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#1 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 02 June 2005 - 04:23 AM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!

1. Short chapter.

2. Valygar chapter.

3. Splinter Cell-inspired chapter.

4. That is all. :)

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“Lieutenant, do you see anything?”

“Sorry, Val, I got bupkis.”

The area the two of them were searching was heavily forested, with tall, coniferous trees stretching across acres and acres of land, all the way to the mountainside. The forest made for good cover, but that was actually working against them at this point – tracking an unknown number of escaped Confederation refugees through the thick woods was no small feat, even for a Ranger.

Nalia broke in over the comm. She sounded apologetic. “Sorry. I’m trying to pin down those transmission coordinates, but the signal’s shaky. Plus, there’s a lot of jamming and other interference that’s making it real hard to get a solid fix. I’m sure he’s in that general region you’re searching, but I can’t really narrow down the sweep area. I’ll keep working on it from this end.”

Valygar cut back into the conversation. “I think I have something. I’ll go take a look.” He flicked his comlink off, and shifted the weight of the heavy Gauss rifle slung across his shoulders. The small pistol he used as a backup weapon was gripped solidly in his right hand. He raised it to a ready position then began to trudge through the undergrowth, eyes peeled for any movement or other signs of life. There was little to go on at first, but as he kept moving, the signs became more readily apparent. Faded footprints in the soil, broken branches indicating the passage of one or more persons. The trail was faint, but at least it was something.

“Keep going, Sergeant.” That was Nalia once again; she and Falynn had been coordinating the search efforts. “I think you’re getting close-”

Spectre quickly muted the transmission. The ensign was right. He was getting close to something, and didn’t want her voice distracting him, or, incidentally, giving away his position. The forest gradually opened to a small clearing – a clearing that was mostly empty except for a hastily-erected duraplas emergency shelter. Other bits and pieces of survival equipment, from water purification canteens and chemical break-lights, to a crate of field rations, were strewn about the makeshift camp. The shelter-building itself was a dull, light-gray, and had the blue-white, eight pointed Star of the Confederation inscribed on its side.

“Are you Ivan?” Valygar asked, as he approached the lone figure in the camp.

The other man startled some. “Y-yes,” he stammered in a thick, northern-Faerunian accent. He ran several fingers through his thinning, gray hair and pushed his glasses up higher on the bridge of his nose. “You’re human… you are police?”

Omega Six shrugged. “Yes and no. The relief force is on its way. Until they get here, I’m the only friend you’ve got, and I’m not a very good one.”

The half-panicked scientist seemed to ignore that. “We have to l-leave,” he stuttered out. “We have to hurry. They’ll find us soon.”

The Army Ranger shook his head. “I understand, but it’s not why I’m here. I’m here for your encryption key.”

Ivan blinked behind his thick lenses. “Why?”

“Because not giving it to me would ruin my sweet disposition.”

He protested. “That wasn’t the deal.”

“The deal still stands. When the Confederation lands more forces in the area, they -will- get you out of here; but first, you have to give me the key.”

“That wasn’t the deal I made with the woman on the radio.”

Valygar wasn’t particularly interested in discussing the deal Nalia had made with a chemical-weapons scientist. “Listen, do I come to your job and tell you how to murder civilians?”

“What?!”

“No. So don’t come to my job and tell me how to do mine. The Feds are on their way or here already. You’re gonna be fine. You can give me the key, or I can take it.”

“That -wasn't- the deal!”

“You’re working from a very limited phrase book. Listen, just give me the key. I’m tired, and I hate making people scream. It gets me down.”

Ivan finally relented. He reached under his shirt, pulling a chain from around his neck. At the end of that chain hung an electronic access card, almost certainly containing some manner of inane techno-babble that only someone like Nalia, or perhaps Jan, could comprehend. “Here.”

Valygar took the proffered item and tucked it away in one of the many pockets attached to his uniform fatigues. “Thanks. And until the Feds get here, find a better hiding place.”

“Goddamnit!”

#2 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 02 June 2005 - 06:55 AM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!


I’ve been thinking that maybe we should rename the board name from ‘Serials’ to ‘Cereals’ :twisted:

1. Short chapter.


2. Valygar chapter.


Gotta stay in character. I mean, can’t be too wordy! :)

“Lieutenant, do you see anything?”


