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#1 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 13 November 2002 - 12:12 PM

Chen's servant put little porcelain bowls full with hot soup, scenting of ginger root, in front of everyone. There was also steamed rice and pork in a spicy sauce. Sarevok and Peri didn't fail to notice that it was a festive meal, which caused them to frown a bit. It was not any special occasion to their knowledge.

- "I went to the marshals, may rose petals cover their way..." Chen stopped abruptly.

- "Make it rose thorns instead and make them lose their shoes in the bargain!" she burst. "I find your company... refreshing. I feel I can speak the naked truths, instead of the ones properly clothed. But that is dangerous... still, I will enjoy it for now."

- "I have never had any great difficulty in saying exactly what I think, in no uncertain terms," Peri shrugged. "But then, no-one ever demanded me not to."

- "That is not the way of the Shou," Chen said. She didn't add that the Shou generally found such straigth-forwardness barbaric.

- "I must say that I have developed an odd fascination with your oblique way of communication," Sarevok said. "Not unlike games of strategy - only played with words and social conventions instead."

- "That," Shui said, "is the civilized way. The poetry of language, the subtle understanding of nature of society and its functions, makes much of what separates a man of a beast."

Peri smiled, reminded of Anomen.

- "Beasts can be refreshingly uncomplicated at times, though. As far as I am concerned, man is only half a man - the other half is nothing more than a beast," she said.

- "A... novel thought. Very interesting," Shui replied, not looking Peri in the eye.

He is irritatingly cute like Ano is, Peri thought. Full of himself on the surface, yet so insecure inside. Would be funny to rattle him a little, see what he is made of... but for Chen's sake, I'll leave him alone.

- "But we were about to discuss the marshals," Sarevok said, uneasy about the spark he had briefly perceived in Peri's eyes. "I take it you weren't please with the outcome of the meeting."

- "The marshals are not real chanshi - and it bears mentioning that I would lose my head for saying so," Chen said. "Perhaps they once were, perhaps they never served and protected but only pranced in beautiful uniforms, attending balls and holding administrative positions. At any rate, now they are content with their enjoyable lot in life, and they do not want to hear what would upset the things as they perceive them. They are fools, really - like a shipbuilder who thinks that his ship can not sink! No matter how wonderfully built the ship, if she is made of wood she can sink, and sometimes she will. Shou Lung is mighty, yes... but the mightiest of empires can fall if its guardians don't stay vigilant."

- "And you told them that you suspect that Yun-Men Khan might try to invade Shou Lung?" Peri said.

- "Yes, young yet immortal one," Chen smiled bitterly. "They ridiculed me, asked for proof..."

Peri snorted, interrupting the other woman.

- "Yeah, like the Khan will up and leave proof and clues lying around if she is any good - and I gather she must be if she has gone as far as making a real army of those nomads."

- "It is my fear, as a servant of Shou Lung, that the proof will be Yun-Men Khan's troops running all over our cities, burning everything in their way," Chen said.

- "She seems to be above mindless destruction, however," Sarevok remarked, "as she must supply her armies by the lands she has conquered. I would advocate intelligence efforts."

- "My marshals... promised to think carefully on my warnings. That means nothing will happen, in your way of talking," Chen said.

There was an awkward silence that even Umikaze seemed to sense somehow. Her round, blue eyes wondered about it, and Peri patted her head reassuringly.

- "So... there is no help available from your superiors, no reinforcements, no spies, mages, nada," Peri said. She sighed deeply, avoiding Chen's gaze. "And let me guess. You would like us to help you out."

- "I do realize Shou Lung is not your empire," Chen said stiffly. "Nor can I offer anything to you.you could not get yourselves."

- "Chen... I respect you. I do. And Ankiang is full of very decent people, I'm sure. We have been treated well. But... I have a small child here. I would not want her in the middle of the warzone, and I would kinda like to spend some quality time with her, raising her and so. Settling down for a while and getting to know Kozakura sort of thing," Peri explained. "And not only that, you are aware of Sarevok's mission. You should know how important it is to Tamoko's people to be buried properly in their own soil. Now and then I see Tamoko in my dreams, and she waits... her soul is restless and yearning. Sarevok suffers, too."

- "You are correct, immortal one," Chen said. "I am a mother myself."

She looked unhappy and anxious, Shui looking at her an alarmed expression on his face.

