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#1 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 29 March 2006 - 10:43 PM

Chapter 9: Scratching the Surface


The last ogre fell to the ground with a sickening thud.

"Is everyone all right?" Imoen shouted.

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.

A man and a woman stepped out from behind a large boulder. In the days that had passed since leaving Melicamp in Thalantyr's care, they were the first people Ember and her friends had come across; the ogres had been chasing them, and the group had intervened. Thankfully, they at least appeared to be unharmed.

"Thank you so much for your assistance! We owe you our lives!" the woman exclaimed.

"We could never repay you," The man said. "All I can offer is my healing skills, if you desire," the man said.

"We would appreciate that," Ajantis said.

"I suspected you might. Those ogres did not appear the gentle types. Now, where shall I start..." The man scrutinized each of them before heading for Kivan. He held his hand a couple inches over the elf's chest and murmured softly with closed eyes. "Broken ribs," the man pronounced, then cast a healing spell.

The man continued onward to Ember. "Fractured arm. You should have held still; the bones have twisted out of position."

"I didn't have time to hold still."

"I know, my dear. It doesn't matter; I'll just have to set your arm straight before I can heal it." The man chanted a light healing cantrip, removing the pain and seemingly filling Ember's arm with cool water as he twisted it back into shape. He let go of her arm, nodded with satisfaction, and cast a more powerful spell upon her. The coolness gave way for a warm, tingling sensation as bones and tissue reknit. The warmth flooded through her body, easing minor aches and bruises she had barely noticed were there. Tentatively, she raised her arm; she noted with a smile that it moved and felt as though it had never been injured in the first place.

The healer moved on to Ajantis, concentrating on his badly sprained leg, and finished with Imoen's small cuts and scrapes.

"You have our gratitude," Kivan said.

"If you don't mind my asking," Ajantis said, "why is a healer of your caliber traveling in the wilderness in these unsafe times?"

"Oh, it is a sad tale," the woman said.

The man nodded. "I heal others in penance for what I have done in my past. Many have died because of a foolish act of charity on my part, you see."

"What happened?" Imoen asked, wide-eyed.

"I have a brother, an evil man named Davaeorn. Many have died at his hands, including... including our own father. He lives because I was too weak hearted to kill him when I had the chance. I have heard that he has come to this region, and I hope to meet him one day, to rectify my previous mistake."

"I hope you do find him," Ember said.

"May we ask who your companion is?" Ajantis asked. "Is this gentle lady aiding you in your momentous task?"

"My wife... my wonderful wife," the man said, smiling warmly at the woman, "could not bear to let me travel alone. She has followed me across many rough miles."

"He makes it sound like a chore," the woman said with a chuckle. "Now, I do not have his abilities, but I do see a lot that is hidden. Plain as day, it is to me. Would you care for a little old fashioned palm reading? A little gypsy magic to steer your course straight and true?"

Ember and Imoen looked at each other.

"Aw, what harm can it do?" Imoen said, shoving Ember towards the woman.

"Hey!" Ember protested, then sighed theatrically at her grinning friend. "I guess I am the first volunteer, then. How does this work?" Ember asked the woman.

The woman smiled warmly. "There is no need for alarm. What I offer is not magic in the common sense, but rather a reading of YOU. Nothing to do with summoning energy, just the reading of that which is already there. Give me your palm and I shall demonstrate."

Ember obediently held out her hand to the woman. "Let's have a look now," the woman muttered, tracing the palm's lines with her fingers; the touch was warm and comforting. "Interesting. Though you live the hard life now, your hand tells of a softer existence not long ago. I assume that you have just recently taken to the road?"

"That much is true, yes," Ember said. Pretty harmless so far; anyone could see how fresh those calluses are.

"I thought as much. Lets have a little closer look now. Back down your life line," the woman said, tracing a single long line across Ember's palm. "I see a scholarly influence, and you are well educated. You had a mentor that was a great sage? Perhaps of considerable power as well?"

Ember hesitated before answering. "My foster father Gorion might fit that description."

"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.

"What? What is it that you saw?"

"I saw nothing! You will live long and enjoy life and we must be going now!" The woman ran off, dragging her confused husband along with her.

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Ember stared morosely at the mass of greenish black above her. They were many miles from where they'd destroyed the band of ogres, and had set up camp for the night under a cluster of large evergreen trees. The others were fast asleep already, but although her body felt tired, she just couldn't rest.

