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#1 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 11 November 2003 - 08:01 PM

Well, now I get evil. And not mildly evil, either. Full-blown evil.

The answer to any questions you have at the end of this chapter is probably 'yes'. And it'll probably be the most evil answer available.

Oh, and yes, liberal use of Slide's 'creative' Spellbooks is used. I try not to break rules, merely bend them. (You don't need dice in a story!) :wink:

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Chapter 145: Confrontations

Reynald adjusted his grip on the Sword of Chaos slightly, taking a deep breath and revelling in the freshness around them. Were they not heading towards the conclusion of such a vital mission, he would have stopped for a while to admire the Tree of Life as they stood on its boughs. You could smell the crispness in the air around them, almost taste nature. It was by his gauntleted hand as he stretched it out to a near ‘twig’ in the massive tree, under his heavy metal boots as he strode at the back of the group, filling his nostrils and his throat with each breath he took. He had never placed much stock in nature before, considering the devotion of druids such as Jaheira to be admirable but unnecessary – though had quickly realised not to express that sentiment to the half-elf – but here and now, he could see what they had been fighting for. This part of nature wasn’t merely something away from the cities and the people. This was something beyond them.

And Irenicus was trying to destroy it. For the first time, Reynald felt something stirring in him vaguely resembling a desire to fight for a cause. Until now, he had been fighting for the cause of someone else so it would serve his own ends. He could see now that this was hardly the path that would return him to Torm – the right action, done for the wrong reasons, was no right action at all. But to fight to preserve this, preserve the life he had seen, in all shapes and sizes… that was a reason.

They had so far despatched the parasites Irenicus had placed at key points on the Tree, finding them to be quite easy to deal with once their guards were eliminated. One by one, the barriers standing in the way of the party and Irenicus were lowering, and as they fell the tension rose. Harrian was becoming shifty, over-exerting himself in combat and remaining stoically silent outside, and it was starting to affect the others. Imoen had failed a few spells as time had gone by, and although Jaheira had been doing her best to keep them calm and had been constantly telling them to keep their guard, Reynald was not concerned. This was something he saw occasionally before the great battles; warriors would get nervous, make minor mistakes, and then agonise about making bigger mistakes when the fight finally came. But when it did… all was calm. All went like clockwork. Either they died smoothly or they lived smoothly. And although Reynald now had a strong reason to desire to win the fight beyond self-preservation, he was still ready to accept death. If his death could further the life of someone else who had more to live for then so be it.

The party maintained a constant pace as they strode through the branches of the Tree, heading for the very centre, where Irenicus would be, with Ellesime his captive. Harrian was bouncing from foot to foot with pent up energy on every other step, moving the Equaliser through complicated sword patterns as he walked, other hand itching towards the Daystar. He seemed to have decided to use one blade only, however, so that he was freer to move and dodge as he wished. With their packs deposited at the entrance to the Tree, all they had with them were their weapons and their armour. All they were equipped for was battle, not adventure. All they needed to be able to do was to fight at full strength, be as dangerous as possible, and bring Irenicus down.

The mad mage – for, although Reynald had never seen The Exile face to face, with the tales he had been told he had come to think of him as mad – was in the centre as predicted. There was no way they could have approached discreetly; their path towards him was a clear one, and as they emerged from the branches and leaves he spotted them instantly. The Queen was in a cage of sorts to Irenicus’ left, looking as cool and composed as Reynald had ever expected of nobility – especially elven nobility – and regarded them with calm eyes on their approach.

Irenicus, similarly, had a lack of reaction. His arms were folded across his chest, and he seemed utterly unconcerned by either the arrival of the Bhaalspawn’s party or the dozen or so bodies of fallen elves littered around his feet. His eyes swept over them all imperiously, and as Reynald looked into the blue orbs even icier than his own, he felt a shiver run up his spine. Harrian was right. There was something about this man which was utterly, utterly empty – he was not made of nightmares, as Reynald imagined the greatest of foes would be. He was made of the void, and that somehow made him even more terrifying than the fears the Fallen Paladin usually harboured in his heart.

“You live?” Irenicus asked, his voice as cold and unconcerned as his eyes. “You have only a fraction of your soul left, and yet you continue to defy me?” Although his words spoke of incredulity, he looked and sounded utterly bored by the goings-on.

Reynald blinked. This man, this monster, had decimated an entire city and was trying to commit an offence against the very gods themselves – and he didn’t care. Reynald could, at last, feel anger rising within himself – hot, burning, empowering, and threatening to control. Anger was something that, until now, he had stamped down on, not wishing to allow it to guide his hand to more sins, but now he embraced it, tasted it, allowed it to flow through his limbs. Anger, he knew, was the most dangerous of weapons to harness, as it could so easily be turned on oneself – but if one succeeded, they would have strength greater than any cause or love could give.

Harrian’s expression was similarly smouldering, and his gloved hand was shaking a little as he pointed a finger at Irenicus. Reynald hoped it was from fury rather than fear. “Yes. I do. I live. I continue to pursue you. And I shall finish you, Irenicus.” The thief paused for a moment to take a deep, calming breath. “Bodhi has fallen. Your pets are defeated. The city is cleared. You are beaten, Irenicus.”

“I am not beaten until I fall,” the mage replied calmly. “Bodhi and the city are irrelevant. I shall finish you off, and then I shall resume my plans here. I have waited too long for this, planned too long, and fought too hard to be defeated. The Tree is all that matters. I shall harness its divine energy and be elevated to godhood. And you cannot stop me.”

Harrian blinked. “I think that I can. Or I shall die in the attempt. Enough is enough, Joneleth.” For once, Irenicus reacted. There was no flinch, no obvious shift in appearance, but he seemed sapped of his cold indifference for a moment. “Yes. I know who you are. I know why you do this. This is not how it must be done.”

