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#1 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 04:10 PM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.

Here we have the completion of the talk with Demin – yes, I am leaving the hunt for artifacts in, but I tried to make the search more logical, giving Demin the ability to detect their place of location.

Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :P) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :D

 

Rush Of Blood To The Head, part 7.5.

Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.

“Well, I must thank you for abstaining from killing an injured and helpless woman,” she notes, “I suppose, I can only expect that even the mention of The Exile’s name can trigger such strong emotions in you, that they make you lose your temper.”

“Indeed… you never know with those barbaric races, do you?” I smirk, “now, perhaps you can finish the story you started… and you have my promise that there will be no more interruptions like the one before… so, Ellesime petitioned the gods to strip the elven spirit from them and then cast them out to wreak havoc and horror outside the elven settlements… please, continue.”

“Yes, I shall… of course, they tried to counteract the divine curse, for example, the sister exposed herself to vampirism… but gods are not routed so easily,” Demin coughs briefly, before continuing, “The brother did not risk doing the same. A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”

“You expected someone like Irenicus to apologize and repent for his sins?” now is Jaheira’s turn to ask in disbelief, “then… then none of you ever truly knew him! He would have never done that, not with his arrogant, unbreakable pride! Foolish… how foolish of you… regardless if your intention was a noble one, the execution of it was… well, it was moronic, and it caused many deaths of innocent people.”

“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.

“It is not Ellesime’s fault… we all hoped this would turn out better,” Demin sighs, “but instead, The Exile has found a way to restore himself, has made pacts with our most despised enemies, and has resumed his original plot – to drain the Tree of Life and gain the divine status.”

“And I suppose that stealing my soul was a part of this plan… or perhaps he just needed it to replace his severed spirit?” I muse.

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.

“So much of Suldanessellar's defenses were away, battling the Drow and their incursion at the temple. We were left weak, which was exactly what Irenicus had hoped for,” Demin continues, “One group of exiles helping another, both so full of their petty hatred and jealousy that they would stop at nothing to strike at our hearts. The Exile brought to the city magical constructs and demons, and a... a black dragon, which landed to the northwest. I have been trying to fight, but there are too many of them.”

“Obviously, we need to defeat the root of all the problems, which is Irenicus,” I conclude, “but we need to get inside the palace, we have a reason to believe that he is inside…”

“If we kill the mage,” Edwin flinches at Keldorn’s words, but this time the paladin does not speak of him, “then his army of minions will become disorganized and will be routed easily.”

“Indeed, he has taken Ellesime into the palace and is preparing for the dark ritual to drain the tree and obtain the divine powers…” Demin confirms our suspicions.

“The gate to the palace is well protected and attacking it openly might prove too dangerous,” Jaheira says, “we came here in hopes that you might provide us with a plan.”

“I have tried to get inside the palace, but it is warded off magically – you would not be able to enter, even if you had fought and defeated the defenders of the gate. But… there is one possible way… it might prove dangerous, but it will offer you a chance to get inside the palace and to help and save those few survivors of the carnage, all at once…” Demin speaks, “of course, you can reclaim the streets from the monsters with brute force, but the solution I suggest would be far more efficient and less risky.”

“Well, anything would be better than a mindless hand-to-hand combat,” I point out, “please, tell us about your plan.”

“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.

“The artifacts are held by the Exile's minions and because of my connection with the Leaflord I have managed to divine their place of location. One of them is held by the black dragon in the northwest, another one is in a house to the west of the palace and the third is in the Temple, itself… prepare for a fight in order to reclaim them,” Demin says, “These three artifacts are a talisman of Rillifane, a golden cup, and a moonblade. After you have retrieved them, place the items on the statue in the centre of the temple. This will summon the Leaflord to our defense.”

“Oh, and then that Leaflord will clear the streets for us? That would be nice…” Nalia squeaks.

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.

“Yes, Rillifane will help… but you must hurry, for the longer you delay, the more elves die… please, go quickly!” Demin exclaims and tries to rise from the chair, but her legs still don’t offer her the usual support…

“Will you be able to make it to the gates on your own?” Jaheira asks as we are about to exit her home, but Demin just waves her hand dismissively and motions us to leave.

Once outside, we decide to make a half-circle around the edge of the city, in order to stay away as far as possible from the centre of the settlement to avoid getting caught up in large battles. Still, from time to time we come across groups of hostile creatures, mostly golems and elementals of various sorts, but nothing that we could not defeat with a little effort.

