Let's see : paladins portrayed as stupid goody two shoes with no brains-check.
You do have a bit of a hang-up there, you know. There even are no paladins in this story (I think Baldric was a ranger), and Theo actually likes Keldorn and writes him accordingly. Actually, I think none of the serious paladin portrayals here are of the Lawful Stoopid variety.
Aerie dieing in some brutal fashion-check.
Can't get enough of a good thing.
Evil NPCs are far better than any good ones, as long as they stay evil-check.
Neutral NPCs are far better if they have evil outbursts-check.
Who *cares*?

I don't give an *expletive deleted* what their alignments are, only whether I like them or not.
NPCs reduced to a charicature of themselves-check.
In this story, yes. There are plenty of others. Perhaps there is something more to your liking.
Don't you ever get bored? I used to have these kind of fantasies when I was 13 years old (heck, I've "killed" my poor Math teacher in all kind of ways at least 200 times). It's good therapy, it's a way to blow off steam...when you're thirteen.
Well... no. Congratulations for being so much more mature than the rest of us.
And of course a fan of the bashed NPC feels hurt, and the reply is "then don't read it" and blah-blah-blah...and we go again in circles. It's all getting soooo old.
Yep, and you just joined the fray with a post the critique value of which for the author is "I don't like this kind of story." I join the fray because the 'don't read it and/or learn to understand the meaning of subjectivity of interpretation' is a way I see the problems of this board could be solved with without sacrificing the freedom of expression and interpretation.
Oh, and Theo, UU was right, the catapult idea was better, I can't imagine the girls going past them and not using one to hurl Aerie into orbit
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Well, at least there is one thing we agree on.