Must? What do you know of these things, Bhaalspawn! You are but a pawn, a tool in my game, an annoying pest that I should have eradicated long ago instead of allowing Bodhi to have her fun. You know nothing of this, Corias,” Irenicus said, his voice bland but with a greater note of urgency this time.

“No, Joneleth.” Reynald blinked, and glanced over to see Ellesime clambering to her feet. Harrian was staring at her with an odd expression – something mixed between confusion and recognition, though he did not say anything.

“Your plan is failing,” the queen continued. “The Tree of Life will not fall. You will not succeed as you once had. And it does not have to be this way.” She rested heavily against the bars of her cage, her eyes fixed on Irenicus’ frozen ones. “You were once a man I loved, Joneleth. And then you gave up everything – me, your life, your spirit – for your ambition and desire for power.”

Irenicus stared impassively. “I did not give up anything. I reached further for that which I deserved, for all that I could achieve, until you stopped me, you tore away my life and my spirit. I did not do this to myself. You did.”

“Because of what you had done! I did everything to spare your life, Joneleth!” Ellesime pressed, the tension on her face clear even to Reynald, though she still spoke with a note of great urgency. “Return to us, Joneleth. Return to what you were. It can be done.”

Irenicus paused for a moment, and behind the mask he wore it seemed as if he was actually smiling. Reynald shivered. “You say it can be done now that I have you in a cage. It is too late for that, Ellesime.” He grew grim again. “It cannot be done. I cannot feel what I was. You tore all of that away, my queen. You tore away all there was of my elven spirit so that all I had left to cling to was the memory. Then the memory of the memory. And then nothing.”

He drew himself up to his full, imposing height to stare at them all again, turning his back on Ellesime and looking at the party. “You understand vengeance, don’t you, Bhaalspawn? Of course you do, it is what has driven you so far. So understand my vengeance, Corias. I swore that the day would come when I would stride amongst these fools and fill their hearts with fear, that the day would come when I would ascend to what was rightly, mine. You may have disrupted my plans for the Tree, but they can be continued once I have dealt with you! At the very least, I swore that at some point vengeance would be in reach! And I shall have it!”

Minsc launched forward, Warblade upraised, Boo squeaking indignantly. Normally Reynald found the hamster amusing, but right then there was something very disconcerting about a battling rodent. “Minsc and Boo shall have their vengeance too!” the giant Rashemani cried. “You slew Dynaheir, our witch, without a thought! You shall pay!”

Irenicus stared calmly. “I do not know to whom you refer, and I care not. But I do not have time to deal with those such as you.” He turned and pointed over at Minsc’s left, murmuring an incantation Reynald recognised as a Summoning Spell, but unlike one he had ever heard.

Why it was so unfamiliar became clear seconds later, as a score of gnolls burst into the air – beasts like for any other Summoning Spell, but in far greater numbers than Reynald was used to seeing.

Minsc stopped in his tracks, and turned to face the gnolls bearing down on the party. “Fight the evil mage!” he bellowed, adjusting his grip on his sword. “I have the dog men. Yes, Minsc remembers you well, evil dog men!” And with that he was gone, launching himself into a mass of snarls and battling bodies to do as much damage as Reynald was sure he could deal out.

Harrian had hardly blinked during this entire exchange, also on his way towards Irenicus. Magic missiles launched by the mage were deflected by the enchanted buckler into the branch at his feet, but this distracted him enough that when the Equaliser was brought down in a blow aimed for the mage’s head, it hit only a magical barrier. The swashbuckler staggered for a moment, the impact jarring his wrist, before leaping back and turning his head to yell at the rest of the party, who were hot on his heels. “Imoen! Bring those protections down!”

Reynald was directly behind him, the spellcasters of the party preparing their incantations to summon all the power they could possibly have – this was not a time to hold back for ‘more important battles’ – and swung the Sword of Chaos in an attack that should have split Irenicus’ torso in half.

It broke through the shimmering barrier, but when it collided with the mage, his skin was solid and impenetrable, and the blade merely deflected off, leaving a slight dent but no lasting magic.

Reynald spat, shaking his head. “Blasted cowardly mages,” he mumbled, regrouping and glaring at Irenicus.

The mage actually acknowledged him for a second. “Who shall live where you shall not.” Then he raised his hands and mumbled another incantation swiftly, in time for an Aganazzar’s Scorcher to hit Reynald in the chest and send him flying back through the air, in the direction of where Minsc had wiped out half of the gnolls.

Reynald’s sword went flying from his hand and skidding along the boughs of the tree before pitching over the edge, and as the Fallen Paladin his the floor with a thump and a groan, he swore loudly. Clambering to his feet wasn’t too easy in full plate, and made even harder by the gnoll bearing down on him.

Forgetting Irenicus for the moment, Reynald snatched a short sword from the scabbard on his right side and parried the halberd blow aimed at his skull. A quick twist detached metal from pole, and a slash ended the attack of the comparatively weak monster, but it prompted Reynald to still look at Minsc.

The Rashemani warrior was having a difficult time of so many foes at once. His red dragon scale had a giant slash in it across his back, and although Reynald could not see the blood from the wound against the colour of Minsc’s armour, the crimson stream running down his face from a cut above his eye told of the challenge. And yet the ranger did not falter, but continued in an effective pattern of block, parry, kill, block, parry, kill.

Reynald hurried forwards, pausing to despatch another gnoll that faced him, unused to fighting at the close quarters his short sword forced him into. It was a matter of much jumping back and dodging, then getting in close for an attack before withdrawing rapidly, and Reynald knew he was not quite fast enough on his feet to be as effective as someone like Imoen might be.

