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#1 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:28 PM

Chapter 86: Light in Dark Places


The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc. If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage; there were several deep gashes across his body, and broken links of chainmail were embedded in the edges of the wounds. As gently as she could, she pulled the metal free from Minsc's flesh, then said a litany of healing prayers over him. Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.

"Boo! Where is Minsc's Boo?!"

"Right here," Ember said, and handed over the hamster. With a happy cry, Minsc clasped Boo safely in his hands.

"Do not be afraid, little one!" he cooed in Boo's ear. "Minsc is well now!"

With a sigh of relief, Ember sat back on her haunches and wiped a trickle of blood from a small cut on her cheek. "Is everyone else all right?" she asked, looking around at the rest of the group.

"I believe so, my lady," Anomen replied. "Some bruises and cuts remain, but all major injuries have been attended to." The cleric had finished healing Valygar's wound - the only reminder of it was a significant tear in the shoulder of his leather armour - and was tending to Mazzy's arm; evidently, it had been broken when the bone golem knocked her down.

"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.

"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"

Whatever that reason might be, it was not readily apparent as the group entered the chamber the bone golem had emerged from. It was a smallish chamber, about three times as wide as the corridor, and there was nothing in it other than the usual drifts of ancient dust, some scattered bones, and a simple sarcophagus with its lid halfway off. The lid of the sarcophagus bore what Ember recognized as the corroded remnants of a sun symbol, and one of the walls was made of some kind of smooth, sooted panels rather than of rough stone.

"How exceedingly exciting," Edwin grumbled.

The bones that lay scattered across the floor were small and delicate; the bones of a child. The skull had been cracked into three segments, and several of the larger bones looked as if something had gnawed upon them, but as far as Ember could tell, few of the bones were outright missing.

"Can you feel it?" Mazzy asked quietly.

"Feel what?" Yoshimo asked.

"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."

Valygar nodded, his face a stern mask. "It is ...not surprising. Dark, foul magic is drawn to such pits like flies."

"I don't think it is dark magic," Mazzy said. "It is something else. Something is out of place."

"Boo knows what is out of place! Bones should be in graves, not on floors!" The giant ranger bent down, carefully picked up a shin bone, and placed it in the sarcophagus.

Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."

"We... we are," Valygar said. "Who are you?"

"I am Amauna," the ghost said. "I was born a prophetess to our lord Amaunator. I was the Child of Light who would fight against the darkness that was beginning to spill into these lands. Long ago, I gathered the last of the faithful, and brought them here. The temple was old, even then, and a shadow had taken up abode in it. We were to destroy the Shade Lord and reclaim the temple. We... we failed in our task."

"What happened?" Ember asked.

"We drove the Shade Lord from this place, but we did not destroy him. I was killed in the battle. My people entombed me here and set up wards to keep the darkness at bay, but as our Lord's power dwindled, the wards began to weaken. The priests left, or died, and I slept here alone. Then, one year ago, the Shade Lord returned, accompanied by vampires as well as his shadow minions. Together, they destroyed the wards and claimed the temple, and the Shade Lord threw my bones to his dark wolves, that they might defile my remains."

"I have seen several of his minions, but no vampires," Mazzy said. "Where are they?"

"Once the temple had fallen to darkness, they left. They can find no sustenance in a dead place, and cannot linger long."

"There was a light outside that destroyed the shadows," Yoshimo said. "We were searching for its source when we found your remains."

For a moment, the ghost brightened. "It still exists? It is good to hear that. The source lies beyond the glass doors," she said, looking towards the panels on the wall.

"(Glass?)" Edwin ran a finger over one of the panels, rubbing off a thick layer of soot and grime. A piercing ray of light shot through the freshly exposed glass.

"The Altar of the Eternal Sun is behind those doors," Amauna said. "It was once the inner heart of the temple. Daylight reigns eternal in that room, harnessed in a sun gem. No undead creature can tolerate its presence; the Shade Lord could not access my remains until he had sent living creatures, dominated by his will, to darken the glass panels. He fears it even now, and none of his creatures, save the bone golem, would come here."

"This sun gem... it can be used as a weapon against the Shade Lord, then?" Valygar asked.

"No. The gem will fade if it is removed from the altar."

"I see," Valygar said quietly. His shoulders seemed to slump, just a little. "It matters not. I have another plan for the Shade Lord, but... his dragon stands in the way."

"I was not strong enough to defeat the Shade Lord, even when I was among the living, but I do have some power," Amauna said. "I have power enough to elude the attention of his guardians, if necessary, and I can give this to you." She spoke a few words over the sun symbol on her sarcophagus, and with a flash of bright light, it broke off and fell to the dusty floor. "Take it. It is now a wardstone... carry it, stay close together, and move quietly. The Shade Lord's creatures will not notice your passing unless you draw attention to yourselves."

"Thank you for your assistance," Valygar said, and picked up the wardstone. "We will do our utmost to free your temple from this fiend."

"We are truly blessed to have an ally such as yourself, Lady Amauna," Anomen said, "but if you do not object to my inquisitiveness... why does your spirit still linger here?"

"My duty was to destroy the Shade Lord. I have not yet fulfilled it," the ghost said quietly, then looked at the cleric; there was a strange weariness in her expression.

"As long as he still exists, I will remain here."

---

After leaving Amauna's tomb, Mazzy led the party down the path that she and her companions had followed before, through darkened tunnels and dusty chambers. Amauna's wardstone proved true; they passed by numerous shadows, wraiths and skeletons without ever being noticed. Even though their footsteps seemed to go unheard, nobody spoke, just in case the undead would hear them after all.

Soon, Mazzy directed them all into an empty chamber with only one doorway, and called for a halt. "We are not far from the dragon's lair," she said. "We should rest for a while here, and gather our strength. I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle."