“Sorry, Val, I got bupkis.”


http://www.randomhou...l?date=19980302

Thanks to this, now I know what this strange word means. :twisted:

Nalia broke in over the comm. She sounded apologetic. “Sorry. I’m trying to pin down those transmission coordinates, but the signal’s shaky. Plus, there’s a lot of jamming and other interference that’s making it real hard to get a solid fix. I’m sure he’s in that general region you’re searching, but I can’t really narrow down the sweep area. I’ll keep working on it from this end.”


In that general region? My, that sounds extremely vague. :D

“Are you Ivan?” Valygar asked, as he approached the lone figure in the camp.


Figures that an escaped scientist would have a Russian name. Don’t ask me why, it just figures. :twisted:

Though, it could have been ‘Igor’, too. :twisted:

Omega Six shrugged. “Yes and no. The relief force is on its way. Until they get here, I’m the only friend you’ve got, and I’m not a very good one.”


The rest of Omega Crew: Mmmm-hmmmmm! He’s not kidding, not kidding at all! :twisted:

Ivan blinked behind his thick lenses. “Why?”


“Because not giving it to me would ruin my sweet disposition.”


Umm, that… doesn’t really sound too much like Valygar. :D

“That wasn’t the deal I made with the woman on the radio.”


Yeah, that will teach you to believe what women on the radio say. :D Hey, it could have been worse, it could have been Amy Sheckenhausen instead of Nalia. :twisted:

“You’re working from a very limited phrase book. Listen, just give me the key. I’m tired, and I hate making people scream. It gets me down.”


Somehow these lines seem to be fitting Imoen a bit better… of course, her attitude might be wearing down on him. :)

Valygar took the proffered item and tucked it away in one of the many pockets attached to his uniform fatigues. “Thanks. And until the Feds get here, find a better hiding place.”


“Goddamnit!”


Valygar does not like scientist types very much, does he? Maybe it’s the scientist=mage likeness? :twisted:

#3 Guest_Userunfriendly_*

Posted 03 June 2005 - 02:02 AM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!


pass the milk please. :)

The area the two of them were searching was heavily forested, with tall, coniferous trees stretching across acres and acres of land, all the way to the mountainside. The forest made for good cover, but that was actually working against them at this point – tracking an unknown number of escaped Confederation refugees through the thick woods was no small feat, even for a Ranger.


why the heck do i get this image of val wearing a drill instructor's hat, standing on top of a house mounted on poles? :) :shock:

yeah, i know you meant army ranger, but the image of val on forest fire watch is...hard to shake... :shock:

Spectre quickly muted the transmission. The ensign was right. He was getting close to something, and didn’t want her voice distracting him, or, incidentally, giving away his position. The forest gradually opened to a small clearing – a clearing that was mostly empty except for a hastily-erected duraplas emergency shelter. Other bits and pieces of survival equipment, from water purification canteens and chemical break-lights, to a crate of field rations, were strewn about the makeshift camp. The shelter-building itself was a dull, light-gray, and had the blue-white, eight pointed Star of the Confederation inscribed on its side.


my...a nice rustic camping spot...dufus...he's never heard of camoflauging his bivouak area..any sort of scout plane would spot that clearing and right-out-in-the-open tent in a heartbeat... (sorry about the bad spelling) :)

The other man startled some. “Y-yes,” he stammered in a thick, northern-Faerunian accent. He ran several fingers through his thinning, gray hair and pushed his glasses up higher on the bridge of his nose. “You’re human… you are police?”


civilians... :)

“Because not giving it to me would ruin my sweet disposition.”


sure, val can be nice and reasonable, and bring a blackboard with him to diagram out all the reasons why he should turn over the encryption key...or he can just threaten him...saves time and effort..

“That -wasn't- the deal!”


val: who's got the gun here? :)

“Goddamnit!”


a nice short little piece on how in the field, good manners is a waste of time and utterly expendable...even to your own...also how even if fae isn't going to express her comments about chem weapons, the other omegas sure will...

yay!!! :) :) :)

#4 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 03 June 2005 - 04:24 AM

I’ve been thinking that maybe we should rename the board name from ‘Serials’ to ‘Cereals’


Ok, but I get first dibs on the box of Cap'n Crunch...