A great cry then filled the air, and Reynald’s first thoughts were of the rest of the party, battling Irenicus. But no. Anomen was picking himself up off the floor, granted, looking battered and bloody, but not in that much pain. Imoen was interchanging between her arrows aimed at Irenicus and a spell to bring down his protections, the concentration and determination on her face all too plain to see. Jaheira and Harrian had settled into a pattern of combat, one striking and then the other, forcing Irenicus to focus his attentions on both sides in a continuous battering. Although the fight looked like a challenge, they were not screaming.
Reynald ducked a swipe from the halberd and then lodged his short sword in the gnoll’s gut before pushing the monster way from him. As it fell, he saw the source of the cry.

Minsc was on his knees, too bloodied for Reynald to see how many wounds he had suffered, defending himself weakly against the gnolls. Even as the Fallen Paladin redoubled his effort, fighting and killing quicker to get to him, a gnoll raised a spear it grasped, then launched it through the Rashemani ranger’s chest. It exploded on the other side, and Minsc grew suddenly quiet, his eyes wide and staring. He took one great struggling painful breath… then was silent.

Without thinking, Reynald charged forward, taking up Minsc’s fallen Warblade and swinging at the gnolls in a swipe that killed two of them. Boo was sitting on Minsc’s chest, sniffing at the ranger’s face, squeaking piteously. The rest of the party had been locked in combat too much to notice, save Imoen, whose eyes were wide and scared as Reynald spared a glance for her. Then she turned her bow in his direction, and felled two gnolls in quick succession.

With the numbers reduced and two of them focusing, the summoned army was eradicated without as much effort as there had once been, but Irenicus still remained. Reynald withdrew the Warblade from the body of the last gnoll, reached down to scoop up Boo – not even knowing why, exactly – then turned to face the mad mage, ready to rejoin the fray.

But before he reached there, a final spell from Imoen knocked down the shimmering barrier before him, and Harrian’s latest blow took the mad mage in the chest.

With a great cry of pain, Irenicus fell back, collapsing to his knees, struggling for breath as Minsc had seconds before. Reaching the others, Reynald could summon no pity for this man as the mage convulsed briefly, then fell to his back, all breath or movement stopping.

A great silence settled upon them all as they stared at Irenicus’ fallen body, then they all looked at Harrian. His eyes were closed, his brow creased in thought and hope, but as they looked, he became increasingly concerned. Then he looked at them at last. “Nothing,” he whispered hoarsely, a touch of panic creeping in. “I feel… nothing.”

Then everything went black.

#2 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 11 November 2003 - 08:40 PM

Well, now I get evil. And not mildly evil, either. Full-blown evil.


Yikes!

The answer to any questions you have at the end of this chapter is probably 'yes'. And it'll probably be the most evil answer available.


YIKES! :wink:

They had so far despatched the parasites Irenicus had placed at key points on the Tree, finding them to be quite easy to deal with once their guards were eliminated. One by one, the barriers standing in the way of the party and Irenicus were lowering, and as they fell the tension rose. Harrian was becoming shifty, over-exerting himself in combat and remaining stoically silent outside, and it was starting to affect the others. Imoen had failed a few spells as time had gone by, and although Jaheira had been doing her best to keep them calm and had been constantly telling them to keep their guard, Reynald was not concerned. This was something he saw occasionally before the great battles; warriors would get nervous, make minor mistakes, and then agonise about making bigger mistakes when the fight finally came. But when it did… all was calm. All went like clockwork. Either they died smoothly or they lived smoothly. And although Reynald now had a strong reason to desire to win the fight beyond self-preservation, he was still ready to accept death. If his death could further the life of someone else who had more to live for then so be it.


Loved the reactions. When you think about it - hey, it's only a single wizard against six very powerful warriors, but... Irenicus is different. The scars that he left on their souls, will remain there for long.

Irenicus, similarly, had a lack of reaction. His arms were folded across his chest, and he seemed utterly unconcerned by either the arrival of the Bhaalspawn’s party or the dozen or so bodies of fallen elves littered around his feet. His eyes swept over them all imperiously, and as Reynald looked into the blue orbs even icier than his own, he felt a shiver run up his spine. Harrian was right. There was something about this man which was utterly, utterly empty – he was not made of nightmares, as Reynald imagined the greatest of foes would be. He was made of the void, and that somehow made him even more terrifying than the fears the Fallen Paladin usually harboured in his heart.


*shivers* You know, I have a great admiration for Irenicus's ambition... I could probably never like him, but something in him is very fascinating.

Reynald blinked. This man, this monster, had decimated an entire city and was trying to commit an offence against the very gods themselves – and he didn’t care. Reynald could, at last, feel anger rising within himself – hot, burning, empowering, and threatening to control. Anger was something that, until now, he had stamped down on, not wishing to allow it to guide his hand to more sins, but now he embraced it, tasted it, allowed it to flow through his limbs. Anger, he knew, was the most dangerous of weapons to harness, as it could so easily be turned on oneself – but if one succeeded, they would have strength greater than any cause or love could give.


I wonder if Irenicus actually has recovered his emotions to truly *care* at this stage... his dialogue with Ellesime suggests that there are some lingering sparks of emotion.

“I am not beaten until I fall,” the mage replied calmly. “Bodhi and the city are irrelevant. I shall finish you off, and then I shall resume my plans here. I have waited too long for this, planned too long, and fought too hard to be defeated. The Tree is all that matters. I shall harness its divine energy and be elevated to godhood. And you cannot stop me.”


As I said - hats off to Irenicus. He is a villain worthy of a grandiose final fight. The sheer preservance of him, after being cursed and stripped of all emotions, to realize such a devious, complicated plan, against all odds... part of me is taken with awe, other part of me hates him.

“Your plan is failing,” the queen continued. “The Tree of Life will not fall. You will not succeed as you once had. And it does not have to be this way.” She rested heavily against the bars of her cage, her eyes fixed on Irenicus’ frozen ones. “You were once a man I loved, Joneleth. And then you gave up everything – me, your life, your spirit – for your ambition and desire for power.”