"You are right," Valygar said. "It is time." He sat heavily down on the floor, his back resting against the solid rock wall. "Most of you know of my ancestor, the necromancer Lavok, and that I recently vanquished him. Most of you do not know that he had let himself become possessed by a demon. It needed flesh to stay on this plane, and repaid him with longevity. My companions and I knew nothing of this creature until we had beaten down Lavok. The demon left him on the brink of death... and possessed me. I was only saved by the quick actions of the knights that were fighting by my side. They set upon me. The demon had been weakened - whether from the battle or from possessing my body, I do not know - and the knights were able to drive it out of me without killing me. Before it could attempt to claim another body, they destroyed it."

"And you suspect the Shade Lord will do the same thing," Edwin said, studiously examining his fingernails.

"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If such a thing comes to pass... I intend for that host to be me."

"But-"

"No, Mazzy. I will not suffer any of you to endure such a thing in my stead. Come, let us sit down. I will explain further while we rest."

---

The shadow dragon's lair was shaped very much like a crater; it was almost as if some wizard, mad with power, had used his strongest spells to scoop out a circular pit right in the middle of the temple ruins. The dragon itself lay in the center of the pit, lazily coiled up around a small pile of bones that somehow was visible even through the bulk of the dragon's body, and the all too familiar sea of dark fog billowed above it. Mazzy raised a finger to her lips in warning, and the group started a slow, careful climb down into the pit, taking care to stay close to each other and to the protection of the wardstone even as they traversed the sloping sides of the pit, using every slight protrusion of rock as a foothold. Some of the rocks were looser than they appeared, and many slipped loose, creating minuscule landslides that made everyone hold their breath, but the dragon seemed to be used to such things; its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinary, it settled down again almost immediately.

Their descent stopped a hundred feet from the dragon, where the surface of the pit was level enough to walk without fear of anyone losing their balance, and they moved slowly in a semicircle around the dragon towards the opposite side of the lair. There was an opening high up on that side of the pit; when the dragon had destroyed Mazzy's friends, the Shade Lord had entered the lair there. A second grueling climb, up instead of down, and the group found themselves in a short corridor, its walls still showing traces of elaborate carvings. Amauna's wardstone had held.

At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.

#2 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 25 November 2007 - 05:12 PM

Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


:lol:

Poor, little critter.

If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage


Raven: "You know, they say that it's a warrior's mind that wins battles, not their equipment. That may be true at its most basic, but the gear HELPS."

Harlequin: (Checks the power levels on her laser carbine) "You said it."

and was tending to Mazzy's arm; evidently, it had been broken when the bone golem knocked her down.


Ouch. Gotta be careful. We don't have any replacement bones in her size. :evil:

I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle.


Raven: "Plans are good. Just remember, though, that no battle plan ever survives contact with the enemy. Hope you guys can think on your feet."

its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinairy, it settled down again almost immediately.


This is why I'm so bad at games that require you to be sneaky. I'm always worried if someone saw or heard me. As Han Solo would say "I'd prefer a straight fight to all this sneaking around." ;)

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oops.

Well, that's a problem. :)

#3 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 25 November 2007 - 08:23 PM

Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


:lol:

Poor, little critter.


My Boo may not be a supernatural one, but his bond with Minsc is far from one sided.

If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage


Raven: "You know, they say that it's a warrior's mind that wins battles, not their equipment. That may be true at its most basic, but the gear HELPS."

Harlequin: (Checks the power levels on her laser carbine) "You said it."


Back when I played everquest, there was a weapon that was so overpowered they removed it from the game. It was a moss-covered twig :)

and was tending to Mazzy's arm; evidently, it had been broken when the bone golem knocked her down.


Ouch. Gotta be careful. We don't have any replacement bones in her size. :evil:


Well, who knows what that dragon o' mine is hoarding? ;)

I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle.


Raven: "Plans are good. Just remember, though, that no battle plan ever survives contact with the enemy. Hope you guys can think on your feet."


I Have Plans. (Of course, mine might not work either...)

its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinairy, it settled down again almost immediately.


This is why I'm so bad at games that require you to be sneaky. I'm always worried if someone saw or heard me. As Han Solo would say "I'd prefer a straight fight to all this sneaking around." :(


I could never play a thief. That's all I'll say about the matter.

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oops.

Well, that's a problem. :(


What, for getting back out, you mean? :)

#4 Guest_Ananke_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 08:32 AM

Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.

Aww. That hurt.

Ember feels like a very qualified doctor healer, though, from the way she thinks this description. It almost begs me to ask, 'when did she grow up?'

(About what level is she now? Tenth/eleventh/twelfth, I guess?)

"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.

Oh. I wonder how long it'll be until, 'Don't you dare call me a squire, because, let me assure you, you are not a paladin! In the Order-!' and/or 'Isn't it the time to eat something, halfling?'

Whatever that reason might be, it was not readily apparent as the group entered the chamber the bone golem had emerged from. It was a smallish chamber, about three times as wide as the corridor, and there was nothing in it other than the usual drifts of ancient dust, some scattered bones, and a simple sarcophagus with its lid halfway off. The lid of the sarcophagus bore what Ember recognized as the corroded remnants of a sun symbol, and one of the walls was made of some kind of smooth, sooted panels rather than of rough stone.

'smallish' again! You must like this word. :(

I think that it would be nice to remind the reader here that they are seeing this all in a (weak? strong?) spotlight... knowing this changes the look of the scene completely.

Great description, though.

"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."

Aww... Spooky. :evil:

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."

...and there is even a ghost!

