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#1 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 06:21 AM

Okay, here we go – The Slayer vs. The Vamps.

I am not sure how I managed the first-person pov while in the Slayer form… I hope it’s ok. Also, be advised that some scenes are pretty gory, but after all… it is just Bodhi.

In any case, this was probably the most anti-climatic way to kill Bodhi that I have ever seen on Attic. No exposition, no insulting speeches, no boasting, no flashy heroism. Nothing. Just… death.

Oh, and I think I just gave a new meaning to the term of ‘staking a vampire’ ;)

 

Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 6.10.

“Are you… are you sure about this, bro?” Imoen gasps, trying to catch her breath, being still half-asleep and trying to keep up with me is not an easy thing to do. The unusually cold night makes me want to hurry up with this vampire hunting - luckily the Graveyard is only a few minutes walk away.

“Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?”

“Lately yes,” she replies nonchalantly, “boy, am I gonna get yelled at, in the morning… Vic might never forgive me such recklessness…”

“Heh, isn’t this cute – I am worried about receiving the same treatment from my significant other…” I chuckle, “but what we are doing will be pretty safe for us, Imoen, while Jaheira and Viconia might be in a great danger…”

“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.

“Umm, I am sure that using them once won’t make a huge amount of difference, Immy,” I smile at her encouragingly, “relax, everything should go just fine… here we are, now do you have everything with you?”

“One Invisibility spell, a couple of invisibility potions in case the spell runs out, Elhan’s vials and a pair of wooden stakes… I’m all set,” Imoen proudly declares.

I open the creaking gate and we pass inside the graveyard, sticking to the shadows of the crypts and carefully proceed towards the entrance of Bodhi’s lair, knowing that at this time of night there is a great chance of us being suddenly surprised by a random vampire, gone hunting. We make it to the door leading into the lower crypts without any difficulty and I open it to look inside the dark emptiness.

“Any famous last words?” I look at Imoen, who is hopping form one foot to another in order to warm herself.

“No… I don’t think so… oh, wait! Crap! You didn’t tell me what am I supposed to do with that elven holy water…” she exclaims.

“Well, I don’t know either… I guess you should splash Bodhi with it, when you have a chance – I can’t think of anything else. Just be careful and don’t get into my way and watch that your invisibility doesn’t get dispelled,” I warn her.

“Yeah, yeah… now you are repeating yourself every five minutes, it’s bloody annoying,” Imoen grumbles, “now, are we going or not?”

I turn around to descend into the crypt, Imoen following me as silently as possible. We hug the walls, using all our stealth to avoid some minor undead critters and giant spiders that infest the passageways. I know the way from my memory and soon we arrive to the set of blue doors – they have not been placed back after the mage’s golem crushed them from their hinges. Imoen sneaks over to peek inside and from the look that she gives me I understand that there are plenty of vampires inside…

“Geez… there must be at least a dozen of them, there… and I didn’t even see Bodhi amongst them,” Imoen explains.

“That’s ok, I know where she is hiding, I’ll track her down,” I try to sound reassuring, but in the same time I am worried as I have no idea exactly how much control I will have over that… thing.

“Now cast your spell and stay away from me or you might get hurt… make sure that you have stoneskins cast before that, sis…” I tell her.

“Really… you don’t have to explain me everything, Theo…” she pouts before proceeding with the spells and soon enough I am alone in the huge hallway. I close my eyes and try to concentrate - soon enough Bhaal responds my invitation.

“SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased.

“Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort.

“ONCE YOU HAVE SEEN THE BENEFITS, IT WILL BE HARD TO REFUSE,” Bhaal laughs.

“Good luck trying to convince me, daddy… now, will you give me the power this once or no?” I become impatient, knowing that the duration of Imoen’s spell is not everlasting.

“ENJOY YOURSELF, SON,” Bhaal’s voice booms in my head and suddenly I feel that my awareness of the surroundings has diminished almost completely… I don’t feel my own body and my vision is very blurry. It seems as all my senses have deserted me and I am frightened at how very little control I have over my body. I know that something drags me forward, even if I can hardly feel my body moving… a smell, so alluring and tempting… is it blood?

I can hardly make out the outline of the room I am in, but I know well enough where I am… somehow, my legs have drawn me into the room, full with vampires and now my body is methodically smashing and slashing them to pieces. Vaguely, I can discern flying body parts and showers of blood all around me, but the instinct is too hard to control… it drags me from one body to another, leaving only shattered corpses in my wake.

“CONTROL WILL COME WITH PRACTICE, SON,” the voice says, “MEANWHILE, RELISH THE POWER!”