I don't think that he planned to give up his spirit, really... it was Elle who stripped him of it.

“Because of what you had done! I did everything to spare your life, Joneleth!” Ellesime pressed, the tension on her face clear even to Reynald, though she still spoke with a note of great urgency. “Return to us, Joneleth. Return to what you were. It can be done.”


I think death would have been a better solution for everyone... just that Elle had no guts to do it, but what she thought out instead, was not a punishment fitting the crime. She wanted him to repent for the crimes, but she took away what he needed to be able to repent, his emotions. In my book, that makes her either 1) stupid or 2) cruel. I've not decided which one I lean towards.

He drew himself up to his full, imposing height to stare at them all again, turning his back on Ellesime and looking at the party. “You understand vengeance, don’t you, Bhaalspawn? Of course you do, it is what has driven you so far. So understand my vengeance, Corias. I swore that the day would come when I would stride amongst these fools and fill their hearts with fear, that the day would come when I would ascend to what was rightly, mine. You may have disrupted my plans for the Tree, but they can be continued once I have dealt with you! At the very least, I swore that at some point vengeance would be in reach! And I shall have it!”


Cool speech, really well done! Very villainesque and fitting!

Minsc stopped in his tracks, and turned to face the gnolls bearing down on the party. “Fight the evil mage!” he bellowed, adjusting his grip on his sword. “I have the dog men. Yes, Minsc remembers you well, evil dog men!” And with that he was gone, launching himself into a mass of snarls and battling bodies to do as much damage as Reynald was sure he could deal out.


I'm having the Gnoll Stronghold flashbacks...

Harrian had hardly blinked during this entire exchange, also on his way towards Irenicus. Magic missiles launched by the mage were deflected by the enchanted buckler into the branch at his feet, but this distracted him enough that when the Equaliser was brought down in a blow aimed for the mage’s head, it hit only a magical barrier. The swashbuckler staggered for a moment, the impact jarring his wrist, before leaping back and turning his head to yell at the rest of the party, who were hot on his heels. “Imoen! Bring those protections down!”


No, Death Spell, get rid of those gnolls, presto!

A great cry then filled the air, and Reynald’s first thoughts were of the rest of the party, battling Irenicus. But no. Anomen was picking himself up off the floor, granted, looking battered and bloody, but not in that much pain. Imoen was interchanging between her arrows aimed at Irenicus and a spell to bring down his protections, the concentration and determination on her face all too plain to see. Jaheira and Harrian had settled into a pattern of combat, one striking and then the other, forcing Irenicus to focus his attentions on both sides in a continuous battering. Although the fight looked like a challenge, they were not screaming.
Reynald ducked a swipe from the halberd and then lodged his short sword in the gnoll’s gut before pushing the monster way from him. As it fell, he saw the source of the cry.


:(

Minsc was on his knees, too bloodied for Reynald to see how many wounds he had suffered, defending himself weakly against the gnolls. Even as the Fallen Paladin redoubled his effort, fighting and killing quicker to get to him, a gnoll raised a spear it grasped, then launched it through the Rashemani ranger’s chest. It exploded on the other side, and Minsc grew suddenly quiet, his eyes wide and staring. He took one great struggling painful breath… then was silent.


Without thinking, Reynald charged forward, taking up Minsc’s fallen Warblade and swinging at the gnolls in a swipe that killed two of them. Boo was sitting on Minsc’s chest, sniffing at the ranger’s face, squeaking piteously. The rest of the party had been locked in combat too much to notice, save Imoen, whose eyes were wide and scared as Reynald spared a glance for her. Then she turned her bow in his direction, and felled two gnolls in quick succession.


This is the evil thing, isn't it?

:wink: But I can understand you. I think that the final fight deserves a sacrifice... and really - thinking logically, Minsc was the only choice. Fitting death for a heroic friend... sad, of course, but it made the necessary emotional impact. :(

I hope you will take care of Boo, though... will ya? :( :wink:

A great silence settled upon them all as they stared at Irenicus’ fallen body, then they all looked at Harrian. His eyes were closed, his brow creased in thought and hope, but as they looked, he became increasingly concerned. Then he looked at them at last. “Nothing,” he whispered hoarsely, a touch of panic creeping in. “I feel… nothing.”


Then everything went black.


This was a great chapter. It must have taken alot from you to take the decision... I know that as I write more and more, I feel that the possibilities that I might kill someone off are diminishing rapidly. The characters just become too real... you were brave and kudos to you for that. :D

#3 Guest_Yazston_*

Posted 11 November 2003 - 09:15 PM

Well, now I get evil. And not mildly evil, either. Full-blown evil.


Scary.. :)

The answer to any questions you have at the end of this chapter is probably 'yes'. And it'll probably be the most evil answer available.


So, Reynald is going to keep Boo? Yay! :D

Oh, and yes, liberal use of Slide's 'creative' Spellbooks is used. I try not to break rules, merely bend them. (You don't need dice in a story!) :)


I didn't notice much rule bending in the story. It was all good. :(

This was something beyond them.


Yep! A tree that makes you god. :(

He could see now that this was hardly the path that would return him to Torm – the right action, done for the wrong reasons, was no right action at all. But to fight to preserve this, preserve the life he had seen, in all shapes and sizes… that was a reason.


And.. Torm will smile on him in the end, right?

But when it did… all was calm. All went like clockwork. Either they died smoothly or they lived smoothly. And although Reynald now had a strong reason to desire to win the fight beyond self-preservation, he was still ready to accept death. If his death could further the life of someone else who had more to live for then so be it.


Liked the whole paragraph and the way you described it. It was so.. well, real. I mean, it felt real. :P

Harrian was bouncing from foot to foot with pent up energy on every other step, moving the Equaliser through complicated sword patterns as he walked, other hand itching towards the Daystar.


