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#1 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 25 July 2005 - 05:46 AM

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1. Just a little setup on the Firebug mini-plotline...

2. Swearing warning: again. :) Given who's doing the swearing, though, I'm surprised it wasn't worse.

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45th and Sprang
Street Level


The fire hadn’t yet spread to the neighboring buildings, but that wasn’t much comfort for the G.C.P.D. officers down at street level trying desperately to keep the situation from becoming too chaotic to control. In an effort to retain some semblance of order, they’d cordoned off the entire area. Yellow caution-tape was everywhere, and uniformed patrolmen were standing on the street corners trying to keep the crowds of onlookers away. Police cars, both marked and unmarked were parked across the roadways blocking all traffic in and out of the area except in the entry lanes set aside specifically for Emergency Services personnel.

Anomen swerved the car in around a pair of black-and-white G.C.P.D. squad cars and brought the vehicle to a stop. He popped his door immediately afterwards and sprinted to where someone had set up a mobile command post of sorts.

Enara and Anomen found Detective Nathaniel Patton standing by the open door of his unmarked. In his hand was the vehicle’s radio receiver, attached to the main unit by a coiled length of cord. “Where are you, Sarge?”

A burst of static and the crackling of flames came through over the radio frequency. “Right on him, I've got this mother-!” Detective Sergeant Sarevok Anchev responded as he continued pursuit. The suspected perpetrator had taken to the building’s roof, and several of Gotham’s finest, including the Sarge, were right on his heels.

Back down below, Nate shouted a warning over the radio. “Take a shot, Sarge, don’t risk close contact!”

The immediate response was the sound of several sets of hurried footsteps pounding against a flaming roof, then a handful of grunts as the Sarge and the officers backing him up vaulted some obstacle or another. “I almost got him!” Anchev growled into the walkie-talkie gripped in his left hand. There was a sudden, loud * Whoosh! * and then a scream.

“Sarge! What happened?! Answer me!”

Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”

”You all right, up there?”

“No, damn it all… I lost him!”

“Say again?”

Anchev grumbled into his radio as he extricated himself from the smoldering remains of his favorite blazer. “Bastard got away, Patton…” he growled. A couple of uniformed patrolmen tried to help him up, but he waved them away. “…and he toasted my best jacket while he was at it. Jackass.”

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“Nate! What can we do?”

“Is there anybody in the apartment house still?”

Nate Patton was busy, alternately yelling into his radio and staring in morbid fascination at the flames licking out of the burning building. He looked away from both tasks when Delryn and Kell approached him. Patton shrugged helplessly at their questions, clearly frustrated at being forced to sit on the sidelines while so much was happening. He frowned. “I don’t know. We’ve been doing our best to evacuate the tenants, but we can’t do much without support.”

“Where’s F.D.G.C.?!” Enara demanded; she held her hand above her eyes, trying to shade them against the bright orange light blossoming from each and every one of the apartment building’s windows.

Another frown. “Warehouse fire few blocks away. Big one. They’re scrambling a few engines to us over here. Should be here any time.”

Enara growled. “Don’t think that’s gonna be good enough. They should be here already. Damn it, I’m heading in there…”

Patton grabbed her by the collar of her jacket and yanked backwards so hard she nearly lost her balance. “Are you crazy, Kell?! You can’t go in there!”

She spun around and glared at him until he let go of her blazer. “Someone has to. If not me, then who-“

A window up on the fifth floor of the building exploded in a shower of broken glass and splintered wood. Cracked, jagged shards of the shattered windowpane and ruined frame rained down onto the asphalt below.

A dark silhouette suddenly emerged to fill the space left behind by the destroyed window; it stood there, backlit by the yellow and orange flames of the raging fire, for only a fraction of a second before diving out towards the street, swinging across to a building over on the other side of 45th, and then dropping straight down to the road below.

Delryn, Kell, and Patton looked on in astonishment, but it was Enara who finally managed to speak first. “What the hell?” she whispered.

