the sentence. I think "said" would work there just as well as ask and be a tad more accurate.

“That can’t be true, can it?” Imoen looks at me, confused, “they are villains, aren’t they? They… they tortured us and… and stole our souls…”


:) I appreciate Immy's reaction, that she assumes they were always evil without considering that somehow they were led to or made into evil.

“Err… indeed… so how come he still lives?” I ask Demin, knowing that I probably won’t like the answer.

“It fell to Queen Ellesime to judge the crime, and she was very harsh. Having forsaken everything elven, they would be outcast so they might learn how precious our ways are,” Demin explains.

“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.


Not only is this explanation the height of stupidity, it's also really really really insulting to anyone not elven. I don't blame Edwin's reaction (especially considering what Edwin is like). Leaving your foes alive and unchained and unrehabilitated just guarantees that they'll be back to get revenge. Now, if the explanation was something like, "It's forbidden to kill an elf, because elven spirits are more powerful than elven mortals, and if we killed them then they'd be able to haunt us always" I could buy it better.

“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


Although it is a bit odd that Eddie would be insulted on behalf of his race. He doesn't seem to me to be much of a "family of man" sort of guy. Now, insulting him personally *because* he's human sounds about right.

Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


This is what happens when you mix your parties. All sorts of chaos errupts. Perfect for a child of Bhaal, no? :)

Nice job! It's a good viewpoint on the situation. :)

Rose of Jericho

#13 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 05:35 AM

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you. :P


I thought so. It's certainly a departure from the way I played the game, but then, I always play a goody-goody.


The choices were pretty limiting though. I always pick the most insulting options in the talk, but just enough to avoid the fighting.


“I… th-thank you for your assistance, strangers… you are not elves… how do you come to be here?” the priestess asks, “Our city is very difficult to find by outsiders, and with the Exile employing his magics to hide it… if you have stumbled upon it unknowingly, then it truly is a miracle.”


They're elves. Half-human elves, but still elves all the same, in my book anyway. Silly snotty elves.


Very snotty those bigots are.


“Excuse me, priestess, but most of the elves we rescued in the city, referred to Irenicus as the Exile,” I ask Demin, but she looks rather stunned by the news of Elhan’s death, “am I to understand that he has returned to a place that he has once been banished from?”


He's not actually asking her anything until the second half of the sentence. I think "said" would work there just as well as ask and be a tad more accurate.


Gah! Now how did that happen? :D That needs fixin'.


“That can’t be true, can it?” Imoen looks at me, confused, “they are villains, aren’t they? They… they tortured us and… and stole our souls…”


:) I appreciate Immy's reaction, that she assumes they were always evil without considering that somehow they were led to or made into evil.


Some things are quite difficult to fathom.


“Allow me to explain… of spiritually high regard, Ellesime petitioned the gods and a divine curse was placed upon the Exiles. All their connection to the elven spirit was severed. Ellesime thought it a punishment worse than death. A life no longer than human’s and their elven spirits banished from the paradise all elvenkind are entitled to,” Demin explains, but what I hear makes me even angrier.


Not only is this explanation the height of stupidity, it's also really really really insulting to anyone not elven. I don't blame Edwin's reaction (especially considering what Edwin is like). Leaving your foes alive and unchained and unrehabilitated just guarantees that they'll be back to get revenge. Now, if the explanation was something like, "It's forbidden to kill an elf, because elven spirits are more powerful than elven mortals, and if we killed them then they'd be able to haunt us always" I could buy it better.


I think we all would agree that the punishment for Jon's crime was absolutely inadequate, cruel and stupid. I can't believe she truly expected him *to learn*, after taking away his spirit.


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”


Although it is a bit odd that Eddie would be insulted on behalf of his race. He doesn't seem to me to be much of a "family of man" sort of guy. Now, insulting him personally *because* he's human sounds about right.


I think that's true, yes. Let me se if I can rephrase that...