"We drove the Shade Lord from this place, but we did not destroy him. I was killed in the battle. My people entombed me here and set up wards to keep the darkness at bay, but as our Lord's power dwindled, the wards began to weaken. The priests left, or died, and I slept here alone. Then, one year ago, the Shade Lord returned, accompanied by vampires as well as his shadow minions. Together, they destroyed the wards and claimed the temple, and the Shade Lord threw my bones to his dark wolves, that they might defile my remains."

...vampires? :lol: You Have Plans, I get it already. :(

"Thank you for your assistance," Valygar said, and picked up the wardstone. "We will do our utmost to free your temple and from this fiend."

The 'and' is superfluous.

"As long as he still exists, I will remain here."

:)

"No, Mazzy. I will not suffer any of you to endure such a thing in my stead. Now, let us go."

Whoa. That was... quick. ;) Perhaps because no one of Ember's party had anything to say.

At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.

I scratch the previous comment about a great description. This was a great description. It felt... well, it felt like a shell-pit or a bomb crater to me. In a post-nuclear world, where the fallout cuts off the sun. :)

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.

Oh, dear. Are we up for a dragon fight, or will the dragon disappear together with the rest of the nightmare as the new day dawns?

If we're up for a dragon fight... cool!

Great chapter of moving in a complete nightmare... Thank you. :(

#5 Guest_Phoenix_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 10:46 AM

Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.

Yes, that would be the druid thing to do :evil: and poor little Boo. He's a good animal companion, he has Ranger Empathy.

"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"

You silly optimist! I usually like Yoshimo, but I'm still unsure what I should do with him...

"I don't think it is dark magic," Mazzy said. "It is something else. Something is out of place."

"Boo knows what is out of place! Bones should be in graves, not on floors!"

:lol:


"

I see," Valygar said quietly. His shoulders seemed to slump, just a little. "It matters not. I have another plan for the Shade Lord, but... his dragon stands in the way."

That can be a bit of a problem, yes.

She spoke a few words over the sun symbol on her sarcophagus, and with a flash of bright light, it broke off and fell to the dusty floor. "Take it. It is now a wardstone... carry it, stay close together, and move quietly.

So it comes from her grave? That's original, and highly creepy.


Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."

Excuse me? That sounds like a really dumb plan ;)


At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.

How... scenic.

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.

A definite Oh Crap moment... and a nasty cliffhanger. Well done.

#6 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 11:26 AM

Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.

Aww. That hurt.

Ember feels like a very qualified doctor healer, though, from the way she thinks this description. It almost begs me to ask, 'when did she grow up?'


Heh. She's been doing the healing thing for quite some time (until Anomen showed up, she was the only healer in the group), and it is the druidic discipline she focuses the most upon.

(About what level is she now? Tenth/eleventh/twelfth, I guess?)


Something like that; I don't quite remember.

"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.

Oh. I wonder how long it'll be until, 'Don't you dare call me a squire, because, let me assure you, you are not a paladin! In the Order-!' and/or 'Isn't it the time to eat something, halfling?'


I'm working on it :(

Whatever that reason might be, it was not readily apparent as the group entered the chamber the bone golem had emerged from. It was a smallish chamber, about three times as wide as the corridor, and there was nothing in it other than the usual drifts of ancient dust, some scattered bones, and a simple sarcophagus with its lid halfway off. The lid of the sarcophagus bore what Ember recognized as the corroded remnants of a sun symbol, and one of the walls was made of some kind of smooth, sooted panels rather than of rough stone.

'smallish' again! You must like this word. :(


Oh, do I use it a lot? ;)

I think that it would be nice to remind the reader here that they are seeing this all in a (weak? strong?) spotlight... knowing this changes the look of the scene completely.


I'm like the game itself; I tend not to think overly much about what might actually be there to light up the scenery.

Great description, though.


Thanks :)


"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."

Aww... Spooky. :evil:


This place stood out as a good spot for Mazzy to notice something.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."

...and there is even a ghost!


Oh yes. But only one, not three.

"We drove the Shade Lord from this place, but we did not destroy him. I was killed in the battle. My people entombed me here and set up wards to keep the darkness at bay, but as our Lord's power dwindled, the wards began to weaken. The priests left, or died, and I slept here alone. Then, one year ago, the Shade Lord returned, accompanied by vampires as well as his shadow minions. Together, they destroyed the wards and claimed the temple, and the Shade Lord threw my bones to his dark wolves, that they might defile my remains."

...vampires? :lol: You Have Plans, I get it already. :P


I'm actually quite proud of this particular Plan, as it adds some logic to a Very Coincidental Thing :)

"Thank you for your assistance," Valygar said, and picked up the wardstone. "We will do our utmost to free your temple and from this fiend."

The 'and' is superfluous.


Thanks for the heads up. They tend to happen when I shuffle things around...

"As long as he still exists, I will remain here."

:)


...and the shuffling was done to emphasize that line :D

"No, Mazzy. I will not suffer any of you to endure such a thing in my stead. Now, let us go."

Whoa. That was... quick. ;) Perhaps because no one of Ember's party had anything to say.


Valygar is in I Am Boss mode. And Edwin did try to speak up, but didn't get a word out before Valygar stopped him.

At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.

I scratch the previous comment about a great description. This was a great description. It felt... well, it felt like a shell-pit or a bomb crater to me. In a post-nuclear world, where the fallout cuts off the sun. :(


That's exactly what I was going for :)

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.

Oh, dear. Are we up for a dragon fight, or will the dragon disappear together with the rest of the nightmare as the new day dawns?

If we're up for a dragon fight... cool!


We're up for... something :D

Great chapter of moving in a complete nightmare... Thank you. :D


I wasn't too pleased with it myself, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

#7 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 11:34 AM

Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.

Yes, that would be the druid thing to do :evil: and poor little Boo. He's a good animal companion, he has Ranger Empathy.


