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#21 Guest_Daie_*

Posted 05 May 2005 - 08:06 PM

There are parts of AC that I have written with tears running down my face, but I wrote them because I *had* to.



...And there's parts of AC we've read with tears running down our faces.

I can understand Arcalian's point. I try and keep Daie happy, and have altered his story to avoid dealing with things I can't cope with. Some things I can cope with, and enjoy dealing with, hence the love issues in Saga.


Since you're using quotes, I'll give you one:

"Read this one. You'll laugh, you'll cry, it'll change your life"

Dermot Morgan, Black Books.


Peace out people, stay frosty etc.

#22 Weyoun

Posted 05 May 2005 - 10:15 PM

I wanted freedom but I'm restricted
I tried to give you up but I'm addicted
Now that you know I'm trapped, sense of elation
You'll never dream of breaking this fixation
You will squeeze the life out of me


Bury it
I won't let you bury it
I won't let you smother it
I won't let you murder it


Our time is running out
And our time is running out
You can't push it underground
We can't stop it screaming out
How did it come to this?


Muse


Oh, a song-introduction. :D

Weyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Back up Drow singers Viconia, Phaere and Sendai :
...what about it, Daddy Cool,
We're crazy like a fool,
What about it, Daddy Cool,


Back up Drow singers Viconia, Phaere and Sendai :
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool


How's that for an image, ey? :D Hey, don't laugh. Bobby Farrell lives in holland now, after all. :?

With barely a conscious intention, her feet took her to the room they had so recently vacated. Jaheira shuddered at the huge statue heads that had appeared after they had destroyed Cyric’s minions. Why had Jarran’s mind conjured such disturbing decorations for this room? Perhaps they represented the watchful eyes of those who followed the bard’s progress towards the divine.


Is it just me or is Cyric an annoying prat with a god-complex (no pun intended).

Brainless fool, smiling as though the future was a smooth road before your feet. Falling in love with a god, what were you thinking? Did you imagine, even for a moment, that you would find yourself spending your days in your lover’s godly realm? That you would see him do things that no mortal man could hope to accomplish?


I have no doubt there'd be women who'd find that exciting. I also have no doubt that Jaheira isn't one of them.

Jarran stared at the wizard, who met his gaze levelly. “Why would I want to do that? The ants aren’t hurting anyone.”


“True, lad, true. But there are many who would stomp them just for the satisfaction. To prove how mighty they are, ye see.”


I remember there was a huge ant-invasion in my granddad's backyard, he'd choose for the non-nosense approach and set a blowtorch on them while they scurried on the tiles. :shock:

“Bah!” Sarevok said with a snort. “Childishness.”


I dunno. That blowtorch thing he did was kinda cool to watch. :shock: Mostly because it was totally unexpected. Of course, I was twelve at the time. :(

“You mean you will actually help me? How?”


“Balthazar has used powerful magic to seal his monastery. If ye intend to face him, ye will have to find a way to get inside. I happen to know just the man for the job.”


“Who?”


“Saemon Havarian. I know it is not a pleasant thought, to contemplate trusting that pirate, but it is the quickest path. Still, I doubt even he is foolish enough to cross such a powerful person.”


:shock: Well, I just wonder what Jarran has to tell that one. :D

“I do not understand.”


“I no longer have need of them. There are no armies that will march on Amkethran, not now. And… you have served me well. You have my thanks. Go, Illax.”


Tnt Sendai : I remember. *looks at her own two hands and shudders*

“Then I am even more confused. Why join with the Five if you did not share their goals?”


“I will tell you all… brother. Yes, brother, since I have seen more of your soul than you know. Melissan approached me with dreams of power and glory, riches that could be mine if I joined her effort to revive Bhaal. And yes, I joined, but I was the spy in their midst. I intended to thwart them as best I could, and if possible to turn them on each other.”


And still acted like a petty dictator. Hmm, funny, that. :shock:

“Before we discuss that, I must tell you something of our nature. Do not ask me how I came by this information, I doubt that you would believe me. Some of us, Jarran… some of us are truly siblings. We are not merely vessels for our father’s power, we are true godchildren. Half-gods, with divine strength of our own. You and I… we are not human, brother.”


I don't know if that's a good thing, really.

“I am afraid not, brother.” Balthazar met Jarran’s eyes. “My plan was wise in one respect. It is necessary that the evil Children be slain, to remove their taint from this world. I… I must be true to my beliefs. Evil must be destroyed. Farewell, Jarran. May the gods welcome you with open arms.”


Balthazar forcefully pushed himself backwards, slamming his spine against the back of the chair. He sighed and closed his eyes.


Jarran’s mouth fell open in surprise and horror as Balthazar’s body dissolved into dust. The golden light of Balthazar’s essence seemed to move through him like a divine wind, leaving the bard slightly dizzy.