“I… I don’t want to practice this, you monster,” I fight back weakly, barely conscious of what is happening around me, but the instinct draws me down the passageway, leading me towards the next group of victims… I know well enough, that had any of my friends been present here, the instinct would make me attack them and I would have little hope of fighting the Slayer back and preventing the tragedy.

I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.

The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill, I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.

“I AM PLEASED WITH YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds satisfied, as I silently watch over the carnage that I have caused.

“Im? Immy? Are you here?” I scream aloud and jump suddenly as someone jerks me by the hand and I see Imoen slowly becoming visible. She looks rather pale and I can fully understand why, looking at the aftermath of slaughter at our feet.

“That… that was… um, Theo… I am not sure if I want to see that again… Theo, I don’t want you to… to become that thing…” she is close to tears and I hold her firmly, until she calms down.

“I… I didn’t even get to use that holy water… I was so scared that I could hardly move…” she looks at me solemnly, “promise that you will never ask for this power again. Seriously. Promise me that, brother.”

“I promise Immy… you know, it scares me as much as it scares you,” I strike her soft, black locks, “but we have to finish the job – now get that stake and pierce Bodhi’s heart, that should probably release the part of your soul…”

“Do… do I have to?” she looks slightly disgusted.

“I am not sure, but I think it would be better if you would do it – maybe it won’t work if I did it,” I muse.

“Shucks… oh well, I suppose I will just have to be brave…” she smiles weakly and crawls towards Bodhi’s crippled form.

“Theo… err… where is her heart?” I hear her asking after a little while.

“The left side of her chest, I thought you knew.”

“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.

“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.

“Do you expect me to… stake that?” Imoen asks slightly shocked, but as I stay silent, she reluctantly crawls over and places the stake over the bloody mass. I turn away in aversion as I hear a loud splash and a split second later, Imoen is busy throwing up…

“Well, feel any different?” I ask her as she finally rises from the floor and wipes her face clean.

“Hey! It’s a great feeling! It’s… it’s… almost as good as a huge portion of vanilla-strawberry ice cream! Boy, I can’t wait to tell Vic the good news, come let’s ditch this joint! Theo… Theo, what is wrong with you? Your face – it is so pale… what is wrong? Speak, brother…” Imoen’s joy is quickly replaced by concern as she shakes me by the shoulders, but I don’t feel a thing.

What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…

 

Next: Theo and Immy get yelled at. :lol:

#2 Guest_argan_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 09:46 AM

Good chapter. Next one will be fun :lol:

#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 09:57 AM

Good chapter. Next one will be fun :lol:


Uhuh. Not for everyone, though... ;)

Thanks for reading!

#4 Guest_Dark-Mage_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 11:05 AM

Good chapter :lol: Liked the way you kept the first person perspective when Theodur changed into the slayer

#5 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 11:32 AM

Good chapter :lol: Liked the way you kept the first person perspective when Theodur changed into the slayer


Thank you! I'm glad that it worked for you. ;)

#6 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 12:01 PM

“Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?”


:lol: Theo, this is really not the time to start quizzing Immy about her private life.

“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


He thinks he does...

“That’s ok, I know where she is hiding, I’ll track her down,” I try to sound reassuring, but in the same time I am worried as I have no idea exactly how much control I will have over that… thing.


;) Still time to change your mind about this, Theo.

“Now cast your spell and stay away from me or you might get hurt… make sure that you have stoneskins cast before that, sis…” I tell her.


;) She knows what she's doing, Theo. I'd worry less about her and more about yourself if I were you...

“SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased.


And that's not a good thing. Be careful, Theo.

“Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort.


So what happens if tomorrow you have another dream about Jaheira dying, Theo? Are you going to say 'well, ok, just one more time then'? Bhaal knows just how to tempt you...

I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Well, at least his plan worked, anyway.

The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill, I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.


Must be a relief - being the Slayer did not sound like fun.

“That… that was… um, Theo… I am not sure if I want to see that again… Theo, I don’t want you to… to become that thing…” she is close to tears and I hold her firmly, until she calms down.


;) You tell him, Immy.

“I… I didn’t even get to use that holy water… I was so scared that I could hardly move…” she looks at me solemnly, “promise that you will never ask for this power again. Seriously. Promise me that, brother.”


“I promise Immy… you know, it scares me as much as it scares you,” I strike her soft, black locks, “but we have to finish the job – now get that stake and pierce Bodhi’s heart, that should probably release the part of your soul…”


I hope he keeps that promise - but Bhaal won't be easily put off.

“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.


“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.


LOL!

