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#1 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 25 August 2008 - 09:04 AM

Chapter 103: Storm Brewing


Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets. The air was hazy with heat, sticky with moisture, and more pungent than ever. Few people moved in the streets. The guards that were posted outside most prominent buildings were sweating and grumbling, and the merchants who normally stood in front of their displays, hawking their goods at the top of their lungs, had all withdrawn in under the shelter of their canopied booths. Even the beggars were more listless than usual.

"Boo misses the forest," Minsc lamented. "We didn't even visit the forest ladies again!"

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom. "It wasn't the right time for it," she said. "But maybe we can take Imoen to see them after all this? I think she'd like that."

A broad smile blossomed on Minsc's face. "Boo agrees!"

Just like before, the group arrived at Gaelan Bayle's house to find his nephew Brus sitting on the doorstep. This time, however, the boy was not on watch duty; his attention was fixed on what looked like a fairly sharp dagger, which he was twirling between his fingers.

"Hello, Brus," Ember said.

The boy gave a start, almost losing control of the dagger. "Adventurers!" Brus cried, giving the group a gap-toothed smile. "I did nay think I'd be talkin' to you louts again!"

"It is a pleasure to see you again too, Master Brus," Yoshimo said, bowing deeply to the boy. "Is your uncle at home?"

"'Course not! But he'll be back by sundown, an' prob'ly sooner. You wanna wait here? I won' mind!"

The front of Bayle's house lay in shade, and the street was fairly quiet; it was as good a place to wait than any. Mazzy and Minsc sat down beside Brus, and the three of them were soon deep in conversation about knife skills, adventuring, and dragons. Ember found a seat at the foot of the doorstep. Edwin perched himself alongside the wall with his ubiquitous bundle of scrolls and documents. Yoshimo stood at the corner of the house, leaning casually against the wall as he watched the goings-on in the adjoining, busier street, and Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty; Ember couldn't help but smile at the difference in their stances.

I should tell him what I am.

The thought was unpleasant, but it was true: if anything significant were to happen between her and Anomen, he needed to know what he might be getting into. He was a priest of Helm, after all, and soon to be a knight; a child of Bhaal couldn't exactly be considered a suitable match for someone like him. A suitable match? Hells, he'd be hard pressed to consider someone like me as anything but a foe! And if he didn't know until it was too late, it'd only make matters worse...

Enough. All they'd done was talk. He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship. It'd all probably come to nothing, anyway, so there was no point in worrying.

"Is something amiss, my lady?"

She looked up at Anomen's concerned face. "No... nothing's wrong," she said. "Just a bit lost in thought."

"You are certain?"

"Yes, I'm fine. I wish it'd rain soon, though," she said, and gestured at the clouds.

Anomen glanced upwards. "Hm. You may have your wish by nightfall, my lady."

"I hope so. It's a bit too hot for my tastes right now."

"Indeed, the summers in Athkatla are not entirely pleasurable," he said, and sat down beside her. "Nevertheless, I have a fondness for such days."

"Oh?"

"When I was a child, days such as this meant fewer chores and more reasons to be outside, away from my father's house. At my leisure, I often took my sister with me to one of the many parks in the government district. She would amuse herself with pebbles and colourful flowers, and I would reenact great campaigns with figurines I had made from wood or soft metal." He smiled. "Some of my dearest memories arise from those times."

"It almost never got this hot at Candlekeep," Ember said, and told him about one of the times it did; Imoen had talked her into bathing in the large fountain in front of the library, and they had both been splashing around in it when a big, important-looking delegation arrived. "Ulraunt was incensed, and at first Gorion looked angry too, but as soon as we all were dismissed from Ulraunt's office, he burst out laughing. And the next day, he took us to a large pond, about a half hour away from the keep, and showed us how to swim."

"My mother taught me that particular skill many summers ago, on a rare trip to Esmeltaran," Anomen said. "Candlekeep is located upon a cliff, is it not?"

Ember nodded. "That's why we couldn't swim in the ocean; anyone who tried would have been crushed to bits by the waves."

"A most efficient defense system."

"And a pretty one, too. If I woke up early enough, I'd watch the sunrise from my window." Ember was in the middle of describing how it looked on calm mornings, when the sea mirrored the sky and everything blazed with colours, when Yoshimo stirred from his chosen post.

"Oh great wizard," the Kara-Turan said, looking at Edwin, "is that not one of your kind standing across the street?"

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.

Mazzy got to her feet. "We cannot allow him to harass that poor man!" she cried, but then the Red Wizard shrugged and walked away, leaving the herb vendor shaken but unscathed.

"Your friend has left," Yoshimo calmly called out to Edwin. The Thayvian returned, looking around nervously as he stepped out into the open again.

"Everything not well between you and the Red Wizards, Edwin?" Ember asked.

"That is none of your business!" Edwin snapped. "(Being saddled with the company of monkeys should be enough self-punishment for anyone!) Unhand my documents; I will not have them sullied by unworthy fingers!"

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.

"Would that Bayle returned before long," Anomen murmured.

---

Gaelan Bayle arrived soon thereafter, and seemed pleasantly surprised to find the group assembled on his doorstep. "Coo! 'Tis grand to be seeing ye again, my friends." He ushered the group inside and looked expectantly at Ember. "Ye've gathered the fee for my associates, aye?"

She held up a bag of gemstones.

"Thank ye, my lady." Bayle accepted the bag from her, poured the contents out on his table, and started sorting through the jewels. "I'll jus' tally these, real quick like... aye, 'tis all here, an' a great an' good thing it is!"