- "This tears my soul like claws of a demon!" Sarevok exclaimed. "Honor, so important to Tamoko... I would not sully her memory by dishonorably leaving the people who welcomed me to their death. However... each day she remains unburied is one more fiery claw shredding me in my torment, in my guilt which guides every waking moment of my step!"

- "Whose children are you, immortal ones? For it is not the wu jen Perorate who sired you,"Chen said quietly.

- "We," Sarevok said darkly, "are children of Bhaal. And we can not be stopped."

-------

Chen relates her troubles to Peri and Sarevok, who get angsty.


Road of redemption

#2 Laufey

Posted 13 November 2002 - 12:49 PM

> - "I went to the marshals, may rose petals cover their way..."

> Chen stopped abruptly.

> - "Make it rose thorns instead and make them lose their shoes in the

> bargain!" she burst. "I find your company... refreshing. I feel

> I can speak the naked truths, instead of the ones properly clothed. But

> that is dangerous... still, I will enjoy it for now."

I really, really like Chen. :D She's a very admirable woman, I think.

> - "I must say that I have developed an odd fascination with your

> oblique way of communication," Sarevok said. "Not unlike games

> of strategy - only played with words and social conventions instead."

Vadrak Dekaras: That sort of thing can actually be very amusing...

> - "A... novel thought. Very interesting," Shui replied, not

> looking Peri in the eye.

> He is irritatingly cute like Ano is, Peri thought. Full of himself on the

> surface, yet so insecure inside. Would be funny to rattle him a little,

> see what he is made of... but for Chen's sake, I'll leave him alone.

Poor boy! He wouldn't stand a chance. :)

> - "But we were about to discuss the marshals," Sarevok said,

> uneasy about the spark he had briefly perceived in Peri's eyes. "I

> take it you weren't please with the outcome of the meeting."

> - "The marshals are not real chanshi - and it bears mentioning that I

> would lose my head for saying so," Chen said. "Perhaps they once

> were, perhaps they never served and protected but only pranced in

> beautiful uniforms, attending balls and holding administrative positions.

> At any rate, now they are content with their enjoyable lot in life, and

> they do not want to hear what would upset the things as they perceive

> them. They are fools, really - like a shipbuilder who thinks that his ship

> can not sink! No matter how wonderfully built the ship, if she is made of

> wood she can sink, and sometimes she will. Shou Lung is mighty, yes... but

> the mightiest of empires can fall if its guardians don't stay

> vigilant."

As I said, I grow more and more fond of Chen.

> - "Chen... I respect you. I do. And Ankiang is full of very decent

> people, I'm sure. We have been treated well. But... I have a small child

> here. I would not want her in the middle of the warzone, and I would kinda

> like to spend some quality time with her, raising her and so. Settling

> down for a while and getting to know Kozakura sort of thing," Peri

> explained. "And not only that, you are aware of Sarevok's mission.

> You should know how important it is to Tamoko's people to be buried

> properly in their own soil. Now and then I see Tamoko in my dreams, and

> she waits... her soul is restless and yearning. Sarevok suffers,

> too."

I completely understand her.

> - "This tears my soul like claws of a demon!" Sarevok exclaimed.

> "Honor, so important to Tamoko... I would not sully her memory by

> dishonorably leaving the people who welcomed me to their death. However...

> each day she remains unburied is one more fiery claw shredding me in my

> torment, in my guilt which guides every waking moment of my step!"

Aw, now he's going all angsty again... *hugs Sarry*

> - "Whose children are you, immortal ones? For it is not the wu jen

> Perorate who sired you,"Chen said quietly.

> - "We," Sarevok said darkly, "are children of Bhaal. And we

> can not be stopped."

Love that line! :D


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#3 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 13 November 2002 - 02:00 PM

> I really, really like Chen. :D She's a very admirable woman, I think.

Yeah, me too. When I first started writing her I was neutral about her - she was just supposed to give face to Yun-Men's opposition. But she has grown to be a true hero, a real soldier whose duty is to her country even though her superiors don't appreciate her.

> Vadrak Dekaras: That sort of thing can actually be very amusing...

Winski: "Indeed. However, Sarevok's patience rather easily runs out and the he doesn't want to play anymore..."

> Poor boy! He wouldn't stand a chance. :)

*grin* He is just a kid.

> I completely understand her.

Yes, she can easily refuse the role of do-gooder if it is not about people who she knows, but now it is much harder to refuse to help.

> Aw, now he's going all angsty again... *hugs Sarry*

It is not easy to be Sarry.