She could not get the palm-reading woman out of her head. Her stricken expression, the way she had let go of her hand as though it were toxic, the obvious lie she had insisted upon ending her reading with before running away.

The woman must have seen something horrible in her past.

When they were children, she and Imoen had sometimes pretended that their parents were heroes and princesses who had had to give up their babies for a number of extremely dramatic and deeply tragic reasons beyond their control. It was only a game, but part of her had wished that their games might have had a kernel of truth; she had hoped her lost parents were good, kind people who never would have abandoned her willingly.

If she were a regular, tragic orphan, the woman should have looked shocked and called her a poor, poor child. The only explanation was that her parents were truly awful people, or that she herself was awful. Hells, maybe she killed her parents when she was a baby?

Now how could I possibly have done that, she chided herself. Angry at herself and at her inability to let it go and let herself rest, she tossed her blanket aside and stood up from her bedroll. Moving as quietly as she could, she left the cluster of trees. The moon was half full and gave enough light that she could easily make her way to the small river nearby. She sat down on a large, flat rock which jutted into the shallow river. The river was shallow and had a bed of rocks, worn round and smooth by time and current. She stuck her hand into the cold water and fished out a handful of the pebbles, which she sorted into small piles according to shape. She was preoccupied with skipping the flattest stones across the river when she was startled by the sound of Kivan's voice from behind to her.

"You should be sleeping, child," he said quietly.

Dropping the stone in her hand and turning rapidly, Ember found herself looking up into the elf's serious face. "Kivan! Um, shouldn't you be sleeping too?"

"I do not require much rest," Kivan said. "Why are you sitting here?"

"I'm just... thinking."

"About the healer's wife?"

"Yes," Ember admitted. "I just don't understand... why would she react like that? She was so scared! It doesn't make sense - unless she saw something really bad about me!"

"Palm reading is not an accurate discipline."

Ember didn't respond, and for a couple minutes, the only sounds around them were those of running water, distant nocturnal animals, and their breathing.

"Kivan?"

"Yes?"

"Do you think my parents might have been bad people?"

"Does it matter?"

"Doesn't it?"

"Your lineage does not make you. Good men can have evil offspring, and bad men can have gentle offspring. How you were raised is of at least as much importance."

Ember nodded quietly. "That makes sense, I guess."

"What makes you is what you do here and now, not what might have occured two decades ago. You were raised by a good man, and from what I can see, it is apparent in you. Do not let a fortune teller make you forget that."

Ember smiled in the darkness. "Thanks, Kivan. I appreciate that."

"You are welcome. Now, get some rest, child."

The two of them walked back to the camp in silence. Ember lay down on her bedroll and looked at the stars above her as they shone through the loose ceiling of branches. Kivan was right; her past was no different today than it had been yesterday. Palm reader or no palm reader, she was still who she always had been: Gorion's daughter.

And she'd make him proud of her yet.

As Ember drifted off into sleep, she found herself standing outside the gates of Candlekeep. Her father was standing at the gates, a warm yet wistful smile on his face as he blocked the path back inside.

"You cannot go back this way, child," her father told her. "You must go on."

#2 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 08:22 AM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.


Laying on hands… you know there is a naughty implication about that special ability, yes? :roll:

A man and a woman stepped out from behind a large boulder. Ember recognized them as the couple the ogres had been chasing; thankfully, they at least appeared to be unharmed.


That’s what the adventurers are there for – to be clobbered instead of you!

"I know, my dear. It doesn't matter; I'll just have to set your arm straight before I can heal it." The man chanted a light healing cantrip, removing the pain and seemingly filling Ember's arm with cool water as he twisted it back into shape. He let go of her arm, nodded with satisfaction, and cast a more powerful spell upon her. The coolness gave way for a warm, tingling sensation as bones and tissue reknit. The warmth flooded through her body, easing minor aches and bruises she had barely noticed were there. Tentatively, she raised her arm; she noted with a smile that it moved and felt as though it had never been injured in the first place.


If only modern day medicine was as easy as this. Avian flu? Cure Light Wounds! Gangrene? Cure Moderate Wounds! Colon Tumor? Cure Serious Wounds! :)

"I have a brother, an evil man named Davaeorn. Many have died at his hands, including... including our own father. He lives because I was too weak hearted to kill him when I had the chance. I have heard that he has come to this region, and I hope to meet him one day, to rectify my previous mistake."