"Where is Imoen?" Edwin asked impatiently.

"Not so quick, my friend-"

"I am not your friend. Where. Is. She?"

"Ye know perfectly well that she is in Spellhold," Gaelan Bayle said, "an' if ye want her to not be there, ye have to be patient. One doesn't simply walk into Spellhold, or we'd have set ye on the path there a long time ago."

"(Insolent-)"

"Quiet, Edwin," Ember said. "Bayle, you have our money now. How long must we wait for it to be put to use?"

"Oh, we'll be starting at once, my lady, but as for when we'll be ready to go... I can't tell ye. It could take a tenday, it could take two, it could take three."

Ember frowned. She'd known Bayle wouldn't produce Imoen from his hat like some cheap illusionist, but she'd hoped for a shorter delay than that before they could start the rescue. "Why the uncertainty? I thought your people had a plan in mind."

"They do, they do," Bayle said, "but parts o' the matter are beyond our control."

"Is there anything we could do to hasten the proceedings?" Mazzy asked.

"If there is, we'll let ye know. If there ain't, jus' wait until all is ready."

"How do we know you are to be trusted, thief?" Anomen asked.

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"

"Minsc wants to trust the little man. But if he tricks us..."

"Don't worry, good Minsc," Yoshimo said. "He would not dream of doing that, I am sure."

"Right ye are!" Bayle said. "We'll be parting now, but rest assured that we'll let ye know when to act. A fair evening to ye!"

---

Ember entered the Copper Coronet in decidedly lowered spirits. Even as she'd been aware there would be a delay, she hadn't actually been aware of it. They did have things to do, she reminded herself; there was Minsc's armour to commission, there were repairs to be made to much of their other gear, her own armour included, and with their newfound wealth, there was no reason for them to avoid the Adventurer's Mart any longer. Yes, the delay would, after all, give them time to become much better prepared for whatever they might encounter on their way to Imoen.

Still, she would have felt much better if only she knew how long this delay might turn out to be.

"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."

"But Boo wants her back today!"

"I know he does. Perhaps, if you show him how patient you can be, it'll be easier for Boo to wait?"

"Yes... that is good thinking. Minsc will do that."

Once inside the common room of the inn, they were greeted warmly by Hendak. "Our heroes grace us with their presence once again! A good day to you, my friends, and welcome back!"

"Ah, good Hendak!" Yoshimo called out. "Do you have any news for us?"

"Not much. Some more squabbling amongst the thieves, or so I heard, and some more priests have disappeared. Brother Keelan from the chapel nearby just up and vanished not five days ago."

"I know this Brother Keelan," Anomen said. "He has gone missing, has he? How very odd, indeed. This is not like the Keelan that I know."

"Aye, it is troubling," Hendak agreed. "But come, young Delryn, I have a letter here for you. It arrived the day before yesterday."

"A letter?"

Hendak reached into a shelf and pulled out a folded and sealed letter, which he handed to Anomen.

"It bears my father's seal," Anomen murmured as he opened the letter. "What reason could he have to write to me?"

He read, and his face turned white. "H-how can... Helm's Grace, this cannot be..."

Ember reached for his shoulder; he looked as if he were about to faint. "Anomen, what's wrong?"

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."

#2 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 August 2008 - 12:09 PM

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom. "It wasn't the right time for it," she said. "But maybe we can take Imoen to see them after all this? I think she'd like that."


Bah, it would have been perfect opportunity for Edwin to practice his erotic onslaught, I’m sure! :D

The thought was unpleasant, but it was true: if anything significant were to happen between her and Anomen, he needed to know what he might be getting into. He was a priest of Helm, after all, and soon to be a knight; a child of Bhaal couldn't exactly be considered a suitable match for someone like him. A suitable match? Hells, he'd be hard pressed to consider someone like me as anything but a foe! And if he didn't know until it was too late, it'd only make matters worse...


It would certainly be worse if he heard that from someone other than Ember.

"It almost never got this hot at Candlekeep," Ember said, and told him about one of the times it did; Imoen had talked her into bathing in the large fountain in front of the library, and they had both been splashing around in it when a big, important-looking delegation arrived. "Ulraunt was incensed, and at first Gorion looked angry too, but as soon as we all were dismissed from Ulraunt's office, he burst out laughing. And the next day, he took us to a large pond, about a half hour away from the keep, and showed us how to swim."

Yeah, Candlekeep is obviously bit further north, I imagine the climate there to be pretty mild, while I always thought of Athkatla having more of Mediterranean climate.

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.


Ah… it’s that guy… Degardan something. :lol: Obviously the party member personal quests are about to flood in.

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.


Worry not Edwin, you’ll soon assume a most effective disguise to hide from Degardan. :D

"How do we know you are to be trusted, thief?" Anomen asked.


Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


I don’t think it means much even to the thieves themselves.

"Not much. Some more squabbling amongst the thieves, or so I heard, and some more priests have disappeared. Brother Keelan from the chapel nearby just up and vanished not five days ago."


Hmm. The Unseeing Eye quest, perhaps?

"Aye, it is troubling," Hendak agreed. "But come, young Delryn, I have a letter here for you. It arrived the day before yesterday."


Oh no… I hate letters…

Ember reached for his shoulder; he looked as if he were about to faint. "Anomen, what's wrong?"


He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Poor Anomen. :( This will be interesting, though.