The figure standing across the street was facing away from them, but soon turned, his black cape billowing out behind him from the motion. Cradled in his arms, and curled up into a tight, little ball, was a young (probably only a short while out of her teens) woman dressed in her nightclothes. He gently lowered her to the ground, and she looked up at her rescuer, still trembling. Wrapped close to her chest was a tiny infant – crying now, but otherwise seemingly no worse for the wear.

The Batman put a hand on her shoulder and smoothly turned her around to face the awestruck detectives. “See those police officers over there? They’ll take care of you.” His voice came out sounding not quite gruff, but far from warm, as well.

Anomen and Nate rushed forward, quickly flanking the (understandably) shaken woman and quietly shepherding her and her child to a waiting ambulance. Enara turned to join them, but his voice, speaking to the back of her head, stopped her in her tracks.

“Detective Kell… that’s the last of the tenants.”

She turned and tried to look him in the eye, but couldn’t seem to scrape together the courage. She nodded mutely, instead, her eyes cast downward, apparently finding her shoes supremely interesting. By the time she’d managed to work up the nerve to even look up again, he was gone.

“Who was that masked man?” Patton joked from some distance behind her.

“Stop it,” she said, frowning at him.

There were several drawn-out, tortured wails in the distance as a half-dozen of the F.D.G.C.’s fire engines barreled down the street. “Finally…” Enara grumbled as the cavalry finally arrived and began swarming into action. She leaned against the hood of Nate’s unmarked, suddenly feeling very tired. Nate himself had taken it upon himself to go hunting for the Sarge, who had apparently made it to one of the adjacent rooftops. His latest radio transmissions had suggested he hadn’t been seriously hurt, but no one would be able to relax until they knew for sure. Patton had taken Anomen with him, leaving Enara alone (relatively speaking) down below.

Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”

#2 Guest_VigaHrolf_*

Posted 25 July 2005 - 02:39 PM

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Alrighty then?

2. Swearing warning: again. :twisted: Given who's doing the swearing, though, I'm surprised it wasn't worse.


While it may not be sufficient for the character :D :P it certainly makes up for it in colorfulness. :lol:

Anomen swerved the car in around a pair of black-and-white G.C.P.D. squad cars and brought the vehicle to a stop. He popped his door immediately afterwards and sprinted to where someone had set up a mobile command post of sorts.


Anomen is one of those types who's always on the case. Or on the action. Or... well, you get my drift.


A burst of static and the crackling of flames came through over the radio frequency. “Right on him, I've got this mother-!” Detective Sergeant Sarevok Anchev responded as he continued pursuit. The suspected perpetrator had taken to the building’s roof, and several of Gotham’s finest, including the Sarge, were right on his heels.


Sarge Sarry sounds pissed. :lol: This could be entertainment. :lol:

Back down below, Nate shouted a warning over the radio. “Take a shot, Sarge, don’t risk close contact!”


He's hot and toasty and we don't want you getting all roasty. :)

The immediate response was the sound of several sets of hurried footsteps pounding against a flaming roof, then a handful of grunts as the Sarge and the officers backing him up vaulted some obstacle or another. “I almost got him!” Anchev growled into the walkie-talkie gripped in his left hand. There was a sudden, loud * Whoosh! * and then a scream.


Ruhro! No burning Sarevok. It gets him mad. :)

Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”


Oooooh. Ass pirate. Nice choice. The MF at the end just lends it character.

Bran: "High marks for inventiveness and including a pirate."

”You all right, up there?”

“No, damn it all… I lost him!”


No wonder he's pissed. :D

Anchev grumbled into his radio as he extricated himself from the smoldering remains of his favorite blazer. “Bastard got away, Patton…” he growled. A couple of uniformed patrolmen tried to help him up, but he waved them away. “…and he toasted my best jacket while he was at it. Jackass.”


Ooooh. Now that's just mean. :D


Nate Patton was busy, alternately yelling into his radio and staring in morbid fascination at the flames licking out of the burning building. He looked away from both tasks when Delryn and Kell approached him. Patton shrugged helplessly at their questions, clearly frustrated at being forced to sit on the sidelines while so much was happening. He frowned. “I don’t know. We’ve been doing our best to evacuate the tenants, but we can’t do much without support.”