“Do you expect me to… stake that?” Imoen asks slightly shocked, but as I stay silent, she reluctantly crawls over and places the stake over the bloody mass. I turn away in aversion as I hear a loud splash and a split second later, Imoen is busy throwing up…


Ick. Nice of you to help her out, Theo ;)

What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


Eep! Hope nothing too horrible is happening to him :)

Next: Theo and Immy get yelled at. :)


Serves them right. :(

#7 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 12:23 PM


“Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?”


:roll: Theo, this is really not the time to start quizzing Immy about her private life.


No, but I think that Theo is looking for a bit of diversion from his grim thoughts. ;)


“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


He thinks he does...


Oh yes.


“That’s ok, I know where she is hiding, I’ll track her down,” I try to sound reassuring, but in the same time I am worried as I have no idea exactly how much control I will have over that… thing.


:D Still time to change your mind about this, Theo.


Well... the alternative is not pretty, anyways.


“Now cast your spell and stay away from me or you might get hurt… make sure that you have stoneskins cast before that, sis…” I tell her.


;) She knows what she's doing, Theo. I'd worry less about her and more about yourself if I were you...


Yeah... but that would be the wise thing to do... :D


“SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased.


And that's not a good thing. Be careful, Theo.


Oh, he knows that he shouldn't be doing this...


“Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort.


So what happens if tomorrow you have another dream about Jaheira dying, Theo? Are you going to say 'well, ok, just one more time then'? Bhaal knows just how to tempt you...


Exactly. This is what he will hear in the next chapter... but not from Jaheira. She will be using... stronger words...


I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Well, at least his plan worked, anyway.


Hmm, Theo is now chalking that as a 'plus' in the column called 'Benefits from giving into the taint'


The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill, I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.


Must be a relief - being the Slayer did not sound like fun.


Nope. It scared him a lot. ;)


“That… that was… um, Theo… I am not sure if I want to see that again… Theo, I don’t want you to… to become that thing…” she is close to tears and I hold her firmly, until she calms down.


:D You tell him, Immy.


I think Theo is thinking second thoughts right now.


“I promise Immy… you know, it scares me as much as it scares you,” I strike her soft, black locks, “but we have to finish the job – now get that stake and pierce Bodhi’s heart, that should probably release the part of your soul…”


I hope he keeps that promise - but Bhaal won't be easily put off.


Well, he intends to keep it... but the circumstances may force him into breaking it, who knows.


“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.


LOL!


Yeah... poor Bodhi... :twisted:


“Do you expect me to… stake that?” Imoen asks slightly shocked, but as I stay silent, she reluctantly crawls over and places the stake over the bloody mass. I turn away in aversion as I hear a loud splash and a split second later, Imoen is busy throwing up…


Ick. Nice of you to help her out, Theo ;)


Theo: Ugh, I can't stand blood... :D


What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


Eep! Hope nothing too horrible is happening to him :D


No, just the effect of staying to long in Slayer form. After all... it can kill you in the game...


Next: Theo and Immy get yelled at. :D


Serves them right. :P


Oh, yes. :)

I just hope I can get the next chapter out before the end of the week. My home PC is in repair after its hard drive crashed and I lost tons and tons of useful info... by pure luck I had made the backups of the story on Re-Writable CDs. Had quite a scare yesterday. :D

#8 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 12:37 PM

I just hope I can get the next chapter out before the end of the week. My home PC is in repair after its hard drive crashed and I lost tons and tons of useful info... by pure luck I had made the backups of the story on Re-Writable CDs. Had quite a scare yesterday. :roll:


Ouch - sorry to hear that. Glad you didn't lose any of Rush, at least :twisted: .

#9 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 12:48 PM


I just hope I can get the next chapter out before the end of the week. My home PC is in repair after its hard drive crashed and I lost tons and tons of useful info... by pure luck I had made the backups of the story on Re-Writable CDs. Had quite a scare yesterday. ;)


Ouch - sorry to hear that. Glad you didn't lose any of Rush, at least :roll: .


I think I didn't... they should be ok. Losing 37 episodes would be... ugh. I'll spend my time without the PC to think about some devious plot twists, muahaha...

But they better fix my PC before friday afternoon, or I'll go berserk... and without Boo to calm me down... :twisted:

#10 Guest_Chantrys_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 02:10 PM

I am not sure how I managed the first-person pov while in the Slayer form… I hope it’s ok. Also, be advised that some scenes are pretty gory, but after all… it is just Bodhi.


Hooray for gore! (Three years ago, that could have been a campaign slogan in the US.)

In any case, this was probably the most anti-climatic way to kill Bodhi that I have ever seen on Attic. No exposition, no insulting speeches, no boasting, no flashy heroism. Nothing. Just… death.


