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#21 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 05:59 AM

> *snerk*

> Theros: I never wanted fame.

> Adrian: Nor I, just money.

Hehehe, well it isn't Jarran himself doing the bragging.

> Very interesting.

She had to want a squire for *some* reason.

> Uh oh....

*grin*

> HEH!

That's how it worked out in my game, I just let them wipe each other out. Hey, I didn't get as many XP, but it made getting Celestial Fury easier.

> Oh my!

With the item description, I'm surprised nobody else has thought of seeing if Larry was really in the sword.

> *Adrian grits his teeth and throttles Jaheira*

Jarran (growling): I'd recommend letting her go before you hurt her, brother. *taps axe handle and glares*

> Never mind him. Well written as always.

Thanks!



#22 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 06:13 AM

> I actually gave Lilarcor to Minsc in my first game. Seemed an appropriate

> match. In my second game there was noone in my group that could wield

> two-handed swords, so he got left at the Keep early on.

I let Minsc have him, too, but lordie he was annoying.

> ? ? ?

> If Jarran looks like the portrait on the novel website... I am not at all

> surprised at their reaction.

Well, he does have a high charisma... he just never got close enough to use it.

> Ooops, indeed. Added a couple extra therapy sesssions that they'll need.

LOL!

> Mazzy to the rescue!

Tada!

> Ah, yes... Remind them of their plumage and of all the hens in the next

> cage... :)

Boys will be boys. :D

> I *do* hope that all of the slavers got chunked. No hope for resurrection.

> :)

Rotting on the floor, I assure you.

> Slight confusion here. 'He and Jaheira...' Khalid or Jarran? I'm assuming

> Khalid, but you had another 'he' prior to this one that referred to

> Jarran.

The 'he' was Jarran, but it could use clarification in the edits.

> 'SUPER-MAZ'

*snicker* That's not the nickname she'll have...

> Now go forth, and spread the legend that is Jarran!

Hey, it's not his fault everybody talks about him.

> '...old enough to be apprenticed...' or just 'to apprentice'?

'Be'. Typo.

> Whatever destiny he had... Mazzy just took it over.

*grin* His destiny won't be what he thinks, but... we'll see if it's Mazzy who changes it.

> That's my first reaction, too - regroup into a defensible position. It is

> a little annoying when they have the cutscene that reorganizes your party

> and makes you react with everyone out of place.

Oooh I hate that!

> Let's you and him fight....

Hey, it worked!

> Don't fall for it, Jarran!

> I warned you...(sigh)

Yes, Jarran peeled some paint off the wall with the profanity.

> You are here because you were - *are* - an idiot...

> Well, sharp and edgy....

Hee!

> Nice way of incorporating that dialogue. It always seemed to be missing

> the first half of it.

I never quite liked it either. 'What do you mean how did the battle make me feel? Hot, sweaty, and covered with other people's blood, what else should I feel?"

> I have always liked a lot of Jaheira's lovetalk dialogues. There is so

> much more to Jaheira than just the hardened warrior with a sharp tongue.

> Unfortunately - like Anomen - you don't see too much of it unless you are

> in the romance with her...

True, though they did soften her enough that you see it in the regular dialogues, too.

> Nice 'Awwwwwww' moment at the end, too. :)

> Well, inspiration must have struck. I wasn't expecting a part from you for

> some time.... Glad you found the time for this one!

> The 'Awwww'-ing Mutant

Well, RL took a turn for the better and gave me some free time. Though some parts will be coming soon. I have a section or two to write, and then I can release a block of stories I've been sitting on for quite some time.



#23 Guest_Dallan_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 06:16 AM

> “I swear before all that is holy, sword, if you don't shut up I'm going

> to beat you into a plowshare!”

*cackle* What an amusing idea!

> Jarran sighed. What a pity he was the only who could use that stupid

> blade. He had to agree with Kay, the sword had been nothing but trouble

> from the moment he had taken possession of it. It had started with the cry

> of “We're here to kill you!” when they entered the building from the

> sewers, bringing a horde of guards charging their way, but the straw that

> had broken the camel's back was its refusal to stop screaming “Murder!

> Death! Kill!” while they were trying to calm the crying enslaved children.