Without the fire department, there really isnt' much one can do...

“Where’s F.D.G.C.?!” Enara demanded; she held her hand above her eyes, trying to shade them against the bright orange light blossoming from each and every one of the apartment building’s windows.

Another frown. “Warehouse fire few blocks away. Big one. They’re scrambling a few engines to us over here. Should be here any time.”


Warehouse fires can be damn damn nasty. Especially if they're full or even worse refrigerated. 8 firemen died in Worcester MA about ten years ago when an abandoned refrigerated warehouse went up and they went into to rescue squatters who 1) accidentally started the blaze and 2) weren't in there. The thick smoke and fumes from the foam caused them to get lost and then... well... yeah. :roll:

Enara growled. “Don’t think that’s gonna be good enough. They should be here already. Damn it, I’m heading in there…”


Not bright Nar... once the building's really gone up, there isn't much you can do without gear. Other than be another casualty....

Patton grabbed her by the collar of her jacket and yanked backwards so hard she nearly lost her balance. “Are you crazy, Kell?! You can’t go in there!”

She spun around and glared at him until he let go of her blazer. “Someone has to. If not me, then who-“


Batman? :shock:

A window up on the fifth floor of the building exploded in a shower of broken glass and splintered wood. Cracked, jagged shards of the shattered windowpane and ruined frame rained down onto the asphalt below.

A dark silhouette suddenly emerged to fill the space left behind by the destroyed window; it stood there, backlit by the yellow and orange flames of the raging fire, for only a fraction of a second before diving out towards the street, swinging across to a building over on the other side of 45th, and then dropping straight down to the road below.


See, Batman. :D

Delryn, Kell, and Patton looked on in astonishment, but it was Enara who finally managed to speak first. “What the hell?” she whispered.

The figure standing across the street was facing away from them, but soon turned, his black cape billowing out behind him from the motion. Cradled in his arms, and curled up into a tight, little ball, was a young (probably only a short while out of her teens) woman dressed in her nightclothes. He gently lowered her to the ground, and she looked up at her rescuer, still trembling. Wrapped close to her chest was a tiny infant – crying now, but otherwise seemingly no worse for the wear.


Batman saves the day again. :)

Anomen and Nate rushed forward, quickly flanking the (understandably) shaken woman and quietly shepherding her and her child to a waiting ambulance. Enara turned to join them, but his voice, speaking to the back of her head, stopped her in her tracks.

“Detective Kell… that’s the last of the tenants.”


And save Detective Kell, too.

She turned and tried to look him in the eye, but couldn’t seem to scrape together the courage. She nodded mutely, instead, her eyes cast downward, apparently finding her shoes supremely interesting. By the time she’d managed to work up the nerve to even look up again, he was gone.


I can understand that... having a caped crazy doing your job probably doesn't help the ol self esteem.

“Who was that masked man?” Patton joked from some distance behind her.


Bwahahahahaha

Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”


Someone in need of a permanent place behind bars....

Good stuff again Alpha. Can't wait for the EXCITING conclusion.

Same Kell time. Same Kell channel. 8) :wink:

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#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 July 2005 - 05:50 PM

1. Just a little setup on the Firebug mini-plotline...


Ya know, I was just killing off an army of Fire Beetles… playing around with some Neverwinter Nights mods. :roll:

2. Swearing warning: again. :shock: Given who's doing the swearing, though, I'm surprised it wasn't worse.


Sarge Anchev? Umm, yeah, I can only guess what he sounds like at the worst. :D

A burst of static and the crackling of flames came through over the radio frequency. “Right on him, I've got this mother-!” Detective Sergeant Sarevok Anchev responded as he continued pursuit. The suspected perpetrator had taken to the building’s roof, and several of Gotham’s finest, including the Sarge, were right on his heels.