I don't think he could handle going through battles with Minsc if he didn't :lol:

"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"

You silly optimist! I usually like Yoshimo, but I'm still unsure what I should do with him...


I suspect that's a common problem (and one that I share).

"I don't think it is dark magic," Mazzy said. "It is something else. Something is out of place."

"Boo knows what is out of place! Bones should be in graves, not on floors!"

;)


Well, he's right, isn't he? :)

"I see," Valygar said quietly. His shoulders seemed to slump, just a little. "It matters not. I have another plan for the Shade Lord, but... his dragon stands in the way."

That can be a bit of a problem, yes.


He was hoping he could just use the light source to mow down the undead. Nope, not going to be that easy :(

She spoke a few words over the sun symbol on her sarcophagus, and with a flash of bright light, it broke off and fell to the dusty floor. "Take it. It is now a wardstone... carry it, stay close together, and move quietly.

So it comes from her grave? That's original, and highly creepy.


Thanks :)

I couldn't think of anything else she could use to make one (and if she'd already had one around, they wouldn't have found her bones, would they?) and I didn't want her to just ward the party, as then there'd be no wardstone for the Shade Lord to break.

Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."

Excuse me? That sounds like a really dumb plan :(


He's being all noble and stuff and doesn't want his hired help to do something that he's already endured and survived. (It's not that he WANTS to do it, it's that he expects it.)

At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.

How... scenic.


I wanted it to look like it once was beautiful.

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.

A definite Oh Crap moment... and a nasty cliffhanger. Well done.


Thanks :(

#8 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 11:48 AM

The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


Poor Boo, but Minsc has that fate of the tank, always getting beat up.

"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.


Wonder if these two will hate each other as much as in the game.

Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.


Theo: You’d think they would be more in a hurry to be done with this place, it’s not like the skeleton’s feelings will be upset if you leave the bones where they are. :evil:

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."


Theo: … *scowls* Pbbt, that was just pure luck.

"I have seen several of his minions, but no vampires," Mazzy said. "Where are they?"


"Once the temple had fallen to darkness, they left. They can find no sustenance in a dead place, and cannot linger long."


Not enough traffic in the ways of adventurers, too.

"This sun gem... it can be used as a weapon against the Shade Lord, then?" Valygar asked.


"No. The gem will fade if it is removed from the altar."


D’oh. Well… carry it with the altar? :)

Soon, Mazzy directed them all into an empty chamber with only one doorway, and called for a halt. "We are not far from the dragon's lair," she said. "We should rest for a while here, and gather our strength. I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle."


Paladin. Dragon. Paladin see Dragon. Charge! :lol:

"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."


Aww, pick Mazzy! ;)

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."


The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


This fight was kind of a letdown in the game… hope you make it a bit more dramatic. :)

#9 Guest_Futurist_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 03:52 PM

The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


Heh... that is cute.


"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.


I thought healing spells fixed that?

"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."

Valygar nodded, his face a stern mask. "It is ...not surprising. Dark, foul magic is drawn to such pits like flies."


Love the use of their "dugeon talk"



Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."


He lives in a magcial world and scoffs at the thought that doing something nice for a dead person might yeild som good effect. That is Edwin for ya...

After leaving Amauna's tomb, Mazzy led the party down the path that she and her companions had followed before, through darkened tunnels and dusty chambers. Amauna's wardstone proved true; they passed by numerous shadows, wraiths and skeletons without ever being noticed. Even though their footsteps seemed to go unheard, nobody spoke, just in case the undead would hear them after all.


Useful gadet. Wish I had it there.

The shadow dragon's lair was shaped very much like a crater; it was almost as if some wizard, mad with power, had used his strongest spells to scoop out a circular pit right in the middle of the temple ruins. The dragon itself lay in the center of the pit, lazily coiled up around a small pile of bones that somehow was visible even through the bulk of the dragon's body, and the all too familiar sea of dark fog billowed above it. Mazzy raised a finger to her lips in warning, and the group started a slow, careful climb down into the pit, taking care to stay close to each other and to the protection of the wardstone even as they traversed the sloping sides of the pit, using every slight protrusion of rock as a foothold. Some of the rocks were looser than they appeared, and many slipped loose, creating minuscule landslides that made everyone hold their breath, but the dragon seemed to be used to such things; its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinairy, it settled down again almost immediately.


That is a fight to aviod... I hated the forced Dragon fights in TOB...



"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oh ya... The dragon won`t be too happy now I guess...

#10 Laufey

Posted 26 November 2007 - 06:57 PM

Chapter 86: Light in Dark Places


The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc. If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage; there were several deep gashes across his body, and broken links of chainmail were embedded in the edges of the wounds. As gently as she could, she pulled the metal free from Minsc's flesh, then said a litany of healing prayers over him. Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.


Aw. Poor Minsc. ;) That golem is really, really nasty.

"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"


No Yoshi, it's a random encounter. Don't expect them to make sense. :evil:

Soon, Mazzy directed them all into an empty chamber with only one doorway, and called for a halt. "We are not far from the dragon's lair," she said. "We should rest for a while here, and gather our strength. I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle."


Good idea.

"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."


Okaaaay...that doesn't sound like a very good plan to me. If I were there, I think I'd like him to explain his reasoning some more.

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."


The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


There you go, just nuke him, and try to make Val forget about this 'being possessed' thing. :lol:
Rogues do it from behind.

#11 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 08:00 PM

The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


Poor Boo, but Minsc has that fate of the tank, always getting beat up.


Hamsters do not understand such things.

"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.


Wonder if these two will hate each other as much as in the game.


Level of dislike (mostly from Anomen's side of things) will increase the longer Mazzy stays in the group, I suspect.

Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.


Theo: You’d think they would be more in a hurry to be done with this place, it’s not like the skeleton’s feelings will be upset if you leave the bones where they are. :evil:


Theo and my Edwin should get along splendidly in many, many ways.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."