> The poor things were still huddled in their cages, terrified to come out.

Now, if only they'd implemented that ingame, no one would take the bloody thing. :)

> Jaheira approached him, a frown on her face. “I am unsure of what we

> should do, Jarran. I cannot coax the children out, and they become

> hysterical when Valygar and Anomen come near them. Do you think you could

> try?”

> “I'll do my best.” About two dozen dirty, wide-eyed youngsters watched him

> until he stepped into the cage, then began to scream and wail in terror.

> He backed out quickly. “Oops.”

Err...hi? :)

> Mazzy marched past him, ignoring the tears, and walked to within a foot of

> the boys. “Now stop that this instant,” she said sternly. “You have

> survived a terrible experience, young ones. You should be proud! You are

> strong. You are brave. You have nothing to fear from these people, they

> have come to rescue you.”

Good job, Mazzy!

> As she spoke, the tears died away to sniffles, and smiles began to appear.

> The boys started to stand straighter, and one said, “You're really here to

> rescue us?”

> “We have, ah, taken care of all the slavers that held you here, and now we

> will take you away from this place. Now, I have a very important task for

> you boys. You must come with me to the girls' cage and show them how brave

> you are. This will help them be brave as well.”

> At these words, there was a sudden flurry of eyes being wiped and faces

> rubbed. Jarran had to grin as he watched the youngsters clean themselves

> up to impress the young girls.

*smirk*

> Jarran was happy to see that the other children had no more than scratches

> and bruises. He watched Jaheira tending to the whipped girl, and a smile

> came to his face. She was so gentle and kind with the child, soothing the

> traumatized girl with a tenderness that those who had experienced her

> sharp tongue might not have believed possible. The image of Jaheira as a

> mother came into his mind. I wonder why she and Khalid never… He brought

> that line of thought to a halt. It was silly to think about that. He and

> Jaheira would never have children.

Aww...

> Anomen's jaw clenched when he saw the record sheet. “I know of this place.

> A palatial and luxurious estate, mere steps from the Order and the Temple.

> They dare to operate amongst the very gods themselves.”

I wonder, then, why the holy orders haven't gone there in force long before now.

> Jarran smiled as he quietly passed Hendak a bag of gold. “Some of them are

> old enough to apprenticed somewhere, and I'm sure some of the adults would

> be willing to adopt a number of them after they have established

> themselves. The ones who want to return to their native countries might

> find caretakers among the adults who are going home. If you need more gold

> to care for them, let me know. I can be reached through the Five Flagons

> Playhouse.”

> “Ah, you are too kind.”

> “Not at all. Let's just say… I know what it's like to be in a cage.”

Dallan: *sigh* As do we all, brother. As do we all.

> “I must say, in the time that I have traveled with you, you have proven

> yourself to be a person of good heart, Jarran. What you have done for

> those poor slaves assures me that I have found the right person to travel

> with.”

> “Thank you, Mazzy. Thank you for judging me for who I am rather than what

> people think I am.”

Aw. I should take Mazzy, one of these games. She sounds like a person I'd like to know.

> “Then start your own order of knighthood.”

> Mazzy looked startled. “Begin… my own?”

Nice little idea!

> Mazzy smiled as she said, “I am merely considering who would be a suitable

> candidate for my first squire.” Her eyes seemed to linger on Valygar, who

> did not appear aware that he was being scrutinized.

I'm glad to see a reason for that. I was always a bit leery of Mazzy turning Valygar into basically a servant without any context.

> “A nishruu!” Jan gasped. “They're magic eaters!”

Jan, being brief? Surely you jest.

(I saw a ToB dialog from Jan, where you're attacked by Githyanki in Watcher's Keep, and Jan starts telling a story about astral turnips, for $DEITY's sake...)

> As they readied themselves to go up the sweeping staircase, Jarran heard a

> faint whine. “Don't leave me out of all the fun. I was in a sewer forever

> and ever, and now you keep me cooped up in this thing.”

> The bard sighed. “I'll give you one last chance, Lilarcor. You keep your

> mouth…or whatever it is you use shut, and I'll let you out.”

How nice of him.