I am in a bit of incomprehension, wondering exactly where a dragon could have landed in this city, as there is no suitable place for a creature of huge proportions to settle in… so I conclude that it is probably residing just outside the city and my companions agree with my assumption. A couple of elves that we manage to save from being crushed by a towering iron golem, confirm our suspicions and point towards a wide, long air bridge, leading downwards, but the end of the bridge disappears in the thickness of leaves. The elves offer their gratitude in terribly stuttering voices, and then leave as quickly as possible, the proximity of the dragon making them very nervous.

Before we proceed to face the dragon itself, there is a call to stop for a moment in order for mental preparations… In my case it results in realizing how hungry I am and I retrieve some rations from my pack and start to nibble on those, thinking that fighting a dragon on empty stomach is probably a bad omen in any case. Seeing me eating, my friends follow my example and Jaheira feels obliged to remind everyone not to load up their stomachs too much, unless we want to make the dragon very happy…

“I still can’t believe that…” Imoen says, before biting off another lump of bread, “that Irenicus was once normal… honourable or… well, good…”

“It’s hard to imagine, isn’t it?” I reply, “It’s quite possible that we would not recognize him, if we were to meet him when he was still a… well, a normal elf. I wonder what changed him the most, the seductive schemes of his sister or that curse of the queen… well, no point in guessing, I suppose.”

“We only know him as a despicable, remorseless beast,” Jaheira speaks, “what was before he became as such… perhaps there is a lesson to learn from all of this, but this is not the time to muse about it. He will pay for what he did to you and Imoen, I will see to that,” she looks at me with a steely determination in her eyes.

“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…

So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…

“That goes without saying, Nalia,” Viconia chimes in, before someone has picked up on our strange reactions, “and I agree with Jaheira. Irenicus must die. Nothing we learn about his noble deeds in the past will make me reconsider… and I care not of what made him the way he is. He dies, it is decided.”

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.

#2 Laufey

Posted 24 November 2003 - 06:19 PM

Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


Trying to make Edwin apologise if he doesn't want to is like trying to make a stone lay eggs. :shock:


“Yes, I shall… of course, they tried to counteract the divine curse, for example, the sister exposed herself to vampirism… but gods are not routed so easily,” Demin coughs briefly, before continuing, “The brother did not risk doing the same. A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


Noooo! :twisted:

“You expected someone like Irenicus to apologize and repent for his sins?” now is Jaheira’s turn to ask in disbelief, “then… then none of you ever truly knew him! He would have never done that, not with his arrogant, unbreakable pride! Foolish… how foolish of you… regardless if your intention was a noble one, the execution of it was… well, it was moronic, and it caused many deaths of innocent people.”


“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


By this point in the game, most of my PC:s would happily leave Ellesime to her fate, if it wasn't for the fact of the stolen soul.


“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Yep, Demin struck me as far more decent than her queen.

“Oh, and then that Leaflord will clear the streets for us? That would be nice…” Nalia squeaks.


“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


Oh yes, Vic's got the right of it...it's about time somebody helped them out for a change.


“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…


So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Ouch! I sense a talk coming up...

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


Heh, I can see Edwin putting up with lectures from exactly one person, and Keldorn is not him. :wink:
Rogues do it from behind.

#3 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 24 November 2003 - 07:39 PM


Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


Trying to make Edwin apologise if he doesn't want to is like trying to make a stone lay eggs. :wink:


Does he ever want to? Oh, wait... I already made him apologize once in the story... that's already quite a lot. :wink:


“Yes, I shall… of course, they tried to counteract the divine curse, for example, the sister exposed herself to vampirism… but gods are not routed so easily,” Demin coughs briefly, before continuing, “The brother did not risk doing the same. A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


Noooo! :shock:


I feel for Demin - she is in a very bad position of having to explain Ellessime's stupidity. I can imagine that less than decent Bhaalspawn might have gutted her right there.


“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


By this point in the game, most of my PC:s would happily leave Ellesime to her fate, if it wasn't for the fact of the stolen soul.


Theo would certainly not hang around here, if it wasn't for the soul.


“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Yep, Demin struck me as far more decent than her queen.