When the dust and light cleared, Balthazar’s robes seemed to be hanging in the air. Jarran reached forward and gave them a tug. The garments fell to the floor, revealing a dagger that had had its handle jammed into the back of the chair. A dagger that had been carefully placed so that its point was perfectly aligned with Balthazar’s heart.


Pretty neat trick, though.
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#23 Guest_Oyster Girl_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 01:43 AM

eyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Ow. I just had a vision of Elaine dancing in an afro.

*dives back into Paragon City in hopes of a brainscrub*

#24 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 01:59 AM

There are parts of AC that I have written with tears running down my face, but I wrote them because I *had* to.


...And there's parts of AC we've read with tears running down our faces.


Er... good? After all, every writer hopes to get a reaction from the readers.

I can understand Arcalian's point. I try and keep Daie happy, and have altered his story to avoid dealing with things I can't cope with. Some things I can cope with, and enjoy dealing with, hence the love issues in Saga.


It all depends on what style a writer is shooting for. I've tried to write AC in the 'epic fantasy' mode, which calls for realism. And pain is a very real thing. But to each his own. Everyone has their own tastes, and nobody's are 'wrong'.

Since you're using quotes, I'll give you one:

"Read this one. You'll laugh, you'll cry, it'll change your life"

Dermot Morgan, Black Books.


I laughed, I cried, I kissed ten bucks goodbye...

Peace out people, stay frosty etc.


*waves*

#25 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 02:25 AM


Our time is running out
And our time is running out
You can't push it underground
We can't stop it screaming out
How did it come to this?

Muse


Oh, a song-introduction. :?

Weyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Back up Drow singers Viconia, Phaere and Sendai :
...what about it, Daddy Cool,
We're crazy like a fool,
What about it, Daddy Cool,


*Runs like hell*

Back up Drow singers Viconia, Phaere and Sendai :
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool


How's that for an image, ey? :D Hey, don't laugh. Bobby Farrell lives in holland now, after all. :(


*dives into a ditch and sticks fingers in ears*


With barely a conscious intention, her feet took her to the room they had so recently vacated. Jaheira shuddered at the huge statue heads that had appeared after they had destroyed Cyric’s minions. Why had Jarran’s mind conjured such disturbing decorations for this room? Perhaps they represented the watchful eyes of those who followed the bard’s progress towards the divine.


Is it just me or is Cyric an annoying prat with a god-complex (no pun intended).


*groans anyway*


Brainless fool, smiling as though the future was a smooth road before your feet. Falling in love with a god, what were you thinking? Did you imagine, even for a moment, that you would find yourself spending your days in your lover’s godly realm? That you would see him do things that no mortal man could hope to accomplish?


I have no doubt there'd be women who'd find that exciting. I also have no doubt that Jaheira isn't one of them.


Not in the least, especially when losing Jarran at any time might be part of the package.


Jarran stared at the wizard, who met his gaze levelly. “Why would I want to do that? The ants aren’t hurting anyone.”

“True, lad, true. But there are many who would stomp them just for the satisfaction. To prove how mighty they are, ye see.”


I remember there was a huge ant-invasion in my granddad's backyard, he'd choose for the non-nosense approach and set a blowtorch on them while they scurried on the tiles. :shock:


*snicker* At least you guys don't have to deal with fire ants like we do here. Nasty little things, they bite. And when they do, they tear out a chunk of skin about the size of a grain of sand and leave digestive acid behind. The bites burn for days.


“Bah!” Sarevok said with a snort. “Childishness.”


I dunno. That blowtorch thing he did was kinda cool to watch. :shock: Mostly because it was totally unexpected. Of course, I was twelve at the time. :D


:shock:


“Saemon Havarian. I know it is not a pleasant thought, to contemplate trusting that pirate, but it is the quickest path. Still, I doubt even he is foolish enough to cross such a powerful person.”


:shock: Well, I just wonder what Jarran has to tell that one. :D


Help me or else?


“I do not understand.”

“I no longer have need of them. There are no armies that will march on Amkethran, not now. And… you have served me well. You have my thanks. Go, Illax.”


Tnt Sendai : I remember. *looks at her own two hands and shudders*


Jarran: Er, sorry.


“Then I am even more confused. Why join with the Five if you did not share their goals?”

“I will tell you all… brother. Yes, brother, since I have seen more of your soul than you know. Melissan approached me with dreams of power and glory, riches that could be mine if I joined her effort to revive Bhaal. And yes, I joined, but I was the spy in their midst. I intended to thwart them as best I could, and if possible to turn them on each other.”


And still acted like a petty dictator. Hmm, funny, that. :D


I never claimed he was a nice guy.


“Before we discuss that, I must tell you something of our nature. Do not ask me how I came by this information, I doubt that you would believe me. Some of us, Jarran… some of us are truly siblings. We are not merely vessels for our father’s power, we are true godchildren. Half-gods, with divine strength of our own. You and I… we are not human, brother.”