Ah, the Surgeon. Poor fellow, I always felt sorry for him.

"I hope you do find him," Ember said.


No, but someone else will. :)

The woman smiled warmly. "There is no need for alarm. What I offer is not magic in the common sense, but rather a reading of YOU. Nothing to do with summoning energy, just the reading of that which is already there. Give me your palm and I shall demonstrate."


I liked the readings you can get in Trademeet a lot better. :twisted:

"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.


Whoops, saw a bit too much for her comfort.

When they were children, she and Imoen had sometimes pretended that their parents were heroes and princesses who had had to give up their babies for a number of extremely dramatic and deeply tragic reasons beyond their control. It was only a game, but part of her had wished that their games might have had a kernel of truth; she had hoped her lost parents were good, kind people who never would have abandoned her willingly.


Yeah. :lol: I know we would all hope for that in her place. But in the end, that’s really not important. You and your deeds alone determine what you are, nothing else matters.

Dropping the stone in her hand and turning rapidly, Ember found herself looking up into the elf's serious face. "Kivan! Um, shouldn't you be sleeping too?"


"I do not require much rest," Kivan said. "Why are you sitting here?"


Yep, he probably does the whole reverie thing.

"Do you think my parents might have been bad people?"


"Does it matter?"


"Doesn't it?"


"Your lineage does not make you. Good men can have evil offspring, and bad men can have gentle offspring. How you were raised of at least as much importance."


Seems that Kivan agrees with me. :shock:

The two of them walked back to the camp in silence. Ember lay down on her bedroll and looked at the stars above her as they shone through the loose ceiling of branches. Kivan was right; her past was no different today than it had been yesterday. Palm reader or no palm reader, she was still who she always had been: Gorion's daughter.


Yup, glad she realizes this simple truth. :?

"You cannot go back this way, child," her father told her. "You must go on."


Hopefully he also told her not to take the seemingly smooth, alluring path… :shock:

#3 Guest_Futurist_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 01:04 PM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.


Yes, alive counts as alright. :roll:

Ogres, pretty though in BG1.


"He makes it sound like a chore," the woman said with a chuckle. "Now, I do not have his abilities, but I do see a lot that is hidden. Plain as day, it is to me. Would you care for a little old fashioned palm reading? A little gypsy magic to steer your course straight and true?"


Ooh.. The reading from BG2, neat.

"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.


Maybe I shouldn`t laugh but the last line is funny.

"Yes," Ember admitted. "I just don't understand... why would she react like that? She was so scared! It doesn't make sense - unless she saw something really bad about me!"

"Palm reading is not an accurate discipline."


I prefer tarot cards myself.

#4 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 06:15 PM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.


Laying on hands… you know there is a naughty implication about that special ability, yes? :roll:


Nope. Never even occured to me when I was writing that paragraph. Didn't cause me any wording issues or anything at all. :)

"I know, my dear. It doesn't matter; I'll just have to set your arm straight before I can heal it." The man chanted a light healing cantrip, removing the pain and seemingly filling Ember's arm with cool water as he twisted it back into shape. He let go of her arm, nodded with satisfaction, and cast a more powerful spell upon her. The coolness gave way for a warm, tingling sensation as bones and tissue reknit. The warmth flooded through her body, easing minor aches and bruises she had barely noticed were there. Tentatively, she raised her arm; she noted with a smile that it moved and felt as though it had never been injured in the first place.


If only modern day medicine was as easy as this. Avian flu? Cure Light Wounds! Gangrene? Cure Moderate Wounds! Colon Tumor? Cure Serious Wounds! :(


And let's not even start on resurrection spells.

"I have a brother, an evil man named Davaeorn. Many have died at his hands, including... including our own father. He lives because I was too weak hearted to kill him when I had the chance. I have heard that he has come to this region, and I hope to meet him one day, to rectify my previous mistake."


Ah, the Surgeon. Poor fellow, I always felt sorry for him.


Yeah, me too.

"I hope you do find him," Ember said.


No, but someone else will. :D


Probably just as well, considering the Surgeon probably couldn't fight his way out of a paper bag :lol:

The woman smiled warmly. "There is no need for alarm. What I offer is not magic in the common sense, but rather a reading of YOU. Nothing to do with summoning energy, just the reading of that which is already there. Give me your palm and I shall demonstrate."