Yup, it’s Sarry alright. Go on Sarry, step on that Bug! :lol:

Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”


Heh heh. Juicy! :twisted:

A window up on the fifth floor of the building exploded in a shower of broken glass and splintered wood. Cracked, jagged shards of the shattered windowpane and ruined frame rained down onto the asphalt below.


Still wanna go in, Nar? :P

A dark silhouette suddenly emerged to fill the space left behind by the destroyed window; it stood there, backlit by the yellow and orange flames of the raging fire, for only a fraction of a second before diving out towards the street, swinging across to a building over on the other side of 45th, and then dropping straight down to the road below.


Good old Bat, showing off again.

Anomen and Nate rushed forward, quickly flanking the (understandably) shaken woman and quietly shepherding her and her child to a waiting ambulance. Enara turned to join them, but his voice, speaking to the back of her head, stopped her in her tracks.


“Detective Kell… that’s the last of the tenants.”


Ah, he’s been taking note of her. Wonder what she’ll make of that.

“Who was that masked man?” Patton joked from some distance behind her.


A figment of your collective imagination, wouldn’t you know. :wink:

Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”


Hmm… kind of a strange episode… you’d expect the plot to advance in some way, but this was sort of… I don’t know, like going nowhere. They didn’t even get that FireGerm! Maybe that was the point of the episode… a bit strange, so I am a bit of a loss as to where this goes next…

#4 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 25 July 2005 - 09:48 PM

it certainly makes up for it in colorfulness.


Considering that my friends and I spent several months worth of lunch-hours in high school compiling a list that culminated with that one phrase, I'd be pretty bummed if it wasn't colorful. :P

Anomen is one of those types who's always on the case.


No Helmites in Gotham City, but he's still the vigilant type, yeah.

This could be entertainment.


It's funny how depending on context, he can be an utter bastard, or, as it is here, entertaining. :roll:

He's hot and toasty and we don't want you getting all roasty.


This almost sounds like something out of a Quizno's commercial. :lol:

Ruhro! No burning Sarevok. It gets him mad.


Don't shoot the Sarge. It only makes him angry. :twisted:

Ooooh. Now that's just mean.


Yep. They're detectives. They need to look decent, but they don't exactly have a huge budget to spend on clothes.

See, Batman.


No, it was Krypto the Super Dog. :lol: :wink:

I can understand that... having a caped crazy doing your job probably doesn't help the ol self esteem.


True enough. A few have come to grips with it... like, say, Gordon and Montoya... but, for example, Bullock never liked Batman even if he accepted his help sometimes.

Good stuff again Alpha. Can't wait for the EXCITING conclusion.

Same Kell time. Same Kell channel.


Maybe I should get Enara a bust of George Washington (or whoever it was) for her desk. :lol:

Anyway, got a few more sections left to go, I think... need to sit down and crank some more out. :shock: :D

#5 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 25 July 2005 - 09:52 PM

Ya know, I was just killing off an army of Fire Beetles… playing around with some Neverwinter Nights mods.


I know some of you have said the expansions are way better than the original campaign, but even so, I've never been all that tempted to try them... or any of the fan-made mods, either.

Umm, yeah, I can only guess what he sounds like at the worst.


There's this line in the original comic that I think works very well, but I couldn't find a way to fit it in. Basically, it has Sgt. Davies (a.k.a. Sarevok in my version), and he's all animated, his eyes are bugging out as he's telling this story. And he goes "So this crazy broad's like 'Don't swear in front of my kid!' and I'm like 'Lady, that ain't even swearing!' "

I laughed. :roll:

Good old Bat, showing off again.


He can't help it that he's that good. :twisted:

A figment of your collective imagination, wouldn’t you know.


Exactly. Good work. Batman doesn't exist. Excellent. Carry on. :shock:

Hmm… kind of a strange episode… you’d expect the plot to advance in some way, but this was sort of… I don’t know, like going nowhere. They didn’t even get that FireGerm! Maybe that was the point of the episode… a bit strange, so I am a bit of a loss as to where this goes next…


It's supposed to be a bit of an interlude... just to show what's happening with Firebug since, yes, that plot line -will- tie in with the main one... as to how, well, that'll show up later. :wink:

#6 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 July 2005 - 05:42 AM

Ya know, I was just killing off an army of Fire Beetles… playing around with some Neverwinter Nights mods.