> Love that line! :D

Me too :) I could listen to Sarry for days... both the voice and what he actually says.


Road of redemption

#4 Weyoun

Posted 13 November 2002 - 08:42 PM

> Chen's servant put little porcelain bowls full with hot soup, scenting of

> ginger root, in front of everyone. There was also steamed rice and pork in

> a spicy sauce.

Hmmmmm... *drools*

Laska : *stares at the screen licking her lips*

Vierna : *tummy rumbles*

Aribeth : *On the phone, ordering take-out*

> - "I have never had any great difficulty in saying exactly what I

> think, in no uncertain terms," Peri shrugged. "But then, no-one

> ever demanded me not to."

> - "That is not the way of the Shou," Chen said. She didn't add

> that the Shou generally found such straigth-forwardness barbaric.

> - "I must say that I have developed an odd fascination with your

> oblique way of communication," Sarevok said. "Not unlike games

> of strategy - only played with words and social conventions instead."

> - "That," Shui said, "is the civilized way. The poetry of

> language, the subtle understanding of nature of society and its functions,

> makes much of what separates a man of a beast."

> Peri smiled, reminded of Anomen.

LOL!

> - "Beasts can be refreshingly uncomplicated at times, though. As far

> as I am concerned, man is only half a man - the other half is nothing more

> than a beast," she said.

> - "A... novel thought. Very interesting," Shui replied, not

> looking Peri in the eye.

Hmmm, a very Freudian thought too, perhaps. :D Heh, I just finished watching 'Enemy within' some minutes ago, a classic Trek episode where Kirk was split in a good and evil half by a transporter accident. The point of the episode was that one side cannot exist without the other.

> He is irritatingly cute like Ano is, Peri thought. Full of himself on the

> surface, yet so insecure inside. Would be funny to rattle him a little,

> see what he is made of... but for Chen's sake, I'll leave him alone.

Awww... :) :)

> - "Yes, young yet immortal one," Chen smiled bitterly.

> "They ridiculed me, asked for proof..."

Heh. Maybe the proof he needs is the Khan's spear at his throat before he takes action. :D

> - "You are correct, immortal one," Chen said. "I am a

> mother myself."

> She looked unhappy and anxious, Shui looking at her an alarmed expression

> on his face.

> - "This tears my soul like claws of a demon!" Sarevok exclaimed.

> "Honor, so important to Tamoko... I would not sully her memory by

> dishonorably leaving the people who welcomed me to their death. However...

> each day she remains unburied is one more fiery claw shredding me in my

> torment, in my guilt which guides every waking moment of my step!"

> - "Whose children are you, immortal ones? For it is not the wu jen

> Perorate who sired you,"Chen said quietly.

> - "We," Sarevok said darkly, "are children of Bhaal. And we

> can not be stopped."

Well said...

Great stuff,

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#5 Requiem

Posted 14 November 2002 - 05:26 AM

> Chen's servant put little porcelain bowls full with hot soup, scenting of

> ginger root, in front of everyone. There was also steamed rice and pork in

> a spicy sauce. Sarevok and Peri didn't fail to notice that it was a

> festive meal, which caused them to frown a bit. It was not any special

> occasion to their knowledge.

Mmmm...sounds tasty! Why wait for a special occasion!

> ."

> - "That," Shui said, "is the civilized way. The poetry of

> language, the subtle understanding of nature of society and its functions,

> makes much of what separates a man of a beast."

What a lovely way to express this!

Like the way you're developing the political situation and also wrapping it around Sarevok's mission. Good chapter!

j.


#6 Guest_Ophidia_*

Posted 14 November 2002 - 12:29 PM

> Chen's servant put little porcelain bowls full with hot soup, scenting of

> ginger root, in front of everyone. There was also steamed rice and pork in

> a spicy sauce. Sarevok and Peri didn't fail to notice that it was a

> festive meal, which caused them to frown a bit. It was not any special

> occasion to their knowledge.

I don't like pork, but it still sounds delicious! It's nearly lunchtime here and my stomach is growling.

> - "I went to the marshals, may rose petals cover their way..."

> Chen stopped abruptly.

> - "Make it rose thorns instead and make them lose their shoes in the

> bargain!" she burst. "I find your company... refreshing. I feel

> I can speak the naked truths, instead of the ones properly clothed. But

> that is dangerous... still, I will enjoy it for now."

