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#1 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 03 March 2008 - 09:42 AM

Chapter 93: A Hero's Welcome


The following afternoon found the group back in Trademeet, assembled in Lord Coprith's office and waiting quietly while the lord read a letter they'd brought from Cernd. It was a letter of truce; it detailed how Faldorn's actions had created the rift between them, it announced that the problem had been dealt with, it offered gifts of reparation, and it spoke of a desire to mend the gap. Lord Coprith read it slowly and thoroughly; when he finished, he put the letter down on his desk and looked questioningly at Mazzy.

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.

The lord glanced at the document in front of him, then looked up at Ember, and smiled. "It would appear we owe you a debt of gratitude! Not only did you return our lady knight to us, but you have also been instrumental in setting things right between us and the forest," he said. "I count you among the Heroes of Trademeet, and you shall be toasted and rewarded tonight!"

"Thank you," Ember said, feeling slightly bewildered. Heroes of Trademeet? Just for this?

As they left the Trade Hall a short while later, Ember turned to Mazzy. "All we did was deliver Cernd to the grove," she said. "He did all the actual work. As much as I like not being treated like a criminal anymore, I don't see that what we did deserves this kind of treatment."

"If not for you-"

"And you."

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."

"I see what you mean," Yoshimo said, and gestured down a side street that offered a clear view of a fountain in the middle of a town square. Several statues stood around the perimeter of the fountain; most were of humans, but one looked more like an elf, and two were the size of halflings.

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."

"Boo says you must miss your friends a lot," Minsc said.

"Yes, I do," Mazzy said, staring as if transfixed at the fountain. "But at least they rest honourably now; knowing that will make their absence easier to bear." With a sigh, she tore her gaze away from the statues, then turned towards at Ember and the others. "Come, my friends. Let's get you ready for tonight."

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That night, Ember and her companions were introduced as Heroes of Trademeet at a great party in the main chamber of the Trade Hall. In front of an assembly of Trademeet's nobles, merchants and guild masters, Lord Coprith held a speech about the renewed bonds of friendship between town and nature and the group's role in making it happen, and presented Ember with several magical items - four pieces of protective jewelry, and a small but powerfully enchanted shield - that the town had gained through dealings with previous Great Druids of the grove. As the group's actions had aided both Trademeet and the grove, it was only fitting that their reward should have ties to both parties, Lord Coprith proclaimed, and the hall rang with applause as Ember accepted the items from him.

After the speech, a throng of finely dressed people gathered around Ember and her companions, offering praises and congratulations and handshakes, and all eager to do so at the same time. A dizzying array of lords, ladies and merchants introduced themselves to Ember with a handful of flattering words; she barely had time to stammer a 'thank you' to each before they moved on and were replaced by another well-wisher. It was as chaotic and confusing as any battle, and it came as a relief when Trademeet's finest began to take more interest in each other and in the large, tidbit-laden tables that stood at either end of the hall, than in Ember. Weaving her way through the everchanging mesh of people that milled around the chamber, she headed towards one of the many benches that lined the walls and sat down with a weary sigh.

"All this attention is a little overwhelming, no?" Yoshimo asked, sitting down beside her.

"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.

She couldn't tell whether or not she actually minded.

At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.

Anomen, on the other hand, did not appear to be having a good time. The cleric had been in a bad mood ever since they arrived back in Trademeet, and judging by the dour look on his face as he approached Ember and Yoshimo, his mood had, if anything, worsened.

"Young Anomen! Why so glum on such a festive occasion?" Yoshimo asked.

"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.

"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

"Falsehood, you say?" Yoshimo asked. "What makes you so sure?"

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice. "She told us they like celebrating people here, didn't she? Just look at us, their newest Heroes..."

"Aye, perhaps, my lady," Anomen said, sounding not quite as irate, "but you may be in the wrong. And even should you be correct: will it stop at this, or will they one day address her as a paladin?"

If Arvoreen wills it," Mazzy said. The halfling was standing behind Anomen; her face was calm and collected, but there was a hurt look in her eyes. "Or do you think me not fit for such aspirations due to my parentage? My stature?"

The cleric's face turned red. "There... there has never been a halfling paladin."

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."

"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."

Clenching his fists and looking fit to burst, Anomen stared at the ground, then drew a deep breath and slowly exhaled. "The sooner we are gone from this wretched place, the better," he muttered. Ember was about to suggest that he go back to the inn and calm down when the main doors to the chamber burst open and a young man rushed in.

"By all the gods, you must help me!" the youth shouted in a panicked voice. "They've taken Raissa!"

Almost instantly, he was surrounded by a clamouring mass of people. "Tiris? We thought you still in Imnesvale!" a woman cried. "What has become of my daughter?!" a man bellowed, forcing his way through the crowd.

Shaking and stammering, Tiris told the story of how he and his bethrothed, Raissa, were on their way home from Imnesvale when they were assaulted by two men, who knocked them out and locked them up in a small shack. "They took Raissa away first... I was tied to a chair, and could do nothing to stop them," he moaned. "Later, one of them came for me, or so I thought. He untied me, and I managed to knock him over... I bolted out the door, and heard someone behind me... I... I saw him, I turned and saw him! He was a... a man, or a creature that looked like a man... but he had no skin!" A gasp went up from the crowd.

"All I saw was his... his muscles and sinew!" the youth continued. "He hissed, a dreadful sound, and tried to grab me, but I fled as quickly as I could. I heard it shout behind me, once... it said that it would get me, that it would find me. I didn't stop running until I couldn't hear it any more. What manner of creature could this be?" Tiris asked despairingly. "What kind of magic would create a horror such as this?!"

"Could you show us where the shack is?" Lord Coprith asked.

Tiris nodded. "It's not too far from the Southwest Gate."

"Good, good," the lord said. "Is there anything else you could tell me about them?"

"Um... I think I heard the name of one of the men, when they tok Raissa away. One of them called the other... Rajik, or something like that."

"Could it have been Rejiek?" Ember asked, raising her voice to be heard.