I know some of you have said the expansions are way better than the original campaign, but even so, I've never been all that tempted to try them... or any of the fan-made mods, either.


Actually... the more I play that game, the more I'm convinced that the main reason for someone to get it in the first place is for the mods. You see, Aurora engine lends itself to modding way better than any other modding engine, and hence, the mods developed with this engine are on a simply different quality level than the Infinity Engine mods. There are some truly incredible things you can do with the Aurora engine, I tell you - there are virtually no bounds to the modder's creativity.

If you have the time, just check the NWNVault's Module Hall Of Fame for the general feel of what these modules are about.

http://nwvault.ign.c...iew=Modules.HOF

You can have modules based on classical D&D PnP campaigns, or original ones with the setting and the cities made stunningly accurate with the D&D canon and the sourcebook maps. You can have conversion modules that convert other games to the Aurora Engine, for example I've found a total Diablo and Icewind Dale: Heart Of Winter conversions.

Now, I'm not trying to get you playing the game, obviously - I've just come to opinion that the game is sometimes unfairly dissed, ignoring all the positives that it has. Granted, the whole OC is a big con in itself, but... yeah, nobody is getting the game to play the OC, really. :)

#7 Guest_Wyvern_*

Posted 27 July 2005 - 04:15 AM

Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”

That's Sarry, putting his high intelligence to work. No one else can curse like he does.

Another frown. “Warehouse fire few blocks away. Big one. They’re scrambling a few engines to us over here. Should be here any time.”

Wonder if it's just coincidence that the fire department's busy.

A dark silhouette suddenly emerged to fill the space left behind by the destroyed window; it stood there, backlit by the yellow and orange flames of the raging fire, for only a fraction of a second before diving out towards the street, swinging across to a building over on the other side of 45th, and then dropping straight down to the road below.

Drama queen. :twisted:

She turned and tried to look him in the eye, but couldn’t seem to scrape together the courage. She nodded mutely, instead, her eyes cast downward, apparently finding her shoes supremely interesting. By the time she’d managed to work up the nerve to even look up again, he was gone.

“Who was that masked man?” Patton joked from some distance behind her.

At least Patton's morale seems good.

Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”

Right, distraction over, back to the serious stuff.

#8 Weyoun

Posted 27 July 2005 - 05:12 PM

Anomen swerved the car in around a pair of black-and-white G.C.P.D. squad cars and brought the vehicle to a stop. He popped his door immediately afterwards and sprinted to where someone had set up a mobile command post of sorts.


Great... Now he can yell 'What is it now?!' into his radio and transmit it all over the city. ;) :twisted:

“Sarge! What happened?! Answer me!”


Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”


Well, if he's anything like the historical Patton, that talk shouldn't phase him much. :shock:

Anchev grumbled into his radio as he extricated himself from the smoldering remains of his favorite blazer. “Bastard got away, Patton…” he growled. A couple of uniformed patrolmen tried to help him up, but he waved them away. “…and he toasted my best jacket while he was at it. Jackass.”


:twisted: Lovely.

Delryn, Kell, and Patton looked on in astonishment, but it was Enara who finally managed to speak first. “What the hell?” she whispered.


The figure standing across the street was facing away from them, but soon turned, his black cape billowing out behind him from the motion. Cradled in his arms, and curled up into a tight, little ball, was a young (probably only a short while out of her teens) woman dressed in her nightclothes. He gently lowered her to the ground, and she looked up at her rescuer, still trembling. Wrapped close to her chest was a tiny infant – crying now, but otherwise seemingly no worse for the wear.


The Batman put a hand on her shoulder and smoothly turned her around to face the awestruck detectives. “See those police officers over there? They’ll take care of you.” His voice came out sounding not quite gruff, but far from warm, as well.