I nice choice. :( This is a great battle, so they need to be able to dodge.

The Queen was in a cage of sorts to Irenicus’ left, looking as cool and composed as Reynald had ever expected of nobility – especially elven nobility – and regarded them with calm eyes on their approach.


I'm starting to feel she's arrogant.. a bit at least.

There was something about this man which was utterly, utterly empty – he was not made of nightmares, as Reynald imagined the greatest of foes would be. He was made of the void, and that somehow made him even more terrifying than the fears the Fallen Paladin usually harboured in his heart.


Yep! It's even more terrifying, alright. Irenicus.. he's the void.

And you use the word 'utterly' here, and earlier in the same paraghraph. (And later too, in the next one.) :D Maybe you want to change it?

Reynald blinked. This man, this monster, had decimated an entire city and was trying to commit an offence against the very gods themselves – and he didn’t care.


Can't the Gods stop it, or something? And if he'd ascend into Godhood... wouldn't the other gods hate him a lot? And couldn't they kill him?

“I am not beaten until I fall,” the mage replied calmly. “Bodhi and the city are irrelevant. I shall finish you off, and then I shall resume my plans here. I have waited too long for this, planned too long, and fought too hard to be defeated. The Tree is all that matters. I shall harness its divine energy and be elevated to godhood. And you cannot stop me.”


Bye-bye! :wink:

Irenicus stared calmly. “I do not know to whom you refer, and I care not. But I do not have time to deal with those such as you.”


Eh? :wink: He really thinks he's invincible.. scary..

Minsc stopped in his tracks, and turned to face the gnolls bearing down on the party. “Fight the evil mage!” he bellowed, adjusting his grip on his sword. “I have the dog men. Yes, Minsc remembers you well, evil dog men!” And with that he was gone, launching himself into a mass of snarls and battling bodies to do as much damage as Reynald was sure he could deal out.


:( Go Minsc! Don't let them hurt you.

The mage actually acknowledged him for a second. “Who shall live where you shall not.”


Uh.. What does that mean?

Reynald’s sword went flying from his hand and skidding along the boughs of the tree before pitching over the edge, and as the Fallen Paladin his the floor with a thump and a groan, he swore loudly.


Ouch!

'His' - 'hit'

And yet the ranger did not falter, but continued in an effective pattern of block, parry, kill, block, parry, kill.


Yesss! You will win the battle! :D

Minsc was on his knees, too bloodied for Reynald to see how many wounds he had suffered, defending himself weakly against the gnolls. Even as the Fallen Paladin redoubled his effort, fighting and killing quicker to get to him, a gnoll raised a spear it grasped, then launched it through the Rashemani ranger’s chest. It exploded on the other side, and Minsc grew suddenly quiet, his eyes wide and staring. He took one great struggling painful breath… then was silent.


:wink: Oh no...

;)

Reynald withdrew the Warblade from the body of the last gnoll, reached down to scoop up Boo – not even knowing why, exactly – then turned to face the mad mage, ready to rejoin the fray.


Awwww... :(

With a great cry of pain, Irenicus fell back, collapsing to his knees, struggling for breath as Minsc had seconds before. Reaching the others, Reynald could summon no pity for this man as the mage convulsed briefly, then fell to his back, all breath or movement stopping.


:lol: Hah! They won, like they said!

Then everything went black.


Oh no... the Heeeell!



A Great Episode! Liked the battle scene, though it was sad. :D

#4 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 12 November 2003 - 12:03 AM

Without thinking, Reynald charged forward, taking up Minsc’s fallen Warblade and swinging at the gnolls in a swipe that killed two of them. Boo was sitting on Minsc’s chest, sniffing at the ranger’s face, squeaking piteously.


:wink: Aw...party deaths are horrible. But given all the near misses and stuff they've had, it does drive home just what they are risking every day.

And of all the people in this party, Minsc is probably the one I would miss the least (now that Haer's left, anyway :wink: ) - although the image of Boo mourning his master was heartbreakingly sad.

With the numbers reduced and two of them focusing, the summoned army was eradicated without as much effort as there had once been, but Irenicus still remained. Reynald withdrew the Warblade from the body of the last gnoll, reached down to scoop up Boo – not even knowing why, exactly – then turned to face the mad mage, ready to rejoin the fray.


Aw, Reynald's going to take care of Boo? Good for him.

A great silence settled upon them all as they stared at Irenicus’ fallen body, then they all looked at Harrian. His eyes were closed, his brow creased in thought and hope, but as they looked, he became increasingly concerned. Then he looked at them at last. “Nothing,” he whispered hoarsely, a touch of panic creeping in. “I feel… nothing.”


:D Poor Harrian. Does he just mean he doesn't feel his soul, or does he mean things have got worse? (Your 'I am being evil' warning has made me seriously paranoid :wink: ).

Great chapter - credit to you for writing a party member death, it can't have been easy to do. I wasn't expecting it at all, which makes it all the more sad.

#5 Guest_argan_*

Posted 12 November 2003 - 11:22 AM

Hey, ho.

Sad chapter, but I loved it. Anguish :)

#6 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 13 November 2003 - 07:18 PM

Yikes!

YIKES! :)


Yes, be afraid - be VERY afraid!

Loved the reactions. When you think about it - hey, it's only a single wizard against six very powerful warriors, but... Irenicus is different. The scars that he left on their souls, will remain there for long.


Indeed. It's hard for a 1-on-6 battle to be too dramatic, but then... it's Jonny...

*shivers* You know, I have a great admiration for Irenicus's ambition... I could probably never like him, but something in him is very fascinating.


Agreed. He does make a very good villain... Not quite love to hate, but definitely... instills respect.

I wonder if Irenicus actually has recovered his emotions to truly *care* at this stage... his dialogue with Ellesime suggests that there are some lingering sparks of emotion.