She is. And Theo will learn that later, too. Maybe Edwin will even apologize to her eventually. :wink:


“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


Oh yes, Vic's got the right of it...it's about time somebody helped them out for a change.


Well, in the game you would have already cleared out the whole city, before Rillifane sends his summons. In a fic, I can make him help in a bit more appreciable manner.


“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…



So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Ouch! I sense a talk coming up...


I will find a way to delay it. :twisted: Seriously, though - they would not want the possible consequences to distract them from their goal in Suldanessellar, so this is delayed until Irenicus is dead.


“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


Heh, I can see Edwin putting up with lectures from exactly one person, and Keldorn is not him. :wink:


Nay, Keldorn may be a bit of a fatherly figure, but not for our Edwin. :roll:

#4 Guest_Bjorn_*

Posted 25 November 2003 - 12:20 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


Nope! :)

Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


He's getting pretty damn good at this diplomacy lark, it has to be said. :wink:

“Well, I must thank you for abstaining from killing an injured and helpless woman,” she notes, “I suppose, I can only expect that even the mention of The Exile’s name can trigger such strong emotions in you, that they make you lose your temper.”


And she's not bad at it either, when she puts her mind to it - hopefully they'll be able to get round to helping each other out now, without any more arguments.

“You expected someone like Irenicus to apologize and repent for his sins?” now is Jaheira’s turn to ask in disbelief, “then… then none of you ever truly knew him! He would have never done that, not with his arrogant, unbreakable pride! Foolish… how foolish of you… regardless if your intention was a noble one, the execution of it was… well, it was moronic, and it caused many deaths of innocent people.”


To be fair, though, she's only ever known him when he's been at his worst - she doesn't know what he was like back when he still had the connection to the elven spirit. Whereas Demin probably still thinks of him as Jonaleth.

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Give her a break Theo, she's not exactly had an easy time of it lately. And she's proving now that she can be reasonable.

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


Plenty more of that to come in ToB though, Vic. :twisted:

“Yes, Rillifane will help… but you must hurry, for the longer you delay, the more elves die… please, go quickly!” Demin exclaims and tries to rise from the chair, but her legs still don’t offer her the usual support…


Aw, c'mon Theo - spare her a healing potion, at least.

“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…


:wink: Not what Theo needs to hear when he's trying to mentally prepare himself for fighting a dragon, really...

So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


:roll: A lot of feeling very guilty, I'd imagine. You really need to have this out with her soon, Theo.

“That goes without saying, Nalia,” Viconia chimes in, before someone has picked up on our strange reactions, “and I agree with Jaheira. Irenicus must die. Nothing we learn about his noble deeds in the past will make me reconsider… and I care not of what made him the way he is. He dies, it is decided.”


Not much choice, if they want Theo's soul back. But it won't be easy, that's for sure.

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


:wink: Keldorn, calling him 'young Edwin' is more likely to earn you a fireball in the face than to actually get you anywhere.

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


LOL! (Sorry Eddie. :shock: )

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Hope it goes better than the battle with Thax did...

Nice chapter. :wink:

#5 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 November 2003 - 05:29 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


Nope! :D


:wink:


Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


He's getting pretty damn good at this diplomacy lark, it has to be said. :)


Well, he has to, if he wants to survive. :)


“Well, I must thank you for abstaining from killing an injured and helpless woman,” she notes, “I suppose, I can only expect that even the mention of The Exile’s name can trigger such strong emotions in you, that they make you lose your temper.”


And she's not bad at it either, when she puts her mind to it - hopefully they'll be able to get round to helping each other out now, without any more arguments.


No, Demin is not a bad sort. You'll learn that later, as well.


“You expected someone like Irenicus to apologize and repent for his sins?” now is Jaheira’s turn to ask in disbelief, “then… then none of you ever truly knew him! He would have never done that, not with his arrogant, unbreakable pride! Foolish… how foolish of you… regardless if your intention was a noble one, the execution of it was… well, it was moronic, and it caused many deaths of innocent people.”


To be fair, though, she's only ever known him when he's been at his worst - she doesn't know what he was like back when he still had the connection to the elven spirit. Whereas Demin probably still thinks of him as Jonaleth.


Yep, lots of miscomunication going on, right there.


“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Give her a break Theo, she's not exactly had an easy time of it lately. And she's proving now that she can be reasonable.


Oh, it's just hard for Theo to calm down and start acting reasonably in an instant.