"Yes, that's it! That's his name! How did you know, my lady?"

"It is the name of a murderer that escaped from Athkatla recently."

"Oh... oh, no!" Tiris sobbed. "Raissa..."

Lord Coprith patted the youth's shoulder reassuringly. "Have no fear, lad, it may not be too late. Come, show us to the shack." Turning towards Ember, the lord added, "You are familiar with these villains. Will you assist us?"

"Of course!"

"We will take the bootheel to their evil ways!" Minsc bellowed, and joined the flock of guards that rushed out of the hall, following Tiris's lead.

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.

"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," Ember said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.

#2 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 03 March 2008 - 10:29 PM

The lord glanced at the document in front of him, then looked up at Ember, and smiled. "It would appear we owe you a debt of gratitude! Not only did you return our lady knight to us, but you have also been instrumental in setting things right between us and the forest," he said. "I count you among the Heroes of Trademeet, and you shall be toasted and rewarded tonight!"

"Thank you," Ember said, feeling slightly bewildered. Heroes of Trademeet? Just for this?


Sometimes people just need heroes... especially when they've been through some crazy stuff. Just look at it as them needing to make you a hero more than you need to feel like one.

"All this attention is a little overwhelming, no?" Yoshimo asked, sitting down beside her.

"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


Heh. Get used to it. There's going to be a little more of this before you're through. Granted, also a lot more horrible stuff. But hey, thems the breaks. :(

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


I kinda always hated how because 2E rules said halflings couldn't be paladins that they had to find some in-universe way of justifying why such things never happened. Mazzy's an example of that, and a saddening one. It means a lot to her to have the title, to be called a knight and such, and I think she's earned it.

Not that I think Anomen is any less deserving (assuming he doesn't go the CN route) but it really isn't fair, is it? That simply because he's human he gets the chance and she doesn't. Again, not to disparage him, but Mazzy's family, you imagine is a bit more well-respected than Cor ever was. She had a good upbringing, unlike him. She's more amiable around people unlike him when he's cranky. In many ways, she's more deserving of a knightship than he is. But he gets the chance because he's human. It's... a little silly at best, and out and out wrong at worst.

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Raven: "You know, I keep hoping that one day he'll get tired of being such a selfish twit."

Harlequin: "I hear electroshock therapy works -wonders.-"

Raven: "How about we just electrocute him?"

Harlequin: "We could do that."

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Well, of course not. It's hero time. ;)

#3 Guest_VigaHrolf_*

Posted 04 March 2008 - 05:19 AM

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.


.... well, except the bit about the red starling's flight. I didn't really get that bit. Nature metaphors, you know.

The lord glanced at the document in front of him, then looked up at Ember, and smiled. "It would appear we owe you a debt of gratitude! Not only did you return our lady knight to us, but you have also been instrumental in setting things right between us and the forest," he said. "I count you among the Heroes of Trademeet, and you shall be toasted and rewarded tonight!"


Aleria: *Smiles* "That was one of the nicer moments. Not that I need to be treated as a hero. Nor do I crave it..."

Jaheira: "But recognition for our blood, sweat and pain is nice every now and then."

Aleria: "Yes."

As they left the Trade Hall a short while later, Ember turned to Mazzy. "All we did was deliver Cernd to the grove," she said. "He did all the actual work. As much as I like not being treated like a criminal anymore, I don't see that what we did deserves this kind of treatment."

"If not for you-"

"And you."

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Bran: "Hey, go with it Ember. Being a hero is a hell of a lot better than being a criminal. Even if it is just a matter of definition and when you did what when. And not screwing it up too badly."

"I see what you mean," Yoshimo said, and gestured down a side street that offered a clear view of a fountain in the middle of a town square. Several statues stood around the perimeter of the fountain; most were of humans, but one looked more like an elf, and two were the size of halflings.


Aww... no statues for Ember N Company?

"Boo says you must miss your friends a lot," Minsc said.


Boo is wise.

"Yes, I do," Mazzy said, staring as if transfixed at the fountain. "But at least they rest honourably now; knowing that will make their absence easier to bear." With a sigh, she tore her gaze away from the statues, then turned towards at Ember and the others. "Come, my friends. Let's get you ready for tonight."


Poor Mazz. ;)

That night, Ember and her companions were introduced as Heroes of Trademeet at a great party in the main chamber of the Trade Hall. In front of an assembly of Trademeet's nobles, merchants and guild masters, Lord Coprith held a speech about the renewed bonds of friendship between town and nature and the group's role in making it happen, and presented Ember with several magical items - four pieces of protective jewelry, and a small but powerfully enchanted shield - that the town had gained through dealings with previous Great Druids of the grove. As the group's actions had aided both Trademeet and the grove, it was only fitting that their reward should have ties to both parties, Lord Coprith proclaimed, and the hall rang with applause as Ember accepted the items from him.


And then, the Hall rang with 70s Disco Party Favorites!

And Anomen and Edwin had a Dance Off!

"All this attention is a little overwhelming, no?" Yoshimo asked, sitting down beside her.


Bran: "Hey, well wishers and hand shakers can be annoying, tiring and a pain in the ass..."

Aleria: "A veritable whirlwind of borderline sincerity, platitudes and such..."

Bran: "Trays of overdone chicken, bad speeches and cheap wine..."

Aleria: "Trying to keep the names and faces and titles of a dozen people you'll never meet again straight..."

Bran: "But it sure as hell beats people poking you with pointy sticks."

Aleria: "Or that same group leading the proverbial horde of 'righteous' citizenry."

"Young Anomen! Why so glum on such a festive occasion?" Yoshimo asked.


"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.


Bran: "Simple. Logistics measured his shorts incorrectly and he's too uptight to get them to correct their mistake and give him the proper sized shorts. Make anyone cranky, wearing shorts two sizes too small."

Aleria: "He is not that bad."

Bran: "Right."

"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

"Falsehood, you say?" Yoshimo asked. "What makes you so sure?"