#3 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 26 August 2008 - 04:59 PM

Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets. The air was hazy with heat, sticky with moisture, and more pungent than ever. Few people moved in the streets. The guards that were posted outside most prominent buildings were sweating and grumbling, and the merchants who normally stood in front of their displays, hawking their goods at the top of their lungs, had all withdrawn in under the shelter of their canopied booths. Even the beggars were more listless than usual.


Heat wave. Ugh. How I hate those. Thankfully, it's the end of August, so we probably won't have any more of those, but even so... ugh. Now I get to look forward to things cooling down and eventually shoveling snow and crap in a few months. Oh BOY.

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom.


Yeah, you can't take Edwin -anywhere.- :lol:

Well, except maybe the inside of a prison cell.

Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty


In armor. In like ninety degree weather.

Falynn: "Helmite."

Enara: "No kidding. It's cute."

Falynn: "Really?"

Enara: "Yes, really."

Falynn: "Seriously?"

Enara: "Yes!"

Falynn: "You're weird."

Enara: "Well, for what it's worth, when he'd do something like that, I'd try and find ways of distracting him."

Falynn: "Er. Like what?"

Enara: "Well, just as an example, Viconia taught me some very... interesting ways of eating an apple."

Falynn: "Oh. Ohhhhhhh."

Enara: :D "Heh."

"Yes, I'm fine. I wish it'd rain soon, though," she said, and gestured at the clouds.


Colleen: "You're a druid. Can't you like... do some weird nature dance or something and make it rain?"

Jefferson: "I don't think it works like that... and anyway, you're just hoping that said druidic ritual involves nakedness, aren't you?"

Colleen: "Jeff. Stuck in the city with zombie hordes. Hadn't been with a girl in like two years before that. Kinda... kinda 'lonely.'"

Jefferson: "We'll hit the mall. See if we can't find you a battery-operated-girlfriend."

Colleen: (Sighs) "It's not the same."

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.


CN: "Any particular reason why they keep the arrogant prick around, again?"

JG: "He's apparently useful."

CN: "As what, zombie bait?"

JG: "I guess so. Those little legs of his -look- spindly but he can actually run pretty fast."

CN: "Huh. All right, then. Well, I guess he's gotta be good for -something.-"

One doesn't simply walk into Spellhold


"One does not simply walk into WalMart. There is evil there that does not sleep."

"They do, they do," Bayle said, "but parts o' the matter are beyond our control."


Falynn: "You know what else is beyond your control? Whether or not you get to keep your kneecaps. That's actually under -my- control."

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


Falynn: "Worth about as much as the gold you just lifted from my pocket a couple of seconds ago. I'll want that back, by the way. I'll trade it for the fingers I was going to take away from you otherwise."

"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."


Yeah, the problem is, she won't be there... in the head. :D

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Looks like someone's Test is coming up soon.

Enara: "Am I allowed to pass him some... uh... what do they call him in your time period? Cliff's Notes?"

CN: "I don't think this is the kind of test you can cheat on, Enara. Besides, what, exactly would you put on a crib sheet, anyway?"

JG: "A picture of herself naked?"

CN: "Oh. That... would work. Uh... could I get a copy of that?"

Enara: (Smirks) "No, Colleen."

CN: "Darn."

#4 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 August 2008 - 05:00 PM

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom. "It wasn't the right time for it," she said. "But maybe we can take Imoen to see them after all this? I think she'd like that."


Bah, it would have been perfect opportunity for Edwin to practice his erotic onslaught, I’m sure! :D


That, or body parts. There's really no telling what he might try.

The thought was unpleasant, but it was true: if anything significant were to happen between her and Anomen, he needed to know what he might be getting into. He was a priest of Helm, after all, and soon to be a knight; a child of Bhaal couldn't exactly be considered a suitable match for someone like him. A suitable match? Hells, he'd be hard pressed to consider someone like me as anything but a foe! And if he didn't know until it was too late, it'd only make matters worse...


It would certainly be worse if he heard that from someone other than Ember.


It should all be out in the open before long, though.

"It almost never got this hot at Candlekeep," Ember said, and told him about one of the times it did; Imoen had talked her into bathing in the large fountain in front of the library, and they had both been splashing around in it when a big, important-looking delegation arrived. "Ulraunt was incensed, and at first Gorion looked angry too, but as soon as we all were dismissed from Ulraunt's office, he burst out laughing. And the next day, he took us to a large pond, about a half hour away from the keep, and showed us how to swim."

Yeah, Candlekeep is obviously bit further north, I imagine the climate there to be pretty mild, while I always thought of Athkatla having more of Mediterranean climate.


That's pretty much how I imagine it as well.

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.


Ah… it’s that guy… Degardan something. :( Obviously the party member personal quests are about to flood in.


If two makes a flood, then yes :( (Timing is coincidental. Did you ever notice how hard it is to make a good story flow out of the chapter 2 quests?)

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.


Worry not Edwin, you’ll soon assume a most effective disguise to hide from Degardan. :lol:


:D

"How do we know you are to be trusted, thief?" Anomen asked.

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


I don’t think it means much even to the thieves themselves.


You're probably right :D

"Not much. Some more squabbling amongst the thieves, or so I heard, and some more priests have disappeared. Brother Keelan from the chapel nearby just up and vanished not five days ago."


Hmm. The Unseeing Eye quest, perhaps?


Perhaps.

"Aye, it is troubling," Hendak agreed. "But come, young Delryn, I have a letter here for you. It arrived the day before yesterday."