“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


Plenty more of that to come in ToB though, Vic. :wink:


Plenty a time left before ToB starts... and scribe will probably twist things around in a MAJOR way for ToB.


“Yes, Rillifane will help… but you must hurry, for the longer you delay, the more elves die… please, go quickly!” Demin exclaims and tries to rise from the chair, but her legs still don’t offer her the usual support…


Aw, c'mon Theo - spare her a healing potion, at least.


Oh, don't worry, she's fully healed and is more exhausted than actually injured. :)


“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…


:( Not what Theo needs to hear when he's trying to mentally prepare himself for fighting a dragon, really...


Nope. But that's what you get for not sorting out these things earlier. At least, everytime he hears it, makes him understand that this can't go on for much longer.


So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


:( A lot of feeling very guilty, I'd imagine. You really need to have this out with her soon, Theo.


They both really need it. As for now, they are really hurting themselves - all these quick glances at each other and the secrecy... it's very bad for a relationship. And they know it. :(


“That goes without saying, Nalia,” Viconia chimes in, before someone has picked up on our strange reactions, “and I agree with Jaheira. Irenicus must die. Nothing we learn about his noble deeds in the past will make me reconsider… and I care not of what made him the way he is. He dies, it is decided.”


Not much choice, if they want Theo's soul back. But it won't be easy, that's for sure.


Nope... not easy.


“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


:roll: Keldorn, calling him 'young Edwin' is more likely to earn you a fireball in the face than to actually get you anywhere.


From the Ano-Keldorn talks, I got the idea that Keldorn sometimes fails in finding an approach to someone he wants to re-educate. :wink:


“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


LOL! (Sorry Eddie. :wink: )


:twisted:


Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Hope it goes better than the battle with Thax did...


Theo: Yep, it will. We have Edwin with us, now...

Everyone: Aaaaargh! RUN! :shock:

Theo: What did I say?

Nice chapter. :)


Thanks for commenting! :P

#6 Guest_WC_Sumpton_*

Posted 25 November 2003 - 08:10 PM

Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


That would have been a telling sight... Edwin apologizing :(

“Well, I must thank you for abstaining from killing an injured and helpless woman,” she notes, “I suppose, I can only expect that even the mention of The Exile’s name can trigger such strong emotions in you, that they make you lose your temper.”

“Indeed… you never know with those barbaric races, do you?” I smirk, “now, perhaps you can finish the story you started… and you have my promise that there will be no more interruptions like the one before… so, Ellesime petitioned the gods to strip the elven spirit from them and then cast them out to wreak havoc and horror outside the elven settlements… please, continue.”

“Yes, I shall… of course, they tried to counteract the divine curse, for example, the sister exposed herself to vampirism… but gods are not routed so easily,” Demin coughs briefly, before continuing, “The brother did not risk doing the same. A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


There were many time through her exposé that I felt just like Edwin does here. The nerve of these...

“You expected someone like Irenicus to apologize and repent for his sins?” now is Jaheira’s turn to ask in disbelief, “then… then none of you ever truly knew him! He would have never done that, not with his arrogant, unbreakable pride! Foolish… how foolish of you… regardless if your intention was a noble one, the execution of it was… well, it was moronic, and it caused many deaths of innocent people.”

“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


Yes Jaheira and ever Viconia seem to have joined Edwin.

“It is not Ellesime’s fault… we all hoped this would turn out better,” Demin sighs, “but instead, The Exile has found a way to restore himself, has made pacts with our most despised enemies, and has resumed his original plot – to drain the Tree of Life and gain the divine status.”


I am reminded so much here of an old saying 'Hope and on hand. S**t in the other. And see which one fill first!' But I degress. Maybe the other hand should be filled with this elven head... :)

“And I suppose that stealing my soul was a part of this plan… or perhaps he just needed it to replace his severed spirit?” I muse.

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Just smacking her does not seem to cover it though... :)

“So much of Suldanessellar's defenses were away, battling the Drow and their incursion at the temple. We were left weak, which was exactly what Irenicus had hoped for,” Demin continues, “One group of exiles helping another, both so full of their petty hatred and jealousy that they would stop at nothing to strike at our hearts. The Exile brought to the city magical constructs and demons, and a... a black dragon, which landed to the northwest. I have been trying to fight, but there are too many of them.”