Thanks to this, now I know what this strange word means.


It's Yiddish! :)

Figures that an escaped scientist would have a Russian name. Don’t ask me why, it just figures.


Well, it's really just because the corresponding character in Splinter Cell is named Ivan. :)

Umm, that… doesn’t really sound too much like Valygar.


Yes, it does. :shock:

Actually, the way it was said in the game, it really works for Valygar. :shock:

Hey, it could have been worse, it could have been Amy Sheckenhausen instead of Nalia.


Or worse... Fernando Martinez...

:)

Man... where's Maurice when you need him?

Valygar does not like scientist types very much, does he? Maybe it’s the scientist=mage likeness?


Not so much the scientists, as much as the "scientists who make chemical/bio weapons"...

#5 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 03 June 2005 - 04:26 AM

pass the milk please.


That better be real milk... from a cow and everything... none of this soy junk... :shock:

yeah, i know you meant army ranger, but the image of val on forest fire watch is...hard to shake...


Maybe for you... I can safely say nothing like that ever entered -my- mind. :)

my...a nice rustic camping spot...dufus...he's never heard of camoflauging his bivouak area..any sort of scout plane would spot that clearing and right-out-in-the-open tent in a heartbeat... (sorry about the bad spelling)


He's a civilian, not military... he has no idea about how to hide a bivouac... :)

sure, val can be nice and reasonable, and bring a blackboard with him to diagram out all the reasons why he should turn over the encryption key...or he can just threaten him...saves time and effort..


And it's more fun! :shock:

#6 Guest_VigaHrolf_*

Posted 06 June 2005 - 06:22 PM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!


No! Chef Notearde!!!

1. Short chapter.


Really?

2. Valygar chapter.


Interesting.

3. Splinter Cell-inspired chapter.


Oh boy.

4. That is all. :oops:


:D

“Lieutenant, do you see anything?”


Imoen: "I see dead people." *pulls trigger*

“Sorry, Val, I got bupkis.”


That's such a good word.

The area the two of them were searching was heavily forested, with tall, coniferous trees stretching across acres and acres of land, all the way to the mountainside. The forest made for good cover, but that was actually working against them at this point – tracking an unknown number of escaped Confederation refugees through the thick woods was no small feat, even for a Ranger.


Bran: "Aw come on. That's easy. Try tracking refuges on a desert planet with a highly magnetized atmosphere and constant wind. Now that's a challenge."

Valygar: "That was distinctly unpleasant."

Bran: "Yeah. Jackal complained about sand for days."

Valygar: "Yes, but she didn't like bathing either."

Bran: "Her hygenie wasn't as much my concern as it was yours V."

Valygar: "..."

Nalia broke in over the comm. She sounded apologetic. “Sorry. I’m trying to pin down those transmission coordinates, but the signal’s shaky. Plus, there’s a lot of jamming and other interference that’s making it real hard to get a solid fix. I’m sure he’s in that general region you’re searching, but I can’t really narrow down the sweep area. I’ll keep working on it from this end.”


Bran: "Tens of thousands of credits of gear and still can't find a damn thing."

Imoen: "Lowest bidder. Lowest bidder."

Valygar cut back into the conversation. “I think I have something. I’ll go take a look.” He flicked his comlink off, and shifted the weight of the heavy Gauss rifle slung across his shoulders. The small pistol he used as a backup weapon was gripped solidly in his right hand. He raised it to a ready position then began to trudge through the undergrowth, eyes peeled for any movement or other signs of life. There was little to go on at first, but as he kept moving, the signs became more readily apparent. Faded footprints in the soil, broken branches indicating the passage of one or more persons. The trail was faint, but at least it was something.


Imoen: "So, Harly, your version of the V-Man has a small pistol, huh? Too bad."

“Keep going, Sergeant.” That was Nalia once again; she and Falynn had been coordinating the search efforts. “I think you’re getting close-”

Spectre quickly muted the transmission. The ensign was right. He was getting close to something, and didn’t want her voice distracting him, or, incidentally, giving away his position. The forest gradually opened to a small clearing – a clearing that was mostly empty except for a hastily-erected duraplas emergency shelter. Other bits and pieces of survival equipment, from water purification canteens and chemical break-lights, to a crate of field rations, were strewn about the makeshift camp. The shelter-building itself was a dull, light-gray, and had the blue-white, eight pointed Star of the Confederation inscribed on its side.