Sometimes, you just have to go with the 'classic' way of killing the evil nemesis. ;)

“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


Lobster powers... ;)

“Any famous last words?” I look at Imoen, who is hopping form one foot to another in order to warm herself.


Don't say famous last words! Not before the battle with the big bad! It's like saying, "Nothing can stop us now..." ;)

I know the way from my memory and soon we arrive to the set of blue doors – they have not been placed back after the mage’s golem crushed them from their hinges.


I guess the vampire repairmen are on strike along with the Waukeen's Promenade repairmen.

“SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased.


No, it's not wise at all. And I still can't believe you're doing this, Theo. You deserve every bit of the yelling Jaheira's going to do.

“ENJOY YOURSELF, SON,” Bhaal’s voice booms in my head and suddenly I feel that my awareness of the surroundings has diminished almost completely… I don’t feel my own body and my vision is very blurry. It seems as all my senses have deserted me and I am frightened at how very little control I have over my body. I know that something drags me forward, even if I can hardly feel my body moving… a smell, so alluring and tempting… is it blood?


(*shudder*)

I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Very nice. I really like the feel this POV gives you.

The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill, I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.


Well, no, there's Immy...she's right over there...just 'accidentally' slash your lobster claws in that corner and...whoops. :roll: Sorry. Got carried away there.

“That… that was… um, Theo… I am not sure if I want to see that again… Theo, I don’t want you to… to become that thing…” she is close to tears and I hold her firmly, until she calms down.


Yes, I really hope he never does that again. But I'm horribly afraid that he will.

“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.


Eeeeewwww. Couldn't you be neater about your killing? ;)

What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


My goodness! :twisted: What happened to him? Did he stay in lobster-mode too long?

Great chapter. I hope Jaheira and Viconia scare the living daylights out of them in the next one.

#11 Guest_Yazston_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 02:23 PM

Okay, here we go – The Slayer vs. The Vamps.


Weeee!

I am not sure how I managed the first-person pov while in the Slayer form… I hope it’s ok. Also, be advised that some scenes are pretty gory, but after all… it is just Bodhi.


I think that you described it well.. but, maybe you should write more about how he feels. I might be wrong, but Theo doesn't like slaughtering others.. and that is what he's doing. So, maybe(?) he is a bit.. erm.. well, terrified? Or something like that. ;)

Oh, and I think I just gave a new meaning to the term of ‘staking a vampire’ :D


lol That you did. ;)

“Are you… are you sure about this, bro?” Imoen gasps, trying to catch her breath, being still half-asleep and trying to keep up with me is not an easy thing to do.


Hmm... I'd put a period, before the first 'trying'. Or then a '-'. (Dunno what that is in english. :) )

“Will you sh…”


Whaa? :D Theo?

I chuckle, “but what we are doing will be pretty safe for us, Imoen, while Jaheira and Viconia might be in a great danger…”


And how is that? Yes, Jaheira and Viccy, they are safe.. but you are not, and neither is Imoen. Don't want to be mean, or anything.. but that is just how I feel. ;)

“…and watch that your invisibility doesn’t get dispelled,” I warn her.


And what if it does? What if you accidentally kill her? :twisted:

“ONCE YOU HAVE SEEN THE BENEFITS, IT WILL BE HARD TO REFUSE,” Bhaal laughs.


Oh? *laughs* Right!

..okay, Theo did kill them all.. but still!

“I AM PLEASED WITH YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds satisfied, as I silently watch over the carnage that I have caused.


*mutters*

“I… I didn’t even get to use that holy water… I was so scared that I could hardly move…” she looks at me solemnly, “promise that you will never ask for this power again. Seriously. Promise me that, brother.”


:D It really was scary...

“Theo… err… where is her heart?” I hear her asking after a little while.

“The left side of her chest, I thought you knew.”

“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.

;) (I know, I know.. I shouldn't laugh!)

What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


What happened?? :roll:


A Great Episode, again! :D

#12 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 02:28 PM

I am not sure how I managed the first-person pov while in the Slayer form… I hope it’s ok. Also, be advised that some scenes are pretty gory, but after all… it is just Bodhi.


Hooray for gore! (Three years ago, that could have been a campaign slogan in the US.)


Well, it didn't seem to work, now that they're stuck with Dubya. :D


In any case, this was probably the most anti-climatic way to kill Bodhi that I have ever seen on Attic. No exposition, no insulting speeches, no boasting, no flashy heroism. Nothing. Just… death.