“Obviously, we need to defeat the root of all the problems, which is Irenicus,” I conclude, “but we need to get inside the palace, we have a reason to believe that he is inside…”

“If we kill the mage,” Edwin flinches at Keldorn’s words, but this time the paladin does not speak of him, “then his army of minions will become disorganized and will be routed easily.”

“Indeed, he has taken Ellesime into the palace and is preparing for the dark ritual to drain the tree and obtain the divine powers…” Demin confirms our suspicions.

“The gate to the palace is well protected and attacking it openly might prove too dangerous,” Jaheira says, “we came here in hopes that you might provide us with a plan.”

“I have tried to get inside the palace, but it is warded off magically – you would not be able to enter, even if you had fought and defeated the defenders of the gate. But… there is one possible way… it might prove dangerous, but it will offer you a chance to get inside the palace and to help and save those few survivors of the carnage, all at once…” Demin speaks, “of course, you can reclaim the streets from the monsters with brute force, but the solution I suggest would be far more efficient and less risky.”

“Well, anything would be better than a mindless hand-to-hand combat,” I point out, “please, tell us about your plan.”

“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.

“The artifacts are held by the Exile's minions and because of my connection with the Leaflord I have managed to divine their place of location. One of them is held by the black dragon in the northwest, another one is in a house to the west of the palace and the third is in the Temple, itself… prepare for a fight in order to reclaim them,” Demin says, “These three artifacts are a talisman of Rillifane, a golden cup, and a moonblade. After you have retrieved them, place the items on the statue in the centre of the temple. This will summon the Leaflord to our defense.”

“Oh, and then that Leaflord will clear the streets for us? That would be nice…” Nalia squeaks.

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.

“Yes, Rillifane will help… but you must hurry, for the longer you delay, the more elves die… please, go quickly!” Demin exclaims and tries to rise from the chair, but her legs still don’t offer her the usual support…

“Will you be able to make it to the gates on your own?” Jaheira asks as we are about to exit her home, but Demin just waves her hand dismissively and motions us to leave.


So now we come to the point... These barbaric races are needed after all... If not for the missing soul, and vengence...

Once outside, we decide to make a half-circle around the edge of the city, in order to stay away as far as possible from the centre of the settlement to avoid getting caught up in large battles. Still, from time to time we come across groups of hostile creatures, mostly golems and elementals of various sorts, but nothing that we could not defeat with a little effort.

I am in a bit of incomprehension, wondering exactly where a dragon could have landed in this city, as there is no suitable place for a creature of huge proportions to settle in… so I conclude that it is probably residing just outside the city and my companions agree with my assumption. A couple of elves that we manage to save from being crushed by a towering iron golem, confirm our suspicions and point towards a wide, long air bridge, leading downwards, but the end of the bridge disappears in the thickness of leaves. The elves offer their gratitude in terribly stuttering voices, and then leave as quickly as possible, the proximity of the dragon making them very nervous.

Before we proceed to face the dragon itself, there is a call to stop for a moment in order for mental preparations… In my case it results in realizing how hungry I am and I retrieve some rations from my pack and start to nibble on those, thinking that fighting a dragon on empty stomach is probably a bad omen in any case. Seeing me eating, my friends follow my example and Jaheira feels obliged to remind everyone not to load up their stomachs too much, unless we want to make the dragon very happy…

“I still can’t believe that…” Imoen says, before biting off another lump of bread, “that Irenicus was once normal… honourable or… well, good…”

“It’s hard to imagine, isn’t it?” I reply, “It’s quite possible that we would not recognize him, if we were to meet him when he was still a… well, a normal elf. I wonder what changed him the most, the seductive schemes of his sister or that curse of the queen… well, no point in guessing, I suppose.”

“We only know him as a despicable, remorseless beast,” Jaheira speaks, “what was before he became as such… perhaps there is a lesson to learn from all of this, but this is not the time to muse about it. He will pay for what he did to you and Imoen, I will see to that,” she looks at me with a steely determination in her eyes.

“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…

So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Humm... Some I missed here, and it seems that the point might come back to haunt them...

“That goes without saying, Nalia,” Viconia chimes in, before someone has picked up on our strange reactions, “and I agree with Jaheira. Irenicus must die. Nothing we learn about his noble deeds in the past will make me reconsider… and I care not of what made him the way he is. He dies, it is decided.”


It seem as if all tempers here are alinged with Edwin's...