Oh no… I hate letters…


They've got words on them!

Ember reached for his shoulder; he looked as if he were about to faint. "Anomen, what's wrong?"

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Poor Anomen. :P This will be interesting, though.


I hope it will be.

#5 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 27 August 2008 - 02:34 PM

Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets. The air was hazy with heat, sticky with moisture, and more pungent than ever. Few people moved in the streets. The guards that were posted outside most prominent buildings were sweating and grumbling, and the merchants who normally stood in front of their displays, hawking their goods at the top of their lungs, had all withdrawn in under the shelter of their canopied booths. Even the beggars were more listless than usual.


Heat wave. Ugh. How I hate those. Thankfully, it's the end of August, so we probably won't have any more of those, but even so... ugh. Now I get to look forward to things cooling down and eventually shoveling snow and crap in a few months. Oh BOY.


Heat wave, what's that?
Oh, is that like that single day when the temperature breached 70 F?

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom.


Yeah, you can't take Edwin -anywhere.- :P

Well, except maybe the inside of a prison cell.


Ember: hmmm...

Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty


In armor. In like ninety degree weather.


As he later explains, he doesn't mind it too much (crazy man).

Falynn: "Helmite."

Enara: "No kidding. It's cute."

Falynn: "Really?"

Enara: "Yes, really."

Falynn: "Seriously?"

Enara: "Yes!"

Falynn: "You're weird."


Ember: but it IS cute!

Enara: "Well, for what it's worth, when he'd do something like that, I'd try and find ways of distracting him."

Falynn: "Er. Like what?"

Enara: "Well, just as an example, Viconia taught me some very... interesting ways of eating an apple."

Falynn: "Oh. Ohhhhhhh."

Enara: :D "Heh."


:lol:

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.


CN: "Any particular reason why they keep the arrogant prick around, again?"

JG: "He's apparently useful."

CN: "As what, zombie bait?"

JG: "I guess so. Those little legs of his -look- spindly but he can actually run pretty fast."

CN: "Huh. All right, then. Well, I guess he's gotta be good for -something.-"


Heh :D

None of the others can cast wizard spells.

One doesn't simply walk into Spellhold


"One does not simply walk into WalMart. There is evil there that does not sleep."


:D

Once the line popped into my head, I couldn't resist.

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


Falynn: "Worth about as much as the gold you just lifted from my pocket a couple of seconds ago. I'll want that back, by the way. I'll trade it for the fingers I was going to take away from you otherwise."


Falynn's a hard bargainer, isn't she?

"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."


Yeah, the problem is, she won't be there... in the head. :(


So to speak :(

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Looks like someone's Test is coming up soon.


The formal one is still a ways off, but yes, the actual one is coming up.

Enara: "Am I allowed to pass him some... uh... what do they call him in your time period? Cliff's Notes?"


I Have Plans.

#6 Guest_VigaHrolf_*

Posted 29 August 2008 - 05:01 AM

Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets. The air was hazy with heat, sticky with moisture, and more pungent than ever. Few people moved in the streets. The guards that were posted outside most prominent buildings were sweating and grumbling, and the merchants who normally stood in front of their displays, hawking their goods at the top of their lungs, had all withdrawn in under the shelter of their canopied booths. Even the beggars were more listless than usual.


When it's hot enough the street vendors have gone in, it is time for siesta.

Which is what I love about the Med. Still go for a nap in the worst of the heat.

"Boo misses the forest," Minsc lamented. "We didn't even visit the forest ladies again!"


Aleria: "The Dryads are... so very relaxing. So peaceful. I could dwell there for some time, I think."

Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom. "It wasn't the right time for it," she said. "But maybe we can take Imoen to see them after all this? I think she'd like that."


Edwin. There. Yeeeah. BAD IDEA.

The boy gave a start, almost losing control of the dagger. "Adventurers!" Brus cried, giving the group a gap-toothed smile. "I did nay think I'd be talkin' to you louts again!"


*snicker* I love that line. :lol:

The front of Bayle's house lay in shade, and the street was fairly quiet; it was as good a place to wait than any. Mazzy and Minsc sat down beside Brus, and the three of them were soon deep in conversation about knife skills, adventuring, and dragons. Ember found a seat at the foot of the doorstep. Edwin perched himself alongside the wall with his ubiquitous bundle of scrolls and documents. Yoshimo stood at the corner of the house, leaning casually against the wall as he watched the goings-on in the adjoining, busier street, and Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty; Ember couldn't help but smile at the difference in their stances.


A relaxing afternoon in the shade. Should have sent someone off for some wine and bread. :)

I should tell him what I am.


Aleria: "It is something that will have to be discussed. It is... a rather dominant characteristic of our lives, our existence. But, he is a good man. And if he does love you, he will accept even that."

The thought was unpleasant, but it was true: if anything significant were to happen between her and Anomen, he needed to know what he might be getting into. He was a priest of Helm, after all, and soon to be a knight; a child of Bhaal couldn't exactly be considered a suitable match for someone like him. A suitable match? Hells, he'd be hard pressed to consider someone like me as anything but a foe! And if he didn't know until it was too late, it'd only make matters worse...


Aleria: "For some, perhaps. I will admit a number of my brethren were not entirely sure about me. Some thought that the Child of Murder could not possibly be a proper Tyrran, that my faith was false, a sham. But I knew what was true. As did those who were true. Anomen is one of them. It will be a rude shock, I imagine, but he will adapt."