I liked the readings you can get in Trademeet a lot better. :twisted:


Yah. Kveroslava actually tells you stuff, and she has words for your party members as well (even though she sometimes tells them about their futures after they've done what needed to be done)

"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.


Whoops, saw a bit too much for her comfort.


Probably saw mommy dearest or something like that.

When they were children, she and Imoen had sometimes pretended that their parents were heroes and princesses who had had to give up their babies for a number of extremely dramatic and deeply tragic reasons beyond their control. It was only a game, but part of her had wished that their games might have had a kernel of truth; she had hoped her lost parents were good, kind people who never would have abandoned her willingly.


Yeah. :? I know we would all hope for that in her place. But in the end, that’s really not important. You and your deeds alone determine what you are, nothing else matters.


Who are you and what have you done with my Kivan?

Dropping the stone in her hand and turning rapidly, Ember found herself looking up into the elf's serious face. "Kivan! Um, shouldn't you be sleeping too?"

"I do not require much rest," Kivan said. "Why are you sitting here?"


Yep, he probably does the whole reverie thing.


Yeah, with a side of brooding.

"Do you think my parents might have been bad people?"

"Does it matter?"

"Doesn't it?"

"Your lineage does not make you. Good men can have evil offspring, and bad men can have gentle offspring. How you were raised of at least as much importance."


Seems that Kivan agrees with me. :shock:


Yep, you're both smart it seems :)


The two of them walked back to the camp in silence. Ember lay down on her bedroll and looked at the stars above her as they shone through the loose ceiling of branches. Kivan was right; her past was no different today than it had been yesterday. Palm reader or no palm reader, she was still who she always had been: Gorion's daughter.


Yup, glad she realizes this simple truth. :D


Well, I wasn't about to have her angst forever about this little thing, or she'd have nothing to do the next times she gets something to be troubled about :)

"You cannot go back this way, child," her father told her. "You must go on."


Hopefully he also told her not to take the seemingly smooth, alluring path… :shock:


Oh absolutely; she made him very proud in that dream.

She won't discover the consequences for a while, though, and it'll be even longer till she links it to the dreams :?

#5 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 06:21 PM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.


Yes, alive counts as alright. :roll:

Ogres, pretty though in BG1.


Especially that horde og ogres and half ogres and ogrillions and ogre berserkers due east of the Surgeon. Kinda convenient that they placed him there, actually :twisted:


"He makes it sound like a chore," the woman said with a chuckle. "Now, I do not have his abilities, but I do see a lot that is hidden. Plain as day, it is to me. Would you care for a little old fashioned palm reading? A little gypsy magic to steer your course straight and true?"


Ooh.. The reading from BG2, neat.


Not quite. BG2 has Kveroslava. This woman is Arkushule, who is normally on the Lighthouse map a bit south of Safana. I decided that she and the Surgeon were meant for each other, so here she is :shock:


"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.


Maybe I shouldn`t laugh but the last line is funny.


Cut 'n' pasted game text, so I can't take credit :shock:


"Yes," Ember admitted. "I just don't understand... why would she react like that? She was so scared! It doesn't make sense - unless she saw something really bad about me!"

"Palm reading is not an accurate discipline."


I prefer tarot cards myself.


Personally, I'm a born-again skeptic :lol:

#6 Guest_Finduilas_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 08:07 PM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm. She hadn't really noticed the pain while they were still fighting - she had been too busy, after all - but now the pain seemed to be intensifying with every moment that passed. Clearly, the half-ogre's blow had broken more than just her bow. She glanced around at her companions: Kivan's breathing was loud and ragged, and Ajantis was limping towards him. She watched as Ajantis placed a hand on Kivan's chest. There was a flash of blue light. When it faded, Kivan was obviously breathing a bit easier; she could no longer hear him from ten paces.


*This* I remember well, too, trying to keep every low-HP character alive while conserving your meager heal spells and potions as much as possible.

The man nodded. "I heal others in penance for what I have done in my past. Many have died because of a foolish act of charity on my part, you see."

"What happened?" Imoen asked, wide-eyed.

"I have a brother, an evil man named Davaeorn. Many have died at his hands, including... including our own father. He lives because I was too weak hearted to kill him when I had the chance. I have heard that he has come to this region, and I hope to meet him one day, to rectify my previous mistake."