I don't know if that's a good thing, really.


Jarran: Well I certainly don't think so!


“I am afraid not, brother.” Balthazar met Jarran’s eyes. “My plan was wise in one respect. It is necessary that the evil Children be slain, to remove their taint from this world. I… I must be true to my beliefs. Evil must be destroyed. Farewell, Jarran. May the gods welcome you with open arms.”

Balthazar forcefully pushed himself backwards, slamming his spine against the back of the chair. He sighed and closed his eyes.

Jarran’s mouth fell open in surprise and horror as Balthazar’s body dissolved into dust. The golden light of Balthazar’s essence seemed to move through him like a divine wind, leaving the bard slightly dizzy.

When the dust and light cleared, Balthazar’s robes seemed to be hanging in the air. Jarran reached forward and gave them a tug. The garments fell to the floor, revealing a dagger that had had its handle jammed into the back of the chair. A dagger that had been carefully placed so that its point was perfectly aligned with Balthazar’s heart.


Pretty neat trick, though.


Thankee. And thanks for commenting!

#26 Weyoun

Posted 06 May 2005 - 09:00 AM

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*Runs like hell*
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Back up Drow singers Viconia, Phaere and Sendai :
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool
Daddy, Daddy Cool

[/quote]

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How's that for an image, ey? :shock: Hey, don't laugh. Bobby Farrell lives in holland now, after all. :shock:
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*dives into a ditch and sticks fingers in ears*
[/quote]

LOL! It's your own fault for doing all those song-intro's. :shock: It brings all the freaks out of in the open, you know? *twitches* :shock:

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Is it just me or is Cyric an annoying prat with a god-complex (no pun intended).
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*groans anyway*
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No, seriously. Maybe it's because he used to be human, but this guy's really gone around the bend. Heh, if I know my Star Trek (and I do. :D), humans aren't supposed to have that kind of power.

[quote]
*snicker* At least you guys don't have to deal with fire ants like we do here. Nasty little things, they bite. And when they do, they tear out a chunk of skin about the size of a grain of sand and leave digestive acid behind. The bites burn for days.
[/quote]

Oh, we have those too. Luckily, they're rarer and mostly stay in the forests. There are regular black garden-ants in everybody's backyard, though.

[quote]
Jarran: Er, sorry.
[/quote]

Tnt Sendai : I've heard of people painting with their feet, but I don't think I can learn to scrub with my feet...
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#27 Guest_Clovis_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 09:10 AM

Very enjoyable chapter. I liked the twist on Balthazar's 'finale', so to speak.

Of course, the thing that keeps me coming back most of all is the Jarran-Jaheira romance. Will he or won't he? (take the godly power). I must admit, you've had me guessing for about the last 20 chapters (darn you :shock: )

Looking forward to more!

-C

#28 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 04:16 PM


*dives into a ditch and sticks fingers in ears*


LOL! It's your own fault for doing all those song-intro's. :wink: It brings all the freaks out of in the open, you know? *twitches* :wink:


You are an evil, evil man.


Is it just me or is Cyric an annoying prat with a god-complex (no pun intended).


*groans anyway*


No, seriously. Maybe it's because he used to be human, but this guy's really gone around the bend. Heh, if I know my Star Trek (and I do. :roll:), humans aren't supposed to have that kind of power.


Well, Cyric has a rather bizarre past enough. He had a book written that, if read, would convince the reader that Cyric was the most powerful, fearsome, etc. supreme being in the Realms... and then he read it himself to see if it worked. The word megalomania doesn't begin to describe what he was like until he snapped out of it, and he's still pretty crazy.

In the Realms, though, there are a number of gods who used to be human. Besides Mystra and Kelemvor, who also ascended because of the Time of Troubles, Torm was once a paladin of Tyr. There are more, but I'm at work and don't have my books handy.


*snicker* At least you guys don't have to deal with fire ants like we do here. Nasty little things, they bite. And when they do, they tear out a chunk of skin about the size of a grain of sand and leave digestive acid behind. The bites burn for days.


Oh, we have those too. Luckily, they're rarer and mostly stay in the forests. There are regular black garden-ants in everybody's backyard, though.


Well, this is Florida, the "Gah! What *is* that?" state. I could go out into my yard and find at least four or five varieties of ants.


Jarran: Er, sorry.


Tnt Sendai : I've heard of people painting with their feet, but I don't think I can learn to scrub with my feet...


Jarran: Well, if my world's Sendai had been as nice as you, I wouldn't have had to do that.

#29 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 04:18 PM

Very enjoyable chapter. I liked the twist on Balthazar's 'finale', so to speak.


Thankee. I thought it was fitting.