> They crept up the stairs, then peered into the large room at the top. A

> group of people and creatures appeared to be huddled in a discussion.

> “Jan, we should toss a couple of fireballs their way while they aren't

> paying attention,” Jarran whispered.

> Suddenly a loud voice rang out, “Awww! Spells? You promised I'd get to

> have some fun!”

Bloody sword!

> Jarran was shaking with anger. His error in judgment could have cost

> lives. “Sword, you are going straight to the Adventurer's Mart. Though

> I'll be lucky to get more than a shaved copper for your sorry self!”

*chuckle*

> Feeling a surge of icy rage welling up from the pit of his stomach, Jarran

> roared. He swung the sword with all his might against the wall. He was not

> prepared for the results of his temper.

> The world seemed to slow as his eyes widened. The blade shattered into

> tiny silver shards, and in his shock he dropped the hilt. It bounced once,

> then clattered to the floor among the slivers. The party froze, startled

> by the sight.

Ooh, a plot twist!

> “Um, yes, a very good sword. There is a temple of Lathander just across

> the way, why don't we take you there and the priests will help you get

> home.”

> “All right. Gee, this is even better than beating that evil treant. I was

> a mighty sword!”

Now I'm _almost_ sorry I had Jaheira toss it into a furnace.

> Jarran left the young man to his happy thoughts as the group finished

> exploring the home. Valygar was pleased when Jarran presented him with a

> katana of obvious power.

Ah, _the_ katana. (I've never actually gotten it, not knowing that the GC was full of Slave Lords...)

> Jaheira joined him as they collected their equipment. “It would seem that

> for once your temper had a positive result.”

*snerk*

> She stared into his eyes for a long moment, then sighed. “You have an

> uncanny knack, Jarran, for holding a mirror up to my soul. I am... I am

> looking for excuses to avoid you... and what I feel. What is it about you

> that makes my resolve melt like butter in the sun? I suppose I have come

> to a crossroads. I must decide which direction to go, and never look

> back.”

> Jarran took her hands and said gently, “And I will still be there to help

> you, no matter what you decide.”

Aww...

Another excellent chapter...well done!

-D.


Ninefires Development Studios

#24 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 01:57 PM

> *cackle* What an amusing idea!

*grin* Though the idea is hardly original to me.

> Now, if only they'd implemented that ingame, no one would take the bloody

> thing. :)

Well, he doesn't warn the enemy, but murder-death-kill is one of Lilarcor's battle cries. For those who don't know, that's a sneaky joking reference to one of Bioware's earlier games, MDK.

> Err...hi? :)

Poor Jarran, he was only trying to help.

> Good job, Mazzy!

She thanks you.

> *smirk*

One of the undeniable facts of nature is that boys will try to impress girls.

> Aww...

Children are a rather touchy subject for Bhaalspawn.

> I wonder, then, why the holy orders haven't gone there in force long

> before now.

He said he knew about the estate, not that he knew slavers lived there. In Amn, the rich regularly throw big, ostentatious parties, and the slavers would do the same unless they wanted to stick out like a sore thumb. Besides, they'd probably enjoy living the high life. So most fellow nobles/rich know what each others homes look like. Growing up in the nobility, Anomen would be familiar with the high class homes in the area.

> Dallan: *sigh* As do we all, brother. As do we all.

That's one thing all the PCs have in common.

> Aw. I should take Mazzy, one of these games. She sounds like a person I'd

> like to know.

Some people think that her game dialogue sounds smug, but I think she's just someone that has reached a place they are comfortable with. And being her god's prototype for paladins, she works harder than a human paladin would at toeing the line.

> Nice little idea!

> I'm glad to see a reason for that. I was always a bit leery of Mazzy

> turning Valygar into basically a servant without any context.

It is rather odd how the game dialogue just sort of comes out of nowhere.

> Jan, being brief? Surely you jest.

> (I saw a ToB dialog from Jan, where you're attacked by Githyanki in

> Watcher's Keep, and Jan starts telling a story about astral turnips, for

> $DEITY's sake...)

Hehe, he doesn't want to attract the critter's attention.

> How nice of him.

Sometimes it doesn't pay to be nice.

> Bloody sword!

Aargh.