Hehehe, she is becoming Westernized!

> - "I have never had any great difficulty in saying exactly what I

> think, in no uncertain terms," Peri shrugged. "But then, no-one

> ever demanded me not to."

> - "That is not the way of the Shou," Chen said. She didn't add

> that the Shou generally found such straigth-forwardness barbaric.

> - "I must say that I have developed an odd fascination with your

> oblique way of communication," Sarevok said. "Not unlike games

> of strategy - only played with words and social conventions instead."

It'd drive me up the wall in about five seconds. I bet Winski likes it, though. I'm surprised Sarry does- wouldn't he prefer directness?

> - "That," Shui said, "is the civilized way. The poetry of

> language, the subtle understanding of nature of society and its functions,

> makes much of what separates a man of a beast."

> Peri smiled, reminded of Anomen.

> - "Beasts can be refreshingly uncomplicated at times, though. As far

> as I am concerned, man is only half a man - the other half is nothing more

> than a beast," she said.

> - "A... novel thought. Very interesting," Shui replied, not

> looking Peri in the eye.

> He is irritatingly cute like Ano is, Peri thought. Full of himself on the

> surface, yet so insecure inside. Would be funny to rattle him a little,

> see what he is made of... but for Chen's sake, I'll leave him alone.

So you should! Don't pick on someone because they remind you of someone else, it's totally unfair. In fact, picking on anyone is totally unfair. Be told, Peri!

> - "But we were about to discuss the marshals," Sarevok said,

> uneasy about the spark he had briefly perceived in Peri's eyes. "I

> take it you weren't please with the outcome of the meeting."

> - "The marshals are not real chanshi - and it bears mentioning that I

> would lose my head for saying so," Chen said. "Perhaps they once

> were, perhaps they never served and protected but only pranced in

> beautiful uniforms, attending balls and holding administrative positions.

> At any rate, now they are content with their enjoyable lot in life, and

> they do not want to hear what would upset the things as they perceive

> them. They are fools, really - like a shipbuilder who thinks that his ship

> can not sink! No matter how wonderfully built the ship, if she is made of

> wood she can sink, and sometimes she will. Shou Lung is mighty, yes... but

> the mightiest of empires can fall if its guardians don't stay

> vigilant."

> - "And you told them that you suspect that Yun-Men Khan might try to

> invade Shou Lung?" Peri said.

> - "Yes, young yet immortal one," Chen smiled bitterly.

> "They ridiculed me, asked for proof..."

> Peri snorted, interrupting the other woman.

> - "Yeah, like the Khan will up and leave proof and clues lying around

> if she is any good - and I gather she must be if she has gone as far as

> making a real army of those nomads."

She is _very_ good.

> - "It is my fear, as a servant of Shou Lung, that the proof will be

> Yun-Men Khan's troops running all over our cities, burning everything in

> their way," Chen said.

> - "She seems to be above mindless destruction, however," Sarevok

> remarked, "as she must supply her armies by the lands she has

> conquered. I would advocate intelligence efforts."

> - "My marshals... promised to think carefully on my warnings. That

> means nothing will happen, in your way of talking," Chen said.

> There was an awkward silence that even Umikaze seemed to sense somehow.

> Her round, blue eyes wondered about it, and Peri patted her head

> reassuringly.

> - "So... there is no help available from your superiors, no

> reinforcements, no spies, mages, nada," Peri said. She sighed deeply,

> avoiding Chen's gaze. "And let me guess. You would like us to help

> you out."

> - "I do realize Shou Lung is not your empire," Chen said

> stiffly. "Nor can I offer anything to you.you could not get

> yourselves."

> - "Chen... I respect you. I do. And Ankiang is full of very decent

> people, I'm sure. We have been treated well. But... I have a small child

> here. I would not want her in the middle of the warzone, and I would kinda

> like to spend some quality time with her, raising her and so. Settling

> down for a while and getting to know Kozakura sort of thing," Peri

> explained. "And not only that, you are aware of Sarevok's mission.

> You should know how important it is to Tamoko's people to be buried

> properly in their own soil. Now and then I see Tamoko in my dreams, and

> she waits... her soul is restless and yearning. Sarevok suffers,

> too."

> - "You are correct, immortal one," Chen said. "I am a

> mother myself."

> She looked unhappy and anxious, Shui looking at her an alarmed expression

> on his face.

> - "This tears my soul like claws of a demon!" Sarevok exclaimed.