Bingo.

“Are you Ivan?” Valygar asked, as he approached the lone figure in the camp.


It's Crazy Ivan!

The other man startled some. “Y-yes,” he stammered in a thick, northern-Faerunian accent. He ran several fingers through his thinning, gray hair and pushed his glasses up higher on the bridge of his nose. “You’re human… you are police?”


I guess I'm just a crazy person, but I think it would have fun to give him more of a Jamaican style accent. Russian looking but island sounding. :)

Omega Six shrugged. “Yes and no. The relief force is on its way. Until they get here, I’m the only friend you’ve got, and I’m not a very good one.”


Imoen: "You're tellin me."

The half-panicked scientist seemed to ignore that. “We have to l-leave,” he stuttered out. “We have to hurry. They’ll find us soon.”


The Dominion is coming. And they want your cookies. All of your cookies. Even the ... ginger snaps......

The Army Ranger shook his head. “I understand, but it’s not why I’m here. I’m here for your encryption key.”

Ivan blinked behind his thick lenses. “Why?”

“Because not giving it to me would ruin my sweet disposition.”


Bran: "Sweet disposition? Seems like Spectre is in a grumpy mood."

Valygar: "Not enough fiber in the diet."

He protested. “That wasn’t the deal.”

“The deal still stands. When the Confederation lands more forces in the area, they -will- get you out of here; but first, you have to give me the key.”


Poor duder....

“That wasn’t the deal I made with the woman on the radio.”

Valygar wasn’t particularly interested in discussing the deal Nalia had made with a chemical-weapons scientist. “Listen, do I come to your job and tell you how to murder civilians?”


Bran: "Depends on the division. Some off them do send memos. You should see the memos on the deployment of the SB-14s. Never thought someone could describe wiping out an entire city quite so clinically."

“What?!”


I don't know if that's indignation at being accused of wiping out civilian populations or the sheer horror of having a field soldier dictating design specs for his little toys. :D

“No. So don’t come to my job and tell me how to do mine. The Feds are on their way or here already. You’re gonna be fine. You can give me the key, or I can take it.”

“That -wasn't- the deal!”


He's starting to sound a little like Kalah. :lol:

“You’re working from a very limited phrase book. Listen, just give me the key. I’m tired, and I hate making people scream. It gets me down.”


*shrug* This line seems a little off for V. He doesn't (at least to me) seem to be the torturing type.

Ivan finally relented. He reached under his shirt, pulling a chain from around his neck. At the end of that chain hung an electronic access card, almost certainly containing some manner of inane techno-babble that only someone like Nalia, or perhaps Jan, could comprehend. “Here.”


Imoen: Don't forget, would want to comprehend.

Bran: You probably could too.

Imoen: Not like I want to.

Valygar took the proffered item and tucked it away in one of the many pockets attached to his uniform fatigues. “Thanks. And until the Feds get here, find a better hiding place.”

“Goddamnit!”


I can understand Ivan's unhappiness here. And plus, leaving a valuable asset like that roaming free is not a good thing.

Good piece Alpha. Short and sweet. :)

VH

#7 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 06 June 2005 - 11:17 PM

Oh boy.


I'm working my way through the recently released third installment of the series. What do you expect? :lol:

That's such a good word.


It reminds me of an early episode of the Sopranos where Paulie and (maybe it's Christopher) are wailing on some Jewish guy.

Paulie: "What the hell is 'bupkis.'"

Christopher: "It's how they say 'nothing.'"

Paulie: "Oh yeah?! Lemme show you how -I- say nothing!" (Grabs a bell (like the kind you see wherever you have to ring the bell for service) and slams it on the back of the guy's head) "This is how I say nothing!" (Ding!) (Ding!)

It's funny. :(

Bran: "Tens of thousands of credits of gear and still can't find a damn thing."

Imoen: "Lowest bidder. Lowest bidder."


Or perhaps just gross incompetence?

Cipher: "HEY!"

:twisted:

Imoen: "So, Harly, your version of the V-Man has a small pistol, huh? Too bad."


