Cel,
A great chapter. I like the way the scene with the Duke played out. He seems the able leader, very knowing and very aware of what he can and can't do. The dream sequence was wonderfully chilling. Your use of imagery was wonderfully potent and the last few lines were excellent.
I know I don't comment too often, and when I do, it takes me a while, but I really love this story. It's a great cast, great characters and characterization and always an interesting read.
Thank you (and I hope I won't disappoint in the future)