Theo: … *scowls* Pbbt, that was just pure luck.


:(

"I have seen several of his minions, but no vampires," Mazzy said. "Where are they?"

"Once the temple had fallen to darkness, they left. They can find no sustenance in a dead place, and cannot linger long."



Not enough traffic in the ways of adventurers, too.


Hmm, how many vampire lairs do you think are sustained by adventurers seeking to destroy them? :(

"This sun gem... it can be used as a weapon against the Shade Lord, then?" Valygar asked.

"No. The gem will fade if it is removed from the altar."


D’oh. Well… carry it with the altar? :(


Altar's just a mite too heavy.

Soon, Mazzy directed them all into an empty chamber with only one doorway, and called for a halt. "We are not far from the dragon's lair," she said. "We should rest for a while here, and gather our strength. I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle."


Paladin. Dragon. Paladin see Dragon. Charge! ;)


:lol:

"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."


Aww, pick Mazzy! :)


Mazzy's actually all for that idea, you know.

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


This fight was kind of a letdown in the game… hope you make it a bit more dramatic. :)


Oh, I intend to try!

#12 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 08:11 PM


The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc.


Heh... that is cute.


He can't always be treated as if he's just some kind of growth on Minsc's body :evil:


"At least it was not my sword arm," the halfling said, carefully flexing her freshly mended limb. "Thank you, squire." The cleric mumbled something practically inaudible in response.


I thought healing spells fixed that?


It did, but I am treating this as if her arm will be slightly weaker for a while, while the bone fully sets and recovers from the shock of being broken and then restored.


"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."

Valygar nodded, his face a stern mask. "It is ...not surprising. Dark, foul magic is drawn to such pits like flies."


Love the use of their "dugeon talk"


Thanks :lol:


Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."


He lives in a magcial world and scoffs at the thought that doing something nice for a dead person might yeild som good effect. That is Edwin for ya...


Absolutely. And another difference between him and the rest: the others aren't looking to gain something from it. Some are doing it because It's A Good Thing To Do, and the others help because It's Something To Do And It's Not Bad And The Rest Want To Do It.


After leaving Amauna's tomb, Mazzy led the party down the path that she and her companions had followed before, through darkened tunnels and dusty chambers. Amauna's wardstone proved true; they passed by numerous shadows, wraiths and skeletons without ever being noticed. Even though their footsteps seemed to go unheard, nobody spoke, just in case the undead would hear them after all.


Useful gadet. Wish I had it there.


You should have had it. I just beefed it up a little ;)


The shadow dragon's lair was shaped very much like a crater; it was almost as if some wizard, mad with power, had used his strongest spells to scoop out a circular pit right in the middle of the temple ruins. The dragon itself lay in the center of the pit, lazily coiled up around a small pile of bones that somehow was visible even through the bulk of the dragon's body, and the all too familiar sea of dark fog billowed above it. Mazzy raised a finger to her lips in warning, and the group started a slow, careful climb down into the pit, taking care to stay close to each other and to the protection of the wardstone even as they traversed the sloping sides of the pit, using every slight protrusion of rock as a foothold. Some of the rocks were looser than they appeared, and many slipped loose, creating minuscule landslides that made everyone hold their breath, but the dragon seemed to be used to such things; its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinairy, it settled down again almost immediately.


That is a fight to aviod... I hated the forced Dragon fights in TOB...


I hated Draconis above all.


"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oh ya... The dragon won`t be too happy now I guess...


The dragon can't see them at the moment.

#13 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 26 November 2007 - 08:30 PM

The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc. If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage; there were several deep gashes across his body, and broken links of chainmail were embedded in the edges of the wounds. As gently as she could, she pulled the metal free from Minsc's flesh, then said a litany of healing prayers over him. Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.


Aw. Poor Minsc. ;) That golem is really, really nasty.


Especially if it decides to show up while you're fighting the two spectres and skeleton warriors near the lava chamber.


"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"


No Yoshi, it's a random encounter. Don't expect them to make sense. :evil:


:)



"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If things go as I intend, that host will be me."


Okaaaay...that doesn't sound like a very good plan to me. If I were there, I think I'd like him to explain his reasoning some more.


He doesn't want to deliberately get possessed, he just doesn't want the others to risk being possessed instead of him, since he brought them there and is doomed to never escape magic and all that. I edited it a bit in the hopes of clearing things up.


"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


There you go, just nuke him, and try to make Val forget about this 'being possessed' thing. :lol:


Valygar: *sullen silence*

#14 Guest_VigaHrolf_*

Posted 27 November 2007 - 08:54 PM

The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc. If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage; there were several deep gashes across his body, and broken links of chainmail were embedded in the edges of the wounds. As gently as she could, she pulled the metal free from Minsc's flesh, then said a litany of healing prayers over him. Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.


It's no good when you're still in Inferior Gear. Need to get him some Dragon Scale or some nice magical plate. :shock:

As to the chainmail damage... There's a general belief that the broken links getting into the skin actually increased the chance of a fatal wound. And I imagine it also jumped the chances for tetnus and such things.

Good thing there are divine powers, no?

"Boo! Where is Minsc's Boo?!"

"Right here," Ember said, and handed over the hamster. With a happy cry, Minsc clasped Boo safely in his hands.


And the Dynamic Duo of Destruction are reunited!

"Do not be afraid, little one!" he cooed in Boo's ear. "Minsc is well now!"


:shock: :evil: :cry:

"I believe so, my lady," Anomen replied. "Some bruises and cuts remain, but all major injuries have been attended to." The cleric had finished healing Valygar's wound - the only reminder of it was a significant tear in the shoulder of his leather armour - and was tending to Mazzy's arm; evidently, it had been broken when the bone golem knocked her down.