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


I have to agree with Alpha here. While I understand why they did it mechanically (following the evolution of DnD to ADD 1st edition to ADD 2nd edition), the justifications always rang a little false. How could dwarves, a generally very Lawful race, not have pallies? Or any race.

Aleria: "All can serve their god, all can take up the mantle. The recognition of an Order matters not, only that of one's god. The earthly recognition is not needed. While I was honored to accept the Order of the Radiant Heart's invitation, I did not need it. It changed not my relationship with Tyr nor my dedication. Mazzy Fentan is as much a paladin as I am."

If Arvoreen wills it," Mazzy said. The halfling was standing behind Anomen; her face was calm and collected, but there was a hurt look in her eyes. "Or do you think me not fit for such aspirations due to my parentage? My stature?"


Mazz with the smackdown.

"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."


Yeowch. ;)

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Bran: "Adrenaline junkie... just like the rest of us. Welcome to the club." *He smiles*

Great chapter Cel. Great transitions as well. :(

VH

#4 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 04 March 2008 - 03:03 PM

The following afternoon found the group back in Trademeet, assembled in Lord Coprith's office and waiting quietly while the lord read a letter they'd brought from Cernd. It was a letter of truce; it detailed how Faldorn's actions had created the rift between them, it announced that the problem had been dealt with, it offered gifts of reparation, and it spoke of a desire to mend the gap. Lord Coprith read it slowly and thoroughly; when he finished, he put the letter down on his desk and looked questioningly at Mazzy.


Still, I don’t think the druids will be welcome in the city for a few years yet. ;)

As they left the Trade Hall a short while later, Ember turned to Mazzy. "All we did was deliver Cernd to the grove," she said. "He did all the actual work. As much as I like not being treated like a criminal anymore, I don't see that what we did deserves this kind of treatment."


Well… she is kind of right about that! But hey, they want to sing you praises and kiss the ground you thread upon – it would be insulting to refuse, I think!

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Pfffft… how is Ember supposed to get all that yummy Exp if those NPC’s keep stealing it away! Not to mention the statues, grrr!

"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


She really could do with a light injection of the Flashy Hero Potion. ;)

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Actually, he doesn’t even have to be prejudiced here, because if she was a member of a knightly order, she would probably be bearing some kind of insignia or something.

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice. "She told us they like celebrating people here, didn't she? Just look at us, their newest Heroes..."


Well, you know, Anomen also would like to simply proclaim himself to be a knight, and have everyone else call him like that as well.

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


Well, I guess issuing death threats to Evil alignment people falls into that category as well, huh, Mazzy? (that was a reference to her banter with Viconia, btw. ;))

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."


I only know that you are incredibly full of yourself. :)

"All I saw was his... his muscles and sinew!" the youth continued. "He hissed, a dreadful sound, and tried to grab me, but I fled as quickly as I could. I heard it shout behind me, once... it said that it would get me, that it would find me. I didn't stop running until I couldn't hear it any more. What manner of creature could this be?" Tiris asked despairingly. "What kind of magic would create a horror such as this?!"


Ah nice, looks like Rejiek will finally be dealt with. Good. :)

Lord Coprith patted the youth's shoulder reassuringly. "Have no fear, lad, it may not be too late. Come, show us to the shack." Turning towards Ember, the lord added, "You are familiar with these villains. Will you assist us?"


Of course, but where do you think YOU are headed? :( Stealing our EXP again, are you?

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Hi, Edwin! :)

...and bye, Edwin. :)

#5 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 04 March 2008 - 09:59 PM

The lord glanced at the document in front of him, then looked up at Ember, and smiled. "It would appear we owe you a debt of gratitude! Not only did you return our lady knight to us, but you have also been instrumental in setting things right between us and the forest," he said. "I count you among the Heroes of Trademeet, and you shall be toasted and rewarded tonight!"

"Thank you," Ember said, feeling slightly bewildered. Heroes of Trademeet? Just for this?


Sometimes people just need heroes... especially when they've been through some crazy stuff. Just look at it as them needing to make you a hero more than you need to feel like one.


Trademeet strikes me as a place that probably sees a lot of stuff that needs heroes. So I decided that they like discovering heroes ;)

"All this attention is a little overwhelming, no?" Yoshimo asked, sitting down beside her.

"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


Heh. Get used to it. There's going to be a little more of this before you're through. Granted, also a lot more horrible stuff. But hey, thems the breaks. :(


She's never been much of a party girl. That was Imoen's role. Ember's the one who doesn't dance, but sits back and watches instead.

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


I kinda always hated how because 2E rules said halflings couldn't be paladins that they had to find some in-universe way of justifying why such things never happened. Mazzy's an example of that, and a saddening one. It means a lot to her to have the title, to be called a knight and such, and I think she's earned it.


When I played Everquest and they introduced halfling paladins, I promptly made one. She was adorable ;)

In many ways, I think it means more to Mazzy than to Anomen, but in different ways.

Not that I think Anomen is any less deserving (assuming he doesn't go the CN route) but it really isn't fair, is it? That simply because he's human he gets the chance and she doesn't. Again, not to disparage him, but Mazzy's family, you imagine is a bit more well-respected than Cor ever was. She had a good upbringing, unlike him. She's more amiable around people unlike him when he's cranky. In many ways, she's more deserving of a knightship than he is. But he gets the chance because he's human. It's... a little silly at best, and out and out wrong at worst.


Anomen obsesses about not being a paladin or a knight because he is scared he's undeserving.

(My) Mazzy has not been called to be a paladin. She has been called to be a Truesword, which is not much different, and has chosen to content herself with that (she longs to be a true paladin, though). Her obstacle is not being undeserving, it's her race, and hers is more insurmountable :) However, she follows the code of paladins. She may not be able to lay hands, and she may not have an order, but she IS a knight, and both her home town and the shade lord recognize that in her.

Anomen can't admit to himself that he sees it in her, too (because how can she be a knight if he is not?), and chooses instead to get irate at the fallacy he tells himself he is witnessing whenever they call her a knight.