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


Oops... Maybe I spoke to soon. Someone always has to spoil the fun!! :(

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


Yes... But he does have a point here. Any paladin should see that!! :(

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Interesting... Waiting for dragon...

#7 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 25 November 2003 - 08:29 PM

Demin wakes from her daze soon enough, but naturally is quite upset about Edwin’s attempt to end her life prematurely. Of course, pressing Edwin to offer his apologies is absolutely impossible, thus of course the job again falls on my shoulders and all credit to the priestess for actually listening to me after our previous outbursts.


That would have been a telling sight... Edwin apologizing :)


Believe it or not, I already made him aplogize once in this tale... :(

“Yes, I shall… of course, they tried to counteract the divine curse, for example, the sister exposed herself to vampirism… but gods are not routed so easily,” Demin coughs briefly, before continuing, “The brother did not risk doing the same. A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


There were many time through her exposé that I felt just like Edwin does here. The nerve of these...


Theo certainly expected to hear something else...

“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


Yes Jaheira and ever Viconia seem to have joined Edwin.


I doubt that Jaheira would actually attack any of the elves... unlikely.

“It is not Ellesime’s fault… we all hoped this would turn out better,” Demin sighs, “but instead, The Exile has found a way to restore himself, has made pacts with our most despised enemies, and has resumed his original plot – to drain the Tree of Life and gain the divine status.”


I am reminded so much here of an old saying 'Hope and on hand. S**t in the other. And see which one fill first!' But I degress. Maybe the other hand should be filled with this elven head... :(


Well, Demin is just being made into a Ellesime's scapegoat... she's not the really guilty party.

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Just smacking her does not seem to cover it though... :)


Things will happen after Irenicus is dead... not to say that Theo will start killing elves, nothing that extreme...

“Will you be able to make it to the gates on your own?” Jaheira asks as we are about to exit her home, but Demin just waves her hand dismissively and motions us to leave.


So now we come to the point... These barbaric races are needed after all... If not for the missing soul, and vengence...


True, very true...

So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Humm... Some I missed here, and it seems that the point might come back to haunt them...


Theo and Jaheira have a slightly longer relationship than most Bhaalspawn who romance her... and it started when Khalid was still alive and that led to all sorts of bad things. Like Theo and Khalid fighting, and Theo being the only survivor. :(

“That goes without saying, Nalia,” Viconia chimes in, before someone has picked up on our strange reactions, “and I agree with Jaheira. Irenicus must die. Nothing we learn about his noble deeds in the past will make me reconsider… and I care not of what made him the way he is. He dies, it is decided.”


It seem as if all tempers here are alinged with Edwin's...


Well, everyone came here to kill Irenicus, so... :D

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


Oops... Maybe I spoke to soon. Someone always has to spoil the fun!! :)


Paladins, that's their job. :D

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


Yes... But he does have a point here. Any paladin should see that!! :P


Paladin has no ambition, he is a vessel, a servant of his god. Naturally, he would see ambition as a potentially dangerous trait.

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Interesting... Waiting for dragon...


And dragon is waiting for them... :)

#8 Guest_Chantrys_*

Posted 26 November 2003 - 02:29 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


Not at all!

Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :P) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :D


Hurray! Be aggressive, be be aggress...er...I'd better save that cheer for the next bit. :)

“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


:D I guess Demin's had the same thoughts herself. Otherwise I think she might take that in a less calm manner.

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Enjoy it while you can. It probably won't happen again. :(

“If we kill the mage,” Edwin flinches at Keldorn’s words, but this time the paladin does not speak of him,


:(

“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.


It's a scavenger hunt! With monsters wandering about! Those wacky elves...

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


(*cheers*)

Still, from time to time we come across groups of hostile creatures, mostly golems and elementals of various sorts, but nothing that we could not defeat with a little effort.


Getting a little cocky, aren't we? :(

Seeing me eating, my friends follow my example and Jaheira feels obliged to remind everyone not to load up their stomachs too much, unless we want to make the dragon very happy…


Being fattened...like pigs for the slaughter...

“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…

So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Eeep! Well, I suppose Nalia didn't really know, but what an uncomfortable thing to bring up! This talk has got to happen soon...

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


(*begins to laugh*)

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Well, I guess it isn't the time for an emotional moment. The dragon would probably sneak up on them an attack or something. :)

But soon!