Enough. All they'd done was talk. He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship. It'd all probably come to nothing, anyway, so there was no point in worrying.


Bran: "Just for the record, idle talk can go from just that to courtship to ... a lot more rather quickly. Just saying." *Grins*

"Yes, I'm fine. I wish it'd rain soon, though," she said, and gestured at the clouds.

Anomen glanced upwards. "Hm. You may have your wish by nightfall, my lady."


Ahhh summer thunderboomers...

"I hope so. It's a bit too hot for my tastes right now."

"Indeed, the summers in Athkatla are not entirely pleasurable," he said, and sat down beside her. "Nevertheless, I have a fondness for such days."


Surprisingly, this summer has been unbelievably mild. Usually it's an unending barrage of 100+ F degree days and 80% humidity. Constant misery.

It's been -so- nice. Woo!

"When I was a child, days such as this meant fewer chores and more reasons to be outside, away from my father's house. At my leisure, I often took my sister with me to one of the many parks in the government district. She would amuse herself with pebbles and colourful flowers, and I would reenact great campaigns with figurines I had made from wood or soft metal." He smiled. "Some of my dearest memories arise from those times."


*snicker* Those lazy summer days could be great. :)

"It almost never got this hot at Candlekeep," Ember said, and told him about one of the times it did; Imoen had talked her into bathing in the large fountain in front of the library, and they had both been splashing around in it when a big, important-looking delegation arrived. "Ulraunt was incensed, and at first Gorion looked angry too, but as soon as we all were dismissed from Ulraunt's office, he burst out laughing. And the next day, he took us to a large pond, about a half hour away from the keep, and showed us how to swim."


I love that! Swimming in the fountain! :(

"A most efficient defense system."


Aleria: "Once a mind is properly trained, it is difficult to not think of the defensive qualities of a beautiful view. But one can still appreciate them."

"Oh great wizard," the Kara-Turan said, looking at Edwin, "is that not one of your kind standing across the street?"


Reaaaally.

I sense Nether trouble afoot soon. :D

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.


He's in trouble... oh yes. :D

"Everything not well between you and the Red Wizards, Edwin?" Ember asked.

"That is none of your business!" Edwin snapped. "(Being saddled with the company of monkeys should be enough self-punishment for anyone!) Unhand my documents; I will not have them sullied by unworthy fingers!"


Bran: "And this is why I don't like that guy. Well, one of the many reasons."

Street dust is better, I suppose? Rolling her eyes in exasperation, Ember handed the documents back to the wizard. He retreated back to his corner, purposefully ignoring the questioning glances from the rest of the group, and huffily started sorting through the 'clumsy, disrespectful, ignorant chaos' that he himself had created in his most treasured belongings.


*Snickers*

"Thank ye, my lady." Bayle accepted the bag from her, poured the contents out on his table, and started sorting through the jewels. "I'll jus' tally these, real quick like... aye, 'tis all here, an' a great an' good thing it is!"

"Where is Imoen?" Edwin asked impatiently.

"Not so quick, my friend-"

"I am not your friend. Where. Is. She?"


Aleria: "Insufferable git he was. Gods I hated that man."

"Ye know perfectly well that she is in Spellhold," Gaelan Bayle said, "an' if ye want her to not be there, ye have to be patient. One doesn't simply walk into Spellhold, or we'd have set ye on the path there a long time ago."


Aleria: "Unfortunately not. And few seem willing to try."

"Oh, we'll be starting at once, my lady, but as for when we'll be ready to go... I can't tell ye. It could take a tenday, it could take two, it could take three."


Guild war... finding Havarian, you know, the usual.

"If there is, we'll let ye know. If there ain't, jus' wait until all is ready."


Oh... there will be. Oh yes. :P

"How do we know you are to be trusted, thief?" Anomen asked.

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


Aleria: "There is little honor to be found amongst thieves."

Bran: "More than you'd think, but more flexible than you'd like."

"Minsc wants to trust the little man. But if he tricks us..."


Minsc: "Minsc will make tiny foe sized chunks out of you!"

Ember entered the Copper Coronet in decidedly lowered spirits. Even as she'd been aware there would be a delay, she hadn't actually been aware of it. They did have things to do, she reminded herself; there was Minsc's armour to commission, there were repairs to be made to much of their other gear, her own armour included, and with their newfound wealth, there was no reason for them to avoid the Adventurer's Mart any longer. Yes, the delay would, after all, give them time to become much better prepared for whatever they might encounter on their way to Imoen.


Aleria: "Unfortunately, the best arms and armor cannot defend you against treachery from within." *frowns sadly*

Still, she would have felt much better if only she knew how long this delay might turn out to be.


"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."


Aleria: "But not whole. And soon, you will join her." *shivers*

"But Boo wants her back today!"

"I know he does. Perhaps, if you show him how patient you can be, it'll be easier for Boo to wait?"

"Yes... that is good thinking. Minsc will do that."


*Snickers* Minsc rocks. :(

"I know this Brother Keelan," Anomen said. "He has gone missing, has he? How very odd, indeed. This is not like the Keelan that I know."


Interesting....

"It bears my father's seal," Anomen murmured as he opened the letter. "What reason could he have to write to me?"


Nothing good, I assure you :shock:

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


I always hated this happening to poor Anomen. He deserved so much better. :lol:

Great tale Cel! Love the summer descriptions. :(

VH

#7 Guest_Tenfoot_*

Posted 30 August 2008 - 11:14 PM

Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets.