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Raven: "You know, I keep hoping that one day he'll get tired of being such a selfish twit."


I haven't decided. Redeeming the evil character is a bit clicheed, after all.

Harlequin: "I hear electroshock therapy works -wonders.-"

Raven: "How about we just electrocute him?"

Harlequin: "We could do that."


Other than the fact that he has boots of grounding, I commend and applaud you on your idea ;)

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Well, of course not. It's hero time. :)


Much more fun than being served polite phrases!

#6 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 04 March 2008 - 10:12 PM


"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.


.... well, except the bit about the red starling's flight. I didn't really get that bit. Nature metaphors, you know.


;)


The lord glanced at the document in front of him, then looked up at Ember, and smiled. "It would appear we owe you a debt of gratitude! Not only did you return our lady knight to us, but you have also been instrumental in setting things right between us and the forest," he said. "I count you among the Heroes of Trademeet, and you shall be toasted and rewarded tonight!"


Aleria: *Smiles* "That was one of the nicer moments. Not that I need to be treated as a hero. Nor do I crave it..."

Jaheira: "But recognition for our blood, sweat and pain is nice every now and then."

Aleria: "Yes."


Ember: Well, I suppose so... but shouldn't Cernd be called a Hero of Trademeet instead of us? We just escorted him!

Mazzy: You also rescued me and destroyed the Shade Lord.

Ember. Oh. Right. ...Except we'd done that before we first arrived, and they almost arrested me!

Edwin: (I don't care as long as they pay us handsomely.)


A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Bran: "Hey, go with it Ember. Being a hero is a hell of a lot better than being a criminal. Even if it is just a matter of definition and when you did what when. And not screwing it up too badly."


She was perfectly fine with being treated like a hero in Imnesvale, mind you :)


"I see what you mean," Yoshimo said, and gestured down a side street that offered a clear view of a fountain in the middle of a town square. Several statues stood around the perimeter of the fountain; most were of humans, but one looked more like an elf, and two were the size of halflings.


Aww... no statues for Ember N Company?


Nope. I wanted Mazzy's group to not be inept, and I didn't want all the crises to accidentally happen all at once just as my group arrived ;)


"Boo says you must miss your friends a lot," Minsc said.


Boo is wise.


Yes.


"Yes, I do," Mazzy said, staring as if transfixed at the fountain. "But at least they rest honourably now; knowing that will make their absence easier to bear." With a sigh, she tore her gaze away from the statues, then turned towards at Ember and the others. "Come, my friends. Let's get you ready for tonight."


Poor Mazz. :)


In many ways, the game skims too lightly over the fact that she loses her beloved to the Shade Lord.

And then, the Hall rang with 70s Disco Party Favorites!


:D

And Anomen and Edwin had a Dance Off!


;)


"All this attention is a little overwhelming, no?" Yoshimo asked, sitting down beside her.


Bran: "Hey, well wishers and hand shakers can be annoying, tiring and a pain in the ass..."

Aleria: "A veritable whirlwind of borderline sincerity, platitudes and such..."

Bran: "Trays of overdone chicken, bad speeches and cheap wine..."

Aleria: "Trying to keep the names and faces and titles of a dozen people you'll never meet again straight..."

Bran: "But it sure as hell beats people poking you with pointy sticks."

Aleria: "Or that same group leading the proverbial horde of 'righteous' citizenry."


I think they pretty much nailed it :P


"Young Anomen! Why so glum on such a festive occasion?" Yoshimo asked.

"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.


Bran: "Simple. Logistics measured his shorts incorrectly and he's too uptight to get them to correct their mistake and give him the proper sized shorts. Make anyone cranky, wearing shorts two sizes too small."

Aleria: "He is not that bad."

Bran: "Right."


At least, mine isn't rude enough to curse her to her face. (I actually altered the dialogue in my game to make him a tad less harsh and to allow my PC to tell him to stuff his attitude a bit more firmly)


"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


I have to agree with Alpha here. While I understand why they did it mechanically (following the evolution of DnD to ADD 1st edition to ADD 2nd edition), the justifications always rang a little false. How could dwarves, a generally very Lawful race, not have pallies? Or any race.


Anomen's just being a jealous Lawful butthead here.

Aleria: "All can serve their god, all can take up the mantle. The recognition of an Order matters not, only that of one's god. The earthly recognition is not needed. While I was honored to accept the Order of the Radiant Heart's invitation, I did not need it. It changed not my relationship with Tyr nor my dedication. Mazzy Fentan is as much a paladin as I am."


Exactly.


If Arvoreen wills it," Mazzy said. The halfling was standing behind Anomen; her face was calm and collected, but there was a hurt look in her eyes. "Or do you think me not fit for such aspirations due to my parentage? My stature?"


Mazz with the smackdown.


He deserved it :(


"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."


Yeowch. :P


Like I said... he deserved it.

And she deserved to say it.

Great chapter Cel. Great transitions as well. :)


Glad you liked the transitions, I struggled a bit with stringing it together :)

#7 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 04 March 2008 - 10:18 PM

The following afternoon found the group back in Trademeet, assembled in Lord Coprith's office and waiting quietly while the lord read a letter they'd brought from Cernd. It was a letter of truce; it detailed how Faldorn's actions had created the rift between them, it announced that the problem had been dealt with, it offered gifts of reparation, and it spoke of a desire to mend the gap. Lord Coprith read it slowly and thoroughly; when he finished, he put the letter down on his desk and looked questioningly at Mazzy.


Still, I don’t think the druids will be welcome in the city for a few years yet. ;)


Not Ember's problem, as she won't be living in that grove :)

As they left the Trade Hall a short while later, Ember turned to Mazzy. "All we did was deliver Cernd to the grove," she said. "He did all the actual work. As much as I like not being treated like a criminal anymore, I don't see that what we did deserves this kind of treatment."


Well… she is kind of right about that! But hey, they want to sing you praises and kiss the ground you thread upon – it would be insulting to refuse, I think!