I'm not sure, myself. Any emotion less, I think, is probably just angerness and bitterness, which aren't exactly liable to return him to the light...

As I said - hats off to Irenicus. He is a villain worthy of a grandiose final fight. The sheer preservance of him, after being cursed and stripped of all emotions, to realize such a devious, complicated plan, against all odds... part of me is taken with awe, other part of me hates him.


Exactly. He is most certainly unique. And would have done it, too, if it hadn't been for those meddling Bhaalspawn!!

I don't think that he planned to give up his spirit, really... it was Elle who stripped him of it.


Exactly. So her words are a tad... erm... rage-inducing for him.

I think death would have been a better solution for everyone... just that Elle had no guts to do it, but what she thought out instead, was not a punishment fitting the crime. She wanted him to repent for the crimes, but she took away what he needed to be able to repent, his emotions. In my book, that makes her either 1) stupid or 2) cruel. I've not decided which one I lean towards.


I agree that Ellesime certainly had no guts to have him executed, and thus came up with some sort of half-arsed solution which was ultimately crueller and more destructive. And whilst I think stupid is probably the closest of your two options, I think it's more... misguided, of sorts. She couldn't find it within herself to be 'good' enough to order the execution of her lover, and I'm not sure I can condemn her for not being saintly. A screw-up, yes, but I don't think it's this intense stupidity or cruelty which others have pinned on her. I think she just happened to make a major-league mistake, courtesy of strong emotions. Which happens to the best of us.

Cool speech, really well done! Very villainesque and fitting!


Well, last bit's game speak. I just love the 'And I WILL HAVE IT!' bit. :(

I'm having the Gnoll Stronghold flashbacks...


Indeed. Summon Monster VII...

No, Death Spell, get rid of those gnolls, presto!


Right then, they don't seem like as much of a threat...

:(


I know, I know. I had the misfortune of writing this chapter in my library at school, so I was huddled in a corner and hoping nobody would ask why I was sniffing so loudly.

This is the evil thing, isn't it?


I'm afraid so. :D

:P But I can understand you. I think that the final fight deserves a sacrifice... and really - thinking logically, Minsc was the only choice. Fitting death for a heroic friend... sad, of course, but it made the necessary emotional impact. :|


Quite frankly, Minsc is getting this because I - CAN'T - WRITE - HIM. Which I discovered far too late. As such, he was destined to fade into the background more and more, popping up only with a one-liner as it entered my head, no longer contributing and just plodding along with a sword to swing. So I thought I'd allow him to have a lasting effect on things and go out in a blaze of glory. I don't know if I was being kind or wussing out...

I hope you will take care of Boo, though... will ya? ;) :)


Of course. Little Boo shall have his carers...

This was a great chapter. It must have taken alot from you to take the decision... I know that as I write more and more, I feel that the possibilities that I might kill someone off are diminishing rapidly. The characters just become too real... you were brave and kudos to you for that. :(


Thanks. I had been planning this for a long time, but it did just feel right. Not only does it give Minsc a great send-off which he wouldn't have had otherwise (and the alternative was killing him in Hell, which would be BEYOND cruel seeing as he would then cease to be - for anyone else, I might do it, but it's Minsc... :'(), but it does up the stakes, and make this a victory with sacrifices, when it comes.

Though I was still sniffing as I wrote this, fortunately a little too involved and flowing to cry, but I did feel like it at times...

Cheers!

#7 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 13 November 2003 - 08:15 PM

Scary.. :|


Be afraid. :P

So, Reynald is going to keep Boo? Yay! :(


Erm, well... that's a possible. Ye shall see.

I didn't notice much rule bending in the story. It was all good. :)


Except for multi-multi monster summonning? :D

Yep! A tree that makes you god. :)


Yay! Tree power! ;)

And.. Torm will smile on him in the end, right?


Perhaps. I reckon Torm is watching...

Liked the whole paragraph and the way you described it. It was so.. well, real. I mean, it felt real. :D


Cheers. Tension scenes, I do enjoy. ;)

I nice choice. :) This is a great battle, so they need to be able to dodge.


Exactly. ;) Harrian does flit between fighting styles, but here he doesn't need to charge through hordes of enemies - so the one sword does him fine.

I'm starting to feel she's arrogant.. a bit at least.


Nobility. Royalty. I try to avoid my own biases, but as a socialist, those two words, to me, speak for themselves. ;)

Ironic, considering what I possibly have lined up next for writing...

Yep! It's even more terrifying, alright. Irenicus.. he's the void.


Indeed! :D

And you use the word 'utterly' here, and earlier in the same paraghraph. (And later too, in the next one.) :( Maybe you want to change it?


Gah. I'm too fond of these particular words...

Can't the Gods stop it, or something? And if he'd ascend into Godhood... wouldn't the other gods hate him a lot? And couldn't they kill him?


Erm... ask Bioware.

Bye-bye! :)


:D

Eh? :) He really thinks he's invincible.. scary..


And he probably really doesn't have a clue whom Minsc is talking about.

:) Go Minsc! Don't let them hurt you.


They were, after all, his Favoured Enemy. ;)

Uh.. What does that mean?


Hmm. I should make that flow more from the last paragraph. Reynald was commenting that Irenicus was cowardly for hiding behind his heavy barriers which stop all attacks - Irenicus thus claimed that he might be cowardly, but he was going to survive this fight thanks to those barriers, whilst Reynald is meant to die.

Ouch!


Yes... I don't know if an Aganazzar's Scorcher does that, but it worked. ;)

'His' - 'hit'


Gah! On it...

Yesss! You will win the battle! :D


:(

:P Oh no...

:D


This was not my favourite bit to write, I confess.

Awwww... :)


Yep. Reynald's ready for battle.

:( Hah! They won, like they said!


Indeed. Jonny was WRONG.