Doctor Anomen, Paging Doctor Anomen! :cry:

"Then, my friends," Yoshimo said with a broad smile, "I think it is time for us to move onwards. That golem must have been here for a reason, no?"


Aleria: "Golems often are. Blasted things. And bone golems are a truly disturbing thing."

Whatever that reason might be, it was not readily apparent as the group entered the chamber the bone golem had emerged from. It was a smallish chamber, about three times as wide as the corridor, and there was nothing in it other than the usual drifts of ancient dust, some scattered bones, and a simple sarcophagus with its lid halfway off. The lid of the sarcophagus bore what Ember recognized as the corroded remnants of a sun symbol, and one of the walls was made of some kind of smooth, sooted panels rather than of rough stone.


Ahh... the burial chamber of the prophetess.

The bones that lay scattered across the floor were small and delicate; the bones of a child. The skull had been cracked into three segments, and several of the larger bones looked as if something had gnawed upon them, but as far as Ember could tell, few of the bones were outright missing.


Yick. Very nice job with that description

"Can you feel it?" Mazzy asked quietly.

"Feel what?" Yoshimo asked.

"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."


And the Divine Senses kicking in.

Valygar nodded, his face a stern mask. "It is ...not surprising. Dark, foul magic is drawn to such pits like flies."


*snickers* I LOVE that line. Just love it. Great use of it by the way. :cry:

"I don't think it is dark magic," Mazzy said. "It is something else. Something is out of place."

"Boo knows what is out of place! Bones should be in graves, not on floors!" The giant ranger bent down, carefully picked up a shin bone, and placed it in the sarcophagus.


And Minsc with the realization. :lol:

Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.


Something a Helmite should feel quite good about.

Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."

"We... we are," Valygar said. "Who are you?"


The pause there does a great job at illustrating that surprise that would come from the appearance of a young girl ghost like that.

"I am Amauna," the ghost said. "I was born a prophetess to our lord Amaunator. I was the Child of Light who would fight against the darkness that was beginning to spill into these lands. Long ago, I gathered the last of the faithful, and brought them here. The temple was old, even then, and a shadow had taken up abode in it. We were to destroy the Shade Lord and reclaim the temple. We... we failed in our task."

"What happened?" Ember asked.

"We drove the Shade Lord from this place, but we did not destroy him. I was killed in the battle. My people entombed me here and set up wards to keep the darkness at bay, but as our Lord's power dwindled, the wards began to weaken. The priests left, or died, and I slept here alone. Then, one year ago, the Shade Lord returned, accompanied by vampires as well as his shadow minions. Together, they destroyed the wards and claimed the temple, and the Shade Lord threw my bones to his dark wolves, that they might defile my remains."


Interesting... the addition of vampires.... I wonder what you have in mind. But I like the new touches, the greater depth.

"Once the temple had fallen to darkness, they left. They can find no sustenance in a dead place, and cannot linger long."


Nope. Need fresh blood.

"There was a light outside that destroyed the shadows," Yoshimo said. "We were searching for its source when we found your remains."

For a moment, the ghost brightened. "It still exists? It is good to hear that. The source lies beyond the glass doors," she said, looking towards the panels on the wall.

"(Glass?)" Edwin ran a finger over one of the panels, rubbing off a thick layer of soot and grime. A piercing ray of light shot through the freshly exposed glass.


Boom! Another nice touch making the source of the light more concrete.

"The Altar of the Eternal Sun is behind those doors," Amauna said. "It was once the inner heart of the temple. Daylight reigns eternal in that room, harnessed in a sun gem. No undead creature can tolerate its presence; the Shade Lord could not access my remains until he had sent living creatures, dominated by his will, to darken the glass panels. He fears it even now, and none of his creatures, save the bone golem, would come here."

"This sun gem... it can be used as a weapon against the Shade Lord, then?" Valygar asked.

"No. The gem will fade if it is removed from the altar."


A better idea than having to use the Sun gem to bash down the barriers. Once again, a definite improvement.

"I was not strong enough to defeat the Shade Lord, even when I was among the living, but I do have some power," Amauna said. "I have power enough to elude the attention of his guardians, if necessary, and I can give this to you." She spoke a few words over the sun symbol on her sarcophagus, and with a flash of bright light, it broke off and fell to the dusty floor. "Take it. It is now a wardstone... carry it, stay close together, and move quietly. The Shade Lord's creatures will not notice your passing unless you draw attention to yourselves."


Don't poke the dragon and it won't eat you.

And that dragon can be a real pain in the tuckus if you're low enough level. Especially without a mage or two to blast down it's protections.

"Thank you for your assistance," Valygar said, and picked up the wardstone. "We will do our utmost to free your temple from this fiend."

"We are truly blessed to have an ally such as yourself, Lady Amauna," Anomen said, "but if you do not object to my inquisitiveness... why does your spirit still linger here?"

"My duty was to destroy the Shade Lord. I have not yet fulfilled it," the ghost said quietly, then looked at the cleric; there was a strange weariness in her expression.

"As long as he still exists, I will remain here."


It really sounds like Amaunator is a bit of a hard case. Especially with the Fallen Temple in the Unseeing Eye quest... he makes Helm seem cuddly.

After leaving Amauna's tomb, Mazzy led the party down the path that she and her companions had followed before, through darkened tunnels and dusty chambers. Amauna's wardstone proved true; they passed by numerous shadows, wraiths and skeletons without ever being noticed. Even though their footsteps seemed to go unheard, nobody spoke, just in case the undead would hear them after all.


Sneak. Sneak. Sneak. :lol:

Soon, Mazzy directed them all into an empty chamber with only one doorway, and called for a halt. "We are not far from the dragon's lair," she said. "We should rest for a while here, and gather our strength. I also think it is time for our leader to tell us what our plans are; I would not go blindly into this battle."