:twisted:

Um... you do know Spectre carries the M-82, right? That's a .50 cal sniper rifle... :twisted:

:lol:

I guess I'm just a crazy person, but I think it would have fun to give him more of a Jamaican style accent.


Yeah, well, the guy in the game was Russian and had a Russian accent. So I went with that. :(

Bran: "Sweet disposition? Seems like Spectre is in a grumpy mood."

Valygar: "Not enough fiber in the diet."


Yeah, that would piss anybody off. :D

I don't know if that's indignation at being accused of wiping out civilian populations or the sheer horror of having a field soldier dictating design specs for his little toys.


Probably a little of both. :wink:

*shrug* This line seems a little off for V. He doesn't (at least to me) seem to be the torturing type.


Oh, he wouldn't actually torture anybody... but Ivan doesn't realize that. :D

#8 Laufey

Posted 08 June 2005 - 01:07 PM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!


1. Short chapter.


2. Valygar chapter.


Seems appropriate! :wink:


Valygar cut back into the conversation. “I think I have something. I’ll go take a look.” He flicked his comlink off, and shifted the weight of the heavy Gauss rifle slung across his shoulders. The small pistol he used as a backup weapon was gripped solidly in his right hand. He raised it to a ready position then began to trudge through the undergrowth, eyes peeled for any movement or other signs of life. There was little to go on at first, but as he kept moving, the signs became more readily apparent. Faded footprints in the soil, broken branches indicating the passage of one or more persons. The trail was faint, but at least it was something.


Ah, shades of the Ranger here!


Omega Six shrugged. “Yes and no. The relief force is on its way. Until they get here, I’m the only friend you’ve got, and I’m not a very good one.”


Doesn't like scientists much, does he?


“That -wasn't- the deal!”


“You’re working from a very limited phrase book. Listen, just give me the key. I’m tired, and I hate making people scream. It gets me down.”


I don't know...this just doesn't sound like Valygar to me. Leaving aside the torture threat, I think Valygar's sense of dry humor is more in response to comments by others, not so much making witticisms of his own.
Rogues do it from behind.

#9 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 08 June 2005 - 11:10 PM

Ah, shades of the Ranger here!


Well, he -is- an Army Ranger... modern day Rangers still have to learn that stuff... ;)

Doesn't like scientists much, does he?


Just scientists who create bio/chem weapons for a living.

I think Valygar's sense of dry humor is more in response to comments by others, not so much making witticisms of his own.


True, but it's a line from Splinter Cell, and I adored it, so I used it, even if it might be a shade out of character. :wink:

#10 Weyoun

Posted 09 June 2005 - 11:01 PM

Uh oh! Notemeal-ios!


1. Short chapter.


Okay...

2. Valygar chapter.


Okay...

3. Splinter Cell-inspired chapter.


Okay...

4. That is all. :wink:


You sure? :wink:

“Sorry, Val, I got bupkis.”


More army terminology?

Omega Six shrugged. “Yes and no. The relief force is on its way. Until they get here, I’m the only friend you’ve got, and I’m not a very good one.”


Short and to the point.

Valygar wasn’t particularly interested in discussing the deal Nalia had made with a chemical-weapons scientist. “Listen, do I come to your job and tell you how to murder civilians?”


“What?!”


“No. So don’t come to my job and tell me how to do mine. The Feds are on their way or here already. You’re gonna be fine. You can give me the key, or I can take it.”


“That -wasn't- the deal!”


"... Hey, do I go around where you work and heckle you there?" ;)

Valygar took the proffered item and tucked it away in one of the many pockets attached to his uniform fatigues. “Thanks. And until the Feds get here, find a better hiding place.”


“Goddamnit!”


Nice going. :twisted:
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#11 Guest_AlphaMonkey_*

Posted 10 June 2005 - 12:41 PM

More army terminology?


What, "bupkis?" No, actually... it... it's Yiddish. :)

http://dictionary.re...search?q=bupkis

Short and to the point.


Eh, when you're in a potential combat zone, you usually don't have time to chat. That doesn't stop some people...

(Cough) Imoen (Cough)...

But it stops Valygar. ;)

Nice going.


I just thought that parting shot was appropriately mean. ;)




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