Oh no... the Heeeell!


Down, down, down, down...

A Great Episode! Liked the battle scene, though it was sad. :)


Thanks. The best is still to come, imho. ;)

Cheers!

#8 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 13 November 2003 - 08:23 PM

:( Aw...party deaths are horrible. But given all the near misses and stuff they've had, it does drive home just what they are risking every day.


Yeah. Jaheira's death would have made them more aware of their vulnerability, but with her then coming back it would make them feel a bit more unbeatable...

And of all the people in this party, Minsc is probably the one I would miss the least (now that Haer's left, anyway :) ) - although the image of Boo mourning his master was heartbreakingly sad.


Yeah. :( Minsc was the only option, and I had to give him a good send-off rather than just let him fade, as I was liable to with my current rate. He's really one of the few characters who I think would actually REALLY want to go down in a blaze of glory, so I let him...

Aw, Reynald's going to take care of Boo? Good for him.


Possibly. :P

:( Poor Harrian. Does he just mean he doesn't feel his soul, or does he mean things have got worse? (Your 'I am being evil' warning has made me seriously paranoid :) ).


Well, the evil was referring to Minsc's death. Harrian's just saying he can't feel his soul...

Though I do have PLENTY more evil things directly ahead. Hoping to surprise a bit. :D

Great chapter - credit to you for writing a party member death, it can't have been easy to do. I wasn't expecting it at all, which makes it all the more sad.


Thanks. It was... needed, but that didn't make it easier. Rather made it harder, actually.

Cheers!

#9 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 13 November 2003 - 08:25 PM

Hey, ho.


:P

Sad chapter, but I loved it. Anguish :)


This, for me, isn't quite the anguish I like. Deaths when they're really, really dead and it's someone like Minsc, are just depressing.

Oh well. I suppose I am, leastways, one of the few people to kill off Minsc. Just as Minsc rarely gets bashed (except for in that one hysterical bash... cannot remember when, what title, who by, only that it included Boo in the maze of fire... anyone remember it?). :)

Cheers!

#10 Guest_Oryx_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 10:15 AM

GAH!!

I had compy problems..and wouldn't you know it'd be right at the culimation of your story? Well on the other hand, maybe it'll be nice to read them back-to-back. Anyway, missed it, good to be back....

Well, now I get evil. And not mildly evil, either. Full-blown evil.




The answer to any questions you have at the end of this chapter is probably 'yes'. And it'll probably be the most evil answer available.


:)

Oh, and yes, liberal use of Slide's 'creative' Spellbooks is used. I try not to break rules, merely bend them. (You don't need dice in a story!) :D


By all means.

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Chapter 145: Confrontations


Reynald adjusted his grip on the Sword of Chaos slightly, taking a deep breath and revelling in the freshness around them. Were they not heading towards the conclusion of such a vital mission, he would have stopped for a while to admire the Tree of Life as they stood on its boughs. You could smell the crispness in the air around them, almost taste nature. It was by his gauntleted hand as he stretched it out to a near ‘twig’ in the massive tree, under his heavy metal boots as he strode at the back of the group, filling his nostrils and his throat with each breath he took. He had never placed much stock in nature before, considering the devotion of druids such as Jaheira to be admirable but unnecessary – though had quickly realised not to express that sentiment to the half-elf – but here and now, he could see what they had been fighting for. This part of nature wasn’t merely something away from the cities and the people. This was something beyond them.


hmmmmm

nice J jab :lol:

And Irenicus was trying to destroy it. For the first time, Reynald felt something stirring in him vaguely resembling a desire to fight for a cause. Until now, he had been fighting for the cause of someone else so it would serve his own ends. He could see now that this was hardly the path that would return him to Torm – the right action, done for the wrong reasons, was no right action at all. But to fight to preserve this, preserve the life he had seen, in all shapes and sizes… that was a reason.


awww, nice

They had so far despatched the parasites Irenicus had placed at key points on the Tree, finding them to be quite easy to deal with once their guards were eliminated. One by one, the barriers standing in the way of the party and Irenicus were lowering, and as they fell the tension rose. Harrian was becoming shifty, over-exerting himself in combat and remaining stoically silent outside, and it was starting to affect the others. Imoen had failed a few spells as time had gone by, and although Jaheira had been doing her best to keep them calm and had been constantly telling them to keep their guard, Reynald was not concerned. This was something he saw occasionally before the great battles; warriors would get nervous, make minor mistakes, and then agonise about making bigger mistakes when the fight finally came. But when it did… all was calm. All went like clockwork. Either they died smoothly or they lived smoothly. And although Reynald now had a strong reason to desire to win the fight beyond self-preservation, he was still ready to accept death. If his death could further the life of someone else who had more to live for then so be it.


died smoothly...lol

Very cool introspection though.

The mad mage – for, although Reynald had never seen The Exile face to face, with the tales he had been told he had come to think of him as mad – was in the centre as predicted. There was no way they could have approached discreetly; their path towards him was a clear one, and as they emerged from the branches and leaves he spotted them instantly. The Queen was in a cage of sorts to Irenicus’ left, looking as cool and composed as Reynald had ever expected of nobility – especially elven nobility – and regarded them with calm eyes on their approach.


Irenicus, similarly, had a lack of reaction. His arms were folded across his chest, and he seemed utterly unconcerned by either the arrival of the Bhaalspawn’s party or the dozen or so bodies of fallen elves littered around his feet. His eyes swept over them all imperiously, and as Reynald looked into the blue orbs even icier than his own, he felt a shiver run up his spine. Harrian was right. There was something about this man which was utterly, utterly empty – he was not made of nightmares, as Reynald imagined the greatest of foes would be. He was made of the void, and that somehow made him even more terrifying than the fears the Fallen Paladin usually harboured in his heart.


'made of the void'

very nice!