"You are right," Valygar said. "It is time." He sat heavily down on the floor, his back resting against the solid rock wall. "Most of you know of my ancestor, the necromancer Lavok, and that I recently vanquished him. Most of you do not know that he had let himself become possessed by a demon. It needed flesh to stay on this plane, and repaid him with longevity. My companions and I knew nothing of this creature until we had beaten down Lavok. The demon left him on the brink of death... and possessed me. I was only saved by the quick actions of the knights that were fighting by my side. They set upon me. The demon had been weakened - whether from the battle or from possessing my body, I do not know - and the knights were able to drive it out of me without killing me. Before it could attempt to claim another body, they destroyed it."

"And you suspect the Shade Lord will do the same thing," Edwin said, studiously examining his fingernails.

"Yes. It is likely that he will attempt to possess one of us. We- do not interrupt me, wizard! We must be prepared to fight him in more than one host. If such a thing comes to pass... I intend for that host to be me."

"But-"

"No, Mazzy. I will not suffer any of you to endure such a thing in my stead. Come, let us sit down. I will explain further while we rest."


Bran: "Well, that's a plan."

Aleria: "A noble plan."

Bran: "But not what I'd call a good one."

Aleria: "It likely could succeed."

Bran: "Yeah, but kill him in the process."

Aleria: "Sometimes..."

Bran: "Sacrifice is the last resort of those who don't plan properly."

---


The shadow dragon's lair was shaped very much like a crater; it was almost as if some wizard, mad with power, had used his strongest spells to scoop out a circular pit right in the middle of the temple ruins. The dragon itself lay in the center of the pit, lazily coiled up around a small pile of bones that somehow was visible even through the bulk of the dragon's body, and the all too familiar sea of dark fog billowed above it. Mazzy raised a finger to her lips in warning, and the group started a slow, careful climb down into the pit, taking care to stay close to each other and to the protection of the wardstone even as they traversed the sloping sides of the pit, using every slight protrusion of rock as a foothold. Some of the rocks were looser than they appeared, and many slipped loose, creating minuscule landslides that made everyone hold their breath, but the dragon seemed to be used to such things; its only reaction was to lift its head just enough to glance at them with large, empty eyes. Seeing nothing out of the ordinairy, it settled down again almost immediately.


Did I mention I really dislike that dragon? He punked my low level party a couple of times.

Now why did I fight him? BECAUSE HE WAS THERE. :lol:

Also, I think you misspelled ordinary.

Their descent stopped a hundred feet from the dragon, where the surface of the pit was level enough to walk without fear of anyone losing their balance, and they moved slowly in a semicircle around the dragon towards the opposite side of the lair. There was an opening high up on that side of the pit; when the dragon had destroyed Mazzy's friends, the Shade Lord had entered the lair there. A second grueling climb, up instead of down, and the group found themselves in a short corridor, its walls still showing traces of elaborate carvings. Amauna's wardstone had held.

At the end of the corridor, a flight of worn stone steps led up to a walled courtyard, crisscrossed by a lattice of ancient paths. Something that looked like a seated statue, even darker than its surroundings, stood in the very middle of the courtyard, and a figure wreathed in shadow stood beside it. As the group entered the courtyard, it turned to look at them.


Shade Lord time...

"My knight miniature has escaped, and returned with more souls to feed upon," the figure said in a voice that sounded like ashes. "Welcome, all."


He's such a nice guy. So friendly. :?

The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oopsies. Gonna have to fight that dragon after all. :D

And great chapter Cel!

VH

#15 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 28 November 2007 - 06:32 AM


The fight with the bone golem left Minsc in a terrible state. The golem's scythes had ripped through his chainmail in several places, and copious amounts of blood seeped through the gashes as he lay unconscious on the rough stone floor, Boo squeaking plaintively beside him. Ember picked up the frightened hamster, placed him in her lap, and set to work healing Minsc. If only he still had his ankheg armour instead of this shoddy stuff, Ember thought in frustration as she inspected the damage; there were several deep gashes across his body, and broken links of chainmail were embedded in the edges of the wounds. As gently as she could, she pulled the metal free from Minsc's flesh, then said a litany of healing prayers over him. Soon, the bleeding stopped, and his face regained some colour. She said a final rejuvenating prayer, and the giant ranger woke up.


It's no good when you're still in Inferior Gear. Need to get him some Dragon Scale or some nice magical plate. :cry:


Oh yes, he really does need something like that, doesn't he?

As to the chainmail damage... There's a general belief that the broken links getting into the skin actually increased the chance of a fatal wound. And I imagine it also jumped the chances for tetnus and such things.

Good thing there are divine powers, no?


:lol:


"Boo! Where is Minsc's Boo?!"

"Right here," Ember said, and handed over the hamster. With a happy cry, Minsc clasped Boo safely in his hands.


And the Dynamic Duo of Destruction are reunited!


Minsc destroys, and Boo offers moral support!


"I believe so, my lady," Anomen replied. "Some bruises and cuts remain, but all major injuries have been attended to." The cleric had finished healing Valygar's wound - the only reminder of it was a significant tear in the shoulder of his leather armour - and was tending to Mazzy's arm; evidently, it had been broken when the bone golem knocked her down.


Doctor Anomen, Paging Doctor Anomen! :lol:


Anomen: Whatisitnow?! :cry:


Whatever that reason might be, it was not readily apparent as the group entered the chamber the bone golem had emerged from. It was a smallish chamber, about three times as wide as the corridor, and there was nothing in it other than the usual drifts of ancient dust, some scattered bones, and a simple sarcophagus with its lid halfway off. The lid of the sarcophagus bore what Ember recognized as the corroded remnants of a sun symbol, and one of the walls was made of some kind of smooth, sooted panels rather than of rough stone.