Of course, the thing that keeps me coming back most of all is the Jarran-Jaheira romance. Will he or won't he? (take the godly power). I must admit, you've had me guessing for about the last 20 chapters (darn you :wink: )


*cough* And that's the point. (It's called suspense, people. :wink: )

Looking forward to more!

-C


Thanks!

#30 Guest_Mutant Mike_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 11:25 PM

[quote name="Silrana"][quote][quote]
Since you're using quotes, I'll give you one:

"Read this one. You'll laugh, you'll cry, it'll change your life"

Dermot Morgan, Black Books.
[/quote]

I laughed, I cried, I kissed ten bucks goodbye...

[/quote]

***WARNING*** Tangent ahead! ! !

Whenever I hear that quote - in it's many varied forms - I remember where I heard it first...

Hardware Wars!
A sprawling space saga of romance, rebellion, and household appliances.

Hardware Wars!
You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll kiss three bucks goodbye!

Coming soon to a theater near you. Get in line now! ! !

.... I am getting too old... ;)

I now return you to your regularly scheduled thread...

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#31 Guest_Mutant Mike_*

Posted 06 May 2005 - 11:28 PM

eyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Ow. I just had a vision of Elaine dancing in an afro.

*dives back into Paragon City in hopes of a brainscrub*


Sorry... Issue 4 didn't include a brain-scrubber..

So I take it the laptop was able to handle it?

What server are you using? (I'm on Pinnacle..)

#32 Guest_Oyster Girl_*

Posted 07 May 2005 - 12:37 AM

eyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Ow. I just had a vision of Elaine dancing in an afro.

*dives back into Paragon City in hopes of a brainscrub*

Sorry... Issue 4 didn't include a brain-scrubber..

I noticed. Even worse, I've crashed twice trying to leave the hospital since I4.

*grumbles and shakes flaming sword at programmers*

So I take it the laptop was able to handle it?

What server are you using? (I'm on Pinnacle..)

Don't you check your email, dear? I sent you details almost a week ago; hope your spamblocker didn't eat it.

In brief: Emergency desktop replacement with a cheap motherboard and an Athlon XP 2800+. Hubby was amazed that I chose a fire-based blaster instead of some form of mentalist/controller for my first toon: Ignea on Pinnacle.

#33 Guest_Mutant Mike_*

Posted 07 May 2005 - 12:52 AM

eyoun : *dancing like a nutty guy with Parkisons while wearing a horribly fake Afro-wig* She's crazy like a fool...

Ow. I just had a vision of Elaine dancing in an afro.

*dives back into Paragon City in hopes of a brainscrub*

Sorry... Issue 4 didn't include a brain-scrubber..

I noticed. Even worse, I've crashed twice trying to leave the hospital since I4.

*grumbles and shakes flaming sword at programmers*

So I take it the laptop was able to handle it?

What server are you using? (I'm on Pinnacle..)

Don't you check your email, dear? I sent you details almost a week ago; hope your spamblocker didn't eat it.

In brief: Emergency desktop replacement with a cheap motherboard and an Athlon XP 2800+. Hubby was amazed that I chose a fire-based blaster instead of some form of mentalist/controller for my first toon: Ignea on Pinnacle.


Nope... Didn't see anything.

As for the crashes... A lot of people have been crashing, but it seems the fix is to get the absolute latest video drivers.

My main machine didn't have any problems - it has an ATI 9700. But my second machine - with a Geforce2 based card - crashed every 15 to 20 minutes.

I should be on tonight with Test Subject 42 - spines scrapper, along with Dianna as Chocolate Rascal - grav controller. Our SG leader is going to be running some high-lvl missions and asked if we wanted to come along.

If you want, add Test Subject 42, Rhett Bhastard, Chip Chocolate, Power Policeman, and Nyght-fyre to your friends list... ;)

#34 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 07 May 2005 - 03:35 PM

One thing, though. I'd think that being a half-god would *somehow* always have affected Jarran. He seems so completely *normal*, so easily adapted to a mortal's short life and its small pleasures. Now the prophecy accelerating is of course taking its toll on him, but you'd think that even as a kid there would been something off with him, even more than with other Bhaalspawn. Not necessarily in an evil way, but so that he would be strange and less... human-like. Of course, your take on what precisely being of really divine blood means may vary from mine.

#35 Guest_Silrana_*

Posted 07 May 2005 - 05:57 PM

One thing, though. I'd think that being a half-god would *somehow* always have affected Jarran. He seems so completely *normal*, so easily adapted to a mortal's short life and its small pleasures. Now the prophecy accelerating is of course taking its toll on him, but you'd think that even as a kid there would been something off with him, even more than with other Bhaalspawn. Not necessarily in an evil way, but so that he would be strange and less... human-like. Of course, your take on what precisely being of really divine blood means may vary from mine.


Actually, I plan to cover some of this in the next chapter or two. It will get explained. :D




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