#9 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 26 November 2003 - 07:55 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


Not at all!


:(

Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :D) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :(


Hurray! Be aggressive, be be aggress...er...I'd better save that cheer for the next bit. :(


Yep - the group will need the support for the fight that's coming up. :wink:

“We will kill him, I promise as much,” Viconia snarls, “but after that, we will kill that Ellesime, too… had it not been for her idiocy, he would have never touched you…” she adds, looking at Imoen.


:D I guess Demin's had the same thoughts herself. Otherwise I think she might take that in a less calm manner.


I think she must have had her doubts about Ellesime's judgement... now she will do even more thinking about the whole thing. :wink:

“I have no way to accurately measure the cost of our decisions on you. Reparations will be made, if there is anyone left here to make them. I... I am still in shock that this happened,” finally Demin says something that doesn’t make me want to smack her in the face.


Enjoy it while you can. It probably won't happen again. :wink:


Well, she may learn... :P


“If we kill the mage,” Edwin flinches at Keldorn’s words, but this time the paladin does not speak of him,


:twisted:


I had this visual image of this moment in mind, as I wrote it - I just loved it :P


“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.


It's a scavenger hunt! With monsters wandering about! Those wacky elves...


LOL! :P

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


(*cheers*)


Vic's got the right of it, doesn't she?

Still, from time to time we come across groups of hostile creatures, mostly golems and elementals of various sorts, but nothing that we could not defeat with a little effort.


Getting a little cocky, aren't we? :P


Yeah... probably wasn't a walk in the park, but those skirmishes are a tad too insignificant to pay more detail to them.


Seeing me eating, my friends follow my example and Jaheira feels obliged to remind everyone not to load up their stomachs too much, unless we want to make the dragon very happy…


Being fattened...like pigs for the slaughter...


Exactly what I was thinking. :)


“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…


So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Eeep! Well, I suppose Nalia didn't really know, but what an uncomfortable thing to bring up! This talk has got to happen soon...


It must and it will happen soon in the story time-line, it's just that there will be so many chapters before it actually happens. :(

“And what do you propose paladin? That I would be more content as a mere peasant with no ambitions whatsoever?” Edwin sneers, “a man without an ambition is like a… like a fish ashore… helpless, miserable and… ah… dead… (Gah! That parable really didn’t come out as perfect as it was supposed to be… well, nobody is laughing yet. Good.)”


(*begins to laugh*)


:D


Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Well, I guess it isn't the time for an emotional moment. The dragon would probably sneak up on them an attack or something. :)


Yes, not a good time to get distracted... so they won't be.

But soon!


Yep, yep, yep!

Thanks for commenting! :P

#10 Weyoun

Posted 27 November 2003 - 12:00 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


I'll let this slip... just this once. :(

Here we have the completion of the talk with Demin – yes, I am leaving the hunt for artifacts in, but I tried to make the search more logical, giving Demin the ability to detect their place of location.


Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :P) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :wink:


Woohoo!

“So much of Suldanessellar's defenses were away, battling the Drow and their incursion at the temple. We were left weak, which was exactly what Irenicus had hoped for,” Demin continues, “One group of exiles helping another, both so full of their petty hatred and jealousy that they would stop at nothing to strike at our hearts. The Exile brought to the city magical constructs and demons, and a... a black dragon, which landed to the northwest. I have been trying to fight, but there are too many of them.”


Irenicus played the elves perfectly, I see. You cna say a lot about him, but he's one smart bugger.

“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.


Time to play Theoana Jones for a while. :D Jaheira could be Marion Ravenwood. :twisted:

“Oh, and then that Leaflord will clear the streets for us? That would be nice…” Nalia squeaks.


That would look fun on COPS. :wink:

“And of course you have a husband to avenge as well, Jaheira,” Nalia adds and her words hit me like a brick in the face and I see that Jaheira is also struggling to find the words…


So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Quite a revelation. :wink:

Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Great stuff,
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#11 Guest_Lord E_*

Posted 27 November 2003 - 01:58 AM

Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :)) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :roll:


It's funny how at some point it is "yawn - another dragon" :wink: Would be a real challenge to make a sequel to ToB.

“Indeed… you never know with those barbaric races, do you?” I smirk, “now, perhaps you can finish the story you started… and you have my promise that there will be no more interruptions like the one before… so, Ellesime petitioned the gods to strip the elven spirit from them and then cast them out to wreak havoc and horror outside the elven settlements… please, continue.”