Jaheira heads over to examine Demin for herself and after a few brief moments, she confirms Viconia’s conclusions… we all get seated and wait for the priestess to recover, the tension and unease still present, despite Jaheira’s outburst… and once again, I am left to question if my choice to bring Keldorn along has been the correct one.


This is what happens when you mix your parties. All sorts of chaos errupts. Perfect for a child of Bhaal, no? :)


...and chaos shall be sown in their footsteps...

Of course. :lol:

Nice job! It's a good viewpoint on the situation. :D


Rose of Jericho


Thanks for reading and commenting! ;)

#14 Guest_WC_Sumpton_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 06:24 AM

Ye-gads.... A party of dynamite... and it seems all with a short fuse. Edwin's actions are forgiveable...? Hopefully with this short wait, some of the steam will be lost. But I think the lid is clamp tight on this boiling pot...

Thanks

#15 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 06:58 AM

Ye-gads.... A party of dynamite... and it seems all with a short fuse. Edwin's actions are forgiveable...? Hopefully with this short wait, some of the steam will be lost. But I think the lid is clamp tight on this boiling pot...


Thanks


Yep, and hopefully the pot will not explode before they reach Irenicus - after that Keldorn plans to leave so that should improve the situation. And as long as they don't talk too much and concentrate more on the fighting, they should be just fine!

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

#16 Guest_Ursula_*

Posted 26 November 2003 - 12:54 AM

Howdy! :(

I really like how you've dealt with the racists, erm, um, meant "elves" :) in this story. This chapter was especially agreeable.


About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you. :(

They were.

Demin muses, “You are not an elf thus it will be difficult for you to fathom why we are so hesitant to speak of this… Hopefully you will come to understand.”

She proves that a priest does not have to be overly bright to become a priest. "Gee, let's tick off the strangers w/ pointy weapons." Maybe Johnny-boy was more like them than they'd like to admit. Arrogance, for one...

“What is there to understand?” I snarl, “I may be a stupid and barbaric half-breed and most of my companions, lowly humans and despised dark elves, but surely you could make an effort and try to explain.”

Yay for Theo! He calls a spade black.

“However, he has garnered the strongest of reactions from us, his own people, for he wronged us greater than any other. He is a criminal that knows no bounds,” Demin says, “Yes, he was once elven as we are, but he is no longer. Queen Ellesime rightfully cast him out, for he had proven he was not elven at heart.”

Um. Tapping a Tree's Power versus Stealing Souls. Um, oh, wait; the donors aren't elves so the crime doesn't matter.

One thing I really like is how you depict this Demin woman as obliviously insulting the party throughout this episode. And you know what? From what I've seen of the elves in this segment of SoA, proving that you're not elven at heart seems almost like a good thing, no?

“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.

Yay, Vikki! :(

“Err… indeed… so how come he still lives?” I ask Demin, knowing that I probably won’t like the answer.

“It fell to Queen Ellesime to judge the crime, and she was very harsh. Having forsaken everything elven, they would be outcast so they might learn how precious our ways are,” Demin explains.

“Err… so… um… she just cast them out of the city so that they could wreak havoc elsewhere?” Imoen looks at Demin, slightly stunned.

Yay, Immy!

“And this comes from a person who insults us as being a lowly, uncouth, barbaric and intolerant race, clearly unable to see and understand their precious ways and moral high ground that they have adopted so graciously,” Edwin snarls, looking at Demin with disdain.

And hurrah for Edwin!

I look at Demin with a faint hope that either I have misunderstood her words or she has misspoken.

I like the reaction you give to Theo here.

“Well, if it is indeed a punishment worse than death as Demin says, then I must say that this Ellesime is a cruel sadist,” Viconia snarls and as I open my mouth to concur with Viconia’s statement, I am interrupted by a quick chanting and five glowing sphere’s of energy fly across room and hit Demin in the chest, making her scream in pain.

“Edwin! Stop that, immediately!” Jaheira yells and jumps towards him, trying to prevent him from further spell casting.