I like this 'sunscorched' especially. Just the word, and I can kind of picture it all. It helps today is a hot day!

The boy gave a start, almost losing control of the dagger. "Adventurers!" Brus cried, giving the group a gap-toothed smile. "I did nay think I'd be talkin' to you louts again!"


Hey, I like your Brus. He's got... character!

Mazzy and Minsc sat down beside Brus, and the three of them were soon deep in conversation about knife skills, adventuring, and dragons. Ember found a seat at the foot of the doorstep. Edwin perched himself alongside the wall with his ubiquitous bundle of scrolls and documents. Yoshimo stood at the corner of the house, leaning casually against the wall as he watched the goings-on in the adjoining, busier street, and Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty; Ember couldn't help but smile at the difference in their stances.


I like this little description of who is where, and how they act. Brings the characters to life, a little, but also the minutae of their lives, you know? Just they way they interact with the world. Cool.

Enough. All they'd done was talk. He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship. It'd all probably come to nothing, anyway, so there was no point in worrying.

"Is something amiss, my lady?"

She looked up at Anomen's concerned face. "No... nothing's wrong," she said. "Just a bit lost in thought."


Whether its pouring icedust or breaking in on Contemplation, your Anomen certainly has a knack for timing! I believe the skill shall serve him well. :shock: Also: I quite like Ember's frustration here. Well, not frustration, but the divide between her ideas, and just how calmly she seems to be rationalizing it all. It's an intriguing characterization, i think, this subtle judgement she displays.

"Oh great wizard," the Kara-Turan said, looking at Edwin, "is that not one of your kind standing across the street?"

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile.


And just like that, you know exactly what's going on, and exactly how bad it is for Edwin. Awesome. :lol:

Still, she would have felt much better if only she knew how long this delay might turn out to be.

"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."

"But Boo wants her back today!"

"I know he does. Perhaps, if you show him how patient you can be, it'll be easier for Boo to wait?"

"Yes... that is good thinking. Minsc will do that."


Poor Ember. And I like your Mazzy and Minsc, and the little relationship they have going. It's quite cool, and funny to picture, wee Mazzy consoling giant Minsc...

He read, and his face turned white. "H-how can... Helm's Grace, this cannot be..."

Ember reached for his shoulder; he looked as if he were about to faint. "Anomen, what's wrong?"

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Uh-oh. And now, it seems Ember will have to choose between rushing for Imoen or helping out her admirer. Well, maybe not rushing, exactly - I'm sure they have time, but how she deals with this will be interesting, to say the least!

#8 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 31 August 2008 - 09:05 AM


Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets. The air was hazy with heat, sticky with moisture, and more pungent than ever. Few people moved in the streets. The guards that were posted outside most prominent buildings were sweating and grumbling, and the merchants who normally stood in front of their displays, hawking their goods at the top of their lungs, had all withdrawn in under the shelter of their canopied booths. Even the beggars were more listless than usual.


When it's hot enough the street vendors have gone in, it is time for siesta.

Which is what I love about the Med. Still go for a nap in the worst of the heat.


Let's just say I never have this problem :P


"Boo misses the forest," Minsc lamented. "We didn't even visit the forest ladies again!"


Aleria: "The Dryads are... so very relaxing. So peaceful. I could dwell there for some time, I think."


They probably wouldn't mind Aleria. But I suspect Edwin might see a quite grisly fate at their hands (and try to do the same to them).


Ember had wanted to visit the dryads as well, but she was nowhere near trusting enough or reckless enough to wilfully bring a Red Wizard to their kingdom. "It wasn't the right time for it," she said. "But maybe we can take Imoen to see them after all this? I think she'd like that."


Edwin. There. Yeeeah. BAD IDEA.


Yeah. Whatever way that would go, you just know it'd end badly.


The boy gave a start, almost losing control of the dagger. "Adventurers!" Brus cried, giving the group a gap-toothed smile. "I did nay think I'd be talkin' to you louts again!"


*snicker* I love that line. :D


Brus is just an adorable little scamp, in many ways :lol:


The front of Bayle's house lay in shade, and the street was fairly quiet; it was as good a place to wait than any. Mazzy and Minsc sat down beside Brus, and the three of them were soon deep in conversation about knife skills, adventuring, and dragons. Ember found a seat at the foot of the doorstep. Edwin perched himself alongside the wall with his ubiquitous bundle of scrolls and documents. Yoshimo stood at the corner of the house, leaning casually against the wall as he watched the goings-on in the adjoining, busier street, and Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty; Ember couldn't help but smile at the difference in their stances.


A relaxing afternoon in the shade. Should have sent someone off for some wine and bread. :D


I originally wanted to just go directly to Moira's death after Firkraag, but I decided they needed a little break first :)


I should tell him what I am.


Aleria: "It is something that will have to be discussed. It is... a rather dominant characteristic of our lives, our existence. But, he is a good man. And if he does love you, he will accept even that."


I Have Plans.


Enough. All they'd done was talk. He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship. It'd all probably come to nothing, anyway, so there was no point in worrying.


Bran: "Just for the record, idle talk can go from just that to courtship to ... a lot more rather quickly. Just saying." *Grins*


This is Anomen we're talking about, remember? :D


"Yes, I'm fine. I wish it'd rain soon, though," she said, and gestured at the clouds.

Anomen glanced upwards. "Hm. You may have your wish by nightfall, my lady."