You're probably right :)

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Pfffft… how is Ember supposed to get all that yummy Exp if those NPC’s keep stealing it away! Not to mention the statues, grrr!


The statues are tacky, and she gets all the exp smuggled in between chapters.

"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


She really could do with a light injection of the Flashy Hero Potion. ;)


It's just not her style, you know?

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Actually, he doesn’t even have to be prejudiced here, because if she was a member of a knightly order, she would probably be bearing some kind of insignia or something.


She's not in an order. Like he said, none would accept her.

She is, however, a knight.

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice. "She told us they like celebrating people here, didn't she? Just look at us, their newest Heroes..."


Well, you know, Anomen also would like to simply proclaim himself to be a knight, and have everyone else call him like that as well.


The problem with that is that he isn't a knight. Not yet, at least.

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


Well, I guess issuing death threats to Evil alignment people falls into that category as well, huh, Mazzy? (that was a reference to her banter with Viconia, btw. ;))


How about the one she has with Edwin?

(A lot of her lines in her smackdown here were lifted from her dialogues with Aerie and Minsc.)

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."


I only know that you are incredibly full of yourself. :P


Will it help if I tell you she's already 'left the group' at this point?

"All I saw was his... his muscles and sinew!" the youth continued. "He hissed, a dreadful sound, and tried to grab me, but I fled as quickly as I could. I heard it shout behind me, once... it said that it would get me, that it would find me. I didn't stop running until I couldn't hear it any more. What manner of creature could this be?" Tiris asked despairingly. "What kind of magic would create a horror such as this?!"


Ah nice, looks like Rejiek will finally be dealt with. Good. :D


But of course!

Lord Coprith patted the youth's shoulder reassuringly. "Have no fear, lad, it may not be too late. Come, show us to the shack." Turning towards Ember, the lord added, "You are familiar with these villains. Will you assist us?"


Of course, but where do you think YOU are headed? :( Stealing our EXP again, are you?


Pff, so worried about the exp when there's more than enough to go around :)

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Hi, Edwin! :)

...and bye, Edwin. :P


He'll get his 15 minutes of fame, don't worry.

#8 Guest_Futurist_*

Posted 05 March 2008 - 11:11 AM

"If not for you-"

"And you."

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Ah, A nice scene.

"I see what you mean," Yoshimo said, and gestured down a side street that offered a clear view of a fountain in the middle of a town square. Several statues stood around the perimeter of the fountain; most were of humans, but one looked more like an elf, and two were the size of halflings.

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Nice twist on it. You`d think Mazzy and her gang would have been a bit more noticed in their home town.


At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


Is Edwin getting proposals to haunt the local tombs mayhap?




"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

"Falsehood, you say?" Yoshimo asked. "What makes you so sure?"

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Way to be an ass Ano!

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice. "She told us they like celebrating people here, didn't she? Just look at us, their newest Heroes..."

"Aye, perhaps, my lady," Anomen said, sounding not quite as irate, "but you may be in the wrong. And even should you be correct: will it stop at this, or will they one day address her as a paladin?"

If Arvoreen wills it," Mazzy said. The halfling was standing behind Anomen; her face was calm and collected, but there was a hurt look in her eyes. "Or do you think me not fit for such aspirations due to my parentage? My stature?"

The cleric's face turned red. "There... there has never been a halfling paladin."

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."

"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.


This might have something to do with his own doubts and such no?

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."

Clenching his fists and looking fit to burst, Anomen stared at the ground, then drew a deep breath and slowly exhaled. "The sooner we are gone from this wretched place, the better," he muttered. Ember was about to suggest that he go back to the inn and calm down when the main doors to the chamber burst open and a young man rushed in.


Well, Mazzy is kind of right...

"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Fleshdancer ass kicking is always ivigorating.

#9 Laufey

Posted 06 March 2008 - 07:09 PM

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Oh, that was a nice touch. :wink:


"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


Mmm, I can understand her, I'm not a fan of huge parties with lots of strangers myself.


At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


I assume that's what's his name, the nobleman who wants to hire you for the graveyard mission?


"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Oh, *that* conversation. One of Ano's worst moments, I always thought.

"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.


What about simple courtesy and manners, I might add.


"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.


She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Adventuring is much better than parties anyway. :wink:
Rogues do it from behind.

#10 Guest_Ananke_*

Posted 07 March 2008 - 06:53 PM

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.

My liege? But I thought that in Trademeet, the Lord is just a better merchant--

Seriously, though. Is it just me, or is Amn peerage system as hard to understand as any real-life one? I mean, Valygar's a noble, Anomen's a noble, Nalia's a noble, except that Valygar and Anomen don't have titles and--

a small but powerfully enchanted shield - that the town had gained through dealings with previous Great Druids of the grove. As the group's actions had aided both Trademeet and the grove, it was only fitting that their reward should have ties to both parties, Lord Coprith proclaimed, and the hall rang with applause as Ember accepted the items from him.

A scimitar from the druids, and a shield from the city... Perfect. Although the way you write it, it's 'a shield from the city and the druids', but I prefer my creative interpretation. :D

At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.

Ember, the gourmet: can spot a honeyed chicken leg from ten steps away! :wink:

It's horrible that I have to ask and don't remember - so, Ember didn't rate Hero of Baldur's Gate?

Also, I'm liking the party, even if she's tired by it. :roll:

"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

Heh. I guess someone's having the same trouble with the game's idea of nobility as I am... Pity he's one of the suspects on my list, too.

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."

I loved this.

Also, I like your Mazzy. Must she go?

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.

"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.

Heh. Edwin makes his grand entry... to grumble. :) I really do think that that 'she' should be 'Ember', and I'm quite curious if she's not tired because she'll get to be heroic... or because Daddy's stirring.

Sorry for the late comment. So, fighting next? :wink:

#11 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 08 March 2008 - 03:05 PM


"If not for you-"

"And you."

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Ah, A nice scene.