Great, that masked clown took the credit again. What about the real policemen, bub? :lol:

Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”


That's the mystery. :oops:
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#9 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 28 July 2005 - 09:26 PM

Now, I'm not trying to get you playing the game, obviously - I've just come to opinion that the game is sometimes unfairly dissed, ignoring all the positives that it has. Granted, the whole OC is a big con in itself, but... yeah, nobody is getting the game to play the OC, really.


Well, I did... I mean, with only a handful of exceptions, I'm not very big on multiplayer games or modded games. So when I got NWN, I knew lots of people were raving about custom modules and all that crap, but it's just not my cup of tea. I don't even use BG mods. (Shrug)

#10 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 28 July 2005 - 09:28 PM

That's Sarry, putting his high intelligence to work. No one else can curse like he does.


Pretty sure he's managed to secure a pretty rich vocabulary, yeah... :twisted:

Drama queen.


Hey, I'm impressed. :twisted:

Right, distraction over, back to the serious stuff.


Pretty much. This murderer isn't going to catch himself... plus, he's doing a good job of avoiding getting caught, so far... never a good thing for the good guys.

#11 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 28 July 2005 - 09:30 PM

Great... Now he can yell 'What is it now?!' into his radio and transmit it all over the city.


(Chuckle) I think this version's a little more mature and a little less... well, annoying. :twisted:

Well, if he's anything like the historical Patton, that talk shouldn't phase him much.


I'm not sure Nate's got enough "General" in him, though... just not sure if he can hack that. :twisted:

Great, that masked clown took the credit again. What about the real policemen, bub?


(Snicker)

Seriously speaking, though, wouldn't -you- be a little pissed off yourself? I mean, maybe part of you might understand that, methods aside, the guy actually -is- helping... but then there would that thing where the cops are out there ever day, putting their lives on the line, too, and it seems like nobody seems to appreciate it. That would wear on anyone, I think.

#12 Laufey

Posted 28 July 2005 - 09:48 PM

A burst of static and the crackling of flames came through over the radio frequency. “Right on him, I've got this mother-!” Detective Sergeant Sarevok Anchev responded as he continued pursuit. The suspected perpetrator had taken to the building’s roof, and several of Gotham’s finest, including the Sarge, were right on his heels.


Yeah, Sarry isn't one for delicate language in a situation like this, I don't think. :twisted:

Back down below, Nate shouted a warning over the radio. “Take a shot, Sarge, don’t risk close contact!”


For a moment there, I read 'Take a shot, Snape'. :twisted: I think I need to cut back on Harry Potter.


Patton actually found himself relaxing somewhat when an elongated stream of vulgarities shot back over the radio, finally coming to a close with one extremely angry-sounding “Ass-pirate motherfucker!”


Don't think Patton is one for delicacy either. :twisted:


A dark silhouette suddenly emerged to fill the space left behind by the destroyed window; it stood there, backlit by the yellow and orange flames of the raging fire, for only a fraction of a second before diving out towards the street, swinging across to a building over on the other side of 45th, and then dropping straight down to the road below.


Ah yes, I do love a nice entrance. :wink:


Not knowing what else to do, she made her way back to her own car, hauled open the passenger-side door and collapsed inside. She reached into the back for one of Bonnie Lewis’ photo albums, and began flipping through it. “Who killed you, Bonnie? Who would do a thing like that?”


One wonders, one wonders indeed...
Rogues do it from behind.

#13 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 29 July 2005 - 03:07 AM

Yeah, Sarry isn't one for delicate language in a situation like this, I don't think.


I don't think he's much for delicate language in any situation... but that's ok. I'd dare say that for him, the "crass" is essentially equivalent to "charm."

:twisted:

For a moment there, I read 'Take a shot, Snape'. I think I need to cut back on Harry Potter.


Hmmmm... mayhap...

I've never read the series, myself. Don't really know much about it. (Shrug)

Don't think Patton is one for delicacy either.


Nate is kinda the surly type, yeah. :twisted:

Ah yes, I do love a nice entrance.


Say what you like about him... call him a kook, a freak, whatever... but damn if Bruce Wayne doesn't know how to make an entrance. :twisted:




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