“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”

This was my favorite part of this chapter. This does seem like the sort of thing that Edwin would do, considering his reaction to the elf in the Cu Coronet. And Demin was really digging her own grave with what she had to say.

Thanks for sharing this chapter. It was a real hoot. :)

#17 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 November 2003 - 06:45 AM

Howdy! :twisted:


Hi, Ursula! :(

I really like how you've dealt with the racists, erm, um, meant "elves" :D in this story. This chapter was especially agreeable.


Cool! Thanks... I generally like elves, you know - especially, half-elves... but these Suldanessellar elves. Nay, nay... they are not a nice sort.

About this chapter… Demin’s explanation is not taken well. Not well at all. I hope that the reactions of the party members seem credible to you. :wink:

They were.


Yay! :wink:

Demin muses, “You are not an elf thus it will be difficult for you to fathom why we are so hesitant to speak of this… Hopefully you will come to understand.”

She proves that a priest does not have to be overly bright to become a priest. "Gee, let's tick off the strangers w/ pointy weapons." Maybe Johnny-boy was more like them than they'd like to admit. Arrogance, for one...


True, but - she can't really imagine that her words could be even potentially insulting. Still, not very nice of her...

“What is there to understand?” I snarl, “I may be a stupid and barbaric half-breed and most of my companions, lowly humans and despised dark elves, but surely you could make an effort and try to explain.”

Yay for Theo! He calls a spade black.


I'm quite proud of the boy, meself. :(

“However, he has garnered the strongest of reactions from us, his own people, for he wronged us greater than any other. He is a criminal that knows no bounds,” Demin says, “Yes, he was once elven as we are, but he is no longer. Queen Ellesime rightfully cast him out, for he had proven he was not elven at heart.”

Um. Tapping a Tree's Power versus Stealing Souls. Um, oh, wait; the donors aren't elves so the crime doesn't matter.


Can you really commit a crime against a lesser being? Uh, I guess you can - we have all sorts of laws against cruelty towards animals, and stuff... though - can Demin understand what a soul means for a human being? It's not something she can experience.

One thing I really like is how you depict this Demin woman as obliviously insulting the party throughout this episode. And you know what? From what I've seen of the elves in this segment of SoA, proving that you're not elven at heart seems almost like a good thing, no?


Yep, it almost seems that way. And when you consider that Demin is actually the most decent of them all, you really hafta wonder... :wink:

“And obviously they committed some crime… get to the point, priestess, we did not rescue you to listen to such long ramblings,” Viconia intervenes.

Yay, Vikki! :P


Yay, Immy!


And hurrah for Edwin!


I just love my characters! :(

I look at Demin with a faint hope that either I have misunderstood her words or she has misspoken.

I like the reaction you give to Theo here.


Thanks, me too!


“I will not stand here and be insulted, druid! Not only does she insult my race, they are the ones partly responsible for the abuse and suffering we received from Irenicus! Do you not understand that they created Irenicus? That they gave him the motivation to take revenge, thus dragging us into these machinations?”

This was my favorite part of this chapter. This does seem like the sort of thing that Edwin would do, considering his reaction to the elf in the Cu Coronet. And Demin was really digging her own grave with what she had to say.


Thanks - I also thought it was something Edwin was the most likely to do. And poor Edwin - it is tough to be a scapegoat and receive all the brunt of anger that should go to Ellesime. :)

Thanks for sharing this chapter. It was a real hoot. :)


Thanks. Ursula! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :P

#18 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 27 November 2003 - 04:14 AM

I must say I am with Edwin, even if it wasn't exactly fair to torch Demin. >:twisted:

#19 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 27 November 2003 - 05:31 AM

I must say I am with Edwin, even if it wasn't exactly fair to torch Demin. >:shock:


I think most of us felt a sentiment similar to Edwin's, but yes - those magic missiles should have been directed at Ellesime. :twisted:




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