> *chuckle*

In the game I did at least get more than a copper.

> Ooh, a plot twist!

I do try to spice things up here and there. Another twist coming up soon, though it's one that's been used before. Some ideas are so good they scream to be re-used.

> Now I'm _almost_ sorry I had Jaheira toss it into a furnace.

BWAHAHAHA!!

> Ah, _the_ katana. (I've never actually gotten it, not knowing that the GC

> was full of Slave Lords...)

Well, actually in the game you wouldn't know. There are a number of 'leftover' quests in the game, and the Guarded Compound is one of them. There was supposed to be something that connected them to the slavers, but somewhere along the line things got changed, and all that was left in the game was killing them because the door guards were rude. I just re-established the link. There was supposed to be something that led you to the Twisted Rune door, too, but that got lost.

One of the most interesting 'lost quests' is the minor villian quest. There was supposed to be a point where a bunch of the irritants like Isaea Roenall, Vaelag, etc. were supposed to get together and come after you. They dropped it because it depended too much on people's NPC choices. You might wind up with a game where say, only one minor villian would appear. Not much challenge.

> *snerk*

That's Jaheira...

> Aww...

> Another excellent chapter...well done!

> -D.

Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it.



#25 Guest_Oyster Girl_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 03:41 PM

> Well, actually in the game you wouldn't know. There are a number of

> 'leftover' quests in the game, and the Guarded Compound is one of them.

> There was supposed to be something that connected them to the slavers, but

> somewhere along the line things got changed, and all that was left in the

> game was killing them because the door guards were rude. I just

> re-established the link.

IIRC, the clues were in Isaea's papers, and you had to get something from the Slave Lords to complete your proof against Isaea.

Me, I walked in, saw who I was talking to, and said, "Oh, fewmets." Then I thought about who and what equipment I had with me, and I grinned. Payback.

I survived the original A-series modules, you see. The beginning of BG2 was so reminiscent of A4 that my memory was well-primed when I finally met Sion and Ketta.

> There was supposed to be something that led you

> to the Twisted Rune door, too, but that got lost.

I need to dig out the details of that for Blue Screen. Now, where did Baldurdash run off to...?


City of Sorrows

#26 Guest_Ursula_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 05:18 PM

> I need to dig out the details of that for Blue Screen. Now, where did

> Baldurdash run off to...?

Thanks to Mr. Sauer...


Baldurdash

#27 Guest_Sarah_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 09:13 PM

> Hmm, yes; a pity indeed. I like to saddle Saint Keldorn w/ it, just to be perverse.

"Saint"? Wow, Keldorn, you've been promoted! ;) But what kind of saint is he? The patron of workaholics? Of youngsters who scrawl naughty songs into holy texts? Of long-suffering Bhaalspawn-mentors?

Hmm, wait. He can't claim that last title, because that particular honor belongs to Gorion.


#28 Guest_Ursula_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 09:21 PM

> "Saint"? Wow, Keldorn, you've been promoted! ;) But what kind of

> saint is he? The patron of workaholics? Of youngsters who scrawl naughty

> songs into holy texts? Of long-suffering Bhaalspawn-mentors?

> Hmm, wait. He can't claim that last title, because that particular honor

> belongs to Gorion.

ROTFLM_O! Oh my, a good laugh for a good Sunday. Thanks! ;)


#29 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 10 February 2002 - 10:09 PM

> "Saint"? Wow, Keldorn, you've been promoted! :) But what kind of

> saint is he? The patron of workaholics? Of youngsters who scrawl naughty

> songs into holy texts? Of long-suffering Bhaalspawn-mentors?

> Hmm, wait. He can't claim that last title, because that particular honor

> belongs to Gorion.

How about saint of warm, deep eyes that make some of us go weak in the knees? You have to remember that there are some of us here who are closer to Keldorn's age than Anomen's. ;)



#30 Guest_Sarah_*

Posted 11 February 2002 - 12:50 AM

> How about saint of warm, deep eyes that make some of us go weak in the knees?

> You have to remember that there are some of us here who are closer to

> Keldorn's age than Anomen's. ;)

Well, remember that I play on the other team, so my opinion on this doesn't count for much. :)





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