Thanks ;)


"I see what you mean," Yoshimo said, and gestured down a side street that offered a clear view of a fountain in the middle of a town square. Several statues stood around the perimeter of the fountain; most were of humans, but one looked more like an elf, and two were the size of halflings.

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Nice twist on it. You`d think Mazzy and her gang would have been a bit more noticed in their home town.


Exactly. Contrary to the game plot, my group does NOT live in a world where everything has to be done by them and no others ;)


At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


Is Edwin getting proposals to haunt the local tombs mayhap?


No, I'm just borrowing Alibakkar for a different plotbunny. (The tomb plot is cheesy, so I'm skipping it)


"Falsehood, you say?" Yoshimo asked. "What makes you so sure?"

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Way to be an ass Ano!


Yeah. The only way he could have been more of a selfrighteous ass is if I'd used the game dialogue for this :)


"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."

"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.


This might have something to do with his own doubts and such no?


Oh, absolutely.


"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."


Well, Mazzy is kind of right...


Not just kind of. In my story, she is a Knight without an Order, and very close to being a paladin.


"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Fleshdancer ass kicking is always ivigorating.


Oh yes :) I would have written the next chapter already except I've been knocked out by the mother of all colds. With extreme luck, I'll manage to do it tomorrow.

#12 Guest_CrazeeFfan_*

Posted 08 March 2008 - 03:10 PM

"Thank you," Ember said, feeling slightly bewildered. Heroes of Trademeet? Just for this?


Mmm. I always thought this too. Me and Ember are of the same mind, it appears.


A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


I like the explanaition. It, well, explains a lot, surprisingly.


"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."



What a clever way to not only avoid a ridiculously over-exaggerated prize for the heroes (I mean, statues? Come on!) but also to avoid another venture in to those blasted woods, though I expect Ember would likely appreciate the time with Nature.


"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.



Oh, dear. His one dialogue with Viconia and a male CHARNAME aside, this is the only time I realy dislike Anomen. He's such a complete and utter ass, here. And Mazzy's so polite in her response, too.


"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Oh, for God's sake: SHUT UP!


The cleric's face turned red. "There... there has never been a halfling paladin."


At least he doesn't threaten to run her through with a sword, here. ;)



"By all the gods, you must help me!" the youth shouted in a panicked voice. "They've taken Raissa!"



Never a moment's peace and quiet, for Ember and her gang, is there?


She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore


Go kick some fleshy ass, Ember!

Loved the whole ball that was held, and I loved Ember's reaction to it. Next chapter will be full of digusting descriptions of animated sinew and flesh, I trust? I ... look forward to it? Good work. ;)

#13 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 08 March 2008 - 03:12 PM


"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


Oh, that was a nice touch. :)


Thanks :)

I figured her deceased friends deserved better than just their in-game cameo as shades.


"A bit, yes," Ember said, letting her head rest in her hands. If she could have had her choice, she'd be resting at their inn right now; the lengthy walk from the grove had been tiresome, and she felt very out of place at this gathering. Granted, she was clean and didn't smell of sweat and swamp water, and the simple grey gown Mazzy had helped her find was finer than anything she'd had to wear since she'd left Baldur's Gate, but with everyone else in the room dripping with more finery than she'd ever seen before, she felt drab and insignificant and nothing like a guest of honour.


Mmm, I can understand her, I'm not a fan of huge parties with lots of strangers myself.


Imoen's the one who enjoys such things. Ember's more the quiet type.


At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


I assume that's what's his name, the nobleman who wants to hire you for the graveyard mission?


Yes, it's him, but that's not why they're talking.


"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Oh, *that* conversation. One of Ano's worst moments, I always thought.


Yep. Horrible.

It's kind of a shame they didn't add a post-knight followup dialogue to it. Or heck, any other Mazzy/Anomen banter at all.


"And what about truthful conduct?" Anomen snapped.


What about simple courtesy and manners, I might add.


Anomen: ;)


"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.


Adventuring is much better than parties anyway. ;)


I suspect most Bhaalspawn would agree with that :)

#14 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 08 March 2008 - 03:46 PM

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.

My liege? But I thought that in Trademeet, the Lord is just a better merchant--


I just like having Mazzy use that word.

Seriously, though. Is it just me, or is Amn peerage system as hard to understand as any real-life one? I mean, Valygar's a noble, Anomen's a noble, Nalia's a noble, except that Valygar and Anomen don't have titles and--


I don't even try to understand, whether it be Amn or real world peerage :)

a small but powerfully enchanted shield - that the town had gained through dealings with previous Great Druids of the grove. As the group's actions had aided both Trademeet and the grove, it was only fitting that their reward should have ties to both parties, Lord Coprith proclaimed, and the hall rang with applause as Ember accepted the items from him.

A scimitar from the druids, and a shield from the city... Perfect. Although the way you write it, it's 'a shield from the city and the druids', but I prefer my creative interpretation. :D


Go for it. I'm just trying to tone down the fact that she's getting all the loot at the moment :P (Shield is from city, and they gave her that item because it was previously given by druids, which makes it more reasonable for the item to be so perfect for a fighter/druid. Also, Ember is not, at the moment, thinking of using the shield herself.)

At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.

Ember, the gourmet: can spot a honeyed chicken leg from ten steps away! ;)


;)

It's horrible that I have to ask and don't remember - so, Ember didn't rate Hero of Baldur's Gate?


She did, but she felt she earned that one :)

Also, I'm liking the party, even if she's tired by it. :)


That's good, I didn't want it to come across as an awful event :)

"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

Heh. I guess someone's having the same trouble with the game's idea of nobility as I am... Pity he's one of the suspects on my list, too.


He's just very, very touchy about knighthood and what he perceives as a false claim at such.

"You are only a youth, so I shall let your insult melt away," Mazzy said. "I may be no paladin, but I do have the honour and privilege of being a Truesword for my God, and that calling carries more weight than I think you realize. With or without an order, I know what code I am bound to. I know what I am." She turned to walk away, then looked back over her shoulder and added, "I can only hope that you will one day be able to say the same about yourself."