> "Honor, so important to Tamoko... I would not sully her memory by

> dishonorably leaving the people who welcomed me to their death. However...

> each day she remains unburied is one more fiery claw shredding me in my

> torment, in my guilt which guides every waking moment of my step!"

> - "Whose children are you, immortal ones? For it is not the wu jen

> Perorate who sired you,"Chen said quietly.

> - "We," Sarevok said darkly, "are children of Bhaal. And we

> can not be stopped."

Ooh, what a tough decision to make. I think I know what they'll decide though!


Glorious Train Wrecks

#7 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 14 November 2002 - 12:33 PM

> Aribeth : *On the phone, ordering take-out*

I love Chinese food *drool*

> Hmmm, a very Freudian thought too, perhaps. :) Heh, I just finished

> watching 'Enemy within' some minutes ago, a classic Trek episode where

> Kirk was split in a good and evil half by a transporter accident. The

> point of the episode was that one side cannot exist without the other.

I believe that too - we are both animals and something else.

> Awww... ;) :)

Best that way, I think.

> Heh. Maybe the proof he needs is the Khan's spear at his throat before he

> takes action. :D

Exactly!

> Well said...

> Great stuff,

> ---Weyoun

Thanks!


Road of redemption

#8 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 14 November 2002 - 12:35 PM

> Mmmm...sounds tasty! Why wait for a special occasion!

I think special food must be a little scarce up there.

> What a lovely way to express this!

Thanks :)

> Like the way you're developing the political situation and also wrapping

> it around Sarevok's mission. Good chapter!

> j.

I'm glad you enjoy it! There are going to be some... interesting times.


Road of redemption

#9 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 14 November 2002 - 12:37 PM

> I don't like pork, but it still sounds delicious! It's nearly lunchtime

> here and my stomach is growling.

I don't like pork that much either (except some special ways to cook it), but I love chinese food.

> Hehehe, she is becoming Westernized!

At least to a point.

> It'd drive me up the wall in about five seconds. I bet Winski likes it,

> though. I'm surprised Sarry does- wouldn't he prefer directness?

In general, definitely. But it intrigues him at the moment, as he sees it as an intellectual game. He would lose his patience with it very quickly though, and we'd get to witness a Sarry Rant ™.

> So you should! Don't pick on someone because they remind you of someone

> else, it's totally unfair. In fact, picking on anyone is totally unfair.

> Be told, Peri!

Yah. Be nice, Peri.

> She is _very_ good.

Just like Genghis was.

> Ooh, what a tough decision to make. I think I know what they'll decide

> though!

We will see...


Road of redemption

#10 Arcalian

Posted 15 November 2002 - 10:36 PM

> - "That," Shui said, "is the civilized way. The poetry of

> language, the subtle understanding of nature of society and its functions,

> makes much of what separates a man of a beast."

Adrian: *snort* Oh yes, cold treachery from a distance is so much more "noble" than honest combat. Right. I'm sure Cyric would agree.

> - "Chen... I respect you. I do. And Ankiang is full of very decent

> people, I'm sure. We have been treated well. But... I have a small child

> here. I would not want her in the middle of the warzone, and I would kinda

> like to spend some quality time with her, raising her and so. Settling

> down for a while and getting to know Kozakura sort of thing," Peri

> explained. "And not only that, you are aware of Sarevok's mission.

> You should know how important it is to Tamoko's people to be buried

> properly in their own soil. Now and then I see Tamoko in my dreams, and

> she waits... her soul is restless and yearning. Sarevok suffers,

> too."

> - "You are correct, immortal one," Chen said. "I am a

> mother myself."

> She looked unhappy and anxious, Shui looking at her an alarmed expression

> on his face.

> - "This tears my soul like claws of a demon!" Sarevok exclaimed.

> "Honor, so important to Tamoko... I would not sully her memory by

> dishonorably leaving the people who welcomed me to their death. However...

> each day she remains unburied is one more fiery claw shredding me in my

> torment, in my guilt which guides every waking moment of my step!"

> - "Whose children are you, immortal ones? For it is not the wu jen

> Perorate who sired you,"Chen said quietly.

> - "We," Sarevok said darkly, "are children of Bhaal. And we

> can not be stopped."

Oh dear Sarry, oh dear...

I get the feeling they will wind up helping wether they like it or not.


Adrian
The road to the abyss may be paved with good intentions, but it is those with bad intentions that race down that road as fast as they can.




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