Sometimes, you just have to go with the 'classic' way of killing the evil nemesis. ;)


Hehe, that too - guess it's somewhat refreshing. :D


“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


Lobster powers... ;)


Well... the Slayer does look like a lobster in the game... :)


“Any famous last words?” I look at Imoen, who is hopping form one foot to another in order to warm herself.


Don't say famous last words! Not before the battle with the big bad! It's like saying, "Nothing can stop us now..." :D


LOL, I know it's a bad omen... I'm afraid that Theo has developed a bit of a gallows humour... :D


I know the way from my memory and soon we arrive to the set of blue doors – they have not been placed back after the mage’s golem crushed them from their hinges.


I guess the vampire repairmen are on strike along with the Waukeen's Promenade repairmen.


Heh, could be! Since Theo got out of the Underdark a bit quicker by skipping the later quests, I used this to show that Bodhi was not fully prepared yet.


“SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased.


No, it's not wise at all. And I still can't believe you're doing this, Theo. You deserve every bit of the yelling Jaheira's going to do.


Afraid so. She isn't going to be pleased one bit.


“ENJOY YOURSELF, SON,” Bhaal’s voice booms in my head and suddenly I feel that my awareness of the surroundings has diminished almost completely… I don’t feel my own body and my vision is very blurry. It seems as all my senses have deserted me and I am frightened at how very little control I have over my body. I know that something drags me forward, even if I can hardly feel my body moving… a smell, so alluring and tempting… is it blood?


(*shudder*)


Not good, eh?


I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Very nice. I really like the feel this POV gives you.


Thanks! I'm still not sure if I let him feel and see too much, but maybe it's all right.


The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill, I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.


Well, no, there's Immy...she's right over there...just 'accidentally' slash your lobster claws in that corner and...whoops. ;) Sorry. Got carried away there.


Oooh, that was baaad! Real bad! No cake for you! :D


“That… that was… um, Theo… I am not sure if I want to see that again… Theo, I don’t want you to… to become that thing…” she is close to tears and I hold her firmly, until she calms down.


Yes, I really hope he never does that again. But I'm horribly afraid that he will.


Umm... depends on the circumstances... he doesn't want to, but if he is forced...


“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.


Eeeeewwww. Couldn't you be neater about your killing? :D


Nope. :twisted:


What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


My goodness! ;) What happened to him? Did he stay in lobster-mode too long?


Yep, that's it. Luckily, there are some drawbacks to using it.

Great chapter. I hope Jaheira and Viconia scare the living daylights out of them in the next one.


Oh, yes... :roll:

#13 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 02:53 PM

Okay, here we go – The Slayer vs. The Vamps.


Weeee!


In the end the Slayer won by 23-0.


I am not sure how I managed the first-person pov while in the Slayer form… I hope it’s ok. Also, be advised that some scenes are pretty gory, but after all… it is just Bodhi.


I think that you described it well.. but, maybe you should write more about how he feels. I might be wrong, but Theo doesn't like slaughtering others.. and that is what he's doing. So, maybe(?) he is a bit.. erm.. well, terrified? Or something like that. ;)


I'll think about that. Now, Theo would not care much for the vamps being slaughtered... he isn't terrified by that. But he is terrified by the awesome power that the Slayer has - I might need to show it more.


Oh, and I think I just gave a new meaning to the term of ‘staking a vampire’ :P


lol That you did. ;)


:twisted:


“Are you… are you sure about this, bro?” Imoen gasps, trying to catch her breath, being still half-asleep and trying to keep up with me is not an easy thing to do.


Hmm... I'd put a period, before the first 'trying'. Or then a '-'. (Dunno what that is in english. :D )


I don't like the whole sentence, honestly. I think, I'll rather rework it completely. :D


“Will you sh…”


Whaa? :D Theo?


Yeah, that's not nice. But if someone is asking you 'Are you sure?' 'Are you sure?' 'Are you sure?' every five minutes and especially, whe you are NOT sure yourself... it can get on the nerves...


I chuckle, “but what we are doing will be pretty safe for us, Imoen, while Jaheira and Viconia might be in a great danger…”


And how is that? Yes, Jaheira and Viccy, they are safe.. but you are not, and neither is Imoen. Don't want to be mean, or anything.. but that is just how I feel. :)


That's how it is, really. Jaheira and Viccy are strong and powerful, they can protect themselves. Theo's just being unwise...


“…and watch that your invisibility doesn’t get dispelled,” I warn her.


And what if it does? What if you accidentally kill her? ;)


Well, there is always a possibility in dying in a regular battle, too. Basically, he just hopes it will work. :D


“ONCE YOU HAVE SEEN THE BENEFITS, IT WILL BE HARD TO REFUSE,” Bhaal laughs.