Wee hee :roll: WTG Ellie.

A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


:twisted:
Also, it is very telling that it is the humility Ellie was most concerned with. I'd think it more important that he learns compassion. No, all Ellie cared about was her hurt pride.

“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


The bane of an adventurer.

“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


I'm sure he will :shock:

#12 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 27 November 2003 - 05:38 AM

Ok, I’m posting this one a bit earlier. Hope you don’t mind.


I'll let this slip... just this once. :wink:


Pfew... :)


Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :P) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :D


Woohoo!


The dragon demanded so. How do you refuse a dragon, anyway?


“So much of Suldanessellar's defenses were away, battling the Drow and their incursion at the temple. We were left weak, which was exactly what Irenicus had hoped for,” Demin continues, “One group of exiles helping another, both so full of their petty hatred and jealousy that they would stop at nothing to strike at our hearts. The Exile brought to the city magical constructs and demons, and a... a black dragon, which landed to the northwest. I have been trying to fight, but there are too many of them.”


Irenicus played the elves perfectly, I see. You cna say a lot about him, but he's one smart bugger.


No argument about that...


“Near the palace is a temple, dedicated to Rillifane Rallathil. He can summon the spirit defenders of the forest to protect us... and has the power to break the wards on the palace. But the Leaflord must be awakened and summoned, in order for the spirits to come. The Exile's creatures have desecrated the temple and stolen the artifacts that are needed,” Demin explains, and I gather that we are expected to participate in a merry hunt for the artifacts.


Time to play Theoana Jones for a while. :roll: Jaheira could be Marion Ravenwood. :roll:


LOL! I think she is glaring at you, now. :twisted:


“Oh, and then that Leaflord will clear the streets for us? That would be nice…” Nalia squeaks.


That would look fun on COPS. :D


Wouldn't it just? :shock:


So… she knows that Khalid did not die in the dungeon… I always suspected that she knew, but now I am sure… and yet, she stood with me, despite that… I wonder… I wonder what it took from her, to make that decision…


Quite a revelation. :D


Well, it's more a confirmation of his greatest fear, it's not a sudden surprise... still feels bad. :D


Keldorn only sighs and we resume eating, time from time I throw a glance at Jaheira, trying to read at least some traces of wandering emotion in her eyes, but all I see is determination and assuredness, her thoughts already fixed on the fight with the wyrm. A few moments later we gather our things and leave in the direction the elves pointed us to… the dragon is waiting.


Great stuff,
---Weyoun


Thanks! And thanks for commenting! :)

#13 Guest_Theodur_*

Posted 27 November 2003 - 05:44 AM


Next part – party fights their first dragon (Thax was just a warm-up :D) and it definitely deserves a full chapter. :roll:


It's funny how at some point it is "yawn - another dragon" :roll: Would be a real challenge to make a sequel to ToB.


And yet you made it and very convincingly. :)


“Indeed… you never know with those barbaric races, do you?” I smirk, “now, perhaps you can finish the story you started… and you have my promise that there will be no more interruptions like the one before… so, Ellesime petitioned the gods to strip the elven spirit from them and then cast them out to wreak havoc and horror outside the elven settlements… please, continue.”


Wee hee :) WTG Ellie.


At this point, Theo's wondering how many other screw-ups the moron-queen has made.


A better man would have learned to appreciate what he had lost, perhaps learning humility and seek to make amends. He did not prove to be a 'better man.'”


:shock:
Also, it is very telling that it is the humility Ellie was most concerned with. I'd think it more important that he learns compassion. No, all Ellie cared about was her hurt pride.


Yep, she probably wanted to see Jon crawl back to her and beg. As if that would ever happen.


“Yes, it is about time someone would do some work for us, I’m getting terribly annoyed of breaking sweat for someone else, all the time,” Viconia smirks.


The bane of an adventurer.


It figures.


“I hope you will use this to learn a very good lesson, young Edwin,” Keldorn says admonitory, “powerful magic combined with unhealthy ambition, even obsession, leads to a disaster… remember that, wizard.”


I'm sure he will :wink:


Afraid that Edwin is a lost cause for Keldorn... he cerrtainly wasn't too successful with educating Anomen, Edwin is much worse... :twisted:




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