I loved these 2 paragraphs...truly vivid image

Must? What do you know of these things, Bhaalspawn! You are but a pawn, a tool in my game, an annoying pest that I should have eradicated long ago instead of allowing Bodhi to have her fun. You know nothing of this, Corias,” Irenicus said, his voice bland but with a greater note of urgency this time.


hmm...mask starting to crack

He drew himself up to his full, imposing height to stare at them all again, turning his back on Ellesime and looking at the party. “You understand vengeance, don’t you, Bhaalspawn? Of course you do, it is what has driven you so far. So understand my vengeance, Corias. I swore that the day would come when I would stride amongst these fools and fill their hearts with fear, that the day would come when I would ascend to what was rightly, mine. You may have disrupted my plans for the Tree, but they can be continued once I have dealt with you! At the very least, I swore that at some point vengeance would be in reach! And I shall have it!”


*nibbles* BG1 was the B-spawn's own vengeance, SoA is someone else's....hmm...nah, I guess SoA is also the B-spawns' vengeance just as much.

Minsc launched forward, Warblade upraised, Boo squeaking indignantly. Normally Reynald found the hamster amusing, but right then there was something very disconcerting about a battling rodent. “Minsc and Boo shall have their vengeance too!” the giant Rashemani cried. “You slew Dynaheir, our witch, without a thought! You shall pay!”


Yay!

Uhoh..this is when.....

Irenicus stared calmly. “I do not know to whom you refer, and I care not. But I do not have time to deal with those such as you.” He turned and pointed over at Minsc’s left, murmuring an incantation Reynald recognised as a Summoning Spell, but unlike one he had ever heard.


Why it was so unfamiliar became clear seconds later, as a score of gnolls burst into the air – beasts like for any other Summoning Spell, but in far greater numbers than Reynald was used to seeing.


Gnolls! Of course! Very nice touch.

Wait....Minsc's blaze of glory being against 100 gnolls...didn't I once suggest that to you? :green: Slide, I'm touched.

Forgetting Irenicus for the moment, Reynald snatched a short sword from the scabbard on his right side and parried the halberd blow aimed at his skull. A quick twist detached metal from pole, and a slash ended the attack of the comparatively weak monster, but it prompted Reynald to still look at Minsc.


ah...backup weapon...good

The Rashemani warrior was having a difficult time of so many foes at once. His red dragon scale had a giant slash in it across his back, and although Reynald could not see the blood from the wound against the colour of Minsc’s armour, the crimson stream running down his face from a cut above his eye told of the challenge. And yet the ranger did not falter, but continued in an effective pattern of block, parry, kill, block, parry, kill.


nice

Minsc was on his knees, too bloodied for Reynald to see how many wounds he had suffered, defending himself weakly against the gnolls. Even as the Fallen Paladin redoubled his effort, fighting and killing quicker to get to him, a gnoll raised a spear it grasped, then launched it through the Rashemani ranger’s chest. It exploded on the other side, and Minsc grew suddenly quiet, his eyes wide and staring. He took one great struggling painful breath… then was silent.


:D :P :)

...as it should be, though.

A great silence settled upon them all as they stared at Irenicus’ fallen body, then they all looked at Harrian. His eyes were closed, his brow creased in thought and hope, but as they looked, he became increasingly concerned. Then he looked at them at last. “Nothing,” he whispered hoarsely, a touch of panic creeping in. “I feel… nothing.”


Ahhh creepy.

Very good chapter. I have only one complaint - it seemed like Irenicus never really did anything during battle.

Then everything went black.


Welcome to Hell!

#11 Guest_Slide_*

Posted 29 November 2003 - 07:46 PM

I had compy problems..and wouldn't you know it'd be right at the culimation of your story? Well on the other hand, maybe it'll be nice to read them back-to-back. Anyway, missed it, good to be back....


So I see. I now have a spate of reviews from you to reply to. :)

:twisted:


Oh, you know what's coming...

By all means.


Yay! Just don't call the rules-mongers over here. :wink:

hmmmmm

nice J jab :P


He's already worked her out. :wink:

awww, nice


Yep. Reynald's finding a raison d'etre...

died smoothly...lol


I could have probably found a word better than 'smoothly', I know. :roll:

Very cool introspection though.


Cheers. Reynald's never ceased to fascinate me since the first chapter he appeared in...

'made of the void'

very nice!


Thank you. For Jonny-boy... it's apt.

I loved these 2 paragraphs...truly vivid image


Cheers. Reynald's observant and has a taste for the dramatic. He'd probably see things in a more complex way than Minsc would.

hmm...mask starting to crack


It won't fall off, though.

*nibbles* BG1 was the B-spawn's own vengeance, SoA is someone else's....hmm...nah, I guess SoA is also the B-spawns' vengeance just as much.


Yeah... vengeance for torture, for soul-stealing... but ToB isn't really vengeance, mind... Hmm.

Yay!

Uhoh..this is when.....


Erm, yes. :D

Gnolls! Of course! Very nice touch.

Wait....Minsc's blaze of glory being against 100 gnolls...didn't I once suggest that to you? :green: Slide, I'm touched.


Yes, it was your idea. :) I take all the best ideas that I hear. :)

ah...backup weapon...good


The scene kept giving me Gladiator-style images, for some reason, so Reynald had to have a short sword...

nice


Minsc shall NOT go down easily!

:twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

...as it should be, though.


That sort of makes it worse. If it didn't rather have to be like this, then I probably wouldn't have done it... :P

Ahhh creepy.


Indeed.

Very good chapter. I have only one complaint - it seemed like Irenicus never really did anything during battle.


True. I'm not the best at the all-on-mage battles. But still, most of this was from Reynald's perspective, and after he got zapped by Jonny, his attention was more on the gnolls. (excuses, excuses) :)

Welcome to Hell!


Hopefully a short stay. :(

Cheers!




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