I loved this.


Thanks!

Also, I like your Mazzy. Must she go?


Well, she needs some home time to recover from her loss. And she doesn't get along with almost half the group, so...

(The truth is, if I'd wanted her around, I'd have downplayed the friction. But I need that 6th slot for hanging around with Keldorn later on, and I don't know how long I could do her justice. I don't want her in the party just so she can stand around, after all.)

(I'd much, much rather have her in ToB than Sarevok, mind you. Or Cernd.)

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.

"Enough of that, Edwin. Let's go," she said, and led the rest of her companions out of the hall, hurrying to keep up with the guards.

She didn't feel the least bit tired anymore.

Heh. Edwin makes his grand entry... to grumble. :D I really do think that that 'she' should be 'Ember', and I'm quite curious if she's not tired because she'll get to be heroic... or because Daddy's stirring.


You're probably right about all the above.

Sorry for the late comment. So, fighting next? :)


Yep, once I feel up to writing it :D

#15 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 08 March 2008 - 03:54 PM

"Thank you," Ember said, feeling slightly bewildered. Heroes of Trademeet? Just for this?


Mmm. I always thought this too. Me and Ember are of the same mind, it appears.


At least in the game you have to both stop the druid attacks and drive away the djinni before they break out the statues and partying nobles ;)

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


I like the explanaition. It, well, explains a lot, surprisingly.


Thanks :)

"My companions and I," Mazzy said quietly. "The statues were erected last spring, after we brought about the departure of a group of Dao djinn that were ruining trade for the entire town. They had come in pursuit of a rakshasa, and kept all caravans away from Trademeet until it was found. We managed to locate and dispatch the creature; it had killed old Adratha the potions maker, bless her soul, and was masquerading as her. Once we presented evidence of the rakshasa's death to the Dao djinn, they left town, and business could resume. In gratitude, the merchants paid to have us ...immortalized, as they put it."


What a clever way to not only avoid a ridiculously over-exaggerated prize for the heroes (I mean, statues? Come on!) but also to avoid another venture in to those blasted woods, though I expect Ember would likely appreciate the time with Nature.


Well, there's nature, and then there's bug (and troll, and fungus) infested quagmires. Rest assured, she's not the least bit unhappy that I didn't let her become the leader of that grove :)

"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.


Oh, dear. His one dialogue with Viconia and a male CHARNAME aside, this is the only time I realy dislike Anomen. He's such a complete and utter ass, here. And Mazzy's so polite in her response, too.


The only way I could have used the dialogue as it is in game is if I intended to kick Anomen out of the party immediately thereafter.

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"


Oh, for God's sake: SHUT UP!


Or, to quote Yoda: Control, control, you must learn control!

The cleric's face turned red. "There... there has never been a halfling paladin."


At least he doesn't threaten to run her through with a sword, here. ;)


For someone who can't actually use swords (seeing as BG isn't based on whatever system that lets Helmite priest use swords), he has a surprising amount of stuff to say about blades.

"By all the gods, you must help me!" the youth shouted in a panicked voice. "They've taken Raissa!"


Never a moment's peace and quiet, for Ember and her gang, is there?


Nope. They're just glad I don't make everything happen simultaneously.

Loved the whole ball that was held, and I loved Ember's reaction to it. Next chapter will be full of digusting descriptions of animated sinew and flesh, I trust? I ... look forward to it? Good work. :)


Thanks, and I hadn't actually thought of putting too many yecchy descriptions in the next chapter. I hope you won't mind :)

#16 Guest_Tenfoot_*

Posted 09 March 2008 - 05:37 PM

The following afternoon found the group back in Trademeet, assembled in Lord Coprith's office and waiting quietly while the lord read a letter they'd brought from Cernd. It was a letter of truce; it detailed how Faldorn's actions had created the rift between them, it announced that the problem had been dealt with, it offered gifts of reparation, and it spoke of a desire to mend the gap. Lord Coprith read it slowly and thoroughly; when he finished, he put the letter down on his desk and looked questioningly at Mazzy.

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.


I love this opening. It does say a lot about Cernd, and events, and the ending line is Classic Mazz. ;)

As they left the Trade Hall a short while later, Ember turned to Mazzy. "All we did was deliver Cernd to the grove," she said. "He did all the actual work. As much as I like not being treated like a criminal anymore, I don't see that what we did deserves this kind of treatment."

"If not for you-"

"And you."

A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Y'know, I do like how, for want of a better word, heroic you are making Mazzy here. Having that kind of presence in a story is no mean feat, I reckon, especially with the ambigous morality of Ember's druidic philosophies a few chapters ago. It makes me wanna try a mAzzy of my own, which is a big compliment, coming from me!

After the speech, a throng of finely dressed people gathered around Ember and her companions, offering praises and congratulations and handshakes, and all eager to do so at the same time. A dizzying array of lords, ladies and merchants introduced themselves to Ember with a handful of flattering words; she barely had time to stammer a 'thank you' to each before they moved on and were replaced by another well-wisher. It was as chaotic and confusing as any battle,


And this description, with it's articulation and flow evokes that feeling very well. I really feel for poor Ember viciously beset by these nobles and their conversation!

She couldn't tell whether or not she actually minded.

At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


Well, I'm glad at least some people are enjoying themselves. Although has Edwin talking animatedly with anyone ever boded anything but trouble?

"Young Anomen! Why so glum on such a festive occasion?" Yoshimo asked.

"I... I do not think it a prudent topic of conversation," Anomen said between clenched teeth. Behind him, someone cheered for Mazzy; a flash of anger passed over the cleric's face.

"This eve," he growled, "more than a dozen different people have thanked me for my role in saving their knight. The lord of this town used the same title in reference to Mistress Fentan; even the Shade Lord himself spoke of her as such! How is such falsehood to be endured?"

"Falsehood, you say?" Yoshimo asked. "What makes you so sure?"

"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice.