Oh? *laughs* Right!


..okay, Theo did kill them all.. but still!


Yeah, that is a point for Bhaal.


“I AM PLEASED WITH YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds satisfied, as I silently watch over the carnage that I have caused.


*mutters*


Yeah, I know - you don't get to choose your parents... but they don't come any worse than Bhaal.


“I… I didn’t even get to use that holy water… I was so scared that I could hardly move…” she looks at me solemnly, “promise that you will never ask for this power again. Seriously. Promise me that, brother.”


:D It really was scary...


Seeing Imoen so affected, will make Theo think.


“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.

:D (I know, I know.. I shouldn't laugh!)


:roll:


What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


What happened?? ;)


He stayed too long in the Slayer form...

A Great Episode, again! :D


Thanks a lot! Thanks for the suggestions, too. :P

#14 Laufey

Posted 29 October 2003 - 04:51 PM

“Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?”


“Lately yes,” she replies nonchalantly, “boy, am I gonna get yelled at, in the morning… Vic might never forgive me such recklessness…”


Awwwww! :twisted:

“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


LOL! Sorry, I just got this image of Theo raising his sword, shouting 'By the Power of Bhaal, I have the lobster!'


“ENJOY YOURSELF, SON,” Bhaal’s voice booms in my head and suddenly I feel that my awareness of the surroundings has diminished almost completely… I don’t feel my own body and my vision is very blurry. It seems as all my senses have deserted me and I am frightened at how very little control I have over my body. I know that something drags me forward, even if I can hardly feel my body moving… a smell, so alluring and tempting… is it blood?


I can hardly make out the outline of the room I am in, but I know well enough where I am… somehow, my legs have drawn me into the room, full with vampires and now my body is methodically smashing and slashing them to pieces. Vaguely, I can discern flying body parts and showers of blood all around me, but the instinct is too hard to control… it drags me from one body to another, leaving only shattered corpses in my wake.


This sluggish feeling is actually very scary.


I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Ewwww....


“Theo… err… where is her heart?” I hear her asking after a little while.


“The left side of her chest, I thought you knew.”


“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.


Oh... :roll:


What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


Oh no...it's the aftermath of the Slayer change, of course.
Rogues do it from behind.

#15 Guest_IronDragon_*

Posted 29 October 2003 - 09:56 PM

[quote] Okay, here we go – The Slayer vs. The Vamps. ]/quote] what? No point spread? No handicap?

[quote] In any case, this was probably the most anti-climatic way to kill Bodhi that I have ever seen on Attic. No exposition, no insulting speeches, no boasting, no flashy heroism. Nothing. Just… death. [/quote] Good, I tire do wordy antagonists. Now where have I heard that before?

[quote] “Are you… are you sure about this, bro?” Imoen gasps, trying to catch her breath, being still half-asleep and trying to keep up with me is not an easy thing to do. The unusually cold night makes me want to hurry up with this vampire hunting - luckily the Graveyard is only a few minutes walk away. [/quote] listen to your sister, she was always the smart one.

[quote] “Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?” [/quote] kind of a nosey question.

[quote] “Heh, isn’t this cute – I am worried about receiving the same treatment from my significant other…” I chuckle, “but what we are doing will be pretty safe for us, Imoen, while Jaheira and Viconia might be in a great danger…” [/quote] Actually I would be more afraid of Jaheira than on Bhodi.

[quote] “I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs. [/quteo] Hmmm….lobster. Why am I suddenly thinking about that swan sculpture Laufey used in her last chapter?

[quote] “Umm, I am sure that using them once won’t make a huge amount of difference, Immy,” I smile at her encouragingly, “relax, everything should go just fine… [/quote] famous last words

[quote] “SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased. [/quote] Ya know if daddy approves it is probably a bad idea.

[quote] “Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort. [/quote] Don’t you mean: until the next time I’m desperate?

[quote] “I… I don’t want to practice this, you monster,” I fight back weakly, barely conscious of what is happening around me, but the instinct draws me down the passageway, leading me towards the next group of victims… I know well enough, that had any of my friends been present here, the instinct would make me attack them and I would have little hope of fighting the Slayer back and preventing the tragedy. [/quote] probably to late to wonder if the slayer can see though illusions and invisibility the way that say a high powered lich can.

[quote] I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood. [/quote] well that was quick.

[quote] The instinct is satisfied… there is no one else to kill , I realize as I feel my full awareness and control over my body slowly returning.