Ya know, somehow I think they'll be able to help with that. :roll:

"You had a resonably happy childhood with him, aside from being a little difficult. My my, but you were quite the little hellion," the woman said with a slight chuckle. "Wonder where that comes from? Let's see what we can't learn about you back before this Gorion." The woman leaned over Ember's hand, studying it even more closely. "Further back I see...I see... Madre de merced!" The woman let go of Ember's hand. "I-see-a-long-and-happy-life-for-you-and-yours," she said hurriedly.


Oh, well, *that's* convincing. :twisted:

If she were a regular, tragic orphan, the woman should have looked shocked and called her a poor, poor child. The only explanation was that her parents were truly awful people, or that she herself was awful. Hells, maybe she killed her parents when she was a baby?

Now how could I possibly have done that, she chided herself.


It's nice to see she's not completely lost to reason. Though it must be pretty perplexing/alarming to have all these weird things associated with you for no apparent reason.

"Your lineage does not make you. Good men can have evil offspring, and bad men can have gentle offspring. How you were raised is of at least as much importance."

Ember nodded quietly. "That makes sense, I guess."

"What makes you is what you do here and now, not what might have occured two decades ago. You were raised by a good man, and from what I can see, it is apparent in you. Do not let a fortune teller make you forget that."

Ember smiled in the darkness. "Thanks, Kivan. I appreciate that."


Yay, Kivan!

As Ember drifted off into sleep, she found herself standing outside the gates of Candlekeep. Her father was standing at the gates, a warm yet wistful smile on his face as he blocked the path back inside.

"You cannot go back this way, child," her father told her. "You must go on."



Awww. :shock:

#7 Sumpton

Posted 30 March 2006 - 08:54 PM

I like your characters, they are very lively. Even the minor character are more fleshed out with your style.

But one little question... What happened to the chicken in Imoen pack? :shock:

Or was he kind-of invited along for dinner! :twisted: :roll:

Thanks...
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Cheers...

#8 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 09:44 PM

"Does alive count?" Ember replied, clutching her arm.


*This* I remember well, too, trying to keep every low-HP character alive while conserving your meager heal spells and potions as much as possible.


Archery abuse and instant knowledge of what happens when you Dream helps quite a bit with that :twisted: Still, the ingame version of this group hurt pretty badly after that particular fight.


"I have a brother, an evil man named Davaeorn. Many have died at his hands, including... including our own father. He lives because I was too weak hearted to kill him when I had the chance. I have heard that he has come to this region, and I hope to meet him one day, to rectify my previous mistake."


Ya know, somehow I think they'll be able to help with that. :roll:


Hopefully the Surgeon will find out, as I didn't let this one tell the party to kill Davaeorn for him :shock:


Now how could I possibly have done that, she chided herself.


It's nice to see she's not completely lost to reason. Though it must be pretty perplexing/alarming to have all these weird things associated with you for no apparent reason.


Yeah. But still, a little angst can be healthier than just prancing happily through all the evil omens and bloodshed and whatnot.


"What makes you is what you do here and now, not what might have occured two decades ago. You were raised by a good man, and from what I can see, it is apparent in you. Do not let a fortune teller make you forget that."

Ember smiled in the darkness. "Thanks, Kivan. I appreciate that."


Yay, Kivan!


He makes a good father figure, doesn't he :shock:

As Ember drifted off into sleep, she found herself standing outside the gates of Candlekeep. Her father was standing at the gates, a warm yet wistful smile on his face as he blocked the path back inside.

"You cannot go back this way, child," her father told her. "You must go on."



Awww. :)


It's okay. She found an interesting path and stuff. And in a few days she should discover other consequences of the dream :lol:

You asked about Drizzt; I think he'll be up next, along with a bit more Imoen than I've managed to put in lately.

#9 Guest_Cel_*

Posted 30 March 2006 - 09:47 PM

I like your characters, they are very lively. Even the minor character are more fleshed out with your style.


Thanks :)

But one little question... What happened to the chicken in Imoen pack? :)


Um, he's been skipped :shock: This is supposed to be a few days after the previous chapter, sorry I didn't make it clearer.

Melicamp's fate will be made clear later, as I intend to have them visit Thalantyr again and actually write about it next time :shock:

Or was he kind-of invited along for dinner! :twisted: :roll:


No, no. They went to Thalantyr and Thalantyr was annoyed, figured out how to hopefully turn Melicamp back, got a skull from his stock of reagents (what wizard of his caliber would have to send adventurers out to get a measly skull?) and the result will be revealed at some later time :lol:




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