Woah. Young Anomen, you're seriously losing some sympathy points here. Maybe it's my growing appreciation for Mazzy in the story, but you ain't half the hero she is yet, Delryn. (Please excuse me while I embarass myself by addressing your literary creations directly :) )

If Arvoreen wills it," Mazzy said. The halfling was standing behind Anomen; her face was calm and collected, but there was a hurt look in her eyes. "Or do you think me not fit for such aspirations due to my parentage? My stature?"

The cleric's face turned red. "There... there has never been a halfling paladin."

"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


See? Anomen? See?

"By all the gods, you must help me!" the youth shouted in a panicked voice. "They've taken Raissa!"

Almost instantly, he was surrounded by a clamouring mass of people. "Tiris? We thought you still in Imnesvale!" a woman cried. "What has become of my daughter?!" a man bellowed, forcing his way through the crowd.


That's either very bad timing... or very good timing. And for the story, of course, it's perfect timing! ;)

"Could it have been Rejiek?" Ember asked, raising her voice to be heard.

"Yes, that's it! That's his name! How did you know, my lady?"

"It is the name of a murderer that escaped from Athkatla recently."

"Oh... oh, no!" Tiris sobbed. "Raissa..."

Lord Coprith patted the youth's shoulder reassuringly. "Have no fear, lad, it may not be too late. Come, show us to the shack." Turning towards Ember, the lord added, "You are familiar with these villains. Will you assist us?"

"Of course!"

"We will take the bootheel to their evil ways!" Minsc bellowed, and joined the flock of guards that rushed out of the hall, following Tiris's lead.

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Oh, this should be good. :)

#17 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 11 March 2008 - 10:48 AM

The following afternoon found the group back in Trademeet, assembled in Lord Coprith's office and waiting quietly while the lord read a letter they'd brought from Cernd. It was a letter of truce; it detailed how Faldorn's actions had created the rift between them, it announced that the problem had been dealt with, it offered gifts of reparation, and it spoke of a desire to mend the gap. Lord Coprith read it slowly and thoroughly; when he finished, he put the letter down on his desk and looked questioningly at Mazzy.

"I vouch for every word, my liege," she said.


I love this opening. It does say a lot about Cernd, and events, and the ending line is Classic Mazz. :)


I am going to miss those two :P


A faint smile crossed the halfling's face. "If not for us, then, Cernd might not have been able to reach the grove. Small as it was, our part in this matter is of almost as great importance as his, and is enough to be recognized in Trademeet. The town has a great tradition of celebrating those it could consider its heroes, and you have just joined those ranks."


Y'know, I do like how, for want of a better word, heroic you are making Mazzy here. Having that kind of presence in a story is no mean feat, I reckon, especially with the ambigous morality of Ember's druidic philosophies a few chapters ago. It makes me wanna try a mAzzy of my own, which is a big compliment, coming from me!


A lot of people underestimate her character, and regard her as a hardnosed fanatic, a lawful stupid, or just bland. She is stern, and she has little patience with wickedness, but there is far more to her than that, and a lot of NPCs get along with her quite well. She was in my first party to make it all the way through the game, and I wouldn't mind bringing her along in this group except I don't think I could make her participation interesting enough.

After the speech, a throng of finely dressed people gathered around Ember and her companions, offering praises and congratulations and handshakes, and all eager to do so at the same time. A dizzying array of lords, ladies and merchants introduced themselves to Ember with a handful of flattering words; she barely had time to stammer a 'thank you' to each before they moved on and were replaced by another well-wisher. It was as chaotic and confusing as any battle,


And this description, with it's articulation and flow evokes that feeling very well. I really feel for poor Ember viciously beset by these nobles and their conversation!


Thanks!


At least the others seem to be enjoying themselves, she mused, looking around the room. Minsc was standing not too far away, munching on what appeared to be a honeyed chicken leg while he showed Boo to a small group of giggling children, and Edwin was talking animatedly with one of the nobles, a man wearing a distinctive suit of ornamental, bright green chainmail under a rich velvet cloak.


Well, I'm glad at least some people are enjoying themselves. Although has Edwin talking animatedly with anyone ever boded anything but trouble?


No... ;)


"How could it be otherwise?! I know of no order that would accept one such as her, so how can she allow herself to be spoken of as a knight? Aye, if not for her status as recently bereaved, I would scarce be able to hold my tongue on this matter!"

"Can she really help what her townsfolk call her?" Ember asked, taken aback by the venom in Anomen's voice.


Woah. Young Anomen, you're seriously losing some sympathy points here. Maybe it's my growing appreciation for Mazzy in the story, but you ain't half the hero she is yet, Delryn. (Please excuse me while I embarass myself by addressing your literary creations directly :) )


Oh, it's fine, I do it myself on occasion :D

Yes, he has a lot to learn.


"That much is true," Mazzy replied. "I am not likely to ever receive such a calling, and I know very well that no Human order would embrace me. These things do not mean that I can't aspire to live the example; acts of kindness and justice bear equal weight whether they are done by a paladin or by the lowliest beggar."


See? Anomen? See?


Anomen: ;) :D

(He doesn't take well to being humiliated)

"By all the gods, you must help me!" the youth shouted in a panicked voice. "They've taken Raissa!"

Almost instantly, he was surrounded by a clamouring mass of people. "Tiris? We thought you still in Imnesvale!" a woman cried. "What has become of my daughter?!" a man bellowed, forcing his way through the crowd.


That's either very bad timing... or very good timing. And for the story, of course, it's perfect timing! :)


As long as it's not 'hey, that's convenient' timing :)


Lord Coprith patted the youth's shoulder reassuringly. "Have no fear, lad, it may not be too late. Come, show us to the shack." Turning towards Ember, the lord added, "You are familiar with these villains. Will you assist us?"

"Of course!"

"We will take the bootheel to their evil ways!" Minsc bellowed, and joined the flock of guards that rushed out of the hall, following Tiris's lead.

"(Wonderful. Even more 'heroic' behaviour,)" Edwin grumbled.


Oh, this should be good. :D


I hope so; it's threatening to be somewhat rushed :)




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