Ahhh summer thunderboomers...


My husband misses those. We don't get thunderstorms where we live now, but he grew up with that kind of weather.


"I hope so. It's a bit too hot for my tastes right now."

"Indeed, the summers in Athkatla are not entirely pleasurable," he said, and sat down beside her. "Nevertheless, I have a fondness for such days."


Surprisingly, this summer has been unbelievably mild. Usually it's an unending barrage of 100+ F degree days and 80% humidity. Constant misery.

It's been -so- nice. Woo!


Feel free to send the surplus heat this way!
(There was actually heat up north this summer, it's just that it went straight to the north pole instead of here where we might have felt it. At least we've had quite a few sunny days...


"It almost never got this hot at Candlekeep," Ember said, and told him about one of the times it did; Imoen had talked her into bathing in the large fountain in front of the library, and they had both been splashing around in it when a big, important-looking delegation arrived. "Ulraunt was incensed, and at first Gorion looked angry too, but as soon as we all were dismissed from Ulraunt's office, he burst out laughing. And the next day, he took us to a large pond, about a half hour away from the keep, and showed us how to swim."


I love that! Swimming in the fountain! :D


And can't you just imagine Imoen thinking up that stunt? :D


"A most efficient defense system."


Aleria: "Once a mind is properly trained, it is difficult to not think of the defensive qualities of a beautiful view. But one can still appreciate them."


The previous line was about the waves crashing too hard to swim through and live, after all.


"Oh great wizard," the Kara-Turan said, looking at Edwin, "is that not one of your kind standing across the street?"


Reaaaally.


:shock:

I sense Nether trouble afoot soon. :D


*whistles innocently*


Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.


He's in trouble... oh yes. :D


Rest assured, it is well earned :lol:


"Everything not well between you and the Red Wizards, Edwin?" Ember asked.

"That is none of your business!" Edwin snapped. "(Being saddled with the company of monkeys should be enough self-punishment for anyone!) Unhand my documents; I will not have them sullied by unworthy fingers!"


Bran: "And this is why I don't like that guy. Well, one of the many reasons."


He's good for creating friction, though (no, not that kind!)


"Thank ye, my lady." Bayle accepted the bag from her, poured the contents out on his table, and started sorting through the jewels. "I'll jus' tally these, real quick like... aye, 'tis all here, an' a great an' good thing it is!"

"Where is Imoen?" Edwin asked impatiently.

"Not so quick, my friend-"

"I am not your friend. Where. Is. She?"


Aleria: "Insufferable git he was. Gods I hated that man."


I still haven't decided what I'm going to do to him in the end.


"Ye know perfectly well that she is in Spellhold," Gaelan Bayle said, "an' if ye want her to not be there, ye have to be patient. One doesn't simply walk into Spellhold, or we'd have set ye on the path there a long time ago."


Aleria: "Unfortunately not. And few seem willing to try."


And there is, of course, a reason for that.


"Oh, we'll be starting at once, my lady, but as for when we'll be ready to go... I can't tell ye. It could take a tenday, it could take two, it could take three."


Guild war... finding Havarian, you know, the usual.


Ugh, don't remind me about Havarian yet.


"If there is, we'll let ye know. If there ain't, jus' wait until all is ready."


Oh... there will be. Oh yes. :D


Sort of, anyway :)


"How do we know you are to be trusted, thief?" Anomen asked.

Bayle grinned. "I'd say thieves' honour, but that don't mean aught to ye, does it?"


Aleria: "There is little honor to be found amongst thieves."

Bran: "More than you'd think, but more flexible than you'd like."


In other words, Aleria thinks like Anomen, and Bran thinks like Bayle :(


"Minsc wants to trust the little man. But if he tricks us..."


Minsc: "Minsc will make tiny foe sized chunks out of you!"


Exactly!


"But Boo wants her back today!"

"I know he does. Perhaps, if you show him how patient you can be, it'll be easier for Boo to wait?"

"Yes... that is good thinking. Minsc will do that."


*Snickers* Minsc rocks. :D


Minsc: Yes, Minsc can throw rocks, but the best weapon is a sword of justice!


"I know this Brother Keelan," Anomen said. "He has gone missing, has he? How very odd, indeed. This is not like the Keelan that I know."


Interesting....


I'm not skipping *every* sidequest, after all :D


He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


I always hated this happening to poor Anomen. He deserved so much better. :(


And so did Moira :(

Great tale Cel! Love the summer descriptions. :D


Thanks!

#9 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 31 August 2008 - 09:15 AM

Ember and her companions returned to Athkatla on a hot, sunscorched afternoon. A layer of billowing clouds was forming above the city, but it would not thicken to rain until the evening at the earliest; for now, a dead calm reigned in the streets.


I like this 'sunscorched' especially. Just the word, and I can kind of picture it all. It helps today is a hot day!


I've seen days like that when on vacation. The region around my husband's home town tends to turn into a brown wasteland by august because of them.

The boy gave a start, almost losing control of the dagger. "Adventurers!" Brus cried, giving the group a gap-toothed smile. "I did nay think I'd be talkin' to you louts again!"


Hey, I like your Brus. He's got... character!


Brus *grins*

Mazzy and Minsc sat down beside Brus, and the three of them were soon deep in conversation about knife skills, adventuring, and dragons. Ember found a seat at the foot of the doorstep. Edwin perched himself alongside the wall with his ubiquitous bundle of scrolls and documents. Yoshimo stood at the corner of the house, leaning casually against the wall as he watched the goings-on in the adjoining, busier street, and Anomen took up a post beside him, standing tall and straight and looking exactly like a watchman on duty; Ember couldn't help but smile at the difference in their stances.