“I AM PLEASED WITH YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds satisfied, as I silently watch over the carnage that I have caused. [/quote] again…it is always bad when Bhaal is happy.

[quote] “Theo… err… where is her heart?” I hear her asking after a little while.

“The left side of her chest, I thought you knew.”

“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust. [/quote] Well that fits….

[quote] Next: Theo and Immy get yelled at. [/quote] Theo! You go some splainin to do.

#16 Guest_TheBeastlordJohnny_*

Posted 30 October 2003 - 01:02 AM

Oh yes. Like the splatters. Like the viscerae. I think a few epic similes would have been good though, to really emphasise the sheer bloodthirstiness of Theo as the slayer:

"And so it was that Theodur, infuriated by his father's will
Sliced and tore and ripped into the vampiric hordes
And their innards bit the walls as they bit the dust*
Like when the tides ebb and flow at their sand-covered limits
And recede again, leaving traces behind as they regress
Towards their proper place. So did the viscerae of Bodhi
When savaged by the slashes of the Slayer."


Gods, I'm certainly no Virgil. :lol:

But overall, pretty good actually. It did, however, seem short. And I like the idea of Bodhi going down ignominiously.

(*: Homer actually coined the idea of "biting the dust".)

#17 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 30 October 2003 - 06:52 AM


“Lately yes,” she replies nonchalantly, “boy, am I gonna get yelled at, in the morning… Vic might never forgive me such recklessness…”


Awwwww! :lol:


Yes, that relationship has been progressing... slowly. :)


“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


LOL! Sorry, I just got this image of Theo raising his sword, shouting 'By the Power of Bhaal, I have the lobster!'


LOL! :(


I can hardly make out the outline of the room I am in, but I know well enough where I am… somehow, my legs have drawn me into the room, full with vampires and now my body is methodically smashing and slashing them to pieces. Vaguely, I can discern flying body parts and showers of blood all around me, but the instinct is too hard to control… it drags me from one body to another, leaving only shattered corpses in my wake.


This sluggish feeling is actually very scary.


Yep. He notices that he has *more* control than in spellhold, but still not nearly enough to command that power.


I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


Ewwww....


Cute, eh?


“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust.


Oh... :P


As I said... an interesting way to stake someone... :)


What is wrong with me? A sharp pain, like a shocking discharge of electricity pervades through me, and suddenly my legs grow so weak that they can’t keep me upright. I fall on the ground, screaming in pain as one powerful convulsion after another grips my body and the pain increases with every each of them… it is so intense that I almost lose my consciousness, but somehow through the waves of pain I can feel someone holding me and whispering something calming to me… the last thing I register before the darkness overwhelms me, is the feeling of coolness in my throat as Imoen empties a healing potion in hopes to lessen my suffering…


Oh no...it's the aftermath of the Slayer change, of course.


Yeah, that definitely is not a point for Bhaal.

#18 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 30 October 2003 - 07:08 AM

[quote][quote] Okay, here we go – The Slayer vs. The Vamps. [/quote] what? No point spread? No handicap?
[/quote]

Don't think that Theo is in the merciful mode...

[quote]
[quote] In any case, this was probably the most anti-climatic way to kill Bodhi that I have ever seen on Attic. No exposition, no insulting speeches, no boasting, no flashy heroism. Nothing. Just… death. [/quote] Good, I tire do wordy antagonists. Now where have I heard that before?
[/quote]

:(

[quote]
[quote] “Are you… are you sure about this, bro?” Imoen gasps, trying to catch her breath, being still half-asleep and trying to keep up with me is not an easy thing to do. The unusually cold night makes me want to hurry up with this vampire hunting - luckily the Graveyard is only a few minutes walk away. [/quote] listen to your sister, she was always the smart one.
[/quote]

Theo: Yep. Hey! :)

[quote]
[quote] “Will you sh… oh, I’m sorry Im,” I turn around to look at her apologetically, “it’s just that you have been asking me this question every five minutes since I woke you up. You were so loud for a master rogue, I wonder how we didn’t wake up Viconia… do you always sleep embraced, by the way?” [/quote] kind of a nosey question.
[/quote]

And something that is very appropriate to discuss before a huge fight.

[quote]
[quote] “Heh, isn’t this cute – I am worried about receiving the same treatment from my significant other…” I chuckle, “but what we are doing will be pretty safe for us, Imoen, while Jaheira and Viconia might be in a great danger…” [/quote] Actually I would be more afraid of Jaheira than on Bhodi.
[/quote]

Oh, come on. Jaheira doesn't bite. Unless... you ask her to... :lol:

[quote]
[quote] “I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs. [/quteo] Hmmm….lobster. Why am I suddenly thinking about that swan sculpture Laufey used in her last chapter?
[/quote]

Hehe... ummm, steamed lobster... yumm!