Ahh... the burial chamber of the prophetess.


Slightly altered from the game.


The bones that lay scattered across the floor were small and delicate; the bones of a child. The skull had been cracked into three segments, and several of the larger bones looked as if something had gnawed upon them, but as far as Ember could tell, few of the bones were outright missing.


Yick. Very nice job with that description


Thanks!


"Can you feel it?" Mazzy asked quietly.

"Feel what?" Yoshimo asked.

"The wrongness of this place. It has seeped into the very rocks themselves."


And the Divine Senses kicking in.


It struck me as the kind of thing a paladin-in-all-but-name would notice.


Valygar nodded, his face a stern mask. "It is ...not surprising. Dark, foul magic is drawn to such pits like flies."


*snickers* I LOVE that line. Just love it. Great use of it by the way. :lol:


It should be fairly clear that my Valygar won't let go of his opinions about magic anytime soon :shock:


"I don't think it is dark magic," Mazzy said. "It is something else. Something is out of place."

"Boo knows what is out of place! Bones should be in graves, not on floors!" The giant ranger bent down, carefully picked up a shin bone, and placed it in the sarcophagus.


And Minsc with the realization. :?


Minsc will often notice a simple thing. And every now and then, it's the Right Thing to Notice.


Anomen shrugged. "If nothing else, we may at least restore dignity to this tomb," he said, and started gathering up the frail, ancient rib bones. Edwin scoffed loudly at the foolish waste of time, but the rest of the group joined in. It was not long before they had the skeleton neatly laid out in its original resting place.


Something a Helmite should feel quite good about.


Oh, yes. And had he been a better Helmite than he is, he wouldn't even have shrugged before starting.


Something seemed to whisper through the chamber, and a small, shimmering figure appeared beside the sarcophagus. "My bones have been retrieved," the figure said in the voice of a young girl. "I am most grateful to you, and I pray that you are in this place to strike a blow against the darkness that has engulfed it."

"We... we are," Valygar said. "Who are you?"


The pause there does a great job at illustrating that surprise that would come from the appearance of a young girl ghost like that.


Thanks. (I wrote it without the pause originally, and the effect was that of a Valygar who sees little ghosts every day and treats them as nothing unusual whatsoever :shock: It's amazing how much an ellipsis and a repeated word can change a phrase at times!)


"We drove the Shade Lord from this place, but we did not destroy him. I was killed in the battle. My people entombed me here and set up wards to keep the darkness at bay, but as our Lord's power dwindled, the wards began to weaken. The priests left, or died, and I slept here alone. Then, one year ago, the Shade Lord returned, accompanied by vampires as well as his shadow minions. Together, they destroyed the wards and claimed the temple, and the Shade Lord threw my bones to his dark wolves, that they might defile my remains."


Interesting... the addition of vampires.... I wonder what you have in mind. But I like the new touches, the greater depth.


The vampire thing should be extremely obvious in hindsight, once I get around to it, which won't be for a while yet.


"(Glass?)" Edwin ran a finger over one of the panels, rubbing off a thick layer of soot and grime. A piercing ray of light shot through the freshly exposed glass.


Boom! Another nice touch making the source of the light more concrete.


It's actually quite concrete in game, too. It comes from the pillar with the first sunstone, and if you set foot outside after removing the stone, the light will be gone.


"This sun gem... it can be used as a weapon against the Shade Lord, then?" Valygar asked.

"No. The gem will fade if it is removed from the altar."


A better idea than having to use the Sun gem to bash down the barriers. Once again, a definite improvement.


Reasoning: If there are so many barriers there, how on earth did Mazzy's party manage to reach the dragon? True, the Shade Lord might have restored the barriers, but I doubt he'd replace the sun gems.

So, I removed the whole locked dungeon system :(

And that dragon can be a real pain in the tuckus if you're low enough level. Especially without a mage or two to blast down it's protections.


Oh god yes. (Current strategy for getting it out of the way: Traps + several magic missiles = extremely cheesy)

And then you go to the Big Bad Boss himself, who is a walk in the park by comparison.


"As long as he still exists, I will remain here."


It really sounds like Amaunator is a bit of a hard case. Especially with the Fallen Temple in the Unseeing Eye quest... he makes Helm seem cuddly.


Amaunator is nothing if not rigid.


After leaving Amauna's tomb, Mazzy led the party down the path that she and her companions had followed before, through darkened tunnels and dusty chambers. Amauna's wardstone proved true; they passed by numerous shadows, wraiths and skeletons without ever being noticed. Even though their footsteps seemed to go unheard, nobody spoke, just in case the undead would hear them after all.


Sneak. Sneak. Sneak. :(


What is this word 'sneak' that you speak of? :D


"No, Mazzy. I will not suffer any of you to endure such a thing in my stead. Come, let us sit down. I will explain further while we rest."


Bran: "Well, that's a plan."

Aleria: "A noble plan."

Bran: "But not what I'd call a good one."

Aleria: "It likely could succeed."

Bran: "Yeah, but kill him in the process."

Aleria: "Sometimes..."

Bran: "Sacrifice is the last resort of those who don't plan properly."


Valygar in a nutshell, in this instant :D

Did I mention I really dislike that dragon? He punked my low level party a couple of times.

Now why did I fight him? BECAUSE HE WAS THERE. :D


Isn't that why everyone fights him?

Also, I think you misspelled ordinary.


So I did. Thanks :evil:


The figure pointed at them, and Amauna's wardstone crumbled to dust in Valygar's hands.


Oopsies. Gonna have to fight that dragon after all. :cry:


:D

And great chapter Cel!


Thanks!




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