I like this little description of who is where, and how they act. Brings the characters to life, a little, but also the minutae of their lives, you know? Just they way they interact with the world. Cool.


Thanks!

I figured I couldn't leave them standing around in a three by two grid, you know? :)

Enough. All they'd done was talk. He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship. It'd all probably come to nothing, anyway, so there was no point in worrying.

"Is something amiss, my lady?"

She looked up at Anomen's concerned face. "No... nothing's wrong," she said. "Just a bit lost in thought."


Whether its pouring icedust or breaking in on Contemplation, your Anomen certainly has a knack for timing! I believe the skill shall serve him well. :lol: Also: I quite like Ember's frustration here. Well, not frustration, but the divide between her ideas, and just how calmly she seems to be rationalizing it all. It's an intriguing characterization, i think, this subtle judgement she displays.


He is a Helmite, after all. Watching is their specialty, and some things he watches more than others :lol:

Her base personality seems to be fairly calm and pragmatic, with bits of a temper (which is not entirely from the taint, even though the effects of it does bring it out in her more than it would have been if both parents had been mortals).

"Oh great wizard," the Kara-Turan said, looking at Edwin, "is that not one of your kind standing across the street?"

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile.


And just like that, you know exactly what's going on, and exactly how bad it is for Edwin. Awesome. :)


Thanks!


"Do not worry, my friend," she heard Mazzy tell Minsc. "Imoen will still be there when we are ready to go."

"But Boo wants her back today!"

"I know he does. Perhaps, if you show him how patient you can be, it'll be easier for Boo to wait?"

"Yes... that is good thinking. Minsc will do that."


Poor Ember. And I like your Mazzy and Minsc, and the little relationship they have going. It's quite cool, and funny to picture, wee Mazzy consoling giant Minsc...


I like them too (and they spar well together!). Since neither of them tend to get sufficient screen time, so to speak, I try to pair them up with each other when Minsc isn't busy looking after his witch.

Yoshimo, on the other hand, is mostly quiet because that's how he wants to be.

He read, and his face turned white. "H-how can... Helm's Grace, this cannot be..."

Ember reached for his shoulder; he looked as if he were about to faint. "Anomen, what's wrong?"

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."


Uh-oh. And now, it seems Ember will have to choose between rushing for Imoen or helping out her admirer. Well, maybe not rushing, exactly - I'm sure they have time, but how she deals with this will be interesting, to say the least!


She does, after all, have an indeterminate time to wait before the Shadow Thieves will pull through (lazy gits, giving the party so much time to waste on more sidequests and plot points...) :shock:

#10 Guest_Ananke_*

Posted 13 September 2008 - 05:41 PM

He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship.

I love how peacefully she's taking this all, but... how does she know? I mean, she hasn't had much experience, at least in the part of the story I've read... :puzzled:

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.

I can't wait to see Edwin get the ultimate camouflage. :)

"Would that Bayle returned before long," Anomen murmured.

This scene reminds me of Steinbeck's writing. I'm not sure why, but it does. Nothing's happening, they are just waiting in the heat...

Writing, not fanfic. :D

Still, she would have felt much better if only she knew how long this delay might turn out to be.

Hmm. As long as the plot requires, I'm afraid, Ember. :P

...I just hope Ember doesn't get annoyed at you, Cel, when she learns that if her author didn't need to resolve a couple of loose strands, Imoen might have been saved in time... An angry Daughter of Murder is not a nice sight! :wink:

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."

Poor Anomen. :)

#11 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 14 September 2008 - 06:53 AM

He did seem to hold some admiration for her, that much was true, but there was a long way to go between simple talk and actual courtship.

I love how peacefully she's taking this all, but... how does she know? I mean, she hasn't had much experience, at least in the part of the story I've read... :puzzled:


How does she know what, that Anomen likes her, or that there's a long way etc.? The latter is pragmatism, and as for the former, you may have missed one chapter. Here.

Edwin glanced up, turned pale, and hurried around to the back of the house in such a rush that he left his all-important documents behind in a disarrayed pile. Across the street stood a grey-haired man in the robes of a Red Wizard. He was busy with yelling at a herb vendor, and had noticed neither Edwin nor his flight. Ember gathered up Edwin's documents, and the group watched the Red Wizard argue with, shout demands at, and then seemingly threaten the vendor.

I can't wait to see Edwin get the ultimate camouflage. :D


:wink:

If I can sort out the mess that is the current next chapter, it shouldn't be too long.

"Would that Bayle returned before long," Anomen murmured.

This scene reminds me of Steinbeck's writing. I'm not sure why, but it does. Nothing's happening, they are just waiting in the heat...

Writing, not fanfic. :P


Thank you :)

Still, she would have felt much better if only she knew how long this delay might turn out to be.

Hmm. As long as the plot requires, I'm afraid, Ember. :(

...I just hope Ember doesn't get annoyed at you, Cel, when she learns that if her author didn't need to resolve a couple of loose strands, Imoen might have been saved in time... An angry Daughter of Murder is not a nice sight! :D


Hey, she can help me be annoyed at the story plot that makes me do it this way :)

He sank down on the closest chair, clutching the letter with stiff fingers. "My sister," he whispered. "She... she has been murdered."

Poor Anomen. :(


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