[quote]
[quote] “Umm, I am sure that using them once won’t make a huge amount of difference, Immy,” I smile at her encouragingly, “relax, everything should go just fine… [/quote] famous last words
[/quote]

It's an old classic, really.

[quote]
[quote] “SO YOU DECIDED TO USE MY ADVICE – HOW WISE OF YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds pleased. [/quote] Ya know if daddy approves it is probably a bad idea.
[/quote]

I think it did register in Theo's brain... somewhere... there...

[quote]
[quote] “Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort. [/quote] Don’t you mean: until the next time I’m desperate?
[/quote]

Well, that's the big question, init?

[quote]
[quote] “I… I don’t want to practice this, you monster,” I fight back weakly, barely conscious of what is happening around me, but the instinct draws me down the passageway, leading me towards the next group of victims… I know well enough, that had any of my friends been present here, the instinct would make me attack them and I would have little hope of fighting the Slayer back and preventing the tragedy. [/quote] probably to late to wonder if the slayer can see though illusions and invisibility the way that say a high powered lich can.
[/quote]

Well, since Theo has already become the Slayer twice in Spellhold, I thought he could know that it can't detect an illusion and invisibility... but still, it's a gamble.

[quote]
[quote] I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood. [/quote] well that was quick.
[/quote]

As I said, anti-climactic.

[quote]
[quote]
“I AM PLEASED WITH YOU, SON,” Bhaal sounds satisfied, as I silently watch over the carnage that I have caused. [/quote] again…it is always bad when Bhaal is happy.
[/quote]

Well, Theo is alarmed too, I think.

[quote]
[quote]
“Err… I know that, but… you see, her ribcage is open and the heart is… well, it is not inside… ewww…” Imoen is trying hard to oppress the disgust. [/quote] Well that fits….
[/quote]

As I said... :)

[quote]
[quote] Next: Theo and Immy get yelled at. [/quote] Theo! You go some splainin to do.[/quote]

I bet Jaheira is already awaiting him at the inn, whip at the ready. :P

#19 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 30 October 2003 - 07:13 AM

Oh yes. Like the splatters. Like the viscerae. I think a few epic similes would have been good though, to really emphasise the sheer bloodthirstiness of Theo as the slayer:


"And so it was that Theodur, infuriated by his father's will
Sliced and tore and ripped into the vampiric hordes
And their innards bit the walls as they bit the dust*
Like when the tides ebb and flow at their sand-covered limits
And recede again, leaving traces behind as they regress
Towards their proper place. So did the viscerae of Bodhi
When savaged by the slashes of the Slayer."


Say, that was really good! :)

Gods, I'm certainly no Virgil. :(


Well, you don't have to be Virgil in order to write good stuff, yes?

But overall, pretty good actually. It did, however, seem short. And I like the idea of Bodhi going down ignominiously.


It did seem short to me, too. Perhaps I could make Bodhi as a more evenly matched opponent, but... that would go against my idea of the power of Slayer...

(*: Homer actually coined the idea of "biting the dust".)


:lol: He did? Wow, I guess we all owe it to him, then. :)

#20 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 30 October 2003 - 11:58 PM

“I dunno… I’m more concerned about you using those lobster powers… I hope that you know what you’re doing,” Imoen only sighs.


I *really* wonder about the lobster graphic.

“Just this one time, Bhaal… you won’t trick me into using your gifts again,” I retort.


“ONCE YOU HAVE SEEN THE BENEFITS, IT WILL BE HARD TO REFUSE,” Bhaal laughs.


Probably - but he has seen what it can do to a person.

I know that I am in Bodhi’s throne room now, again tearing up her servants to pieces, one by one. My current victim that is being pummeled by the creature’s claws, is desperately pleading for mercy… and since it takes me that much longer to make minced meat out of this one, I conclude that it is Bodhi, herself. Knowing this increases my anger tenfold and Bodhi’s screams are intensifying, so shrill that they burn my ears, complementing the cracking noises that accompany the breaking and shattering of her bones… she ceases her struggles finally as her skull is squished as easily as an eggshell and she slowly slides down on the floor in a sea of blood.


:shock: Eck. That was impressive.

“Oh… I understand… err… I think I see it…” I point at a tangle of bloody tissue, nearby Bodhi’s corpse.


A touch of realism. Very nice.

“Hey! It’s a great feeling! It’s… it’s… almost as good as a huge portion of vanilla-strawberry ice cream!


:shock: Immy.




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